Snuff: Accepted but only after you give me a SAMPLE! scream
Kato: nope, its denied completely simply because it makes raising your stats too easy. People tend to rp monsters less seriously than their actual characters.
Dg: not looking at yours yet because of your impatience and plus my phone is dying
Really? I waited three days. All the while crew were on.
Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 7:11 pm
Fenrir Graveheart
Snuff: Accepted but only after you give me a SAMPLE! scream
Kato: nope, its denied completely simply because it makes raising your stats too easy. People tend to rp monsters less seriously than their actual characters.
Dg: not looking at yours yet because of your impatience and plus my phone is dying
Fenrir was sitting at his desk one day, going through customs, when he heard a voice floating through the air... Darkness beyond twilight, crimson beyond blood that flows, Buried in the stream of time is where your power grows, I pledge myself to conquer all the foes who stand, before the mighty gift bestowed in my unworthy hand, may the fools who stand before me be destroyed by the power you and I possess! As the odd incantation progressed, the voice seemed to get louder...Suddenly, a Hand burst through his computer screen. It gripped his face and the voice screamed "DRAGON SLAVE!"... A fiery explosion ripped through the neighborhood. Fenrir did not survive...
snuff: That'll do pig, that'll do. mrgreen Accepted.
dg: OMFG YOU HAVE THE BALLS TO COMPLAIN TO ME ABOUT BEING TOO LAZY TO CHECK YOUR SKILLS WHEN YOURS DON'T EVEN HAVE SAMPLES ON THEM YET!? scream FOR SHAME! SHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAME!
Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 10:07 pm
Fenrir Graveheart
snuff: That'll do pig, that'll do. mrgreen Accepted.
dg: OMFG YOU HAVE THE BALLS TO COMPLAIN TO ME ABOUT BEING TOO LAZY TO CHECK YOUR SKILLS WHEN YOURS DON'T EVEN HAVE SAMPLES ON THEM YET!? scream FOR SHAME! SHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAME!
I've seen others approved with no samples. They're all simple enough they really don't need them I can, however, do them if needed for each skill.
I put a short example for each one. If i need more, I can do it, but i don't think it's needed.
dg: If they were approved without samples then it was probably because they were free skills for everyone to learn, not just personal. I like to reward sharing.
meditation: alternating body current- Denied. It lasts way too long and I don't like how it makes your character, a novice if I remember right, completely immune to a type of attack. I'd say limit that this should only make your character immune to magnetism attacks your character's rank or less, and cut the duration to 5 posts with an additional 1 post per rank.
magnetic wave- Denied. This skill already exists in the Inner Storm style. If you want it then you should learn it.
magnetize: alter metals- Accepted
magnetize aura- Denied. I don't like this skill on the basis that you could just use it to stop any and all metal objects from hitting you, whether they be bullets or another melee weapon. Put some drawbacks or limitations to it.
magnetize: advanced movements- Accepted, though I don't why you bothered as normal magnetize should be able to do the same thing...
magnetize: alter gravity- This can only last one post before needing to pay the energy cost again, and requires touch. Edit those changes and this is Accepted.
grounded- This should only protect you from lightning attacks B-rank or less. Also I'm assuming you'll have to stand still when using this if you're to make yourself properly grounded.
Posted: Fri Aug 05, 2011 4:36 pm
Fenrir Graveheart
dg: If they were approved without samples then it was probably because they were free skills for everyone to learn, not just personal. I like to reward sharing.
meditation: alternating body current- Denied. It lasts way too long and I don't like how it makes your character, a novice if I remember right, completely immune to a type of attack. I'd say limit that this should only make your character immune to magnetism attacks your character's rank or less, and cut the duration to 5 posts with an additional 1 post per rank.
magnetic wave- Denied. This skill already exists in the Inner Storm style. If you want it then you should learn it.
magnetize: alter metals- Accepted
magnetize aura- Denied. I don't like this skill on the basis that you could just use it to stop any and all metal objects from hitting you, whether they be bullets or another melee weapon. Put some drawbacks or limitations to it.
magnetize: advanced movements- Accepted, though I don't why you bothered as normal magnetize should be able to do the same thing...
magnetize: alter gravity- This can only last one post before needing to pay the energy cost again, and requires touch. Edit those changes and this is Accepted.
grounded- This should only protect you from lightning attacks B-rank or less. Also I'm assuming you'll have to stand still when using this if you're to make yourself properly grounded.
I'll go through and make edits accordingly. I would just like to attempt to fix some confusion firsthand.
Making me immune to a type of attack? Are you serious? It makes me immune to magnetize, which, essentially as a human with no addons I already am for the most part. I can cut down the length, although I don't see why it's needed. It's basically making me immune to my own class. A rank or less? I see why your saying that, by magnets don't work like that. Hence why I said all magnetic attacks.
Magnetic Wave does not exist in your style. I checked. There is a similar ability, although it's more powerful and ridiculous than mine. This one simply is used to deflect things.
Magnetic wave isn't a defensive maneuver for the most part. Anything within two feet of my body would already be too close if it were a projectile for me to really do anything about. It could maybe work with a weapon, but that's it. I can cut it down to say within 1 foot of my body and/or I have to be touching the item.
According to magnetize you can only move the object around. I wanted to make sure that I could do more.
I would like to counter the verdict on alter gravity, although I wont quite yet. I plan on altering the skill so it works in more of a way that I want it to.
I can make the changes to grounded, and yes, I would be standing still.
Again, I will be going through and doing the alterations at a later date, although I would like you to reconsider some of your verdicts.
Snuff: Accepted but only after you give me a SAMPLE! scream
Kato: nope, its denied completely simply because it makes raising your stats too easy. People tend to rp monsters less seriously than their actual characters.
Dg: not looking at yours yet because of your impatience and plus my phone is dying
Ahhh. I get what you mean. Fair enough. biggrin
Posted: Mon Aug 29, 2011 1:24 pm
Yes. I've already tried to get this skill passed, but it never was. I've edited it a bit, not much though. The basic idea is still the same.
Username: Kagetsukiko
RPC name: Nai Free skill: No Type of skill: Chaos Skill name: Fragmented Identity Rank: S Limits: Must somehow be able to control chaos through either a talent, bloodline, sin, etc.. Skill description: Fragmented Identity sends the user's current physical body into chaos to create a completely new identity within five separate posts that are at least 10 good sentences long. Smell, taste, looks, nothing remains recognizable. Even the energy changes. Although, if the user has Chaotic Energy, the energy remains muddled, just in a different form. People with the ability to identify energy will be unable to recognize the energy and are extremely unlikely to connect the muddled energy of the current form to the muddled energy of the previous form. This appearance change is completely random (however, for rp purposes, only parts of it is actually random) save for age, which can be determined by the user to a point. To determine the necessary factors for one's new identity, several die are rolled during the five post process. The process as a whole, while simple, takes a long time, a full rp day to be exact (3 real life days), during which the user is completely helpless. Furthermore, Fragmented Appearance cannot be used continuously, and a long wait time must be given between changes (3 real life months). Of course, the change of both body and energy itself has an effect on the performance of the user. For a while (3 real life days) after using this skill, the user will suffer a -1 rank in physical abilities and the amount of energy they have. After having used this skill even once, the user does not age and, instead, will maintain their new appearance until they user Fragmented Identity once more. Post 1- User simply starts up the change. Body begins to disfigure, but nothing certain can be seen. Post 2- Age is decided. User decides on which decade they wish to be aged to (ex: between 11 and 20 years old, between 51 and 60 years old). The lowest age is 1 and the highest age is 60. The user then rolls a ten-sided dice to determine their specific age (ex: chose 1 to 10 years old interval and rolled a 5 so the user is 5 years old). Post 3- Hair/eye color is decided. User rolls a six-sided dice: 1 is pink/red, 2 is orange/yellow/brown, 3 is green, 4 is blue/purple, 5 is black, 6 is white/gray. This color applies to only the hair or the eye (rper chooses at the very last post). The color for the body part that wasn't rolled for is up to the rper. Post 4- Gender is decided. User rolls a four-sided dice: odds create a male, evens create a female. Post 5- This is where everything is decided and finalized. Up until now, the user's skin has been a bubbling mess that gave away only hints of the decisions that had been made. At this point, the skin smoothes out to reveal a completely new appearance. Sample: Nai stumbled into the world of the sins through the rip she had made. On the other side was the vast ocean. Here, she knew that the hunters wouldn't be able to track her. Her scent was completely lost and there was no one she knew of who could reach this place. Closing the rip behind her, the girl collapsed into a tired heap. Sloth was a lazy sin, but using him still took a large chunk out of her stamina. Despite the annoyances of the sin, who felt that trying to get up was too much trouble, Nai forced herself to stand. After wavering around a bit, the girl started the arduous process of changing herself. She needed to complete it before too much of her scent seeped into the area around her. Placing both hands over her face to concentrate, the girl began. Beneath her fingers, she felt her skin shift and within her she felt the chaos rip around through her body. The sensation was strange, but not necessarily painful. *time skip* After completing the process, Nai had collapsed into an exhausted heap. Now, though, she was awake. Opening her bright blue eyes, the girl lifted her dark body off of the ground. The bangs of her black hair fell over her face. Oh, wait, no. Nai couldn't be referred to as "she" anymore. Right, now the former girl was a boy. No, a man at about 24 years of age. Everything about her had changed. Well, no, her hair was the same color. Still, though, that was about it even for her hair. Other than the color, nothing about it matched its original appearance. Nai tested her voice. Instead of the childish sound that used to come it, a more lower voice sounded from her throat. She even smelled different. The skill was a success.
Is it a Free skill?: Nope, personal, but like all others, I reserve the right to teach it to people
Type of skill: Energy skill
Skill name: Ragna Blade
Rank: SS
If it uses ammo how much:
Limits: takes two turns to cast
Skill description: By chanting the following incantation,
"Lord of the dreams that terrify. Sword of cold and darkness, free yourself from the heaven's bonds. Become one with my power, one with my body, and let us walk the path of destruction together. Power that can smash even the souls of the gods RAGNA BLADE!"
Beth can summon mass amounts of energy into her hands, forming a large black energy blade. Due to the raw destructive power of this attack, a direct hit is an a guaranteed kill. Any wounds inflicted by this spell cannot be heals, and the body is disintegrated when hit.
Is it a Free skill?: Nope, personal, but like all others, I reserve the right to teach it to people
Type of skill: Energy skill
Skill name: Giga Slave
Rank: SSS
If it uses ammo how much:
Limits: takes 2 turns to cast
Skill description:
By chanting the following incantation,
"Darkness beyond blackest pitch Deeper than the deepest night Lord as vast as the largest ocean Colder than the coldest ice King of Darkness who shines like gold upon the Sea of Chaos I call upon thee and swear myself to thee. I stand ready to bear the strength you give me. Let the fools who stand before me be destroyed By the power you and I possess! GIGA SLAVE!"
Beth creates an orb of black energy in her hands. This orb quickly expands as it smashes into it's target. The spell consumes everything it touches, except for Beth, even allies. This spell is an instant kill on any blow, even a glancing hit. As the spell consumed everything, after it is cast, a large rounded out crater is left where it was cast.
Sample:
A violent black mass swirled in Beth's hands, then elongated into a long blade like shape. Bolts on energy cackled around the blade as Beth ran at her target. She swung downwards, slicing through the main body of the large beast, but to no avail. The attack had done some damage, but not what she was hoping for. The beast looked down at Beth and her party and gave a deep laugh. "Give up mortals, you cant stop me." It said, sending massive tentacles out to grasp each party member. Beth and a few others were able to dodge, but one member of her team was taken. This made things complicated. She had one attack she could use, but it would consume her ally as well. Beth looked him in the eyes and said, "I'm so sorry." her ally smiled and shook his head, "Do it. It's for the good of the city, just tell them i went out like a hero" Beth smirked and began to charge up her spell. She began to speak the incantation, and her body began to glow golden. A black sphere formed in her hands, and she rushed the beast, seeming to throw the sphere at it. When she was close enough, she slammed the black orb into the beast. A thunderous roar shook the ground, and the sphere expanded, swallowing a large chunk of the land, the beast, and Beth's ally. The day was won, but at a heavy price.
Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2011 8:49 am
kage: Accepted
snuff: Didn't I already accept something like this from you before? And where is your writing sample!? stressed
Username: Kagetsukiko RPC name: Nai Is it a Free skill?: No Type of skill: Quicksilver
Skill name: Time Accelerate Rank: S Skill description: The opposite of Time Lag, Time Accelerate slows down the time of the user rather than speeding up their time, which makes it seem as if they are accelerating the time of their surrounding. This skill can neither be used in battle nor when anyone is able to see the user, but it does have its uses despite the added restrictions, especially since that when the user's time is slowed, they seem to disappear completely. Of course, the user, in turn, cannot see what is happening around them because everything is moving too quickly in relation to them. Because this skill slows down the user's time, only one post is needed regardless of how long the skill is needed to last. Sample: Nai was trapped. She had yet to be found, but in the tight corridor, it was only a matter of seconds. She couldn't even use Time Lag to find her way out. There was only one other thing to do, the opposite. Taking a deep breath, the girl activated Time Accelerate. Suddenly, her time slowed drastically and because of that she flickered out of view. In a blink of an eye, Nai found herself in the same spot, but several days later. Her pursuer was nowhere to be seen, she had escaped.
Skill name: Time Zone (single) Rank: D Limits: Time Lag or Time Accelerate must be known. A-rank training if Time Zone (group) hasn't been learned. Skill description: By investing an extra amount of energy during the beginning of a bloodline skill, the Quicksilver is able to use the skill on a single object other than themselves. While using this version of Time Zone, the user cannot use a bloodline skill on themselves and they must be able to see the object when they activate the skill. Sample: Nai shot a bullet and surrounded it with its own time, mimicking the effect of Time Lag, but on the bullet rather than herself. Before her target knew it, he was nailed in the heart.
Skill name: Time Zone (group) Rank: D Limits: Time Lag or Time Accelerate must be known. A-rank training if Time Zone (single) hasn't been learned. Skill description: By investing an extra amount of energy during the beginning of a bloodline skill, the Tempus Papilio is able to use the skill on everyone and everything within a 1 meter radius of themselves (1 meter rule does not apply here), giving those affected the benefits of the skill that is used (ex: everyone within a 1m radius will have their time sped up by Time Ritard). While using this version of Time Zone, no one within the affected area can move from their spot. As long as they do not change their specific locations in the slightest bit, they are allowed to move any part of their body that they wish to move. Should this requirement not be met, then the skill is automatically ended. A three-post cool-down is needed after using this skill. Sample: Nai looked at her team. They had been on what was supposed to be a undercover mission into a hostile nation, but a few minutes ago, the cover had been blown. Filled with stealth specialists, the group had fared badly in most of the fights it had encountered. It was a miracle they managed to get together as it was. Nai thought as she beckoned the small group towards her. Confused, they shuffled slightly closer, the girl continued to beckon, they moved even closer. This process continued all they were all practically touching each other.
Posted: Sun Oct 30, 2011 2:57 pm
Erm.... Could someone look at my skills please sweatdrop ?
