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 Posted: Wed Jul 13, 2011 2:04 am
muffin: I don't like laziness. If you're not going to make the sample then don't make the request.
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Posted: Wed Jul 13, 2011 2:09 am
very well, I just saw others approved that had little to no sample and assumed if things were written out well enough, that they'd be easily understood and approved. I'll begin my editing momentarily.
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Posted: Wed Jul 13, 2011 2:28 am
The Addicted Muffin RPC Name: Zac Forescythe Rank: Trainee Bloodline & Class: Feral Berserker Talent Description: Impure Rebirth Zac wasn't brought back from the grave like a normal Feral. His resurrector was a Necromancer who had learned the ways of the Clerics of the Light. It was from this unusual union of light and dark, that a rare breed of Feral was born. Though Zac is still an Undead Feral, It is impossible to tell without looking at his stitches. Due to the mixture of light and dark energies, his body has taken on forms of a pure resurrection and an impure resurrection. His body is not rotting, so it doesnt give off the distinct odor that the feral are known for, allowing him to hide from sight without having to worry about being sniffed out, he still bears the stitches of where he has been pieced back together over the years, and he has all the other usual Feral traits. Pretty much, he appears to be a living body with Feral abilities, although he is still a Feral. The Light and Dark magic union also gave Zac the ability to suture himself, and others with threads of energy that harden into normal threads. This has given him a skill that can be very handy in one on one combat, but it is not without fault. When Zac makes physical contact with his enemy, he can channel his energy into them and create these threads. Though the threads do not take on physical shape, they effectively cut off the opponent's nerves from the body, forcing them o be stunned until the skill is lifted. This may sound like an all powerful move, especially for a berserker, but Zac must first make, and maintain contact with the enemy. If he moves in the slightest, the energy flow is cut off and his opponent is free to move as they wish. The threads also take their toll on Zac's energy reserves. As he is essentially transferring energy into the body of his opponent to halt them, he is feeding them his energy. For each post this skill is maintained, Zac looses 25 energy, and his opponent gains 25 energy, making this only really useful when he knows he can win, or when in a 2 on 1 fight. Talent Weakness: Must remain still for skill's use Gives opponent energy while taking your own How did the character get this talent?:Resurrected by a Necromancer/Cleric Sample: The loud crack of bone echoed through the clearing. Blood began to drop from Micheal's blade, and the thump of a limb could be heard. Micheal looked back at his opponent, Zac, to see him staring at the limb. Much to his surprise, Zac showed no signs of feeling a thing. As the one armed boy picked up the limb, he looked at the shocked Micheal, "Now now, that was my last undamaged limb, and you got blood on my shirt. I'm gonna have to teach you a lesson for that." Micheal looked at Zac and began to laugh, "Lesson? What could someone with one arm possi-" His words were cut off by a most disturbing sight. Zac had pressed the two stumps together and as he did, faded, sickly green looking threads of energy began to sew the arm back together. Zac flexed his hand to test it out, then turned back to Micheal, "Oh, I'm sorry. I didnt catch that last part." Zac rushed at the shocked kid, catching him off guard. He grabbed Micheal's sword and swung it straight up into the air. As Micheal watched the blade soar into the sky, Zac placed one hand on the boy's chest. Suddenly, Micheal found he couldn't move. Many of the green threads that had repaired Zac's arm were visible along his body, binding him in place. The sword that Zac had thrown had reached it's peak, and now plummeted to the ground, stabbing point first, straight through Micheal's head. Zac released the skill, posed the corpse in an embarrassing position so it'd be stuck when rigor mortise hit, and walked away. Sample is done
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Posted: Wed Jul 13, 2011 11:06 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 8:34 am
RPC Name: Elizabeth Bishop
Rank: Master
Bloodline & Class: Kiranu Ninja
Talent Description:
Ego Boost
Durring the time that Beth played host to Pride, she exploited him as much as possible. This cause the two souls to become entangled, almost to the point where the line between Beth and Pride was barely there. Because of this, when Pride left Beth's body, a small bit of his soul was left behind in the form of a replica weapon of Pride's chain. While Beth is wearing this chain, she gains the passive bonuses from Pride, but with a few added drawbacks.
Talent Weakness:
- Chain can do anything Pride's could do, but is not indestructable
- Mage skills cost twice the energy to use
- Loses all bonuses if Chain is not touching her
- cant use Pride's weapon moves
How did the character get this talent?: see description
Sample: Honestly, one is NOT needed for this talent. You've seen me use the chain, and all this is really doing is letting me keep Pride's bonuses, only with a little extra cost. Samples arent always needed, this is one of those times.
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 12:24 pm
@Snuff: If you have Pride's chain but it's not indestructible, you need to put down a material it's made of so we can know just how strong it is then. And the can't use Pride's moves. Does that extend to the moves in the weapon itself?
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 4:01 pm
SorceressJacklyn @Snuff: If you have Pride's chain but it's not indestructible, you need to put down a material it's made of so we can know just how strong it is then. And the can't use Pride's moves. Does that extend to the moves in the weapon itself? yes, it's essentially a steel chain that I can move around...same principles, but much weaker, and no, I wouldnt get his weapon skills. This is the Chinese made equivalent of Pride's chain
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 4:04 pm
Snuff that Muffin SorceressJacklyn @Snuff: If you have Pride's chain but it's not indestructible, you need to put down a material it's made of so we can know just how strong it is then. And the can't use Pride's moves. Does that extend to the moves in the weapon itself? yes, it's essentially a steel chain that I can move around...same principles, but much weaker, and no, I wouldnt get his weapon skills. This is the Chinese made equivalent of Pride's chain And I'm gonna guess you're looking for the str/spd boosts with this talent as well?
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 4:05 pm
SorceressJacklyn Snuff that Muffin SorceressJacklyn @Snuff: If you have Pride's chain but it's not indestructible, you need to put down a material it's made of so we can know just how strong it is then. And the can't use Pride's moves. Does that extend to the moves in the weapon itself? yes, it's essentially a steel chain that I can move around...same principles, but much weaker, and no, I wouldnt get his weapon skills. This is the Chinese made equivalent of Pride's chain And I'm gonna guess you're looking for the str/spd boosts with this talent as well? you know me...
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 4:08 pm
Snuff that Muffin SorceressJacklyn Snuff that Muffin SorceressJacklyn @Snuff: If you have Pride's chain but it's not indestructible, you need to put down a material it's made of so we can know just how strong it is then. And the can't use Pride's moves. Does that extend to the moves in the weapon itself? yes, it's essentially a steel chain that I can move around...same principles, but much weaker, and no, I wouldnt get his weapon skills. This is the Chinese made equivalent of Pride's chain And I'm gonna guess you're looking for the str/spd boosts with this talent as well? you know me... Thing is, if even one of your stats are higher than Pride's would be, you don't get the boost. *goes off to do math*
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 4:09 pm
SorceressJacklyn Snuff that Muffin SorceressJacklyn Snuff that Muffin SorceressJacklyn @Snuff: If you have Pride's chain but it's not indestructible, you need to put down a material it's made of so we can know just how strong it is then. And the can't use Pride's moves. Does that extend to the moves in the weapon itself? yes, it's essentially a steel chain that I can move around...same principles, but much weaker, and no, I wouldnt get his weapon skills. This is the Chinese made equivalent of Pride's chain And I'm gonna guess you're looking for the str/spd boosts with this talent as well? you know me... Thing is, if even one of your stats are higher than Pride's would be, you don't get the boost. *goes off to do math* with the new stat things, I got the bonuses on both stats...with the old I only got the boost with str... I already did the math
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 4:25 pm
Snuff that Muffin SorceressJacklyn Snuff that Muffin SorceressJacklyn Snuff that Muffin SorceressJacklyn @Snuff: If you have Pride's chain but it's not indestructible, you need to put down a material it's made of so we can know just how strong it is then. And the can't use Pride's moves. Does that extend to the moves in the weapon itself? yes, it's essentially a steel chain that I can move around...same principles, but much weaker, and no, I wouldnt get his weapon skills. This is the Chinese made equivalent of Pride's chain And I'm gonna guess you're looking for the str/spd boosts with this talent as well? you know me... Thing is, if even one of your stats are higher than Pride's would be, you don't get the boost. *goes off to do math* with the new stat things, I got the bonuses on both stats...with the old I only got the boost with str... I already did the math Then I would say approved.
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 4:26 pm
SorceressJacklyn Snuff that Muffin SorceressJacklyn Snuff that Muffin SorceressJacklyn And I'm gonna guess you're looking for the str/spd boosts with this talent as well? you know me... Thing is, if even one of your stats are higher than Pride's would be, you don't get the boost. *goes off to do math* with the new stat things, I got the bonuses on both stats...with the old I only got the boost with str... I already did the math Then I would say approved. yay!
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 4:30 pm
RPC Name: Xander Nyx Neuden
Rank: Novice
Bloodline & Class: Reaper & Mage
Talent Description: Xander's talent allows him to become what would be called a "battlemage". However, this does not mean he will be able to use all melee weapons effectively. His close-quartered combat will focus entirely around his gauntlet and his staff, channeling appropriate energy into them before making each move. Because of his battle-magician training -- he has both a higher strength and speed than that of your average mage, both strength and speed getting a +1. However, the fact that his body is not nimble, the fact that his staff is actually powerful close-ranged and the fact that he gains these perpetual boosts is the only real benefit to being a battlemage. He still cannot wear heavy armor, still cannot use most melee weapons, and is still unable to contest against most other melee classes. However, he does have a form to his melee, and he does know how to block, strike and parry, just... not very well. This also allows Xander to master his staff skills, and learn one hand-to-hand style up to A rank.
Talent Weakness: His 2x energy reserves are pushed down to 1.5x -- and he is now unable to learn water and wind WHATSOEVER (though he may still learn the ice listed as mage abilities), as those elements are too passive for his all-combat upbringing.
How did the character get this talent?: He was trained since birth to fight in such a way -- it was not something that randomly woke up with him in the night.
Sample: ''Well, obviously, that would be the right course of action. I am so very proud of you for taking that into consideration!" The boy told the man before him, almost as if he were taunting him -- though he kept a false tinge of fear within his voice. He wanted to be faced with a desperate situation -- for this was all too... petty. And along the years, he felt that he began to lose touch with what he was as a child. A soldier -- in both magic and melee, though that began to dim as time went on. But it was here where he would see if he, now a man, could ever become more than he was as a child. Back then he was cold -- unfeeling, and that brought him his needs. Power, and the harsh fact that he was above all around him. "Are you afraid of me?" The man asked -- as he stepped forward, causing the enemy to flinch. The opponent's arm had already been obliterated -- and his legs were both in a bad condition, though he still believed he could defeat him by discovering his weakness. However, it was not a weakness, and it was too late for atonement. ''Are you afraid that I'll kill you? Are you afraid that I'll kill your family? Kill your friends? Or are you afraid that I'll make you suffer -- and leave you to die here in your helpless agony as you scream over your lost humanity? Yes, you're not a human anymore. Humans have two arms. But look at you. You only have one." The enemy -- in both his demeanor and his gaze becoming more and more desperate, finally looked for an "opening frame" as he rushed to Xander. And as soon as he did, the mage -- or rather, the battlemage -- strafed to the side as, with his staff, he slammed against his skull, shattering his brain as his body fell to its death.
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 4:10 pm
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