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Okay Snuff. After looking over the talent, you can't deny it has some powerful aspects to it. Considering your combination, I would like to see the passive stat boost removed. Especially if you plan to have stat-boosting skills through this talent. As for the chi sense being passive, no one has that passive at such a low rank. How about paying E or D energy to use until you reach Adept? It's much earlier than most would get a chance fore a passive like that and still give you the ability to use it without learning the hth style that was brought up.

how's this?

RPC Name:Jin and Taki Hatsu
Rank:Adept
Bloodline & Class:Gemini Swordmaster/Gunslinger
Talent Description: This talent is a passive one that eliminates the two characters -2 stat reduction. It's a passive thing they have developed as the two of them are both very strong. They are a perfect team, but they have forfeited their Gemin skills in order to gain more physical strength and speed.
Talent Weakness: Cannot learn any Gemini techniques except for safety line. Also do not gain any stats when in contact.
How did the character get this talent?:The two of them are the typical gemini twins but they only ever learned the safety line skill. Other than that the two worked more down their own separate class skills which makes the two not need to have them.
Sample: (at least ten sentences)

RPC Name: Xander Nyx Neuden
Rank: Expert
Bloodline & Class: Vampire Mage
Talent Name: The Blood of Another
Talent Description: This talent acknowledges that Xander is a powerful vampire (and therefore undead), and also allows him to use Necromancer techniques (his sub-class) up to the A-rank. The penalties for this are listed below:

• All Necromancer abilities cost a rank higher in energy
  
• Unlike most other mages, he cannot learn C-rank stages in any weapon styles; instead, he is restricted only to a C-rank stage of one hand-to-hand style, nothing more. He can no longer cast spells while wielding a staff like other mages; he may only use spells with both hands free
  
• Is extremely vulnerable to the incubi/succubi "seduction" ability. The reason for this is he did not only inherit the body but the natural lust for not only blood but even sex, and it is almost impossible for him to resist Incubi/Succubi because of this (even despite being homosexual he will still be able to fall for the charms of a Succubi, unlike before -- because it was a guild rule that you could only seduce those who were attracted to your sex)
  
  

Talent Weakness: Above ^
How did the character get this talent?: Xander was jealous. A vampire he had lusted for who treated him with scorn; a vampire he would've died for yet also wished had died. The vampire known as Gregor.
Gregor was his subordinate but also his ex-lover; and while Gregor had moved on, he never did. He was jealous of Gregor; for he was strong -- or at least, stronger than him -- both physically and mentally. He was everything Xander was not.
So he took it. He locked Gregor in the dungeons that night, and in that night, he became a monster. He did things that he never would've wanted in his life.
He raped him and took his form for himself, inheriting the vampiric bloodline and his abilities as a Necromancer as well. He took everything that he had. Even the victim-complex from that one last night. But he used this new-found power to revive hoards of the dead and to use the Elder Wurm's own conquest against him; thus ending the year-long war within his land and his walls.
Sample: (at least ten sentences)

RPC Name: TBA [Under construction]
Rank: Trainee
Bloodline & Class: Vampire gunslinger
Talent Description: (Let's call him Bob for now) Bob is able to walk out in the sunlight with no penalty to his strength and speed.
Talent Weakness: While out in sunlight, Bob's body is working so hard to counteract the sun must feed once every 10 posts. If he fails to do so, his strength and speed will drain down just like any normal vampires. If it comes to 13 posts, Bob's body would be working so hard to counteract the sunlight that he would simply pass out.
How did the character get this talent?: A genetic mutation when he was transformed into a vampire.
Sample: Bob was running from his coven. They knew his secret, and it was only a matter of time before they captured him and ripped him apart to figure out how he worked. "He's over there! I see him!" One of the other vampires shouted, and Bob heard several other vampires chasing him. He kept running however. The sun was peaking over the horizon, and it would give him a major advantage. As the sunlight began to hit the other vampires, they all slowed down dramatically. Bob however, maintained the same running speed until he got to the nearby village. He was safe at last, with no need to fear being dissected for his talent. He kept on with his journey however, wanting to put as much distance between him and the other vampires as possible.

RPC Name: Cicero
Rank:Novice
Bloodline & Class: Trickster Wak
tuTalent Description:White Rabbit; This is something almost crazy to think of. Though years of wandering and collecting some of Cicero experiments with different bloods have made him have changes... These changes had unlocked a speical skill that his people learn. The Chaos Scripts, the scripts were the black magic of the Waktu. Even more power than the blood scripts themselves but highly unstable side effects. This talent gives him the power of the Chaos Scripts and all Scripts cost one rank lower.
Skills
Chose Blade
Ranks:E,C,A
Description:
Putting energy into the formarms a symbol in the shape of a two lines with a triangle on top. With E rank energy it forms a blade of energy that floats over the forearm of choice lasting two posts. C rank energy allows you to form a blade on each forearm for four posts. A rank transforms the blades by increasing their size by doubling it and letting it last for six posts. Noraml blade is 3 1/2 inchs wide and 2 1/2 feet long. A rank energy size is 5 inches wide and 3 1/2 feet long.
Talent Weakness: His Earth Element it taken away... All element attacks do one rank higher to him.
How did the character get this talent?: Explained in des
.Sample: (at least tesentces) no needexplained no real way to show without new skills

RPC Name: Raphael Giletti
Rank: Master
Bloodline & Class: Incubus & Berzerker (Seul sub-class)
Talent Name: Psychosexuality
Talent Description: The psychosexuality ability is one special to Raphael. With his long life as an Incubus, and more importantly, his prolonged contact with Lust, he learned how to amplify his seduction ability to much higher levels. This is a very simple process. It's an incredibly easy for him, not a complicated thing.
He can see lust like a Seer sees energy. He can feel the lust all around him, which invigorates him and commands him to act upon it. Incubi and Succubi have been known to amplify lust and seduce people very easily, with some sort of magical and unknown allure. It's in their eyes, their skin, their blood. With this -- it's in his mind. Raphael can assert an ability he's grown into his psychos into this stream of lust within people. It maddeningly amplifies their sexual desires, expanding this stream to cover their whole body. It's been known to relax them, as well; get rid of the tense and awkward. More importantly, he directs this sexual desire, this lust, to himself. The people around him are often drawn to him in a way they can't even describe. His tongue is silver and gold, and in their eyes, his body is like a work of the goddess that they can't deny.

The first noticeable change is that people of only one rank lower cannot resist him, whereas normally, it's people of two ranks lower. Secondly, even people of the same rank as him still find it very difficult to resist his psychosexuality. This is, however, understandable considering Incubi already have this sort of effect. But -- it can become almost unbearably difficult after prolonged exposure to him. Being around Raphael for anything longer than a short forty-five minutes or so can pretty much shatter your ability to resist him. The psychosexuality continually works on your desires as you're nearby. It does not halt unless he wants it to.
Talent Weakness: While the target(s) are seduced, you cannot physically attack them or begin to use/use any elemental attacks. Basically, if you try to hurt them in some obvious way, the seduction breaks and the talent is rendered useless on them. However, if you encounter them again, or after ten posts of the seduction falling apart, the psychosexuality can influence them once more.
How did the character get this talent?: Taught by Lust to harvest the sexual power of his blood.