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 Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 8:32 pm
xLieselotte Okay, he's accepted. He can stay in the Graphite Dorm. =D But just so you know. Hard-headed and proud counts as two flaws. His need for blood is a vampire trait that goes with the race so it wouldn't count as a flaw. It's kind of like how humans can't live very long if they don't eat. And also, you might want to figure out what to do with his need for blood since you can't have him eating other characters. ^^ I'll kick his arse if he ends up sucking Ayu's blood >8( LOL.. I'll help him xD
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 8:38 pm
xLieselotte Okay, he's accepted. He can stay in the Graphite Dorm. =D But just so you know. Hard-headed and proud counts as two flaws. His need for blood is a vampire trait that goes with the race so it wouldn't count as a flaw. It's kind of like how humans can't live very long if they don't eat. And also, you might want to figure out what to do with his need for blood since you can't have him eating other characters. ^^
I'll figure something out with Mhai. Thanks. emotion_yatta
♫=♥
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 8:47 pm
AzzieIsAwesome23 xLieselotte Thanks! And for Nyx, do you want me to make a profile for him, or just some general info? As for her magic, she can do elemental magic, basic summoning with a few exceptions, and some healing. She also brings along some pocket spell books, so she learns spells as she goes. For Nyx, you just need to explain his personality and you might want to explain more on his background since it seemed like he lived a separate life as a human and then suddenly became Alice's familiar and how they even met is kind of vague and left for the reader's imagination. As for her magic, you want to add that in to her magic ability. You also need to limit her magic as well. It's okay if she can do all of that and be so pathetic at it that she fails miserably and never gets it right each time or have some kind of limitation that makes it impossible for her to abuse her magic. If you want her to be good at the magic she does, you might want to have her specialize in one field of magic. As for learning as she goes, you'll want to check in with a moderator if you want to add a new power. We like to stick to having a high school RP and having a lot of powers provides a lot of distractions so we try to keep it down. ^^ So just edit your character profile and quote me when you're done. =D
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 9:29 pm
Edited smile Also, I'll just drop the learning spells, and I put the specifications up with the rest of her skills.
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 9:37 pm
Almost there, but you still have to add limitations to her powers. It would be unreasonable to say she could blast out unlimited amounts of elemental magic and summon excessively that she could make an army and heal the entire planet if she wanted to. So all you need to do is add limitations to her powers and try to be reasonable since she can do elemental, summoning, and healing. We have many characters that usually just specialize in one field of magic which they are strong in and if they don't specialize in one field, they have very severe limitations that go with it. ^^ When you add them in, just quote me and I'll take another look.
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 9:46 pm
Okay, is it good now? If not, you can just take out the Healing and Summoning altogether.
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 9:54 pm
xLieselotte Great job so far! But before I can accept, I need you to clarify some things for me. For her abilities, you'll need to be more specific than just magic because I don't know if you mean she can summon monsters from the dead or do elemental magic or can make flowers and sparkles appear out of nowhere. Also, you will probably need to put up more information about her familiar since you'll probably also RP Nyx as a character as well as Alice. If you can clarify that, then we can accept her. How about I give you an example of a limitation so you know what I'm getting at. ^^ Like I have a character that is powerful in just elemental magic. But he gets tired if he uses too much spells and the more powerful the spell, the more tired he gets. I have another character that does healing magic. She sacrifices her own health to cast her healing magic so she could heal another person. Then there is another character in the guild who specializes in water magic, but she could only control amounts that are puddle sized. That's what I mean by limitation. So even though she has trouble with the other magics because she could only do them when she is strongest, she still needs a limit on her elemental magic. You only say that she does it more often than other magics, but you don't specify if it makes her tired if she uses more of it or if she could only do five spell casts a day and the like. We don't like to give people full control of an element since there has been people who completely abused that power. ^^ And also, by when she is strongest, does that mean when she has full health or something? =O Sorry for being really picky. We're really strict when it comes to powers since we're trying to keep it strictly a high school RP and not a magic flinging RP. ^^
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2012 8:13 am
 Character Information:
Student Name: Keith Rokheart
Species: Half Fallen Angel/Half Human
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Appearance description: He is 5ft 11inches tall and like to change hair color from time to time from Black to red, blonde , white and etc. Quite the hooker because he inherited the princely appearance and charisma that can win anyone's heart and opinion.
Personality:Obviously he is a player and gender was never a problem for he never quits till he gets what he wants, yet for some reason he always end the relationship once his partner gets more into him and the relationship is getting deeper and passionate. He ditches them ending all ties and communication,leaving no trace of him, like he had never been there with them. He is a very unpredictable kind of person, you never know what is going on in his mind or how does he really feel about something. He always show a witty grin at any given situation even if its all hopeless or he is all torn and hurt inside. He doesn't admit it but the sad truth is he is a mess.
Bio: Keith was born in a wealthy family with a mom who is all beautiful, kind and loving and his dad a fine gentleman who remains a loyal husband and a loving father. Everything for him seems to be perfect till his 5th birthday came, it was a lovely and happy evening as the family celebrated his special day, but even before he could blow his candles, bullets started to rain in their house, shattering all the glass windows totally trashing their house and after 2 minutes of none stop gatling, he notices a puddle of blood flowing beside him...his mom was shot and already at the brick of death his father holding her in his arms saying their last words for each other...being a kid all Keith can do is cry. Keith's father screamed crying, as his spouse died on his arms,then his once hidden angel wings spread out, carrying Keith and his dead mom into the forest. He instructed Keith to run straight to the city and promised him he would follow after he gets something from their house. Keith believed his father and made his way to the city, he was all beat up and tired that he collapsed on the streets of the city. He then woke up finding himself in a cell with chain on his right leg...he was abducted by slave traders...Keith was afraid and hoped that his father will find and save him from these bad people...every day and night Keith prayed and hope..he waited..till years past no one came..he was already 10years old, a rich man bought him and turned him to his slave...he was pushed to work day and night..he was whipped and beaten up for every little mistake...then one night..his abilities was awaken and he was able to break free...and luckily he collapsed near the Rosenthal academy gates...and he was then taken care inside the academy...as he grew and learned he made research about his past and answer some questions in his mind...but all he discovered was his dad died...and the one at fault are the spineless humans who are afraid of their difference...
Skills and Abilities:He could talk to animals and since he is half fallen angel he has superior strength and speed compared to humans and his wounds heals faster than a regular human (example regular human recovers after 6 days Keith only 4 days ) Can heal people but takes half of the full damage he healed and also makes him frail because the ability consumes a lot of his energy....oh don't forget he is a smooth talker.
Character Flaws: He plays with other people's heart because he believes all humans are liars and players...that's why he just pays them back with their own game. When irritated or annoyed he becomes a Tactless a*****e and say the most horrible things. He also wears a mask when ever he face people so you are never sure if he is being himself or just him coated in sugar. And for some reason ever since he entered that academy he became a sickly child, but the only persons who knows this is himself and the school doctor.
Sexual Orientation: Bisexual
Status: Unstable
Likes: (at least 3)
- sweets
- animals
- nature
- sun
Dislikes: (at least 3)
- humans
- liars
- darkness
- blood
Extra Information: He believes that the only person he could trust is himself.
He developed fear of the dark and fear of blood due to his child hood. When ever he is faced with his phobias the whole of his body shivers and his mind under goes a state of panic which makes him vulnerable and helpless.
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2012 8:22 am
Perfcktionist xLieselotte Okay, he's accepted. He can stay in the Graphite Dorm. =D But just so you know. Hard-headed and proud counts as two flaws. His need for blood is a vampire trait that goes with the race so it wouldn't count as a flaw. It's kind of like how humans can't live very long if they don't eat. And also, you might want to figure out what to do with his need for blood since you can't have him eating other characters. ^^
I'll figure something out with Mhai. Thanks. emotion_yatta
♫=♥
Why was I involved in here? I demand an explanation from you emotion_donotwant Kidding emotion_yatta yup I'll help you out xD!
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2012 8:57 am
Angel Mhai Perfcktionist xLieselotte Okay, he's accepted. He can stay in the Graphite Dorm. =D But just so you know. Hard-headed and proud counts as two flaws. His need for blood is a vampire trait that goes with the race so it wouldn't count as a flaw. It's kind of like how humans can't live very long if they don't eat. And also, you might want to figure out what to do with his need for blood since you can't have him eating other characters. ^^
I'll figure something out with Mhai. Thanks. emotion_yatta
♫=♥
Why was I involved in here? I demand an explanation from you emotion_donotwant Kidding emotion_yatta yup I'll help you out xD! he said you'll be the one incharge of the blood bags specifically type O- rofl
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2012 9:52 am
Hello! You're going to have to make some modifications before we can approve your character. =) First and foremost, telepathy is not allowed as an ability in this RP, so you will have to remove it. Secondly, you'll need to elaborate on his telekinesis and give it reasonable limitations (like size of objects he can move and so on. ) You're going to need to pare down his abilities as a whole as well. Even with the telepathy gone, you still have telekinesis, talking to animals, strength, speed, self healing and healing other people. That's just too many different abilities so please consider which ones you would like to remove. 3-4 unique abilities is really about the maximum you would need, or that we would allow. And if the abilities are strong, we'll suggest even fewer, to keep the character balanced. Your character flaws need a lot of work. The only real flaw you have is that he "plays with people's hearts". Taking damage from using an ability is not a flaw, but a fairly standard power limitation. Fearing the dark isn't a flaw because honestly it's almost never dark in Rosentale--we RP nighttime once every two weeks. And fearing blood is a common fear so we can't allow that either. He needs at least two more real flaws in addition to the one he has. Finally, the biography. Honestly, this isn't a master-slave RP and the sex-slave bit is kind of over the top for the kind of RP Rosentale is. While the idea of him being enslaved and escaping is okay, I'm going to ask that you remove the fact he was a sex slave and make him just a normal slave, please. In spite of the supernatural beings, this is a fairly standard highschool themed RP so things like sex slavery and unchecked ***** are kind of heavy themes for us. If you need help coming up with flaws, please visit the follow thread for ideas on what we expect of character flaws: Character Flaws
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2012 12:36 pm
Lady Shizika he said you'll be the one incharge of the blood bags specifically type O- rofl
Type OWSOME . emotion_awesome
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2012 1:24 pm
Lady Shizika Angel Mhai Perfcktionist xLieselotte Okay, he's accepted. He can stay in the Graphite Dorm. =D But just so you know. Hard-headed and proud counts as two flaws. His need for blood is a vampire trait that goes with the race so it wouldn't count as a flaw. It's kind of like how humans can't live very long if they don't eat. And also, you might want to figure out what to do with his need for blood since you can't have him eating other characters. ^^
I'll figure something out with Mhai. Thanks. emotion_yatta
♫=♥
Why was I involved in here? I demand an explanation from you emotion_donotwant Kidding emotion_yatta yup I'll help you out xD! he said you'll be the one incharge of the blood bags specifically type O- rofl He can eat Isamu all he wants, lol xD rofl
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2012 2:28 pm
Er, if it's not too much trouble, I'll just use the limitation example you put... eek
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