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 Posted: Wed May 05, 2010 7:58 pm
Sorry, but as of now, Leaf, Sand, and Mist are closed. We're trying to stabilize the number of people in each village. Please choose either cloud or rock. Also, just find a Shinobi Type that pertains to jutsu learning, that counts for both nin and genjutsu. I would suggest going to the Kurama clan for genjutsu, but you have a custom clan pending, so nevermind that.
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Posted: Wed May 05, 2010 8:09 pm
Alright, made appropriate edits, and sorry didn't see the village thing! D;
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 1:49 pm
thedancingbunny Roze Cœur 
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Full Name: Roze Celise Cœur
Nicknames: Blossom, Peirce
Age: 15
Birthdate: 4/19
Gender: Female
Village Village Hidden in the Clouds
Race: Dutch, and French
Rank: Academy Student
Shinobi Profession: Combat Ninja
Ninja Type/Class: Speed type.
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╫Major Infomation╫
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Waiting for acceptance on my bloodline (posted in custom bloodlines)
Current Bloodline Stage: First
Chakra Color: Deep pink
Chakra Level: Low, Medium if my bloodline is approved
Chakra Element: Lightning
Battle Strength: Agility, Speed, flexibility, stamina, her bloodline, and poisons
Battle Weakness: She's not very strong in the physical department, and she's not all too good with sensing things.
Fights Won: 0
Fights Lost: 0
Shinobi Special Skills:
1. Bloodline (if approved)
2.
3.
-Completed Missions-
S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
Organizations:
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╫Summoning infomation╫
Summoning Type: Animals
Boss Summoning: None, yet.
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╫Shinobi Equipment Information:╫
Headband Location: Tied around her waist.
Headband Style: Sand, longer ribbons to tie around her waist.
Headband Color: Cerise
Flack Jacket Style: cut short, to show her stomach
Flack Jacket Color: Cherry blossom
Weapon Class: Kunai, throwing stars, and basic ninja tools and weapons.
Name of Weapon:
Weapon Range:
Special Abilities:
Weapon Location: Keeps them in a pack she wears on her back.
Exploding Smoke Grenade= 5
Makibishi= 5
Shuriken= 10
Light Bombs= 10
Kunai Holster Location: Pack on her back.
Kunai Holster Color: Black
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location: Pack on her pack.
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color: Black
Backpack Style: Small pack, stylish, but easy to carry around.
Backpack Color: Black
Summoning Scroll Holster Location: On her hip.
Summoning Scroll Holster Color: Black
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╫Technique List╫
Starting jutsu
*Henge No Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
*Kawarimi No Jutsu (Body Switch Technique)
*Bunshin no jutsu (clone technique)
Ninjutsu
Genjutsu
Taijutsu
Taijutsu Style(s)
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╫Character Description╫
Personality: She's a mostly fun loving person, although at times she can act like a bit of a punk. She meditates frequently, to clear her mind, and calm her soul. So she does need to have her own quite time sometimes, and does not appreciate being bothered when she does this. But mostly she's brave and outgoing, and enjoys being with other people, aside from her "leave me alone moments," she's a sweet kid. Oh, and she loves the dutch language, so she may randomly start speaking in it, as so knows it fluently!
Her likes include: Flirting, cats, pink, drawing, pottery, piercings, meditating, tattoos, training, genjustu, chocolate, the beach, snakes, thunder storms, dancing, sleep, spicy and sour foods, boys, french fries, speaking in her native language Dutch, and friends.
Her dislikes include: Fish, when it's too bright out, cold weather, having to wake up early, people who can't focus, and people who can't shut up, and close minded people.
Nindo: "Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today."
Height: 5'8
Weight: 110 lbs
Original Eye Color: Dark Salmon
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╫Background Information╫
Roze had a pretty normal life, well at least to her it was normal. When Roze was only about 1 she was given up for adoption, not because for any horribly cliche reasons, no her parents were not killed, no she wasn't a demon child. Her parents simply didn't have enough money to take care of another child, especially since her birth mother had twins. They could only afford to keep one of their children, and as much as they tried to keep Roze, she eventually had to be given up for adoption. Her parents were devastated to see her go, as they did love her, but they really had no money, and were even struggling to keep up one child.
Roze was placed up for adoption, and being very young she was adopted out quickly to a caring family, who needless to say was very well off. Her adoptive father is a very rich and successful vendor who travels all the time to the different countries to sell his goods. She has had a good life with her adoptive family, they taught her dutch, and spoiled her to no end. A year ago, when Roze was 14 her mother had a baby brother, sadly though she was lost too much blood in the birth, and there was no one home at the time to help. She died in childbirth, but the baby boy lived through it. This devastated Roze, as she loved her mother to pieces . But since her mother's death she has taken a liking to pink, her mother's favorite color. She also got a tattoo, and started to get piercings after this happened. Although she doesn't blame her brother for it, she loves him as well, she still misses her mother.
She thinks that over all she has had a good life so far, and she knows to count her blessings, since there are many more people have had much worse pasts than her. She also knows her mother is always watching over her.
The year her mother died she was enrolled in the ninja academy, and has been enthralled into the ninja world. She has especially taken an interest in genjutsu, and loves to study old ninja techniques in genjustu and poison. She has always been good with poisons, but has no idea how good she actually is with them. She is also skilled in flexibility, and speed. Although she has noticed her strength could use some work.
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 1:52 pm
Thanks! n__n And should I wait for my bloodline to be approved before I start posting?
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 2:10 pm
If your bloodline is something you can discover at random, then you can go ahead and post, then when its approved, make up a reason that makes sense for you to suddeny acquire the bloodline's power, or something like that.
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 2:18 pm
Hmm, okay, I might just wait for it to approved, though. But thanks for the info! :3
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 5:04 pm
Ruuko Renigu
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Main Information╫
Full Name:Ruuko Renigu
Nicknames: Ru-kun
Age: 16
Birthdate: Dec 18
Gender:male
Village: cloud
Race: white
Rank: A.S.
Shinobi Profession: steal from other nation's
Ninja Type: long range tactical
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Bloodline/ Or Soul Demon:
Clan:
Current Bloodline Stage:
Chakra Color: green
Chakra Level: low High, Medium or Low - no bloodline or demon = low
/Bloodline or Cursed seal or Lesser Demon= Medium/ Main Demon or Soul demon and bloodline = High
Chakra Element: waterElement's you are allowed two Elements untill Jounnin Rank then you gain another unless posseing a elemental Bloodline
Battle Strength: tool's, estimating
Battle Weakness:
Fights Won: 0
Fights Lost: 0
Shinobi Special Skills:
*Note Special shinobi skills must be approved BEFORE posting your profile*
1.
2.
3.
-Completed Missions-
S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
Organizations:
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Summoning infomation╫
Summoning Type:
Boss Summoning:
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Shinobi Equipment Information:╫ Headband Location: left arm
Headband Style: tied around arm
Headband Color: dark blue
Flack Jacket Style:
Flak Jacket Color:
Weapon Class:long range
Name of Weapon:
Weapon Range:
Special Abilities:
Weapon Location:
Exploding Smoke Grenade=10
Makibishi= 5 pair of five
Shuriken= 15
Light Bombs= 18
Kunai Holster Location: chest
Kunai Holster Color: army green
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location: front of waist
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color: army green
Backpack Style:
Backpack Color:
Summoning Scroll Holster Location:
Summoning Scroll Holster Color:
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•Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Jutsu)
•Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
•Bushin no Jutsu (Clone Jutsu)
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Ninjutsu
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Genjutsu
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Taijutsu
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╫Character Description╫
Personality: clever, sly, kind, chivilrous, versitial, wise crack-ish
Nindo: life is a gamble so why not live
Height: 5,8
Weight: 181
Original Eye Color: blueish green
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╫Background Information╫
has lived in the V.H.C for his entire life. he showed pormise at shinobic skill's, mostly with his love of making bombs and traps. his parents and neighbors convinsed him to start ninja training. part of why he wanted is for him to use these invention's of his to good use.
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 5:28 pm
Sparrow Yamanaka
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Full Name: Sparrow Yamanaka
Nicknames: "Row", "O", or "Yama"
Age: 17
Birthdate: Feb 10
Gender: Female
Village Cloud -Kumogakure (Village Hidden In The Clouds) Race: White
Rank: Academy Student
Shinobi Profession: Combat???
Ninja Type: Speed ninja, Medical ninja
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╫Major Infomation╫
Bloodline/ Or Soul Demon: none
Clan: Yamanaka Clan (being applied for)
Current Bloodline Stage: none
Chakra Color: Purple
Chakra Level: Medium
Chakra Element:Wind
Battle Strength: nothing yet, i guess, speed, healing and quick reflexes, reduced reaction time. Support ninja
Battle Weakness: Direct one on one combat. Talking, or quick temper.
Fights Won: 0
Fights Lost: 0
Shinobi Special Skills:
*Note Special shinobi skills must be approved BEFORE posting your profile*
1. Speed
2. Durability
3. Memorization
-Completed Missions-
S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
Organizations:
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╫Summoning infomation╫
Summoning Type: none
Boss Summoning: none
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╫Shinobi Equipment Information:╫
Headband Location: Around waist
Headband Style: Belt Style
Headband Color: Purple
Flack Jacket Style: Cloud nin
Flak Jacket Color: Cloud standard color
Weapon Class: Tanto
Name of Weapon: none
Weapon Range: none
Special Abilities: none
Weapon Location: small of back
Exploding Smoke Grenade= 6
Makibishi= 10
Shuriken= 12
Light Bombs=2
Kunai Holster Location: Right Thigh
Kunai Holster Color: Purple
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location: Left Thigh
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color: Black
Backpack Style: Traveling small, ANBU
Backpack Color: Black
Summoning Scroll Holster Location: Small of back, below tanto
Summoning Scroll Holster Color: black
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╫Technique List╫
•Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Jutsu)
•Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
•Bushin no Jutsu (Clone Jutsu)
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Ninjutsu
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Genjutsu
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Taijutsu
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╫Character Description╫
Personality: Very cute, and beautiful. But she butts heads with other females. She like seeing woman figures in charge though. She enjoys helping others, and loves her village to death. She is not afraid to defend her village or destroy any one in her way.
Nindo: Friends are like family, Village is like home, and death is like my job! xd
Height: 5'4"
Weight: 120
Original Eye Color: Auburn, Red
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╫Background Information╫
Small beautiful girl who is the next in line for the Head of the Yamanaka Clan. She grew up normal ad safe and sound, but always envied the stories of her father's missions. So she did great honor to her family by joining the academy!
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 5:29 pm
This looks good, but DENIED for a few things. First off (Though this did not really affect my descision) please take away the descriptions of each subject after filling them out. It makes reading them easier.
You have no RPC gender, which you should fill out.
You only start with one element, then get the second at chuunin, and the third at jounin. I know its kind of misleading, but thats how it goes.
Your weapon needs to be approved in the custom weapons thread if it has a special ability, though I'm pretty sure they wont accept something thats different for everyone, its just too hard to keep track of. Also.......180 Yards for a composite bow? MAYBE for a longbow, but NO WAY for a composite.
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 5:37 pm
@Sparrow: DENIED, but easily fixable. Until you are accepted into Yamanaka, your chakra level will be Low. Shinobi special skills are what is granted by your bloodline/shinobi type. Look at the advantages for those, and put those there. And I saw the question marks next to shinobi profession. That is defined as your RPC's job. As a Yamanaka, you can say you work at a flower shop or something, or make a job unique to your character.
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 5:48 pm
gregar828 @Sparrow: DENIED, but easily fixable. Until you are accepted into Yamanaka, your chakra level will be Low. Shinobi special skills are what is granted by your bloodline/shinobi type. Look at the advantages for those, and put those there. And I saw the question marks next to shinobi profession. That is defined as your RPC's job. As a Yamanaka, you can say you work at a flower shop or something, or make a job unique to your character.
So my profession can be anything? It doesnt have to involve ninja stuff does it?
Do i have to have shinobi special skills now? Or can i wait to develop my character a bit before i have to add them? And do you want me to just edited the post, or do you want me to post my entire profile again with the fixes?
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 5:53 pm
(i will fix the other stuff. for the element thing, you said that up to two element's to start with in the skeleton. for the composite bow thing, i could not find any info about how much distance it get's and you never said it had to be confirmed.)
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 5:56 pm
You can edit it, but just post here again saying its done when yor done editing.
The profession can be whatever you want, within reason. You dont really need a job, but sometimes it makes for interesting roleplay.
I guess you can add them later, but the specail skill are just what is inherent to your character. Your a speed and medical ninja, so your skills would be: 1 rank faster than current rank (Speed), able to learn medical ninjutsu 1 rank higher than current (Medical), and any other skill brought on by speed, medical, or Yamanaka. I guess you can add them later, but that would only affect you negatively.
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 5:58 pm
Composite bows depending on the weight of the draw have a variety of ranges most of them have an accurate range of 50 yards as a standard, but there are some who are able to sight in and shoot with great accuracy at 100 yards and depending on the angle of the shot some can even push teh bow to it's limit of 200 yards.
:Edit
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