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PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 12:45 pm


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nice emotion_dowant
PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 12:46 pm


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Hello! Your character is very interesting. I like his backstory. Unfortunately you'll have to make some changes to him before he can be approved.

1. He's really just overpowered and slightly godmoddish. There are almost no drawbacks to his powers and I think paralyzing people by looking into their eyes is a little too close to a godmod/auto hit ability. You'll need to adjust it so we can make sure he's not going to just look at people and instantly paralyze them the moment things get heated. I also think the 20 clones need to have some specifications--like a time limit, needing to stay within a certain distance to him and so on. Also, can they act freely or just mimic him? We kind of need some more details on that.

2. He'll need at least one more flaw. Not being able to look into his own eyes is more a power limitation than a personality or physical flaw. So you have two good flaws--just needs one more. ^^

Quote me when you get him fixed! Thanks. <3

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 12:48 pm


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nice emotion_dowant


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heres the before and after picture
PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 12:50 pm


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cool, i like the after pic the best 8D

can't wait to see your character in action once approved emotion_c8

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 1:03 pm


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Hello! Your character is very interesting. I like his backstory. Unfortunately you'll have to make some changes to him before he can be approved.

1. He's really just overpowered and slightly godmoddish. There are almost no drawbacks to his powers and I think paralyzing people by looking into their eyes is a little too close to a godmod/auto hit ability. You'll need to adjust it so we can make sure he's not going to just look at people and instantly paralyze them the moment things get heated. I also think the 20 clones need to have some specifications--like a time limit, needing to stay within a certain distance to him and so on. Also, can they act freely or just mimic him? We kind of need some more details on that.
done, hopefully that solves it ^_^

2. He'll need at least one more flaw. Not being able to look into his own eyes is more a power limitation than a personality or physical flaw. So you have two good flaws--just needs one more. ^^

Quote me when you get him fixed! Thanks. <3
PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 1:04 pm


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cool, i like the after pic the best 8D

can't wait to see your character in action once approved emotion_c8

thanks :3
If you want any character images edited I can do it smile

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 1:27 pm


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Hello! Your character is very interesting. I like his backstory. Unfortunately you'll have to make some changes to him before he can be approved.

1. He's really just overpowered and slightly godmoddish. There are almost no drawbacks to his powers and I think paralyzing people by looking into their eyes is a little too close to a godmod/auto hit ability. You'll need to adjust it so we can make sure he's not going to just look at people and instantly paralyze them the moment things get heated. I also think the 20 clones need to have some specifications--like a time limit, needing to stay within a certain distance to him and so on. Also, can they act freely or just mimic him? We kind of need some more details on that.
done, hopefully that solves it ^_^

2. He'll need at least one more flaw. Not being able to look into his own eyes is more a power limitation than a personality or physical flaw. So you have two good flaws--just needs one more. ^^

Quote me when you get him fixed! Thanks. <3


Okay...sorry this took a bit. I was contemplating. The only thing you need to do is give more details about his five clones--how far away from the original can they stray? Can they think on their own? What happens if one is hurt/killed? To be honest, this isn't a fighting RP so I doubt he'll ever need to use either ability much since they seem geared toward fighting. But it's best to fully detail things just in case.

I'm going to accept stuttering when he talks to girls only if you promise you absolutely WILL rp him doing that, every time he talks to a girl.
PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 1:36 pm


StrawberryZ0mbie
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Hello! Your character is very interesting. I like his backstory. Unfortunately you'll have to make some changes to him before he can be approved.

1. He's really just overpowered and slightly godmoddish. There are almost no drawbacks to his powers and I think paralyzing people by looking into their eyes is a little too close to a godmod/auto hit ability. You'll need to adjust it so we can make sure he's not going to just look at people and instantly paralyze them the moment things get heated. I also think the 20 clones need to have some specifications--like a time limit, needing to stay within a certain distance to him and so on. Also, can they act freely or just mimic him? We kind of need some more details on that.
done, hopefully that solves it ^_^

2. He'll need at least one more flaw. Not being able to look into his own eyes is more a power limitation than a personality or physical flaw. So you have two good flaws--just needs one more. ^^

Quote me when you get him fixed! Thanks. <3


Okay...sorry this took a bit. I was contemplating. The only thing you need to do is give more details about his five clones--how far away from the original can they stray? Can they think on their own? What happens if one is hurt/killed? To be honest, this isn't a fighting RP so I doubt he'll ever need to use either ability much since they seem geared toward fighting. But it's best to fully detail things just in case.

I'm going to accept stuttering when he talks to girls only if you promise you absolutely WILL rp him doing that, every time he talks to a girl.


Okay I promise I will have him stutter with girls and I have made his clones to just 5 that can't go far and think on their own.

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 1:42 pm


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Alright, I'm going to approve your character. He will stay in Malachite Dorm. Before you do anything else: create a profile thread in the accepted profiles forum. Also, choose a class schedule.

We're in Week 1 of the school system and today is lunch. Welcome to Rosentale.


Finally, as a general note to everyone in this thread: This is not a thread for chatter. It's a thread for people to post profiles and crew to work with them to get them approved. Please do not spam this thread--it just means more scrolling and clicking back and forth for the crew and it's really irritating. We have other places where chatter is completely welcome, but this thread is not one of those places. Thank you!
PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 3:48 pm


StrawberryZ0mbie
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Thanks Berry. I'm not exactly a psychologist XD. Now, I read everyone's profiles to see how it's done. I changed it slightly, I hope I finally get the thumbs-up!



Fortunately, it doesn't actually take a psychologist to be able to write a good character profile. =)

I'm really confused why she gets so mad when you mention her parents, when her bio says she doesn't care about them or her place in the court. But I'm going to let that slide. You will, however, have to give your word that this exploding into flames is not going to be disruptive. If she starts doing this all the time, or disrupting scenes, or it feels like it's being used to draw attention to her, you will be called out and asked to stop. We've had a lot of people in the past use those kinds of abilities to disrupt class time or make people notice their character and it gets a little annoying, so please be responsible.

Also, everyone "can be" over confident or "can be" too loud. It's not really a flaw when she's just like that sometimes. It's a flaw when she is like that all the time--so you'll need to edit that to make it clear this is her personality all the time, not just occasionally.

But sure to quote me when you make the changes so I'm sure to notice right away. =)


I've made changes and I promise to not use the fire powers often. It's fine. But it's 11pm here and I'm beat. Do I get the thumbs-up?

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 4:05 pm


Maraesia
StrawberryZ0mbie
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Thanks Berry. I'm not exactly a psychologist XD. Now, I read everyone's profiles to see how it's done. I changed it slightly, I hope I finally get the thumbs-up!



Fortunately, it doesn't actually take a psychologist to be able to write a good character profile. =)

I'm really confused why she gets so mad when you mention her parents, when her bio says she doesn't care about them or her place in the court. But I'm going to let that slide. You will, however, have to give your word that this exploding into flames is not going to be disruptive. If she starts doing this all the time, or disrupting scenes, or it feels like it's being used to draw attention to her, you will be called out and asked to stop. We've had a lot of people in the past use those kinds of abilities to disrupt class time or make people notice their character and it gets a little annoying, so please be responsible.

Also, everyone "can be" over confident or "can be" too loud. It's not really a flaw when she's just like that sometimes. It's a flaw when she is like that all the time--so you'll need to edit that to make it clear this is her personality all the time, not just occasionally.

But sure to quote me when you make the changes so I'm sure to notice right away. =)


I've made changes and I promise to not use the fire powers often. It's fine. But it's 11pm here and I'm beat. Do I get the thumbs-up?

Maraesia


Okay, she is approved and will stay in Sapphire Dorm. Please post a thread for your characters in the accepted Character profile sub forum and choose a class schedule before you do anything else.

Today is Week 1, lunch time. Welcome to Rosentale. =)
PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 4:17 pm


just saying now, won't be on Friday and Saturday, going away for the weekend.

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 4:26 pm


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(OOC: Sorry if I'm bugging you, but I just wanted to inform you that I'm waiting for your approval on my character's profile. ^-^")

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Name: Ciara Tessla Collinsworth; but please, call her Tessla.

Species: Vampire.

Age: Seventeen.

Gender: Female.

Appearance description: As a vampire, she tends not to get too much sun and is thus very pale. This results in the female only preferring to dress in the plain but solid color black most times. The only exception to this is if she feels like one day wearing red for a specific special occasion. With that being said, Tessla is fond of old, classic clothing and leans towards elegant gowns and expensive accessories, such as real gold or silver jewelry. It's quite fitting for a species such as her to have that kind of taste, since vampires have been around most noticeably for over a hundred centuries past.

Personality: Tessla is your typical "princess". Stemming from royalty, she has always had servants do everything from feeding her, to bathing her. And it's not like she doesn't know how to perform these daily practices on her own, she just feels that she doesn't need to waste her precious time in doing them when there are people already at her service to do so. This particular trait of hers is synonymous to being "spoiled". Tessla is also very vain, and this leads to the girl having a very high self-esteem. There seems to be nothing that gets past this large ego of hers, so far. This characteristic of hers can also be translated as having way too much self-confidence. This isn't necessarily a bad thing, but who says it can't be her downfall. Having too much confidence means you're rather immune to others' opinions on certain topics, which is why Tessla is known to be extremely stubborn. She almost never gives in to the other person in arguments, only liking to keep her own views. She believes that whatever she says is correct, ninety-nine point nine percent of the time. The only exception is if the opposing arguer goes to great measures in proving the girl wrong; that seems to be enduring a life and death situation and surviving it to tell her that she's wrong on the issue.

Despite these seemingly negative aspects of her, however, Tessla is simply a lonely person on the inside. These bad traits of her are only there because she really doesn't know how to deal with people. She wasn't very sociable as a child, and therefore this snobbish, outer shell was created.

Truthfully, Tessla is a nice, kindhearted person. And she feels that if she shows this part of her, someone will end up taking advantage of her and hurt her.

Bio: Tessla grew up in a rich household and thus never experienced anything of a shortage. Her entire room was the size of half a football stadium, and it was littered to the brim with cute dolls and stuffed animals. Every day, Tessla would have servants bring in luxurious platters full of a delicious array of sweets from all over the world that only people as wealthy as her family could afford. And that's not even half of what her parents had bent their backs to give her. If that doesn't scream "princess", then I don't know what does.

But yes, her parents worked very hard to be able to do all this stuff for Tessla. Money just didn't fly into a person's hands from the sky. Her parents owned a modeling business which gradually became famous around the continent, and that's where all of their earnings rooted from. However, due to this, Tessla barely ever got to see her parents, and she felt rather lonely with only her dolls to play with. She never bothered to talk to the maids because she knew they all probably resented her, having to serve under a bratty little girl such as herself. She gave them applause, though, for being able to withstand being someone's slave for years on end. That is something Tessla would and could never do. She was too proud to be a person's pet.

But enough about her childhood, let's get on to Tessla's teenage years. She was always home-schooled, but her parents had decided to put her into public school once she had turned fourteen. The students, however, had made fun of her abnormally white skin, and some even grew scared of her due to the fangs she bared at them when they did. Three years of enduring this miserable time, Tessla withdrew into herself more than ever before, and she pleaded for her parents to transfer her to another school, immediately. They could never turn down their only child, their princess, and so they willingly complied. Now here she is at Rosentale Academy. Hopefully she'll make friends this time, possibly even a lover, and be able to throw away her outer facade.

Skills and Abilities: Shape shifting - Tessla can transform into any animal she wishes, however she can't turn into a creature. (Example: Cats are easy for her to transform into. Dragons are a no-no; she can't turn into them at all.) She also has increased physical strength and agility, as a vampire of course.

Character Flaws: (I listed her flaws as her personality traits. They are as follows: she is spoiled, vain/egotistical, arrogant, and stubborn.)

Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual.

Status: Single.

Likes:
- Sweets
- Anything classified as relatively "cute". (Example: a stuffed animal)
- Music, specifically the sound of a violin or piano being played
- Consuming animal blood
- Challenges
- Genuinely nice people
Dislikes:
- Consuming human blood
- Sour foods
- Figures of authority
- Large crowds
- Humid weather
- Graveyards
Extra Information: N/A
PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 4:45 pm


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Hehe. Don't worry, I saw you. I'm actually currently busy and just kind of popping in and such. (Cooking dinner). you can try to poke our Vice Captain to see if she's available to approve you, or you can wait about....10-15 minutes and I'll take a closer look ^^

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 4:51 pm


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*looks above* I saw it. >8D I am just slow reading person slow reading. XD

I like her so far and the details make my eyes cry with tears of joy. Considering that her picture is black and white, you might want to add more than just her skin appearance and consider perhaps her eye color and hair color.

And thank you for listing her flaws in the flaw list anyways. We still like to see the confirmation that they are flaws.

And it is nicely done so I shall accept her. However, I will point out that you might want to avoid having her shape shift too often since it's a bit disruptive and some teachers will attack your character with a bat if she dares to shape shift in class while they're giving a lecture or something. xD But her ability would be fun to have around if done once in a while.

She will be staying in the Emerald Dorm. Today is Week 1: Thursday so it's Lunchtime. =D Please remember to put her character profile in the accepted character profile subforum and to make a class schedule for your character.

Thank you! <3
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