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 Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 1:50 pm
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 1:54 pm
I know what 1 is scream scream scream
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 1:58 pm
Assembly_Assassin Lance Fulgurant Assembly_Assassin Newbie Question:
When it says that something requires X number of posts to learn, do I actually have to make X number of posts, or can I simply put several "posts" worth of text into one post to learn a technique? you may have one long post yes, that's what i do
Sorry for all the nitpicking questions sweatdrop I just don't want to under post anything.I believe that one good solid paragraph of about 4-6 sentences can be considered one post, as long as it's good rp-ing. It shouldn't be a bunch of random stuff, it should have to do with the jutsu you're learning, here's an example of something I wrote Lance Fulgurant  Kaizen Minoru
改善 山崎實
Demon Host of the Mist
Fire | Lightning | Earth | Water | Wind
Kai nodded his head slowly, still unsure, but with Luo's support he was willing to at least try. Closing his eyes, Kai moved slowly through each hand-sign, memorizing them. He knew how to manipulate water, it was all about his mind-set, when using the suiton techniqes he had to let his chakra flow in the way that water does. But how did he make his chakra burn? He let chakra build up in his stomach as he thought it over, trying to make the chakra take on the properties of Katon chakra. [1/6]
As he performed the final hand-seal Kai said unsuredly, "Ryouka no jutsu", then took a deep breath, breathing in with his stomach rather than his chest. As the air mingled with the chakra in his stomach, Kai began focusing chakra into his throat. After lining his throat with the chakra, Kai exhaled, releasing the air and chakra both through his throat and mouth. The air and chakra passed through the chakra film in his throat, the chakra beginning to tingle, until it burst forth from his mouth... as nothing more than a small gout of flame. [2/6]
Kai scrunched his brow in annoyance, taking a quick glance at Luo to see if he could read any kind of emotion on his face. Clearing his throat unnecessarily, Kai began again, moving a bit more quickly through the hand-seals this time. He was sure that the building up chakra in his stomach wasn't the problem, so perhaps he simply wasn't putting enough chakra behind the technique. Finishing the final hand-seal once more, Kai said clearly, "Ryouka no jutsu!"[3/6]
Kai forced the chakra up through his throat, just as he had done before, but this time he began building up even more chakra in his gut as the original chakra snaked its way up his throat. Just before the chakra was about to pass the chakra film, Kai pushed the chakra in his stomach up through his throat in a sudden burst. As the new chakra rushed up his throat, Kai completely halted the original chakra, and as the new chakra met with the original it pushed the chakra through the film and out of his mouth in a sudden burst. This time, to Kai's great delight, a truly formidable flame burst out from his mouth, but it only lasted for a short moment. [4/6]
Kai beamed at his progress, he almost had it, and just a few moments before he had been worried that he wouldn't be able to produce a flame at all. He had the general idea down, now it was just a matter of maintaining the flame. Kai went through the process all over again, performing the hand-seals, building up chakra and then crying out, "Ryouka no jutsu!" Just as before he let the chakra rise through his throat and then sent another wave up from his stomach to push the original chakra out to produce the flame. This time however he continued to build chakra in his stomach, and pushed it up through his throat and out through his mouth, the chakra acting as fuel for the flame. [5/6]
As the jet of flame issued forth from Kai's mouth, Kai moved his head so that he was now pointing the flame straight up into the air. The flame rose more than thirty feet into the air. Kai was exultant as he continued to spew flame from his mouth. As he stood there for a few moments, expelling flames from his mouth, the flames began to take on a shape of their own, much like Luo's had. But rather than taking the form of a dragon, the flames took on the visage of a great wolf. Finally Kai could hold the jutsu no longer and the flames were expelled. [6/6 Katon: Ryouka no jutsu (Fire Release: Dragon fire Jutsu) learned]
Looking over to Luo, Kai smiled, his crimson eyes exultant in his triumph, and asked excitedly, "How was that?""I live to fulfill the dreams of those that came before me" (could I learn some more Katon techniques while I wait for the mission to start?) as you can see each part is roughly 4-6 sentences of varying lengths, mind you this isn't a super great post, but it gets the job done
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 1:58 pm
Congratulations. Would you like a cookie because you are so smart?
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 2:01 pm
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 2:02 pm
I think everyone else's description of what a 'super great post' is entirely different from mine is, considering I think that both the example given to me by Shira and Lance were both GREAT posts.
Perhaps I just don't know forum-based RPing though. sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 2:05 pm
well, I can only speak for myself, but I don't consider that a great post because reading over it I could have been more descriptive, or at the very least I could have had less useless sentences, and by useless I mean sentences that didn't add anything to the scene, but if I tried to go back and rewrite everything I did until I thought it was perfect, I'd never write a second post
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 2:07 pm
To bad failures don’t get cookies.
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 2:10 pm
YOU GIVE ME THAT COOKIE NOW!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 2:16 pm
*looks at Shade and has a cookie in hand*
Um...
*hands out cookie*
You can have it...
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 2:16 pm
I fail at RPing I can't fit a Bloodline application into a 2 paragraph 7 sentence application.Ugh Dam you HV. But I also fail at Rping because I can't do stuff like that .
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 2:20 pm
Hmmm. Lance. Wanna RP!?
<3
<-- Tends to love the literate, descriptive RPer's better. ^^
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 2:23 pm
That is why I like forum RP. I'm great at RP in games, where they hand you the emote verb and let you do whatever. But once you step into a forum it's a whole new world, and I'm learning to expand details and such. Of course, I'm trying not to get too much into detail, because that just leads to useless sentences and makes the post hard to read. In the end, I know a lot, but I need to work on my application of it.
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 2:24 pm
hey guys I made a banner
here it is
What do you think?
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 2:26 pm
My... toe itches...
=/
And it won't go away!!!!
D<
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