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 Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2012 12:12 am
"it's ok Orochi I'm here now" she told him to help him feel more safe "Sorry to have bothered you sir we'll be going now" Patchouli told to the man as she took Orochi's hand and started to walk away
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Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2012 1:58 pm
"Good will overcome...." ▀Chris Rant▀ Chris' ear twitched as he listened to her. Hungover!? he repeated not sure if he heard her correctly. I don't drink! he said before he recalled a memory of the full moon yesterday night. Wait... now I remember. I remember losing control of myself... and after that, all I know is, the sun rose and I was able to fight to get hold of my body again, and then.. nothing. He blacked out afterwards. Ugh, my head.... I feel sick. What's going on! he said not understanding a 'hangover'. "....No the hell it won't!" OOC:
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Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2012 2:27 pm
 Angel was really confused on this one, Not exactly, he said as he sighed and continued mimicking her movements. If you need me to help on your training, I don't mind. He gave her a sincere smile.
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Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2012 2:32 pm
 Lake was surprised seeing Patchouli appear and the boy acting weird. I'm sorry Patchouli, if I had scared him in anyway. He said as a sweat drop passed his head. As they walked off, his forehead showed wrinkles and he asked himself a question. Patchouli... has a son... possibly? Oh my gosh, Patchouli. That means.. you... you...! His face flared up as he ran the opposite direction trying to leave the thought out. ooc:
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Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2012 7:54 pm
 Orochi calmed down a bit and smiled up at Patchouli, glad she was here. "thank you Patchi-sama. Oh and thank you for saving me from the water to" he added, completely forgetting about Lake at this point as they walked away. "so Patchi-sama can we play on the beach today?" he asked, never having gotten to build that sand fortress with Taur.
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Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2012 8:36 pm
Patchouli looked over at Lake first "No I'm just his care taker" She explained before Lake got the wrong impression she then felt Orochi tug at her arm and ask if they could play on the beach
"Of course we can why don't we go and get our swim wear first?" Patchouli replied she gave Orochi a friendly smile as she spoke.
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Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2012 8:51 pm
(Ok let's get things moving a bit)
Rina had a fun time with but it was time to go as she was more worried about her dad now and headed home immediately to check on him giving Tryton a good bye before leaving
"Daddy I'm home sorry I was away so long, please don't be mad at me" She called out as she entered the basement of the house to the secret room
Rina began telling the mirror all the stuff she did while she was away and all the playing she got to do.
Suddenly Rina elt a shift and strange pulse in energy coming from the mirror and was startled
"Oh simple spawn of mine, with out you I would be so lost,
You have stuck by my side..."
"...No matter what the tragic cost," Rina replied
"Your crazed demented thoughts have given me a new found strength,
Cause you are my daughter Justine, an i'm..."
suddenly the stone statue began to shake and shed it's stone coating as the mirror began to crack
"Breaking out of there!" Rina replied in surprise and joy
Suddenly the dark and demonic figure emerged from the mirror stretching himself as he let a small roar
"Daddy! You're alive!" Rina exclaimed excited to finally see her dad
"I'm free, free atlast. May this world return to it's natural Chaotic state. Come my little abomination we have work to do" The figure stated as he picked up Rina and carried her on his shoulders
" Hee hee I missed you Daddy" Rina replied giving her daddy a hug as they left the house.
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Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2012 9:56 pm
(so as it turns out he could just break out himself the whole time....lame)
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Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2012 10:09 pm
(not really i'll explain how he got out it involves the dolls Rina has been collecting)
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Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2012 10:22 pm
(rina's been collecting dolls?)
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Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2012 10:26 pm
(well her version of dolls aka the victims she murdered from the town her basement is full of them)
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Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2012 10:32 pm
(ok the last time you did that was when you sent Grenga out specifically to get the books to help free her dad)
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Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2012 10:37 pm
(it'll be explained Rina was basically researching away to free her dad hence wanting the books, but in the mean time she was also making these dolls with souls still attached to them,
not knowing this is a type of ritual and with enough dolls rina's dad is able to break the seal safely by sacrificing the doll souls in exchange for his
so basically Rina was making these soul dolls for fun not realizing this was away of freeing her dad )
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Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2012 10:45 pm
(well if thats what happened....then write that....
I mean I don't see how thats hard to do. If the soul ritual is what freed him, then have Rina do the soul ritual. Don't have her sitting around and then randomly "feel a pulse" and her dad breaks free by himself. Because it looks really lazy. And thats just writing yourself into a corner because you can't say "oh she did the ritual" later on, because we just saw what she did and she did JACK s**t
There is no point in not showing important plot details for things like this. Infact not showing it only raises more questions and makes what your doing seem like more of an asspull than it is. No ones characters are around, so there isn't any risk of giving anything away. Just showing her using the corpses to bring back her dad isn't going to somehow clue anyone in on how to kill him, and even if it did we couldn't use that information anyways. There is literally no point in keeping that a secret)
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Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2012 10:48 pm
(The point was that Rina wasn't suppose to know the soul dolls would set her father free and sorry i didn't explain it was on the clock as it were and didn't have much time to make an elaborate post)
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