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PostPosted: Thu Mar 22, 2012 11:23 pm


StrawberryZ0mbie
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Hey! Sorry this took so long. When you quote, be sure you quote one of the crew members and not yourself, so we notice you!

Okay...two issues before I approve:

1. Some of her flaws are kind of borderline okay. It means they CAN be flaws, but they can also be virtues, depending how you play them. For her nervous tendencies and over protectiveness, please elaborate in the profile on How these are flaws--like, what do they make her do or how do they affect her negatively.

2. For her power--how much faster than a cheetah can she run? Cheetahs average very short bursts of 60 miles per hour. They can't actually run that fast for a very long time. In fact, when hunting, if they don't catch their prey on their very first attempt, they usually go hungry because they can't just run that fast all the time.

You need to elaborate--how much faster than a cheetah can she run (Are we talking Cheetara here, or just like 65-70 miles per hour?) and also state how long can she do this before she has to stop and rest.

Thanks! When you've made these changes, feel free to quote me so I can take another look.


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Name: Susan Chang

Species: Neko

Age: 18

Gender: Female

Personality: Susan is very fun-loving, she cares about the people close to her very much and will never let anyone hurt them. Susan is also very flirtaious and out-going. Due to her over-protectivness, she is very over protective over her friends and people she loves, which means that when someone is doing anything un-respectful to anyone she loves, she will clash out and attack them. Also she has nervous tendancies, which means that when she is feeling nervous she will pluck fur from her tail, or sratch at her skin, she also rambles, which makes her say things she doesn't mean, and can offend people very easily.

Bio: When Susan was growing up she was always teased by her siblings because she was the only one out of them who had picked up the gene of being neko from ther great grandmother. Susan's parents keep her locked inside the house all day, they didn't want anyone to know about their daughters species, Susan had little contact with people, but she is still out-going and willing to get to know anyone she meets.

Skills and Abilities:
Susan is very fast on her feet, she can also go faster than a cheetah, but she is not able to run for long periods of time, without passing out from lack of energy.

Character Flaws:
- Over-protective
- Nervous tendencies
- Rambling

Sexual Orientation: Bi-sexual

Status: Single

Likes: (at least 3)
- School
- Reading
- Making and drinking tea

Dislikes sad at least 3)
- Her siblings
- Dog fur
- The colour yellow
PostPosted: Thu Mar 22, 2012 11:33 pm


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Ah, I see what I did there...Working on it. Or do I have to change the whole bio, flaws, and everything?


You need to just alter the parts I mentioned. =)


Okay =)


Hello. Just to be clear on this

Quote:

Character Flaws:
- Can run fast
- Very Flexible
- Has a sense of humor


This part is supposed to list her flaws. Things that are negative about her. None of these are flaws. They are all virtues. Please be sure to put in some real flaws per the threads I requested you to read earlier! Thanks ^^

quote me again when she's edited.


Okay... I think I have it now.

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 22, 2012 11:41 pm


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Please be sure to put all information about her flaws in the actual flaws section since it's easier for people to find it right away. That's why that section is there. =3

I'm not going to accept self harm as a flaw. Mostly because self harm is a real affliction many people struggle with and it's just kind of rude to stick it in the flaws section. You can add that she does self harm when nervous to her extra information if you like and replace nervous tendencies with something else, though. =3

Finally, you neglected to mention how much faster than a cheetah she can run. ^^

One more edit and I'm sure we'll get it right. ^^
PostPosted: Thu Mar 22, 2012 11:49 pm


iiLexi_Luvii


Okay, I'm going to approve her. Before you do any posting anywhere else, please set up a profile thread in the forum, and select a class schedule.

Currently the school is on a field trip so you'll need to be posting in the available threads in the event forum--no one should be at the school right now. =)

She will be in Sapphire Dorm.

Welcome to Rosentale.

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 22, 2012 11:57 pm


StrawberryZ0mbie
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Please be sure to put all information about her flaws in the actual flaws section since it's easier for people to find it right away. That's why that section is there. =3

I'm not going to accept self harm as a flaw. Mostly because self harm is a real affliction many people struggle with and it's just kind of rude to stick it in the flaws section. You can add that she does self harm when nervous to her extra information if you like and replace nervous tendencies with something else, though. =3

Finally, you neglected to mention how much faster than a cheetah she can run. ^^

One more edit and I'm sure we'll get it right. ^^



Name: Susan Chang

Species: Neko

Age: 18

Gender: Female

Personality: Susan is very fun-loving, she cares about the people close to her very much and will never let anyone hurt them. Susan is also very flirtaious and out-going.

Bio: When Susan was growing up she was always teased by her siblings because she was the only one out of them who had picked up the gene of being neko from ther great grandmother. Susan's parents keep her locked inside the house all day, they didn't want anyone to know about their daughters species, Susan had little contact with people, but she is still out-going and willing to get to know anyone she meets.

Skills and Abilities:
Susan is very fast on her feet, she can also go faster than a cheetah, she is able to go at 80 miles an hour when she is running at her fastes, but she is not able to run for long periods of time, without passing out from lack of energy.

Character Flaws:
- Over-protective- Due to her over-protectivness, she is very over protective over her friends and people she loves, which means that when someone is doing anything un-respectful to anyone she loves, she will clash out and attack them.
- Nervous tendencies- When she is feeling nervous she has a tendency to go really quiet and get very clumsy
- Rambling

Sexual Orientation: Bi-sexual

Status: Single

Likes: (at least 3)
- School
- Reading
- Making and drinking tea

Dislikes sad at least 3)
- Her siblings
- Dog fur
- The colour yellow
PostPosted: Fri Mar 23, 2012 12:00 am


My_Red_Stars


Okay, I'm going to approve her. Before you do any posting anywhere else, please set up a profile thread in the forum, and select a class schedule.

Currently the school is on a field trip so you'll need to be posting in the available threads in the event forum--no one should be at the school right now. =)

She will be in Emerald Dorm.

Welcome to Rosentale.

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M i n i R e d S t a r s

PostPosted: Fri Mar 23, 2012 12:08 am


StrawberryZ0mbie
My_Red_Stars


Okay, I'm going to approve her. Before you do any posting anywhere else, please set up a profile thread in the forum, and select a class schedule.

Currently the school is on a field trip so you'll need to be posting in the available threads in the event forum--no one should be at the school right now. =)

She will be in Emerald Dorm.

Welcome to Rosentale.


Thank you! Thank you!! whee
PostPosted: Fri Mar 23, 2012 5:11 pm


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Name:Enapay Chayton

Species:Shaman

Age:15

Gender:Male

Personality:Quiet, outdoors man, athletic, kind, timid

Bio: Both his parents are pure blooded native Americans. He and his family lived in a small town very close to the wild. He and his father would.go out and hunt. They would embrace their ancestry and the nature. TmHis mother grew ill one day when he was 9. They tried different combinations of herbs and other medications but nothing worked. When she died they knew what to expect. But it still saddened him that his mother passed. He and his father continued to live their lives but his father decided it would be best if he had gotten a proper education. His father and talked with others around town and they decided to send him to Rosentale. Due to the fact that it was a very good school and it wasn't very far away. Before he traveled through the forests and different cities, his father gave him a tomahawk. It was the same one that was passed down generations. It was made of stone and eventually was refurbished to steel. The back was slightly hooked and had two beaded feathers at the butt of he grip. Eventually he made his way to school and started to do what his father wanted.

Skills and Abilities: 20/17 vision. Nimble and athletic. Can perform a chant that can change the weather.

Character Flaws: He has the english, math and science skills of 5th grader.(Would this count as a flaw or a mental setback?) Has a very small attention span. So he can get off task very quickly and that can get in the way of him learning, even if he tries his best to focus. Is not a very sociable person. When he is confronted(as in someone wants to talk), he tries his best to stray away from the conversation. His weather changing ability not only takes about 5-10 minutes to perform depending on the current weather, but he can only change heavy rain or snow to light rain or snow. He can also do the same with lightning. But instead he decreases how often the lighting strikes.

Sexual Orientation:Straight

Status: Single

Likes: Nature, hunting, Venison

Dislikes: Forest Fires, littering, being away from.nature.

Extra Tomahawk History: (Yeah the tomahawk has a backstory)The tomahawk was crafted in the center of the wild long before Columbus arrived. The tomahawk was forged be the village shaman and his son. The tomahawk is bound to its owner through blood. It.must be passed down from father to son or the spiritual.energy will eeat.away at the child's energy.





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PostPosted: Sat Mar 24, 2012 3:55 pm


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Name: Harley

Species: Human

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Personality: He is normally rather happy, and tends to try and slip jokes into the things he says every so often. However he has difficulty expressing himself and has difficulty in understanding some emotions. This has caused him to sometimes seem a bit odd, however he can act better around people he knows and likes. He hates being falsely accused and will do anything to prove the accusers wrong. He is also hyper observant, so he notices a lot of things.

Bio: He grew up in a small town, or at least it seemed small to him, he never really did much. His life has been pretty normal, just living like a human; however, due to becoming bored of his life, he started dabbling in things that were not human. Eventually he ended up becoming a student at Rosentale Academy.

Skills and Abilities: None that he’s aware off.

Character Flaws:
- Lazy
- Has difficulty with some emotions
- Stubborn
- Very indecisive
- Has a tough time trusting people
- Secretive
- Easily distracted


Sexual Orientation: Straight

Status: Single

Likes:
- Relaxing
- Snow
- Water
- Freedom
- Eating
- Drinking


Dislikes:
- Bright lights
- Sleeping
- Silence
- Being Watched
- Arrogance
PostPosted: Sat Mar 24, 2012 4:09 pm


Sir Harley


Good work! He is accepted! He can stay in the Limestone dorm.

Remember to put his profile in the accepted character subforum and get him signed up for his classes.

Right now the school is on a winter field trip so when you post, he can go and attend the lantern festival that is going on right now. ^^

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 24, 2012 4:17 pm


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Good work! He is accepted! He can stay in the Limestone dorm.

Remember to put his profile in the accepted character subforum and get him signed up for his classes.

Right now the school is on a winter field trip so when you post, he can go and attend the lantern festival that is going on right now. ^^

Yay! Thanks, I'll do those things right away!
PostPosted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 1:51 am


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Name: Red Shibuya

Species: Vampire

Age: Doesn't age.. He's 17 Forever

Gender: Male

Appearance description: Red possessed a vividly dark red eyes which compliments his hair. And you can see him lurking around the school with his head set.

Personality:
- Competitive
- Passionate
- Violent
- Stubborn
- Reserved

Bio:
I came from a rich family of businessmen. Spoiled and pampered. But all that went away with the arrest of my father for prostitution and selling of illegal drugs. I got kicked out of the mansion and into the streets. Taking my anger and frustration on other people I joined street brawls and gang fights when that wasn't enough, I got into national tournaments of mixed martial arts. Taekwondo, Judo, Boxing. I was invincible fueled by my anger and money, I sought to find the world's strongest fighters. Fate finally found me. I lost to a fighter with skin that of snow. To demorale me of my fights and making his point that humans were inferior compared to that of his race. Sayign that a spirit of mine never belonged with the humans, I was rechristened as a vampire.

Skills and Abilities:
- Limited Superior Strength
- Keen Smell and Sight

Character Flaws:
arrow Hard-headed
arrow Proud
arrow Needs regular blood, or Skills & Abilities are null and void
arrow Distrusts people
arrow Lacks expressing himself

Sexual Orientation: Straight

Status: Single

Likes: (at least 3)
- Fights, Violence, Gore
- Competition, Contests
- Apples

Dislikes: (at least 3)
- Weak people
- Being Weak
- Lazy People

Extra Information: I'll add informations when something comes up

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 2:46 pm


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Okay, he's accepted. He can stay in the Graphite Dorm. =D

But just so you know. Hard-headed and proud counts as two flaws. His need for blood is a vampire trait that goes with the race so it wouldn't count as a flaw. It's kind of like how humans can't live very long if they don't eat.

And also, you might want to figure out what to do with his need for blood since you can't have him eating other characters. ^^
PostPosted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 4:57 pm


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Name: Hans Vladimir

Species: Half demon/ Half human

Age: 18

Gender: Male

Appearance description: (optional) He is 6'1 lanky in height but, lean. And has several tattoos throughout his body.

Personality: Hans is a mysterious person, who confides in his books. He irks rude people especially hotheads. He is very polite and will befriend almost anyone. He may be a tad insecure, but can be open to others when he'd like. He has a dark background, but is sometimes misunderstood. He enjoys others if they enjoy him.

Bio: Hans' father Czar was a horrid man, a drunken and estranged parent. His mother a (Russian experiment) escaped from her facility and exiled to northern Germany. There she met Czar, a very young, handsom, promising man. They had Hans and then came his brother. Hans started school in many different regions, he studied abroad. So he is multilingual, Russian, German, English, French and Japanese. When he had left home, he was bared with bad news of his family crisis, traumatized, pained, and tainted he decided to forget he had a family and abandoned his homeland and is now attending Rosentale Academy aware of the different creatures that linger there and expects to find true happiness.

Skills and Abilities: Telekinesis(he can only move inanimate objects), Levitation, Umbrakinesis(he can't keep a constant whisk of power in daylight, but emits/wields a more stable length of power but, not too much or he passes out of harnessing dark magic)/Lunarkinesis(he uses this ability to draw power from the moon, but not to "heal" him or any nonsense like that).

Character Flaws: Impatient, trust issues, and Emotionless at times.

Sexual Orientation: Unknown

Status: Unspoken for.

Likes: (at least 3)
- Tea
- Books
- Ravens/crows i.e birds

Dislikes: (at least 3)
- Immature people
- the deceitful
- carpet

Extra Information: His parents died when he was young, he had a younger brother that committed suicide after his parents death. (The "lunarkineesis" is not manipulating the moon physically, at all, its drawing power from it)

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 5:30 pm


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Okay, there are a few changes that you may need to make before I can accept your character.

First the flaws. Shapeshifting only into a crow is not a flow. It's just a limitation on your character's powers and is better off found at the skills and abilities section. What we are looking for are flaws on his personality that will negatively impact him when he is interacting with other characters.

Also, just remember that if you choose to use having a temper as a flaw, that would mean he would have to get mad more easily than others and it wouldn't take long for someone to make him mad and the whole bad temper thing kind of contradicts with him being emotionless.

Remember, flaws are something that are a regular occurrence for your character and is an issue that your character has to deal with constantly throughout the RP.

Also, since you're going with just the bare minimum of flaws, you're going to really need to limit his abilities and get rid of a couple since he has a bit too many powers. Apparently he has the ability to move objects, as well as manipulate shadows and the moon, and also having the ability to levitate in the air and shape shift into a crow or raven is quite a lot.

Once you change those, just quote me and I'll take another look. Also if you need any help with coming up with flaws, you're free to reference the Resources for better characters and coding subforum. There are resources there that you could look through that can help you and the Character Flaws - Doing it right thread also has a long list of flaws that you could choose from that could help serve to inspire you.
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