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 Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 3:02 pm
mercenarie13 Billy Mitchell Army Bus Arrival Billy was sitting in the back of the bus where it had not been cleaned lately. He looked around carefully to see if he knew anybody. As he did not recognize anyone he just slouched and looked at a picture of his older brother in uniform, who had died a couple months before. He thought to himself, " Well I guess a bullet to the head will kill a man, no matter how invincible I thought he was." Billy sat up and looked towards the front of the bus that was bumping along the road. He thought to himself with a little sarcasm " Can this bus get there any faster?" ((Um, a pretty decent array of grammar, spelling, and basic roleplay set up. I want to test you a little bit more, though. )) The Drill sergeant suddenly spun around violently and faced Billy, while spitting out different variations of barks, which of course what was considered as presumably words. "SOLDIER! Who are you and what are you doing on this bus! What is that picture? WHY AM I ASKING SO MANY QUESTIONS!?" The D.I. screamed, his apparent level of anger and shouting attracting the attention of the rest of the bus mates.
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 3:13 pm
Billy looked at the D.I. with a strange look on his face. Then he just started laughing hystericly looking at the D.I. Billy stood up and looked at him and responded with a little giggling in his voice "Well sir I'm Billy Mitchell and I'm on this bus because I want to join the Army and become owned by the country." Billy then continued "The picture is my deceased brother who was also in the military."
"With that in mind I have no idea why you ask so many questions, could be because you were horribly uneducated?" Billy finished giving the D.I. a funny look then sat on the broken in seat.
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 3:39 pm
mercenarie13 Billy looked at the D.I. with a strange look on his face. Then he just started laughing hystericly looking at the D.I. Billy stood up and looked at him and responded with a little giggling in his voice "Well sir I'm Billy Mitchell and I'm on this bus because I want to join the Army and become owned by the country." Billy then continued "The picture is my deceased brother who was also in the military." "With that in mind I have no idea why you ask so many questions, could be because you were horribly uneducated?" Billy finished giving the D.I. a funny look then sat on the broken in seat. ((Haha gj, although, in rl, don't have much of an attitude please. All a bad attitude proves to me is that your going to be a liability. Don't be in future engagements. Accepted! )) "Nothing about what you just said means s**t to me. As a matter of fact, I wasn't even listening. I only addressed you so you'd fully know that as of now, I own you. You are mine, maggot. Carry on!" The Drill Sergeant left, unaware of what the new recruit had uttered.
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 4:31 pm
Suicidesoldier#1 mercenarie13 Billy looked at the D.I. with a strange look on his face. Then he just started laughing hystericly looking at the D.I. Billy stood up and looked at him and responded with a little giggling in his voice "Well sir I'm Billy Mitchell and I'm on this bus because I want to join the Army and become owned by the country." Billy then continued "The picture is my deceased brother who was also in the military." "With that in mind I have no idea why you ask so many questions, could be because you were horribly uneducated?" Billy finished giving the D.I. a funny look then sat on the broken in seat. ((Haha gj, although, in rl, don't have much of an attitude please. All a bad attitude proves to me is that your going to be a liability. Don't be in future engagements. Accepted! )) "Nothing about what you just said means s**t to me. As a matter of fact, I wasn't even listening. I only addressed you so you'd fully know that as of now, I own you. You are mine, maggot. Carry on!" The Drill Sergeant left, unaware of what the new recruit had uttered. okay my bad
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 4:32 pm
mercenarie13 Suicidesoldier#1 mercenarie13 Billy looked at the D.I. with a strange look on his face. Then he just started laughing hystericly looking at the D.I. Billy stood up and looked at him and responded with a little giggling in his voice "Well sir I'm Billy Mitchell and I'm on this bus because I want to join the Army and become owned by the country." Billy then continued "The picture is my deceased brother who was also in the military." "With that in mind I have no idea why you ask so many questions, could be because you were horribly uneducated?" Billy finished giving the D.I. a funny look then sat on the broken in seat. ((Haha gj, although, in rl, don't have much of an attitude please. All a bad attitude proves to me is that your going to be a liability. Don't be in future engagements. Accepted! )) "Nothing about what you just said means s**t to me. As a matter of fact, I wasn't even listening. I only addressed you so you'd fully know that as of now, I own you. You are mine, maggot. Carry on!" The Drill Sergeant left, unaware of what the new recruit had uttered. okay my bad ((You passed though! Also, please designate non-roleplay speak in some form of brackets.))
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 8:26 pm
ACTION NOT COUNTED- Suicidesoldier#1
Kuro Suzuki
Army
Bus Arrival
Kuro sat quietly on the bus, swaying back and forth due to the bumps on the road that the bus ran over. The drill sergent approached him and asked him to repeat what he had just finished saying to the rest of the recriuts on the bus about the rules they had to follow. Kuro begins to repeats the rules they had to follow to the drill sergent in calm voice while looking at him dead in the eye. After he was done the drill sergent turns around and walks down the aisle, kuro watches him as he leaves. He then turns his attention to the window, watching people walk down the road as the bus went by them. Soon the bus comes to a stop, signaling that they had arrived at their destination.
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 8:48 pm
dark light yagami22 Kuro Suzuki Army Bus Arrival Kuro sat quietly on the bus, swaying back and forth due to the bumps on the road that the bus ran over. The drill sergent approached him and asked him to repeat what he had just finished saying to the rest of the recriuts on the bus about the rules they had to follow. Kuro begins to repeats the rules they had to follow to the drill sergent in calm voice while looking at him dead in the eye. After he was done the drill sergent turns around and walks down the aisle, kuro watches him as he leaves. He then turns his attention to the window, watching people walk down the road as the bus went by them. Soon the bus comes to a stop, signaling that they had arrived at their destination. ((Um, very good display of both grammar and spelling. Your uh, roleplaying skills seem to be a little off. Chiefly, you roleplayed my character and what I did. Make sure to read the AMP and to act correspondingly. I'll be needing another post from you. ))
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 9:09 pm
Kuro Suzuki
Army
Bus Arrival
Kuro sits quietly on the bus, watching people pass by in a blur as the bus sped up down the road. Soon the voices of the recruits talking to one another about how exctited they were to join the army fills the the bus as it continued to speed up down the road. Kuro removes his gaze from the window and looks at the drill seregent who was asking a new recruit to repeat the rules he just finished saying to everyone. The new recruit looked scared as he began to repeat the the rules they had to follow. After he was done the the sergent moved on to another new recruit and asked him do the same. Before the new recruit could begin the bus rolled to a stop.
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 9:17 pm
dark light yagami22 Kuro Suzuki Army Bus Arrival Kuro sits quietly on the bus, watching people pass by in a blur as the bus sped up down the road. Soon the voices of the recruits talking to one another about how exctited they were to join the army fills the the bus as it continued to speed up down the road. Kuro removes his gaze from the window and looks at the drill seregent who was asking a new recruit to repeat the rules he just finished saying to everyone. The new recruit looked scared as he began to repeat the the rules they had to follow. After he was done the the sergent moved on to another new recruit and asked him do the same. Before the new recruit could begin the bus rolled to a stop. ((...You controlled me, you controlled everyone on the bus, you controlled the bus, you controlled the bus driver, and you controlled a whole lot of things that you do not have control of. You have broken a roleplay rule called 'puppeting', where you control others actions. For many reasons, this is disallowed. You do not choose what I or the other recruits do; I do. Therefore, you can broken the primary rule of roleplaying, you essentially have godmodded. You also did your set-up wrong. [b]Roleplay Name
Branch- Unit
Location
Objective[/b] With the corresponding words reflected from you should be your starting set-up; I have it posted in code for a reason. To further understand these rules, please go read the AMP Version : 2 to further acknowledge yourself on the rules of roleplay. ))
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 9:32 pm
Kuro Suzuki
Army
Bus Arrival
Kuro sits there quietly with his eyes closed and his back against the seat of the bus. Kuro thinking:"I wonder what the army is like?". He opens his eyes back up after a while and looks around at the recruits and the drill sergent on the bus. His first impression of the drill seregnt when he saw him was of a man who did not tolerate people playing around or talking back to him.
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 9:42 pm
dark light yagami22 Kuro Suzuki Army Bus Arrival Kuro sits there quietly with his eyes closed and his back against the seat of the bus. Kuro thinking :"I wonder what the army is like?". He opens his eyes back up after a while and looks around at the recruits and the drill sergent on the bus. His first impression of the drill seregnt when he saw him was of a man who did not tolerate people playing around or talking back to him. ((Because your grammar and spelling are so good, you are accepted! Make sure to brush up on the rules of roleplay though, and the amp. Nice job! Hopefully in the future you'll learn to roleplay more in accordance with the rules. blaugh ))
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 2:24 pm
Suicidesoldier#1 mercenarie13 Suicidesoldier#1 mercenarie13 Billy looked at the D.I. with a strange look on his face. Then he just started laughing hystericly looking at the D.I. Billy stood up and looked at him and responded with a little giggling in his voice "Well sir I'm Billy Mitchell and I'm on this bus because I want to join the Army and become owned by the country." Billy then continued "The picture is my deceased brother who was also in the military." "With that in mind I have no idea why you ask so many questions, could be because you were horribly uneducated?" Billy finished giving the D.I. a funny look then sat on the broken in seat. ((Haha gj, although, in rl, don't have much of an attitude please. All a bad attitude proves to me is that your going to be a liability. Don't be in future engagements. Accepted! )) "Nothing about what you just said means s**t to me. As a matter of fact, I wasn't even listening. I only addressed you so you'd fully know that as of now, I own you. You are mine, maggot. Carry on!" The Drill Sergeant left, unaware of what the new recruit had uttered. okay my bad ((You passed though! Also, please designate non-roleplay speak in some form of brackets.)) ((okay what now where do I go?))
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 2:55 pm
mercenarie13 Suicidesoldier#1 mercenarie13 Suicidesoldier#1 mercenarie13 Billy looked at the D.I. with a strange look on his face. Then he just started laughing hystericly looking at the D.I. Billy stood up and looked at him and responded with a little giggling in his voice "Well sir I'm Billy Mitchell and I'm on this bus because I want to join the Army and become owned by the country." Billy then continued "The picture is my deceased brother who was also in the military." "With that in mind I have no idea why you ask so many questions, could be because you were horribly uneducated?" Billy finished giving the D.I. a funny look then sat on the broken in seat. ((Haha gj, although, in rl, don't have much of an attitude please. All a bad attitude proves to me is that your going to be a liability. Don't be in future engagements. Accepted! )) "Nothing about what you just said means s**t to me. As a matter of fact, I wasn't even listening. I only addressed you so you'd fully know that as of now, I own you. You are mine, maggot. Carry on!" The Drill Sergeant left, unaware of what the new recruit had uttered. okay my bad ((You passed though! Also, please designate non-roleplay speak in some form of brackets.)) ((okay what now where do I go?)) Um, you go to the army, post your registration and what not, and then you go on to the battleground or marksmen training, and what not. Also, you can go to any of the chatterbox areas and talk. I'm in the proccess of making branch specific roleplays. blaugh ))
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 2:09 pm
Recruit Edward Raynor
Army
Bus
Getting to the Army
Raynor leaned against his hand resting on the window frame. His eyes were fixed to a small spot of dirt, the only thing he considered stabile enough to pay attention for. It was one of those days, when everything got a hint of gray to depress anyone a little. Slight and thin rain made everything moist, if not completely wet.
"How long yet?" a recruit in a brightly coloured shirt asked. Raynor just mumbled something incomprehensible, not bothered to make contacts yet. Raynor wasn't exactly sure whether it was the rain or something with him, but he was annoyed. All he awaited for was to enter the gates and have a job for once.
Slowly, almost etherealry, the bus started to slow down, finally stopping in front of the Boot Camp gates. With nothing to carry with him, Raynor just slipped past the more talkative companion and entered the queue exiting from the old vehicle.
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