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 Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2011 10:46 am
All Hiro's customs are approved. And I know what the cloth is. That's what I was referring to.
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Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2011 11:57 am
SorceressJacklyn Okay. Time to get through all of these... Manpish: Throwing Knife- B seems low for heat seeking ability. Maybe C is normal B is go through steal and A is heat seeking... Cain: Healing Cloth- So this can only heal surface wounds? Or is it able to heal, say, a broken bone or ruptured organ? Hiro: Awakening-15 use and 8 posts penalty doesn't seem like a fair trade. Maybe make it 10/10? Bursts of Wrath- 6 feet width seems a bit big... Growth-Is there a length maximum to this skill? Cloth Whip- Considering what cloth is, I would actually say this is D Ranked. Cloth Bugs- Since you're gonna make cloth become animated bugs, I would set this up a little higher to C Rank. this only heals surface wounds.
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Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2011 11:59 am
Cain the Blade SorceressJacklyn Okay. Time to get through all of these... Manpish: Throwing Knife- B seems low for heat seeking ability. Maybe C is normal B is go through steal and A is heat seeking... Cain: Healing Cloth- So this can only heal surface wounds? Or is it able to heal, say, a broken bone or ruptured organ? Hiro: Awakening-15 use and 8 posts penalty doesn't seem like a fair trade. Maybe make it 10/10? Bursts of Wrath- 6 feet width seems a bit big... Growth-Is there a length maximum to this skill? Cloth Whip- Considering what cloth is, I would actually say this is D Ranked. Cloth Bugs- Since you're gonna make cloth become animated bugs, I would set this up a little higher to C Rank. this only heals surface wounds. approved
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Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2011 12:09 pm
_Manpish_ Username: _Manpish_ RPC name: Lucy Red Is it a Free skill?: Assassin Skill. so yes its free. Type of skill: Assassin skill. Skill name: Energy Weapon: Throwing Knife Rank: C-A If it uses ammo how much: 0 Limits: Must be Novice rank and a Assassin Skill description: This is a skill one would use in case they run out of throwing knives, or if they dont want to waste any. By simply focusing their energy the Assassin can make up to twenty throwing knives out of energy. These knives are as sharp as a normal throwing knife and are just as deadly, they also float in the air around the user and can only be commanded to fly at a target. For extra energy (B-rank) the knives become able to go through steel and are heat seeking(A-rank). Sample:Lucy sighed. she had just run out of throwing knives and forgot to bring extras in her pouch. "Well i guess we'll just have to improvise..." Lucy mumbled as she focused her energy and suddenly twenty throwing knives made of energy floated around her. "Go!" Lucy said as she pointed towards her target. She then watched as the knives flew through the air and pierced her targets flesh, killing him effectively. Edited and done.
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Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2011 12:20 pm
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Posted: Wed Jul 20, 2011 8:03 am
Username: Jackie
RPC name: Liliana
Is it a Free skill?: No.
Type of skill: Mage
Skill name: United We Stand
Rank: A-SSS (explained in description)
If it uses ammo how much:
Limits: Must have at least one other person to perform
Skill description: By connecting the energy of the caster with one or more people, the caster creates a beam of concentrated energy 4 ft in diameter and 40 feet in length. The person in physical contact with the caster pays D rank in cost for each post to subtract from the cost the caster much pay herself. Since they only need to have just one hand in contact, they are still able to use any skills that would not break that contact. For each person added, it adds a use time, a rank in power, and additional costs. It takes one post to charge this spell during which it can be stopped if the connection to the other people is broken. While this goes in a straight line, the caster can move their hand and thus redirect the beam at each new post. But the more people used, the more draining this spell is. This spell can only be used three times a day and makes the caster vulnerable for three posts, who is unable to use anything but bloodline skills.
caster+1: one post beam, A Rank and cost
caster+2: 2 post beam. First post A rank and cost, second post S Rank and Cost
caster+3: 3 post beam. First post A rank and cost, second post S Rank and Cost, third post SS Rank and cost
Caster+4 (maximum allowable): 4 post beam. First post A rank and cost, second post S Rank and Cost, third post SS Rank and cost, fourth post SSS Rank and cost
Sample:
She still tasted blood as he lorded over her. But she wasn't out yet. Her allies would be here soon. Jetting back and away on a column of air, Liliana gave herself the distance needed to set up a suppression sphere as a small safeguard. That's when the others showed up. The other people this man had tried to destroy. Come to me and we will end this, she mentally called to them. They hurried behind her, laying a hand on her from behind. Power flowed through them all, gathering in Liliana's hand. "We support the Arch-Mage!" They cried in unison as the man stared her down with death in his eyes. Charging her, she felt the power ready to be used. "United we stand against you," she growled as the beam shot forth. The man leaped over the beam, descending on them to kill her once and for all. But she brought her hand up towards him, the beam brighter now as it became more powerful from their conviction. This time, he didn't have time to fully dodge. The power ripped through his left side, filling the air with burned hair and charred flesh. As he fell to the ground, he didn't make a sound of pain but did start to get back to his feet. "No you don't. We suffer you no longer!" Liliana cried. Sweat beaded on her forehead from channeling so much power as she turned the stronger beam on him again. This time, the beam hit its mark, taking the man full in the chest. He went flying, a whole burned through him from the force of the blast. The beam vanished as Liliana fell to her knees, breaking contact with everyone. Her head spun like mad and before she knew it, she was passed out face first in the dirt.
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Posted: Wed Jul 20, 2011 1:03 pm
Jacklyn what I don't get is how this is a team skill and yet only Lili is the only one doing the work. This skill works by taking and combining the energy of the people in contact with Lili in addition to using a large chunk of Lili's own energy, right? I really don't see how just connecting energies together will strengthen an attack. I'm not saying that the others should pay up as much energy as Lili does, I just think that they should still pay up some energy. Maybe two ranks below what Lili has to pay? Or perhaps just a steady B/A-rank amount of energy or so regardless of how much energy Lili has to pay? Or are those amounts too much? (Sorry, I always did have a problem with ranks sweatdrop .)
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Posted: Wed Jul 20, 2011 3:52 pm
Kagetsukiko Jacklyn what I don't get is how this is a team skill and yet only Lili is the only one doing the work. This skill works by taking and combining the energy of the people in contact with Lili in addition to using a large chunk of Lili's own energy, right? I really don't see how just connecting energies together will strengthen an attack. I'm not saying that the others should pay up as much energy as Lili does, I just think that they should still pay up some energy. Maybe two ranks below what Lili has to pay? Or perhaps just a steady B/A-rank amount of energy or so regardless of how much energy Lili has to pay? Or are those amounts too much? (Sorry, I always did have a problem with ranks sweatdrop .) I was trying to think of a way to add that in too. Maybe C rank cost from them and it subtracts from her cost? And I changed radius to diameter because that's what it was suppose to be. As for why more people makes it more powerful if Liliana pays the cost solo: each person connected to her is a physical reminder that there's more to protect than only herself. This is really a end-game spell from the sheer cost if four people are connected to her.
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Posted: Wed Jul 20, 2011 7:28 pm
Username: (...)
RPC name: Kronos
Is it a Free skill?: no
Type of skill: earth element skill
Skill name: Stone warriors
Rank: S
If it uses ammo how much:
Limits: must be taught by Kronos
Skill description: This skill is an interesting skill. Basically, it allows Kronos to summon warriors made of Earth from the ground, made of earth. The warriors know up to the third (Or 2nd if it seems too OP) stage of the weapon style they are carrying, and can take up to B ranked attacks, which is why they take so much damn energy to summon. If there are statues or anything like that, he may manipulate those as well to become his warriors. Each stone warrior has the strength and speed of a human shadowknight.
Sample:
Kronos inhaled before sighing deeply. he kept trying to charge up one of his more powerful spells. However, whenever he did, the swordsman would charge in and attempt to slash or stab at him with his broadsword. Deciding he had had enough, Kronos slammed his hand down on the ground. At an extremely fast rate, three knight like warriors rose from the ground. They were all 8 feet tall. The swordsmaster charged and hacked at one, and his sword rebounded off of the warrior. Kronos had by then finished charging his spell and sent it at the man, instantly cutting him up in a whirl of magic.
RPC name: Kronos
Is it a Free skill?: no
Type of skill: mage skill
Skill name: blink
Rank: C
If it uses ammo how much:
Limits:
Skill description: This skill allows Kronos to teleport to any place he's been before. Inside of battle, this skill reuires one post of charging in which he cannot move his legs in the slightest. Outside of battle, it requires no charge at all. If he is taking somebody with him, it requires an additional 30 energy for everybody he is taking. (If you've seen harry potter, apparating is what his teleporting looks like.)
Sample:
Kronos had to think, and fast. He could hear a vast patrol of guards coming, and they wouldn't like what they saw when they entered the room full of bodies. It was too hard for him to fight, due to the vast amount of energy the man had already used in the fight in the room to kill all of the people in the first place. The man thought of a place in Luray, and vanished. He arrived at the gates, and smiled. Home sweet home, and with nothing to worry about. He gave cerberus the usual friendly pat on the side and a quick scratch between all six of his ears before going on his way.
RPC name: Kronos
Is it a Free skill?: no... i'm selfish like that.
Type of skill: mage skill
Skill name: flesh eater.
Rank: B (Or A? I can't decide)
If it uses ammo how much:
limits Can only be used twice in a battle.
Skill description: This skill summons a demon, in a condensed sphere of shadows. Kronos then fires the demon out at his target at the speed of an arrow. If it hits the target, the target will be latched onto by the demon, which will then mercilessly begin clawing and biting it's victim. The only way to kill the demon would be to stab it through it's head hard, or shoot it. which would also mean stabbing or shooting yourself. It can go through up to D ranked materials, anything above and it simply dissapears against. Any holy attack can destroy it..
Sample:
Kronos sighed apathetically. He had caught this man sneaking into his house, trying to rob him of his valued belongings, and then attempting to kill him in his sleep. If Kronos didn't have magic alarms around his house, he surely would have been killed. But now the man was suspended in mid air by magic, with a look of fear on his face. "Now what to do with you? I don't take very kindly to people that touch my things without permission. You do realize i'm going to have to punish you to teach you a lesson don't you?" He said. The man looked fearfully at Kronos, who was charging up a ball of wicked aura. he then launched it at the man's torso. A demon erupted from the ball and began tearing at the man's torso, clawing and biting. Kronos released the man from his magical bonds and watched him try to get the demon off. No matter how he pulled and punched and fought, he couldn't get it off. The man was screaming from the sheer pain each wound it gave him. Eventually, Kronos pulled a revolver from a nearby shelf and shot the being in the head. It dissapeard in a poof of black smoke, and the man now had a .44 caliber bullet wound on the left side of his chest. "I'd go and get that healed. It looks like it'll be a rather nasty scar." The man said with a small chuckle before walking away, leaving the man to die of bloodloss. The servants will clean it up eventually...
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Posted: Wed Jul 20, 2011 7:32 pm
Warriors: How many max? Blink: There's already a Blink Mage skill. Denied Flesh: Denied. That would be more of an unholy class skill, not mage.
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Posted: Wed Jul 20, 2011 7:46 pm
SorceressJacklyn Warriors: How many max? Blink: There's already a Blink Mage skill. Denied Flesh: Denied. That would be more of an unholy class skill, not mage. warriors: 2 to 4? Whatever is most appropriate for the rank. Blink: true... That must have been added in after I had last checked the mage skills. Since they're entirely different skills, what if I just changed the name? Flesh eater: That works, if it would have been accepted otherwise, you can just add it to Necromancer or shadowknight skills.
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Posted: Wed Jul 20, 2011 9:23 pm
XxX_-allucard-_XxX SorceressJacklyn Warriors: How many max? Blink: There's already a Blink Mage skill. Denied Flesh: Denied. That would be more of an unholy class skill, not mage. warriors: 2 to 4? Whatever is most appropriate for the rank. Blink: true... That must have been added in after I had last checked the mage skills. Since they're entirely different skills, what if I just changed the name? Flesh eater: That works, if it would have been accepted otherwise, you can just add it to Necromancer or shadowknight skills. Since Biochemists can already make "rock warriors" or stone golems, better keep it to just two. There's already a teleporting spell in there as well. Go through all of them. If you would like to submit it as a shadowknight skill, I can judge it on that basis.
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Posted: Wed Jul 20, 2011 9:57 pm
Username: (...) RPC name: Kronos Is it a Free skill?: no Type of skill: earth element skill Skill name: Stone warriors Rank: S If it uses ammo how much: Limits: must be taught by Kronos Skill description: This skill is an interesting skill. Basically, it allows Kronos to summon warriors made of Earth from the ground, made of earth. The warriors know up to the third stage of the weapon style they are carrying, and can take up to B ranked attacks, which is why they take so much damn energy to summon. If there are statues or anything like that, he may manipulate those as well to become his warriors. Each stone warrior has the strength and speed of a human shadowknight. Maximum summoning of two. Is it a Free skill?: yessiree Bob Type of skill: shadowknight/necromancer skill Skill name: flesh eater. Rank: B If it uses ammo how much: limits Can only be used twice in a battle. Skill description: This skill summons a demon, in a condensed sphere of shadows. The user then fires the demon out at his target at the speed of an arrow. If it hits the target, the target will be latched onto by the demon, which will then mercilessly begin clawing and biting it's victim. The only way to kill the demon would be to stab it through it's head hard, or shoot it. which would also mean stabbing or shooting yourself. It can go through up to D ranked materials, anything above and it simply dissapears against. Any holy attack can destroy it. EDITED
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Posted: Wed Jul 20, 2011 10:01 pm
Just change Flesh to Shadowknights only and make it A rank. After that it can be approved. Stone Warriors are approved as they are now.
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Posted: Wed Jul 20, 2011 10:18 pm
Is it a Free skill?: yessiree Bob
Type of skill: shadowknight
Skill name: flesh eater.
Rank: A
If it uses ammo how much:
limits Can only be used twice in a battle.
Skill description: This skill summons a demon, in a condensed sphere of shadows. The user then fires the demon out at his target at the speed of an arrow. If it hits the target, the target will be latched onto by the demon, which will then mercilessly begin clawing and biting it's victim. The only way to kill the demon would be to stab it through it's head hard, or shoot it. which would also mean stabbing or shooting yourself. It can go through up to D ranked materials, anything above and it simply disappears against. Any holy attack can destroy it.
EDITED
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