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 Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 9:29 pm
xLieselotte Okay! I checked in with Angel Mhai and she gave the okay. So he will be accepted. He can stay in the Moonless Night Dorm. ^^
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 11:37 pm
 Character Information:
Student Name: Saiya Maeda
Species: Lunarian Age: 15 Gender: Female Appearance description: She has blonde hair and blue eyes. She often keeps her hair in long pigtails held up by ribbons. She isn't very tall unlike most of her family and endures their taunting. The picture pretty much shows it. Personality: She is usually very quiet and awkward especially around strangers but once she gets to know them better she opens up a lot more. She tends to be a loner but truly wishes to have friends and may not seem to enjoy being talked to but feels opposite on the inside. She is very strange and eccentric. Bio: Her parents are both Lunarian but moved to Earth just as she was born. Her odd personality seems to drive strangers away so in fear of rejection remains quiet. She is a music prodigy and can play almost any classical instrument with ease. She always had extreme above average intelligence in school and was offered to skip grades but was held back by her parents who wanted her to have a normal school life. After middle school she applied to Rosentale Academy and was accepted. Skills and Abilities: High Intelligence, Occlumency (able to communicate with animals), Manipulate nature Character Flaws: Bad at social interactions, Spaces out a lot while thinking during class, Can't control nature manipulation powers very well and can cause weather changes based on moods, Not very physically strong Sexual Orientation: Straight Status: Single Likes: - Fire - Animals - Reading - Music - Making friends Dislikes: (at least 3) - Loud noises - Crowds - Rejection - Failing
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 11:39 pm
 Character Information:
Student Name: Rose Martin
Species: Fairy
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Appearance description: Her skin is slightly darker, she also has a nose piercing. She also has a set of wings, they are relatively see-through but have a green tinge to them.
Personality: Rose is a very shy and timid person. Due to her past with her father she has trouble trusting males. Once she gets to know someone, Rose is very friendly and caring, but if that trust is broken, it can never be repaired.
Bio: Rose is an only child, up until she was 9 years old she was physically, emotionally and sexually abused by her father. She didn't know what he was doing was wrong, she didn't tell anyone, because she was scared of getting into trouble by her dad. When Rose turned 9 years old she old her mother... Her mother was infuriated, and murdered her father. No one ever found out about Rose's fathers death. In result of her mother killing her father, Rose's mother went crazy and got sent to a mental hospital, Rose was sent to live with her grandmother, she lived with her grandmother for 6 years, until she came to the academy.
Skills and Abilities:
- Drawing
- Cooking
- Smart with school
- Flying
Character Flaws:
~ Over-protective
~ Timid
~ Too shy
~ Has trust issues
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Status: Single, for the moment
Likes:
- Puppies
- Strawberries
- School
- Drawing
- Singing
Dislikes:
- Loud noises
- Hospitals
- Apples
- Her father
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 11:48 pm
Whoops! I'm sorry! D= I don't know how I missed this. Okay. Your character is accepted. She can stay in the Sapphire Dorm. =D But I want to point out that Rosentale is a very lighthearted academy and most of the things that happen here are usually comedic. A little bit of drama and angst is okay every now and then. Her past is a bit on the dark side and is a bit heavy for Rosentale and many of the characters in the guild won't know how to respond if such a dark topic gets brought up so you will probably have to thread carefully with this kind of character. But you can keep that kind of bio and don't need to change anything since your character doesn't seem like one to be gloom and doom all the time. ^^
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 11:55 pm
There are just a little bit of changes that you will need to make with your character before she can be accepted. ^^ First, you will need to explain more about her ability to manipulate nature. What part of nature can she manipulate and how much can she manipulate? You will need to add some limitations to it too since we don't want to give people full ability over one element. Also, not being able to control her manipulation powers very well is not a flaw, it's a limitation--but it's very vague. And I'm going to need to ask you to just take out her ability to change the weather. Weather is hard to incorporate in an RP and it'll just get messy. Also, not being physically strong is not a flaw, it is perfectly normal to not be physically strong. Rosentale is dotted with quite a few wimpy people--including men. So you just need to add limitations to her powers and add one more flaw. Once you've done that, quote me and I'll take another look. ^^
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 12:03 am
xLieselotte Whoops! I'm sorry! D= I don't know how I missed this. Okay. Your character is accepted. She can stay in the Sapphire Dorm. =D But I want to point out that Rosentale is a very lighthearted academy and most of the things that happen here are usually comedic. A little bit of drama and angst is okay every now and then. Her past is a bit on the dark side and is a bit heavy for Rosentale and many of the characters in the guild won't know how to respond if such a dark topic gets brought up so you will probably have to thread carefully with this kind of character. But you can keep that kind of bio and don't need to change anything since your character doesn't seem like one to be gloom and doom all the time. ^^ Thanks XD I'll be careful on how I roleplay with her. Now do I sign up for classes and head to her second period class that I choose?
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 12:10 am
My_Red_Stars xLieselotte Whoops! I'm sorry! D= I don't know how I missed this. Okay. Your character is accepted. She can stay in the Sapphire Dorm. =D But I want to point out that Rosentale is a very lighthearted academy and most of the things that happen here are usually comedic. A little bit of drama and angst is okay every now and then. Her past is a bit on the dark side and is a bit heavy for Rosentale and many of the characters in the guild won't know how to respond if such a dark topic gets brought up so you will probably have to thread carefully with this kind of character. But you can keep that kind of bio and don't need to change anything since your character doesn't seem like one to be gloom and doom all the time. ^^ Thanks XD I'll be careful on how I roleplay with her. Now do I sign up for classes and head to her second period class that I choose? Yup. And make sure to add her profile in your accepted character profile thread. And most of the classes for 2nd period were dismissed so she's free to wander for now. ^^
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 12:17 am
xLieselotte My_Red_Stars xLieselotte Whoops! I'm sorry! D= I don't know how I missed this. Okay. Your character is accepted. She can stay in the Sapphire Dorm. =D But I want to point out that Rosentale is a very lighthearted academy and most of the things that happen here are usually comedic. A little bit of drama and angst is okay every now and then. Her past is a bit on the dark side and is a bit heavy for Rosentale and many of the characters in the guild won't know how to respond if such a dark topic gets brought up so you will probably have to thread carefully with this kind of character. But you can keep that kind of bio and don't need to change anything since your character doesn't seem like one to be gloom and doom all the time. ^^ Thanks XD I'll be careful on how I roleplay with her. Now do I sign up for classes and head to her second period class that I choose? Yup. And make sure to add her profile in your accepted character profile thread. And most of the classes for 2nd period were dismissed so she's free to wander for now. ^^ Cool, thanks smile
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 2:11 am
Here's my character!  Character Information:
Student Name: Anransia Jones (Debious is her real family name, but since adoption, Jones has become her preferred surname)
Species: Fire Elf
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Appearance description: She had long, flowing red hair and eyes as red as embers. She usually tries to cover her ears with her hair. Her ears are especially pointy, even by elf standards. She likes to wear formal clothes, then she puts a bit of attitude in with with pins or badges. She had no tatoos or piercings.
Personality: She is fiery, fiesty and loud. She says what's on her mind, and doesn't care if people don't want to hear it. She can come across as scary by gentle people, but once you be nice to her, she's an incredibly loyal friend.
Bio: Anransia was born to the Fire Elf Duchess Of The Third Season. Considering her mother was thought to be a virgin, she abandoned Anransia to a human family, the Jones family. They treated her kindly and raised her as a human, until one day she found out about the reason behind why her ears were so pointy. She eventually forgave her guardians, and sought to meet her true parents in vain. As soon as she laid eyes on her mother, her mother refused to speak to her. She no longer cares about her inheritance or a place in the Court Of Fire Elves, she is perfectly happy in the company of humans. Her adopters wanted to send her to Rosendale because of past experiences as previous schools
Skills and Abilities: She has limited abilities to control fire, she rarely uses these abilities. When someone mentions about her parents, she immediatly explodes into flames, but a single drop of water can calm her right down. She is a talented musician, and her pan flute playing is beautiful.
Character Flaws: She's too over-confidient, she often thinks she can do everything. She is too loud and she can says things she doesn't really mean. She is always paranoid, that's triggered by the fact she thinks everyone hates her. She will often act without thinking of the person that will be most effected.
Sexual Orientation: Straight, and always will be.
Status: Single, doesn't care much about love, but likes to pretend she has a crush on someone to annoy her friends.
Likes:
- Her pan flute
- Rebelling
- Sleeping
- Visting her adopters
- People who try to befriend her
- Red
- Warm places
- Listening to music - LOUD!
Dislikes:
- Camp Boys
- Suck-ups
- Blue
- Freezing temperatures.
- Pumpkin
Favourite Songs
-Uprising by Muse
-Girlfriend by Avril Lavingne
-Checkin It Out by Lil Chris
Extra Information: Don't ever get on her bad side!
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 3:29 am
Okay--before I can approve her, here are the changes you need to make. First of all, what do you mean by her fire power doubling, and her exploding into flames? Because she has a really quick temper, we want to make sure this isn't something that is going to be disruptive and annoying to your fellow RPers because she's constantly exploding all the time. So you need to give a lot of details on how this works and when it happens, and what are the repercussions? "Some people" finding her scary isn't really a flaw. Whether or not the other characters in the RP find your character scary is really up to them so you can't try to list other peoples' impressions as a flaw. For all you know, no one in Rosentale will actually find her scary. I'm also not sure what you mean by feeling a "lack of security"--does this mean she doesn't have confidence in herself, or is paranoid? It's sort of unclear. Also, I'd like you to state what is the result of her over-confidence--does this mean she's reckless? Or does it mean she seems arrogant? You can work on this while I'm asleep and make the changes she needs. When I wake up tomorrow, I will have another look and see whether or not I can approve her. =)
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 6:44 am
Thanks Berry. I'm not exactly a psychologist XD. Now, I read everyone's profiles to see how it's done. I changed it slightly, I hope I finally get the thumbs-up!
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 10:26 am
 Character Information:
Student Name: Anthony McMillan
Species: Demon
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Appearance description: Everything on Image
Personality: Confident, Kind, Courageous, Easily Distracted
Bio: Anthony trained in martial arts with his father who was on the police force, it wasn't Anthony's real father as he was human but to Anthony he was, he trained from a young age to be more like his father but one night his father was killed during a riot and Anthony felt lost but decided to follow in his foot steps and become a man of justice.
Skills and Abilities: Can duplicate himself to 5 clones which all act on their own, although they think alike and go for the same idea as the original but they must remain close by.
His eyes act like a paralyzing serum if he gazes directly in to ones eyes although the gaze needs to last 10 seconds and only after midnight. Can't look at his own eyes in reflection.
Character Flaws:
Day Dreams and find it hard to pay attention.
Can't talk to girls without stuttering.
Finds it Hard to work with people.
Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual/Straight
Status: Single
Likes:
- Girls
- Sleeping
- Martial Arts
Dislikes:
- Loud Noises
- Working
- Rules
Extra Information: Trained Martial Artist.
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 12:43 pm
Maraesia Thanks Berry. I'm not exactly a psychologist XD. Now, I read everyone's profiles to see how it's done. I changed it slightly, I hope I finally get the thumbs-up! Fortunately, it doesn't actually take a psychologist to be able to write a good character profile. =) I'm really confused why she gets so mad when you mention her parents, when her bio says she doesn't care about them or her place in the court. But I'm going to let that slide. You will, however, have to give your word that this exploding into flames is not going to be disruptive. If she starts doing this all the time, or disrupting scenes, or it feels like it's being used to draw attention to her, you will be called out and asked to stop. We've had a lot of people in the past use those kinds of abilities to disrupt class time or make people notice their character and it gets a little annoying, so please be responsible. Also, everyone "can be" over confident or "can be" too loud. It's not really a flaw when she's just like that sometimes. It's a flaw when she is like that all the time--so you'll need to edit that to make it clear this is her personality all the time, not just occasionally. But sure to quote me when you make the changes so I'm sure to notice right away. =)
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 12:43 pm
just wanted to comment on your characters picture which is awesome ^W^ like his eyes especially
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 12:44 pm
cHesHiRe_CaT_0013 just wanted to comment on your characters picture which is awesome ^W^ like his eyes especially thanks, I created it myself on photoshop ^_^
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