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Shruikan Tenshi Vice Captain
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 Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 12:10 pm
havikthecold tenshi:Well rcok lee didnt do to shabby!, lol but what would you advice? Well let me make it and I hand it too you ^_^ I was thinking along the lines of hidan's religion
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 12:16 pm
Shruikan Tenshi havikthecold tenshi:Well rcok lee didnt do to shabby!, lol but what would you advice? Well let me make it and I hand it too you ^_^ I was thinking along the lines of hidan's religion I dont know what that is... sweatdrop
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Shruikan Tenshi Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 8:20 pm
havikthecold Shruikan Tenshi havikthecold tenshi:Well rcok lee didnt do to shabby!, lol but what would you advice? Well let me make it and I hand it too you ^_^ I was thinking along the lines of hidan's religion I dont know what that is... sweatdrop O.O look in google and type in Hidan naruto wiki
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 10:05 pm
Google hates me and wont allow me to use it on my current laptop i have no idea why
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 10:08 pm
havikthecold Google hates me and wont allow me to use it on my current laptop i have no idea why Bing is better
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 10:10 pm
I actually already denied someone's application for Hidan's Religion.
...I don't think it has a place in an online role playing guild. Scratch someone once, and they are dead?
Yeah, that's completely unfair. Its fine when used in the anime, when the creator can decide who gets scratched and what crazy events lead to the person dying or not dying...but we aren't the Anime.
Actually, this clan has some reasonable weaknesses. one, if you manage to dismember their body, they still can't use those parts without being re-attached. Also, if you manage to get the blood off of the weapon with water or fire or some-such, then the other guy can't hurt you. And last, if you knock them out of the circle or impede their movement, at least you buy some time.
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Shruikan Tenshi Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 4:30 am
well actually I was thinking more of reducing it. I'll work on it another time though
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Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 5:29 pm
Malfrost: [Theory of Avarice, the Art of Greed: The Ozen Clan]
This seems to be a form of crystal release, which is already a kekkai Genkai that was created and approved.
...obviously, it's not the same, but it is similar enough that we don't need this one and the Crystal release, and as the Crystal Release is canon, we'll go with that one unless a really good case could be made.
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Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 6:30 pm
X_SMEXII_kOOkie_mOnster_X: [The Hoshiro Clans: HoshiMe]
Sorry man, but this is not how bloodlines come about. Magical swords do not fall from the sky and give people genetically induced powers which they can then pass to their offspring. If you are going to make this work, the story behind the bloodline needs to be much more well designed. bloodlines are essentially genetic mutations or advances that come through years of evolution...
Also, the premise that the clan can simple dodge things, or be super fast would need to be fleshed out and balanced better as well. it needs to be described with tangible numbers and aspects of a character's stats.
Denied for now.
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Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 8:13 pm
...were does this leave my clan ... should i do more work on it or what?
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Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 9:49 pm
I've been trying to let you down easy, but it'd denied. Sorry dude... I don't mean to crush your spirits.
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Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 9:57 pm
Cobra_X I've been trying to let you down easy, but it'd denied. Sorry dude... I don't mean to crush your spirits. No problem sucks but i will think of something else!
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Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 2:18 pm
 Name of Kekkei Genkai/Clan : Soul Eater Clan
History : This Clan was unknown and had disappeared ages ago. The Clan Members had a special alternate Soul that would serve as their main weapon. It takes the form as a human, but can turn into a weapon at the user's whim. They were masters of combat, but had a huge problem. THey had to consume the souls of other humans. Consuming the soul of a human does not kill them usually, but it could. The alternate Soul has to consume the souls to stay alive.
Abilities :
-High Physical Abilities
-Enhanced Senses
-Can See and Analyze Other Souls
-Ability to Consume Souls
Rules For Kekkei Genkai/Clan :
-Alternate Souls MUST be applied for in the Custom Weapons Thread.
-Cannot kill the enemy by consuming their soul. Only they can decide whether they die or not.
-Must consume the sould of an actual RPC. NO NPCS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-Must consume the Soul of someone of at least your Level. Nobody lower Level than you.
-After consuming the Soul of someone, you cannot consume their soul again.
-Cannot Activate Alternate Soul without first consuming one Soul personally.
-Each Alternate Soul is like another RPC. It is a person you control and will always be with your main RPC.
-Clones do not have Alternate Souls and are like average human Shinobis.
-The head of the Clan has the abilities of each stage even without consuming 15 Souls.
-Can only use one Alternate Soul at a time.
-Cannot take another member's Alternate Soul.
-Alternate Souls can have up to three different Weapon Forms, but they must be very closely related.
-Alternate Souls can take form of rings on the master's finger, but one must always be with the master in human form and only three can be with the master in human form.
Note: When entering battle, every one of the Alternate Souls can take on human form before going into weapon form, but only three can walk around casually with the master.
-Only one Soul can fight on their own at one time. The others have to wait before fighting.
-Only two can defend the master at once, but the master must be incapacitated.
-Maximum of 6 Alternate Souls can be created by consuming 15 Souls.
Note: This does not affect the amount of Alternate Soul the user can have with the Stage Levels. At Stage Five - Five Star Master, the user gets a total of 4 Alternate Souls without having to consume a large amount of Souls. They can only form up to 6 more to have a total of 10. 10 is the maximum number of Alternate Souls.
Weakness :
-Must consume a Soul once per month or the user could go berserk.
-The Alternate Soul is indestructible, but it can take damge still. If the Alternate Soul take too much damage, it becomes unable to continue fighting and requires another Soul before being able to continue.
-The Alternate Soul cannot leave you. It will always remain with you and cannot leave the area without you. If the main RPC is incapacitated, the Alternate Soul must remain with the master until it can get their master out of the area.
-If you die, you cannot consume the soul of your own Alternate Soul to stay alive.
-You take damage if your Alternate Soul is incapacitated and takes more damage.
-Alternate Souls can go berserk and attack anybody. They could attack their masters as well. This will only happen if they haven't consumed a Soul in a month.
Strengths :
-Consuming Souls makes you stronger and your abilities increase.
-Consuming Souls heals all of your wounds.
-Alternate Souls can use their Weapon Form all on their own. The master does not need to control it.
-Can obtain multiple Alternate Souls. Must consume a total of 15 Souls to form a new Alternate Soul.
Stages and Techniques :
[ Stage One - One-Star Master ]
The Master cannot do much at this Stage. They cannot even call upon their Alternate Soul unless they have Consumed a Soul. Once they have done that, their Alternate Soul will emerge from their body. It is a bit painful, but is over quick. The Alternate Soul is not very powerful in Weapon Form. They must consume more Souls to become mor powerful. The Master can have only one Alternate Soul at this time.
Jutsu Name : Consume Soul
Rank : E
Elemental Ethnicity : N/A
Description : The Master consumes the Soul of another RPC. The only way to consume a Soul is to Generate a number between 1 and 15. If the Master gets a multiple of 3, then the Soul is Consumed. Once the Soul is consumed, the enemy become physically weak for a day, but then will feel much stronger after that time is up. They will have a significant lack of Emotion and will not care about as much anymore. To consume the souls =, the Master will reach into the enemy's body, but will not harm them physically. They rip the Soul from the body after then will devour it. The Alternate Soul will be the one who consumes the Soul after it has been formed.
Jutsu Name : Activate Weapon Form
Rank : E
Elemental Ethnicity : N/A
Description : The Master converts his/her Alternate Soul into their Alternate Form.
[ Stage Two - Two-Star Master ]
To achieve this Stage, the Master must consume 3 Souls. The Master is now able to control the Soul very well, but can still only use one Alternate Soul.
Jutsu Name : Resonance of Souls (Level 1)
Rank : D
Elemental Ethnicity : N/A
Description : The Souls of the Master and the Alternate Soul must be in sync to use this technique. The Master transfers his/her Soul's Wavelength through their Alternate Soul in their Weapon Form and then the Alternate must transfer it back after increasing its intensity. The Master's Wavelength and the Alternate Soul's Wavelength must be close to equal to use this, but once it is performed, the Master and the Alternate Soul become much more powerful. The power increase lasts for 10 posts.
Jutsu Name : Pressure Blast
Rank : D
Elemental Ethnicity : N/A
Description : A relatively simple technique. The Master first increases their Soul's Wavelength and then hits the enemy with their bare fists and runs a huge level of pressure through their body and causes their body to go numb and feel weak for 3 posts. It doesn't do too much, but it is helpful.
[ Stage Three - Three-Star Master - God of Death ]
The Master must Consum a total of 6 Souls to achieve this form. Now the Master can use two Alternate Souls without gathering the required 15 Souls. Same rules apply to activate the second Alternate Soul as when you activate the first Alternate Soul.
Jutsu Name : Resonance of Souls (Level 2)
Rank : C
Elemental Ethnicity : N/A
Description : The Souls of the Master and the Alternate Soul must be in sync to use this technique. The Master transfers his/her Soul's Wavelength through their Alternate Soul in their Weapon Form and then the Alternate must transfer it back after increasing its intensity. The Master's Wavelength and the Alternate Soul's Wavelength must be close to equal to use this, but once it is performed, the Master and the Alternate Soul become much more powerful. The power increase lasts for 10 posts. The increase is 2x as powerful as Level 1.
Jutsu Name : Shock Therapy
Rank : C
Elemental Ethnicity : N/A
Description : The Master increases his/her Soul's Wavelength and then unleashes it in a form of pressure that creates powerful shocks. The user must be within 5m of the target to use this. When the enemy is hit by the shocks, they will begin to lose all of their senses for a while. They will come back in 5 posts, but theylose every one of their senses except for sight. Their sight is just a bit blurry for the duration of the effects. Also, the enemy will begin to lose a lot of blood. They usually vomit blood, cough it up, or it just runs out of their mouth, eyes, ears, or nose.
[ Stage Four - Four-Star Master ]
To achieve this Stage, the Master must obtain 10 Souls. Now the Master can have 3 Alternate Souls.
Jutsu Name : Resonance of Souls (Level 3)
Rank : B
Elemental Ethnicity : N/A
Description : The Souls of the Master and the Alternate Soul must be in sync to use this technique. The Master transfers his/her Soul's Wavelength through their Alternate Soul in their Weapon Form and then the Alternate must transfer it back after increasing its intensity. The Master's Wavelength and the Alternate Soul's Wavelength must be close to equal to use this, but once it is performed, the Master and the Alternate Soul become much more powerful. The power increase lasts for 10 posts. The increase is 3x as powerful as Level 1.
Jutsu Name : Resonance of Souls (Level 4)
Rank : B
Elemental Ethnicity : N/A
Description : The Souls of the Master and the Alternate Soul must be in sync to use this technique. The Master transfers his/her Soul's Wavelength through their Alternate Soul in their Weapon Form and then the Alternate must transfer it back after increasing its intensity. The Master's Wavelength and the Alternate Soul's Wavelength must be equal to use this, but once it is performed, the Master and the Alternate Soul become much more powerful. The power increase lasts for 5 posts at this Stage, but will last 10 Posts at the next Stage. The increase is 4x as powerful as Level 1.
[ Stage Five - Five-Star Master - Grim-Reaper ]
Must obtain 15 Souls. This is the absolute Final Stage. Now the Master has 4 Alternate Souls in their possession and has become know as a Grim-Reaper. They are lords of all Souls and are extremely powerful.
Jutsu Name : Resonance of Souls (Level 5)
Rank : S
Elemental Ethnicity : N/A
Description : The Souls of the Master and the Alternate Soul must be in sync to use this technique. The Master transfers his/her Soul's Wavelength through their Alternate Soul in their Weapon Form and then the Alternate must transfer it back after increasing its intensity. The Master's Wavelength and the Alternate Soul's Wavelength must be equal to use this, but once it is performed, the Master and the Alternate Soul become much more powerful. The power increase lasts for 20 posts. The increase is 5x as powerful as Level 1.
Jutsu Name : Witchhunter
Rank : S
Elemental Ethnicity : N/A
Description : Must be using Resonance of Souls (Level 5) to activate this. The Master amplifies the power of their Alternate Soul(s) tenfold and they become all powerful weapons. Their power is now at a level considered to be godly. A simple strike would have the power to shatter bones and disrupt internal functions. This lasts for 10 posts. When this is deactivated, so is the Resonance of Souls (Level 5). The Witchhunter's form will change depending on the Alternate Soul used with it. Only one Alternate Soul can be used with it at once. The form of the Witchhunter must be described when creating the Alternate Form and it is labeled as one of its abilities.
Jutsu Name : Soul Blast
Rank : S
Elemental Ethnicity : N/A
Description : The Master must be using the Witchhunter. The Master unleashes an extremely large blast that can tear through an entire forest only to leave a mass of destruction in its wake. When the blast makes direct contact with a large obstacle, it will create an powerful explosion that has a radius of 100m. The blast normally can travel for
Head of Clan - Soul (Sakoyoshi Daianohara)
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Posted: Mon Jan 25, 2010 5:40 pm
Sako:I'm sorry, it looks like you've put a ton of work into this, but I have to deny it as written. there is A LOT about this Kekkai Genkai which makes it incredibly overpowered. Before I even get into the details of the abilities, we need to negotiate a lot about the basics of this Kekkai Genkai.1st off: This is very similar at least in concept to THIS bloodline. Fundamentally, yes, the concept of an alternate soul is separate from a ghost, but in essence the same thing in many fashions.
Here are a few other notes (just based on the rules)
1. The whole idea of stealing someone's soul based on a DIE ROLL, where there is a 1/5 chance to take the soul... is a little ridiculous.
2. Each Alternate Soul cannot act as another RPC... especially when you can have multiple souls. That's far too powerful in combat. Also, to claim they are like average shinobi, with all their abilities and talents makes it even more powerful as well.
3. This is just utterly ridiculous and FAR too overpowering... "The head of the Clan has the abilities of each stage even without consuming 15 Souls. "... it's also incredibly self-serving, as its a rule that could only ever apply to you and would make you automatically UBER powerful.
4. I'm okay with one alternate soul having 3 weapon forms, but to have multiple souls, each with multiple forms? (essentially you've outclassed a Weapons Master's greatest ability without even trying.
5. So all the other alternate should just kind of stand around unless the master is knocked out? Sounds kind of silly for then to even be present. basically, you could have 6 RPCs standing around at all times, ready to tag in... each with three weapon styles. This is too powerful.
We already have Kakuzu's Tendril Bloodline and the Ghost one... this seems incredibly similar and has some obverpowering effects. It could perhaps be tempered into something usable, but it is going to require a lot of balancing...
Let the negotiations begin! - Go ahead and make your suggestions and arguments.
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Posted: Mon Jan 25, 2010 5:55 pm
1.) I could raise that Dice Roll to like 1/20 chance or higher if necessary, but I think I could add that I can take the soul of anyone who volunteers.
2.) I'm saying that each other Soul is like another person and will interact like an RPC in social ways, but is merely a weapon. It's like carrying around a talking sword. In battle, they are weapons of the Master. To be used as just a weapon and won't really act on their own too often.
3.) That is like the normal Head of Bloodline Rule, but I'll get rid of that. I'll start from the beginning. And it just makes things more fun when you start out like that and actually have something to work for.
4.) Well I'll give you an example of what I meant for this. Imagine an Alternate Soul with Ninja Tool Forms. It would have a dagger form, a shuriken form, and a smoke bomb form. One Offensive, one Defensive, and one Evasive. I can tell that I didn't type it up in a way for everyone to understand it, but I had how I wanted this in my head, but not typed up. I was wanting to put.... "Each Alternate Souls has three Weapon Forms. They can have one Offensive, one Defensive, and one Evasive." ....That is kind of what I meant for that.
5.) That is like a defense if the Master is knocked out and can't actually fight. They will defend the Master to make sure they don't die too.
I know that this was OP, but I needed a lot of help balancing it out anyway. I was expecting this.
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