ShadeKyubi
New Generation Template
Name: Remias Lacode
Aliases: Rem, Remi, Re-Re [Family Only]
Species: Red Fox
Homeworld: Ragyah [Dead]
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Appearance:

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Theme Song(s):
Significant Trait: Fierce/Calm
Quotes:
Good/Evil/Other: Chaotic Neutral
Element: Time
Weapon: Bladed Ring [Soulbound, Bane of the Fated Ones]
Job Class: Time Mage
Commands:
Supports:
Limit Breaks:
Strengths: Very high AGI/MAG/RES, Attacks and moves rapidly, Multi-hit basic attack combos, High critical hit damage, Has studied keyblades at length and thus has knowledge of their nature
Weaknesses: Very low HP, Low STR/VIT, Suffers random attacks of extreme pain,The knowledge he has of keyblades may make him a target, his lack of control over Light/Dark prevents him from fully using his knowledge of keyblades
Personality: Serious, Fierce, Determined, Bitter, Obsessed, Calm, Analytical, he often mentions his sister, His mind is starting to become Unstable as it is proving that his obsession isn't enough for him to live on alone [Hints of this can often be seen in Remias' bursts of rage]
Flaws: See above
Likes: His Family, Nature, Studying, Dancing, Swimming, His Tail-Rings
Dislikes: Keybladers/Keyblades, Fire, Very Noisy Places
Fears: Disease, That someone will enter Kingdom Hearts, His attacks of pain
Family:
Mother: Jalia: Deceased
Father: Toruras: Deceased
Younger Sister: Kalia: Deceased
Bio:
Sample Post:
Remias
Location: Deep Space: White Ray
Company: None
Remias
Location: Deep Space: White Ray
Company: None
HP: 100%
MP: 100%
Remias let loose his breath and relaxed his body as he heard the cessation of sound that signified the end of the transit and the White Ray slowed to a lazy drift, the fox sat up in his chair and opened his eyes expecting to see a lush and green world but was only greeted by the sea of stars; Remias' eyes opened wide in shock "Where is it? it has to be here!" his eyes darted left and right as he span the ship in a tight circle; scanning the void for his home, discovering that there was indeed nothing to be seen the fox slammed his hands down and stood up; he stared for a moment longer before turning to the Keyblade laying on a side desk behind him "You..." the young fox leapt to where the weapon lay and sent it clattering to the floor with a sweep of his arm he summoned his weapon and started to slash it; accompanying each hit with a scream of rage,
after a few minutes Remias fell to the ground panting; as his ring blade disappeared he stared at the undamaged Keyblade and tears began to fall from his eyes as he made a solemn promise "I...I will...destroy you..."
OOC:
Name: Remias Lacode
Aliases: Rem, Remi, Re-Re [Family Only]
Species: Red Fox
Homeworld: Ragyah [Dead]
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Appearance:

Art & Character [C] ShadeKyubi
DO NOT Edit, Redistribute or Use without permission from Owner
- Height: 4'6
Weight: Light
Body Type: As pictured
Skin type: As pictured
Eye Color: As pictured
Hair Color: As pictured
Hair Style: As pictured
Accessories: As pictured plus a Silver Pocket-watch
Unusual Markings: As pictured
Clothing / Description: A long silvery-white hooded robe with a silver materiel upon the edges, silvery grey trousers and boots, Remias' clothing is enchanted with Bane of the Fated Ones
Theme Song(s):
- Persona Q: Shadow of the Labyrinth- Footsteps of Time
Persona Q: Shadow of the Labyrinth- Light the Fire Up in the Night - Dark Hour
Azure Striker Gunvolt- Sumeragi Skirmish
Ys Seven- Knight of Despair
Kamui- Heritage Memory
Significant Trait: Fierce/Calm
Quotes:
- "You say you are here because of Fate; but it's not why I am here"
"Light...Dark...ALL OF YOU ARE TO BLAME!"
"It's your fault...You're the reason I can't see them!"
"Guh! ah AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!"
Good/Evil/Other: Chaotic Neutral
Element: Time
Weapon: Bladed Ring [Soulbound, Bane of the Fated Ones]
Job Class: Time Mage
Commands:
- Stopga- Creates a large sphere which inflicts Stop upon enemies within it's confines at the instant of it's completion
Dispelga- Creates a magical burst which Dispels magical effects within a large radius of the targeted point
Testament- Creates a magical ripple that disrupts the target's memories; inflicting Time damage and Confusion, someone "killed" by this attack will lapse into a coma instead as the damage is mental rather than physical
Bizzara- Fires a piercing icicle at the target
Ice Dance- Creates four large shards of ice around the caster and a fifth above their head; the caster then floats towards the target and performs a combination attack with the fifth shard as the over four shards spin around them before ending with an overhead blow with all five shards
Decay- Interferes with the targeted object's timeline; causing it to age one hundred years in an instant; doesn't work on enchanted, awakened or soulbound objects
Acceleration Glyph- Creates a glyph that triples the velocity of any physical thing that passes through it; note the following two things; 1: if a held object is moved into the glyph without the holder following it will likely fly out of their hand, 2: if only part of someone's body is moved through the glyph it will likely result in damage to that body part
Stop Barrier- Creates a barrier of magic for a moment to deflect attacks;, anyone who hits it with a melee attack will be inflicted with Stop
Slow Pulse- Generates a pulse of magic that inflicts Slow to enemies in a small area around the caster
Clock Breaker- Accelerates the rate at which the target's body consumes energy [inflicts Doom]
Supports:
- Bane of the Fated Ones- Remias is capable of enchanting a piece of equipment to have the ability to react to a keyblade's presense causing it deal more damage to someone using a keyblade or to reduce the damage a keyblade deals
Lucky for Some- Decreases the LUK of enemies temporarily upon inflicting damage to them; the victim's LUK gradually returns to normal but decreases even further if they are hit again, exact effects are as follows
1] the victim's ailment resistance decreases
2] the victim's critical hit rate goes down
Eternal March- Remias is immune to the following aliments; Stop, Slow, Doom, Frog
Unstable Body- Remias is vulnerable to the following aliments; Sap, Toxic, Poison, Cripple, Disable, Sleep, Pain
MP Hastega- Remias recovers MP rapidly once his MP is fully depleted
Limit Breaks:
- Summon: Fumages - Summons a powerful spirit that launches a powerful Magic attack on all enemies at the start of the next three turns [[pronounced Fu.Ma-Ges like guess]]
Terminal Strike - Performs a punch or kick while accelerating it's movement far beyond it's normal performance ability, though it deals incredible damage it tears apart the used limb's muscles preventing it's further use without extensive healing
Strengths: Very high AGI/MAG/RES, Attacks and moves rapidly, Multi-hit basic attack combos, High critical hit damage, Has studied keyblades at length and thus has knowledge of their nature
Weaknesses: Very low HP, Low STR/VIT, Suffers random attacks of extreme pain,The knowledge he has of keyblades may make him a target, his lack of control over Light/Dark prevents him from fully using his knowledge of keyblades
Personality: Serious, Fierce, Determined, Bitter, Obsessed, Calm, Analytical, he often mentions his sister, His mind is starting to become Unstable as it is proving that his obsession isn't enough for him to live on alone [Hints of this can often be seen in Remias' bursts of rage]
Flaws: See above
Likes: His Family, Nature, Studying, Dancing, Swimming, His Tail-Rings
Dislikes: Keybladers/Keyblades, Fire, Very Noisy Places
Fears: Disease, That someone will enter Kingdom Hearts, His attacks of pain
Family:
Mother: Jalia: Deceased
Father: Toruras: Deceased
Younger Sister: Kalia: Deceased
Bio:
In the beginning the World was whole and full of light; but people came to desire that light for themselves; the darkness emerged from their hearts and consumed the World, the World was restored by the Light in the hearts of children but it fragmented into pieces and these pieces became worlds of their own,
ages passed and a certain fox was born; despite legends of "keys that destroyed the world" he grew up happily and upon discovering an affinity for magic he went to study at the Horin Academy, one day when the youth was visiting his family when those who still wished to make the Light their own executed a plan to summon the door once more; the area was devastated by the resulting clash of light and dark leaving only the shredded body of the young fox and the weapons of the greedy ones, seeing the explosion even from far across the world the mages of Horin academy hastened to the area and upon reaching it they found the body of Remias buried underneath the remains of his father; they wasted no time in bringing the body of their apprentice and the weapons back to the academy, Once Remias awakened the mages told him the story of the war before revealing that his family was dead; The young fox spent days in shock barely reacting to anything around himself; after a few days Remias took one of the weapons to one of the labs without a word to anyone and began to study it; while he did this the mages noticed the devastation caused by the battle had began to spread; gradually consuming their world, Noting that only enough land could be protected to sustain a few people a plan was conceived; to build a gate and send most of the population to the future while a select few stayed behind to heal the planet, shortly after the gate was built Remias took one of the academy's "White Ray" ships and went through the gate where he found a terible sight; something had gone wrong and nothing of his world remained; even the gate itself was gone, Remias spent some time weeping for his fallen world before turning towards the weapon he had brought into the future with hatred filling his heart; he would finish learning how to destroy the weapons and their wielders and he would prevent anything else from being destroyed by the Keyblades and their wielders
ages passed and a certain fox was born; despite legends of "keys that destroyed the world" he grew up happily and upon discovering an affinity for magic he went to study at the Horin Academy, one day when the youth was visiting his family when those who still wished to make the Light their own executed a plan to summon the door once more; the area was devastated by the resulting clash of light and dark leaving only the shredded body of the young fox and the weapons of the greedy ones, seeing the explosion even from far across the world the mages of Horin academy hastened to the area and upon reaching it they found the body of Remias buried underneath the remains of his father; they wasted no time in bringing the body of their apprentice and the weapons back to the academy, Once Remias awakened the mages told him the story of the war before revealing that his family was dead; The young fox spent days in shock barely reacting to anything around himself; after a few days Remias took one of the weapons to one of the labs without a word to anyone and began to study it; while he did this the mages noticed the devastation caused by the battle had began to spread; gradually consuming their world, Noting that only enough land could be protected to sustain a few people a plan was conceived; to build a gate and send most of the population to the future while a select few stayed behind to heal the planet, shortly after the gate was built Remias took one of the academy's "White Ray" ships and went through the gate where he found a terible sight; something had gone wrong and nothing of his world remained; even the gate itself was gone, Remias spent some time weeping for his fallen world before turning towards the weapon he had brought into the future with hatred filling his heart; he would finish learning how to destroy the weapons and their wielders and he would prevent anything else from being destroyed by the Keyblades and their wielders
Sample Post:
Remias
Location: Deep Space: White Ray
Company: None
Remias
Location: Deep Space: White Ray
Company: None
HP: 100%
MP: 100%
Remias let loose his breath and relaxed his body as he heard the cessation of sound that signified the end of the transit and the White Ray slowed to a lazy drift, the fox sat up in his chair and opened his eyes expecting to see a lush and green world but was only greeted by the sea of stars; Remias' eyes opened wide in shock "Where is it? it has to be here!" his eyes darted left and right as he span the ship in a tight circle; scanning the void for his home, discovering that there was indeed nothing to be seen the fox slammed his hands down and stood up; he stared for a moment longer before turning to the Keyblade laying on a side desk behind him "You..." the young fox leapt to where the weapon lay and sent it clattering to the floor with a sweep of his arm he summoned his weapon and started to slash it; accompanying each hit with a scream of rage,
after a few minutes Remias fell to the ground panting; as his ring blade disappeared he stared at the undamaged Keyblade and tears began to fall from his eyes as he made a solemn promise "I...I will...destroy you..."
OOC:
1) What's this about suffering random attacks of extreme pain?
2) Your extended writing is a bit... well, you overuse the semi-colon by a good margin. It should really be reserved for when two complete sentences are extremely relevant to one another--and even then, in most cases, a period still works as well or better. Semi-colon overuse is pretty common, particularly in writers that have just discovered its usefulness, but it's a very niche punctuation mark, more often than not proving to hinder more than help. Maybe revise your sample post a bit just in case.


