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 Posted: Thu Sep 29, 2005 2:06 am
Kiraketsu Avor Avor cuts the generator around his leg, then with roar and the sound the metal screaming he pull his leg out. Not dropping his weapon, he colapses onto the ground grasping the wounding leg, shards of jaggid metal ecstroding from all agnles of it. The Jedi seemingly distracted, he takes the opertunity to rip the pieces out of his leg. Blood gushed from wounds as metal sounded agaisnt the wet hard floor. ((Why the ******** would I want to go with you, my character doesnt know you and I came to get at the comm records, that have now been sorta blown up.)) ((watch the language. oh, this is why)) Sergei looked down at the now moving Icarian. The Icarian had no reason to come with him and Sergei didn't need the argument now, seeing as how there were Jedi and some strange troopers in the room. But he did need the Icarian. One who hated the Jedi so much would have to be an invaluble ally and Sergei would need all the help he could get in the coming events involving Jedi and Sith. So he took out his blaster pistol and hit the helpless Avor in the head with it, hopefully knocking him unconcious. ((Im not helpless, other then several jagged pieces of metal in my leg and minnor blood loss Im perfectly fine. BTW, Im not as frail as you puny humons xd )) Avor's hand was grasping a shard of metal that was inbedded in his leg as Sergei approached, but didnt realise it right away. He didnt notice Sergei untill his arm was mid motion, with only a moments notice, Avor's arm moves in a swift, sweeting, single motion, ripping the shard out his leg and ramming into the thigh of his attack. If its wasnt for the sound of blaster bashing agaisn bone((I love alliteration)) you could almost hear the shard scraping and digging into the bone after piearceing the flesh. A stike from above has less chance of knocking a person out, combined with Avor's think skull((Ha ha)), left him uneffected. As fast as he attacked, he pulled hard on the shard towards him while punching at the same same thigh with the other arm. The plan was to use raw power to rip the shard lenth wise, from the side of the leg out the front. Pulling alone would just bring Sergei closer or down ontop of him, the punch would stop the force of pull from being wasting in such a manner, like steping down on a loose piece of wood when you pull a nail out it it. ((This is what happens when people mess with my plan! I make sure they dont walk away twisted The plan was to go in all pissed off, but then discover, by searching the records in the libary, that the Jedi were honesty innocent and it was by the Sith the messages didnt make it. Then once that done, attempt to join the Jedi to fight the Sith. But know, Septh wanted a few rounds and that b***h tried to blow up the entire libary. crying Now Im so crying I want to knife people.))
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Posted: Thu Sep 29, 2005 4:53 am
Jim was creating a wall of boxes around him when he noticed Kari walk into the medbay. He was just about to continue with what he was doing, when she ran out of the medbay.
"I wonder where she's going in such a hurry. I guess there's only one way to find out."
He abandoned what he was doing and started following her at top speed. They went down passage after passage, then she suddenly stopped. Jim took this pause to catch his breath. After a minute she started off at a run again, which Jim also did. After a while they ran up some stairs where there were a bunch of people and what appeared to be a conflict. He noticed Kari was kneeling next to Glacian. He decided to just casually walk past them. As he did, he heard one word 'Medbay'.
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Posted: Thu Sep 29, 2005 5:26 am
Just as Glacian was about to responed to Kari, his head jerked in the direction of the two OTs being yet again thrown at the wall, with Glacian in their path, only his eyes were still closed. He got turned toward them and held up his hands as he invisioned the force acting like a bubble cushion that didn't quite stopp the OTs but did slow the enough that the only hit the wall with enough force for them feel it, but not for it to hurt too much, it was all Glacian could do. He said for them to stay here and watch the door as he turned back to Kari, eyes still closed, and said, "Alron? But how is that possible? He must have fell for at least half a mile and then had to drag himself up that way..." Glacian reach out his 'vision' and tried to see, or he guessed he was actually sensing now, Alron and his force. There was no way he would have been able to see him by just recognition of his masterful force control, seeing as he was soo beaten. But the fact that he had sensed it before and he knew the familiar signature of Alron's force arua let him sense a faint glimmer of Alron.
"My god your right," Glacian said, unfurowing his brow which had a little sweat on it from him learning to use this new 'sight' but not opening his eyes still. "Take me to him, I'm still getting used to this some."
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Posted: Thu Sep 29, 2005 6:09 am
Kari saw that Glacian wasn't opening his eyes, at first she didn't think anything of it, but now it worried her. When Glacian asked to be taken to Master Alron Kari lifted Glacians right arm over her solder to help get him up and someone he could use to support his wieght. As Kari started to take Glacian to the medbay to see Master Alron, Kari thought it convenent because it looked like in his condition Glacian looked like he needed to go to the medbay himself. As Kari started to leave she saw Jim, one of the jedi that choose to return to the temple.
Come on, Master Alron is alive in the medbay, Kari said when she could tell Jim was looking at her
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Posted: Thu Sep 29, 2005 12:09 pm
Once they were in the med bay, Glacian took his arm off of Kari and walk a little shakily, as if he only half saw everything in the room, feeling the counters and walls as he made his way toward Master Alron's bed. As he stood next to the bed, eye closed, a droid looked him over and scanned him before moving over to Kari.
Ma'm, the boy you brought in has 2 broken ribs and a fractured skull from a major concussion. From what I can tell his concussion has cause a splinter of his skull to cut into his brain and cause his vision to become ruffly 2/40, making him leagally blind, we can operate, but there's a chance he will never see again anyway, and removing the splinter could possibly bring back his vision, or make him completely blind. I told you this because I was not sure what his reaction would be and I did not want him becoming agitated around our current patient. We would like to operate on the ribs right away at least and...
The driod was cut off by Glacian as he said, "I don't care what you do, just fix me up and take out the sliver, what ever the forces will is, I will see or become blind, it doesn't matter." Very well the droid said as it told Glacian to follow it to a operating room and Glacian followed, telling Kari to watch over Alron.
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Posted: Thu Sep 29, 2005 12:26 pm
In the med bay, Jim had just caught up when he heard that Glacian was blind. He made his way over to Master Alron's bed, standing right beside Kari.
"It is Master Alron. I would have never believed it had I not seen him with my own eyes."
Jim stood there for a while,wondering what to do next.
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Posted: Thu Sep 29, 2005 2:54 pm
Master Vegilla ((Er, Veg is still in the hallway.)) Veg still stood there, wondering why the soldiers had suddenly gone commando. And how they were still standing. He always liked to bowl. With a flick of his wrists he lifted the two oafs into the air and sent them whizzing towards the Jedi who was just getting up. If all went as planned, they would take him out then slam into the wall again. Just then Veg saw a man run out kinda oaf-ishly, probally thinking he was moving fast. He looked messed up, and so did the person he was carrying. Probally one of thepeople who met the wall. No way they could run, never mind run fast. "Sephiroth!" Veg yelled, hoping to get the fellow Jedi master's attention. He had some words that needed to pass through his ears. ((ha! i love it veg, that thing about them thinking they were going fast, perfect. im sorry, that was just funny to read))
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Posted: Thu Sep 29, 2005 5:57 pm
(( FREEZE IT!The RP is paused for now, no IC posting untill I say so. I have gotten several complains coming from this thread, and I need to address them before the RP can continue any further. We may eve have to re-do some posts, but we'll see. Issues Issue one- Kiraketsu's use of the force, and force powers dispite the fact he has had no training. You cannot do something a Knight is learning to do just because it helps you escape. If that were true we would have bounty hunters running around throwing force lighting at people. There has to be order in the Force system. There is a line between Force Users, Force Sensitive, and Non-force adept. Force users know how to use the force from training and experiance. These would be Jedi, Sith, Dark Jedi and so on. Force Sensitive people are those who can become force users. Think of them as little ani from episode one. Non-force adept people cannot and never will, use the force. Its that simple. Questions?Issue two- SPEED HACKING! BIG ******** NO NO! PUPPET MASTERING! BIG ******** NO NO! Kiraketsu, you CANNOT move around that effing much in your posts. You entered a room, attacked someone, then picked them up and left all in one post. You CANNOT do that when there are other people in the RP, or when you are RPing with a Player Character. Kiraketsu and Avor, you CANNOT assume another Player Character's actions. You cannot say you pistol whip them in the face, then carry them out of the room. You have to swing the pistol whip, and wait for his reply post. He was obviously pinned so there was no way to aviod it, but as you can see he was not knocked out. You cannot say you jab something into their leg. You can say you try to, but you have to give them time to respond. This goes back to speed hacking. Your actions are limited in posts. You cannot stab someone, then kick them, then punch them, then shoot them, all in one post. YOU HAVE TO GIVE THE OTHER PLAYER TIME TO REACT! I will be posting the AMP as a sticky soon. Or atleast have it here somewhere. Questions?Third Issue- Less of a problem with RPing then it is reading back. People are RPing in situations where things are going on, and they are oblivious to it. You can't just walk into a blaster fight and be like "wanna grab lunch guys?". Read back in the thread ifyou missed things. If you still don't know whats going on after that, ask someone OOC. I do it all the time. Its fine to do. It also saves everyone your RPing with a head ache. Read back damnish. Questions?Feel free to ask a question on any other those things. Ane before Sephi freaks, I will be cleaning this up when I am done. ))
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Posted: Fri Sep 30, 2005 12:32 pm
(okay, the running fast thing was a force-ish move but even typing it i did not intend for it to be.
like avor said: i rp all my actions with the conditions for the next set in brackets, that way if the condition for the next set is avoided like " (only if it knocks him out) " and he isnt knocked out then, he just negates all the sets of actions that occur after the the ones that do apply to him like, " (only if he trips) " and he does trip. the actions after he trips apply but not the ones after he would be but wasnt knocked out. its confusing but it does make sense. if you dont understand i'll gladly explain it to you in less complicated terms.
just for the record, wow. i had no idea i was doing all that kind of crap. but now that i do, ill make sure i do my best to stop doing it.
and the only reason i was posting so fast is so that i could keep up with everyone else, but now i see that i was the one going way to fast.
and im sorry if my posts have been a little...um...arrogant. i just kinda wanted a comrade in arms, but i shouldnt have posted so...godmody. i'll be sure not to do it next time. )
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Posted: Fri Sep 30, 2005 3:44 pm
((Avor, don't be wrong just to fight like Kiraketsu. Just because he makes actions past an attack and assumes it hit doesnt mean you should too. Just because you can block and interupt the post in the middle, doesnt mean you should still post actions in that way.
And all the force s**t is stoping. Now. I'm going to be cracking down on it. So if you see something, PM me. Thats why I'm here.
Kiraketsu, stop doing that. Speedhacking. Your impateint, you save that second (if it hits) part for when the other person replies. Not before then. Not only is it not fair, but it's giving them a complete look at what you want to do. They can then just do something to stop it. So again, save the (if it hits) part for after they reply.
I would just like to say none of this is blame. I'm trying to help you, and the guild, get back on track. When RPs get confusing, people stop posting. They confuse people who would rather do something fun then deal with figuring out what happened and how it happened so fast, or so powerful, or why their character was hit when they had no time to dodge. No blame here, but I want this to be fun again.
And lastly; Liz Bliz. Shut up. Shut up good. Keep your unfriendly comments to yourself. Your not perfect either. Your OTs are quite the speed hackers too. I feel like I'm talking to my five year old cousin.
If you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything.))
((OK. I need other mod opinions on where we should jump back to. Like at what point did all this munching happen. MODS, not members.))
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Posted: Sat Oct 01, 2005 8:50 am
As Serra waits to get into the temple she notices Sephiroth. "Hi"
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