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Chibi Halo
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 12, 2015 12:40 pm


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Hydro and I are working on the final stage of the convo with Zeph. Everyone has a window of opportunity to talk with the guy before this, which gives up ample time to get our script hammered out. I'm looking at this final exchange as a sort of closure. For the sake of not spilling the beans on 'Hydro's character development, let's just say Cae and Zeph go a loooooong way back.


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I just want to make sure I understood this clearly. Did Lorelei just go senshi mode in front of everyone? I need to know that I'm not misreading that bit so I'll know just how much to edit my first post for dinner.


          Right that's why I wanted to run some stuff by her first because I keep looking at what I plan on posting and keep wanting to correct things for tone and repeating what's been said before. I'm trying to not have her come across as being too smug sounding or as if she's trying to be overly confrontational with him. She's definitely having a "Tell me something I haven't been dealing with for the last five months" moment about some of what he's telling the girls. So I don't want to say something that will interfere with what she has planned.

PostPosted: Thu Mar 12, 2015 12:50 pm


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          Right that's why I wanted to run some stuff by her first because I keep looking at what I plan on posting and keep wanting to correct things for tone and repeating what's been said before. I'm trying to not have her come across as being too smug sounding or as if she's trying to be overly confrontational with him. She's definitely having a "Tell me something I haven't been dealing with for the last five months" moment about some of what he's telling the girls. So I don't want to say something that will interfere with what she has planned.



While I can't speak to any of Hydro's personal plans with Zeph, I don't think anything Aylin says will interfere with what Hydro and I are working on. It's more of a personal exchange between Zeph and Cae, reflecting on the past. It's still in the rough stages and needs a lot of revisions, but we'll get there. Right now I'm just trying to edit that one post for the dinner scene that I had sent you to preview. I'm really having to rethink it now and take my original intent in a totally different direction. Thank the lord some of the dialogue still works. gonk

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 12, 2015 1:30 pm


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          Right that's why I wanted to run some stuff by her first because I keep looking at what I plan on posting and keep wanting to correct things for tone and repeating what's been said before. I'm trying to not have her come across as being too smug sounding or as if she's trying to be overly confrontational with him. She's definitely having a "Tell me something I haven't been dealing with for the last five months" moment about some of what he's telling the girls. So I don't want to say something that will interfere with what she has planned.



While I can't speak to any of Hydro's personal plans with Zeph, I don't think anything Aylin says will interfere with what Hydro and I are working on. It's more of a personal exchange between Zeph and Cae, reflecting on the past. It's still in the rough stages and needs a lot of revisions, but we'll get there. Right now I'm just trying to edit that one post for the dinner scene that I had sent you to preview. I'm really having to rethink it now and take my original intent in a totally different direction. Thank the lord some of the dialogue still works. gonk


          Yeah, totally didn't expect Lorelei to do what she did. That's why I wondered if I should follow suit or not because before Seren had demanded answers at breakfast that's what Aylin was going to do in a one on one setting with her and Terra, as it's what she did with Prim. She would have showed them the broach, explained what it did, and then transformed in front of them as a display of its power. I had to improvise and revise things. Mostly though, I wanted to be sure I wasn't being too challenging about certain things because I'm responding to and referencing more than one of her characters. My first run through of things came across as too confrontational and too much about Aylin and her credentials. I still saved that bit of conversation so I could go back to it if asked about it.

PostPosted: Thu Mar 12, 2015 2:07 pm


Celestine Ravencroft
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'Hydro

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Accio Alice

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Hydro and I are working on the final stage of the convo with Zeph. Everyone has a window of opportunity to talk with the guy before this, which gives up ample time to get our script hammered out. I'm looking at this final exchange as a sort of closure. For the sake of not spilling the beans on 'Hydro's character development, let's just say Cae and Zeph go a loooooong way back.


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I just want to make sure I understood this clearly. Did Lorelei just go senshi mode in front of everyone? I need to know that I'm not misreading that bit so I'll know just how much to edit my first post for dinner.
Yeah, she did. :3 She's got some past connection to the ancient gaians. She's also not of this world.

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 12, 2015 2:24 pm


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Yeah, she did. :3 She's got some past connection to the ancient gaians. She's also not of this world.


Ok, was all I needed confirmation on. I went ahead and edited my future post for dinner accordingly. I just had to figure out which direction to take it, but I think I've got it resolved. My original intent was to have Lune's forced transformation be the one everyone witnessed first, but then I suppose I shouldn't capitalize on stuff so much, so it's probably better that someone else did this first. With my revised post I'm focusing more on the fact that Lune is not normal. Cae's using her forced transformation to probe her energy and get a feel for why she's so different. It'll actually play into my plans for one on one training between Cae and Lune anyhow.
PostPosted: Thu Mar 12, 2015 2:35 pm


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Yeah, she did. :3 She's got some past connection to the ancient gaians. She's also not of this world.


Ok, was all I needed confirmation on. I went ahead and edited my future post for dinner accordingly. I just had to figure out which direction to take it, but I think I've got it resolved. My original intent was to have Lune's forced transformation be the one everyone witnessed first, but then I suppose I shouldn't capitalize on stuff so much, so it's probably better that someone else did this first. With my revised post I'm focusing more on the fact that Lune is not normal. Cae's using her forced transformation to probe her energy and get a feel for why she's so different. It'll actually play into my plans for one on one training between Cae and Lune anyhow.
Ahh.. I'm so sorry. :'[ I didn't realize you wanted to get Lune's transformation in first. I should have waited. I hope I didn't ruin your post. I just kinda wanted to do something. I'll have to explain what Lorelei's purpose is and why she knows Zephyros. I might just delete it if it's a problem. Hydro PM'd me and she was confused about it too.

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 12, 2015 2:42 pm


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No no, don't delete your post. It's ok, You haven't ruined my stuff at all. I think I needed to go in a differnet direction anyhow. Besides, I've got a bad habit of trying to but in with my own ideas too much. I need to let other people do things theiur way a bit more. I blame it on the author bug in me. Sometimes it just takes control and gets away from me. sweatdrop

Work with Hydro, of course, but don't change things based on my stuff, please. I'm happy with my edits anyhow.
PostPosted: Thu Mar 12, 2015 3:32 pm


I approved the next Chibi post blaugh So she'll probably post it as soon as she's on.

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 12, 2015 5:06 pm


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          Okay gang read my post and chew on that theory I tossed out about the Gaia's Tokens and people of Hydro's clan. Oh and if I ever turn another post into recap the last post through Aylin's viewpoint again you have my permission to Gibbs Slap me for it. xp

PostPosted: Thu Mar 12, 2015 5:16 pm


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razz Mine might not be as long as yours but I pack a punch.

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 12, 2015 5:56 pm


Everyone, you can still talk to Zephyros, I'll try to work with Cel on getting his conversation wrapped up sometime over the weekend.
PostPosted: Thu Mar 12, 2015 6:08 pm


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She'll probably eat a bunch of pancakes after the conversation's done. smile


If Leif left you any....you're welcome to find pancake Yin in the kitchen.

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 12, 2015 6:35 pm


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Ok, I believe I finally have figured out how to explain Lunette's power being different without getting into the whole 'She's really Lady L' thing. Basically, the other senshi are light-oriented (what specific element you use as a senshi has nothing to do with this fact; light equals good while dark equals bad), while the forces attacking Gaia are dark-oriented. Here's the difference. Out in space, in the cosmos, energy is either positive, negative, or neutral. The Celestial Enclave, which is the governing body of Living Stars, has neutral energy. This explains why they are the balance keepers of the galactic realm. The positive charges out in space are responsible for creating, while the negative charges destroy and corrupt. Since Lady Lunettarie is a Living Star, she had neutral energy. When she was blocked by the dark crystal her nemesis used, her neutral energy was overshadowed by the negative charge of the crystal, thus altering her power while in the human form of Lunette. The energies of space cannot be contained by any object, which is why Lunette has no device to aide her transformation. Her necklace isn't a lock for her power, it's just blocking Lady L. Essentially, the power and personality of Lady L is still inside Lunette, but she just won't realize it for a long time. This is why she sometimes feels the other half of herself trying to give her aide.

Was that a decent explanation, or did I just confuse everyone even more? xd
PostPosted: Thu Mar 12, 2015 7:00 pm


Celestine Ravencroft
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Hot Caffeinated Cree

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Ok, I believe I finally have figured out how to explain Lunette's power being different without getting into the whole 'She's really Lady L' thing. Basically, the other senshi are light-oriented (what specific element you use as a senshi has nothing to do with this fact; light equals good while dark equals bad), while the forces attacking Gaia are dark-oriented. Here's the difference. Out in space, in the cosmos, energy is either positive, negative, or neutral. The Celestial Enclave, which is the governing body of Living Stars, has neutral energy. This explains why they are the balance keepers of the galactic realm. The positive charges out in space are responsible for creating, while the negative charges destroy and corrupt. Since Lady Lunettarie is a Living Star, she had neutral energy. When she was blocked by the dark crystal her nemesis used, her neutral energy was overshadowed by the negative charge of the crystal, thus altering her power while in the human form of Lunette. The energies of space cannot be contained by any object, which is why Lunette has no device to aide her transformation. Her necklace isn't a lock for her power, it's just blocking Lady L. Essentially, the power and personality of Lady L is still inside Lunette, but she just won't realize it for a long time. This is why she sometimes feels the other half of herself trying to give her aide.

Was that a decent explanation, or did I just confuse everyone even more? xd


Lunette is neither Ying Nor Yang but the balance of them two? Because that's what I use when talking "light" and "dark" or "positive" or "negative" to understand things. But she's Neutral/Balanced energy.

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 12, 2015 7:04 pm


`Hydro

Lunette is neither Ying Nor Yang but the balance of them two? Because that's what I use when talking "light" and "dark" or "positive" or "negative" to understand things. But she's Neutral/Balanced energy.


Longs story short, neutral corrupted by negative, yeah.
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