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RavenFear

PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 10:01 am


((this is taking freaking forever. i'm gonna finish this))Windclaw waits a few fox lengths from the edge of the cliff. He sees the bear, and yowls at it, getting it to chase him. But the bear sees Nightshadow and Windpelt and goes after them. Windclaw yowls, and runs ahead of the bear and barrels into them getting them away, Windclaw then leaps up with all his might, and bites the bears ear, his claws slashing at the bears neck, blood pouring out. The bears stumbles backwards and falls over she edge, and takes Windclaw with him. Windclaw keeps attacking the bear with all his might on the way down. The bear gets impaled on a huge sharp rock jutting out of the ground, and dies instantly. Windclaw gets thrown into the rock wall and falls in the river, unconcious and badly wounded.
PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 10:09 am


Tearstorm runs up to the edge and sees the unconcious Windclaw drifting down river. She yowls to the nearby Nightshadow and Windpelt. "It's Windclaw! He is in the river! I think he is alive!" She leaps down into the river and swims after him and grabs him by the scruff, pulling him out of the river. She yowls up at the two cats. "Get a medicine cat! Hurry!"

RavenFear


Ill_Fly_You_Jump

PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 11:17 am


Leafheart saw Windclaw leap out at the bear and knew her part was over.She saw him tumble over the edge and ran to get Moonheart.



Moonheart saw Leafheart come upto her and knew the bear was dead they exchanged a wordless glance and then she grabbed some herbs and they ran to Windclaw.
PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 11:53 am


Spottedpaw meowed to moon and sun "Oh thats so sad."


Ravenpaw had sat next ot Frostpaw listing to the story as well and she stared at them sadly she then heard yowling and knew her mentor was dead.

Leafheart


QuteFoxie

PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 11:54 am


((wait a sec...I thought Cartazz wanted something to go wrong and the bear gets away and goes into Fireclan....Im not sure....))

Skystar doged the bears giant lumbering paws. He yowled and headbutted the bear in the side, it was a powerful attack but the bear kept it's balance. Skystar was dazed for a minute and that's all the time the bear needed. It swung a great paw and swiped Skystar off his feet. He landed a few fox-lengths away by the edge of the clif. SKystar struggled to stand but his head was already clouding with blackness. He looked up just in time to see Windclaw jump on the bear and deliver a fatal blow. SKystar watched, horrified as the bear swiped and the warrior and sent him flying. His body landed, bloody and broken, a little ways away from SKystar in the river. Skystar's head was reeling but he got up and dizzily worked his way over to the wounded warrior. He sniffed the warrior but all he could smell was the stench of blood. SKystar looked around for a medicine cat and called out to one of the apprentices, "Fetch a medicine cat! Quickly!"
PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 12:21 pm


(To late the bears dead oh well and i think that was an idea.)

Leafheart


Corner-Stone-Cues

PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 1:16 pm


"What happened?" Sun and Moon watched the turmoile and ran to see what was going.
PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 1:30 pm


frostpaw jumps up when she hears the yell. shes not sure whether she should follow sun and moon or not

lonelion


Corner-Stone-Cues

PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 1:32 pm


Sun and Moon ran, each step matching the others, to the chasm. A cat's body floated down the river. "What in Grim's name happened?"
PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 1:38 pm


frostpaw did follow sun and moon and found windclaw not moving on the ground

lonelion


RavenFear

PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 5:52 pm


Windclaw, still barely alive, mewls. "Take care of Earthclan...." He says to no one imperticular. His body shudders and goes limp and his eyes shut.

Tearstorm yowls with sorrow, tears streaming from her eyes.
PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 5:55 pm


frostpaw runs up to windclaw as she heard his last words

lonelion


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PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 6:20 pm


QuteFoxie
((wait a sec...I thought Cartazz wanted something to go wrong and the bear gets away and goes into Fireclan....Im not sure....))
((That was just an idea I put out through but no one took it. Sometime in the future I think we should have some big story plot happen in Fireclan with the old mill. They're the last clan now to have something big happen in, besides they need some excitement. But lets rest for now, the bear is gone and we'll give it some time before something big happens again.))

Moonstar ran out of the trees just in time to see Windclaw go over the falls with the bear. He gasped and held his breath in horror.
Gradually a medicine cat came and Windclaw was given a decent burial near the waterfall. Even though most of the cats didn't even know Windclaw because of the differences in clans, Moonstar hadn't seen any warrior have so many cats come past his limp body and touch noses in remorse at the tragedy. It was a true warrior's death and now the clans would be free of the bear in their woods.

((Wow, you never really notice it, but our usernames become like real names after a while. Even in real life, if someone called me Cartazzz I'd respond right away as if it were my real name. I see my name in a post and I immediately look cause it catches my eye. Then again I've had the same username for at least 5 years. blaugh ))
PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 6:42 pm


((You guys had to take care of the bear by yourselfs?I couldn't.I've been at All-Region thing for band for two days.))

Snowystream sat beside Skystar."WIndclaw was very brave.I wish I could have thanked him for saving evryone including you before he died."She gave Skystar's ear a lick."Come on.Lets go get you looked at in case theres something you didn't find broken that is."Snowsytream looked over through the trees to see Willowkit running towards them."Skystar.What happened?"The little kit looked at all the commotion around them."Is the bear gone?"She spoke with perfect grammar and gathered up the situation quicker than a normal kit could have.Tenderfoot came bursting out of the trees behind her."Willokit!Don't run away from me again why I-"She stopped next to Snowystream mouth open."Oh no."Tenderfoot looked away from the cliff edge."Windclaw will be remembered by everyone.Skystar I was wanting to talk to you about something when you have the time."She signaled with her tail to young Willowkit who was interogating Snowystream.

Aclyon


lonelion

PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 6:45 pm


frostpaw falls to the ground grief-stricken
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