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Vexin_Dono

PostPosted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 12:35 am


Cobra_X
Vexin_Dono
i edited it and fixed the spelling

Please do not take this the wrong way, but I do not believe you have the necessary RP ability to use the clan. Konaga walks the line between fair and broken very finely and all of it depends on the skill of the RPer.

I'm not saying the RP was bad, but it needs to be a of a higher caliber to be approved. I would suggest you try for a different Bloodline. (I really hope this doesn't sound too harsh...)

no your not being harsh i understand it is a very powerful bloodline. i just started rping online so im kinda new to it i have ten years experience of rpging off lind so its kinda different to me.
PostPosted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 5:53 am


Orchid Moon
Zetsu... I'm looking for 1 thing in your Info Section that is a major part of mokuton.. Once it is there I will say Accepted... Adding a longer rp sample wont help when I told you the problem remains in your Info Section.

? I put they use wood jutsu... Hmmm Well, Time to go see what i forgot...

EDIT: I edited it, This time I figured out what you were meaning... hopefully...

xXZetsubou-KaesuXx


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PostPosted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 9:01 am


Rpc Name: Chikao Huni
Village: Sand
Rank: Academy
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Kyuuketsuki
What you know about the clan/bl: The Kyuuketsuki was formed for wash-outs who could never pass anything. They formed the clan just to have someone to share their grief with, but wanted criminals saw it as a safe haven to spend their time. Soon, the clan was overcome by a strong criminal. This man gave the wash-out clan members of the village each a vial containing a liquid that would strengthen them admirably. The contents ended up supplying them with a special Doujutsu, which helped them pass the chunin exams and such.
Rp Sample: Chikao (user) walks up to his opponent, blocking his simple kunai-throwing attempt with the use of Mind-barrier. Seeing that his squad member was only a few miles short of his location, Chikao stalls for time.
Chikao uses a genjutsu to trap the genin. Using his puppet, he traps the genin ninja inside. There is no escape. His partner is here now. The partner takes out a match, and using his Kyuuketsuki, creates a wonderful dragon of flame which he slips inside the steel puppets secret opening into the chamber with the prisoner. Standing and watching, the two clan members listen to the screams of the burning Shinobi
PostPosted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 10:07 am


Rpc Name: Makkura, Yoarashi

Village: Kumogakure

Rank: Academy Student

Bloodline or Clan applied for: Anigan

What you know about the clan/bl: To adchieve at least basic training for stage one you have to go through extreme amounts of training or a intense stress/ emotional condition. To completely use stage one, you have look at at least ten animals to fully adchieve first stage. You gain one natural ability to use from an animal such as sight, hearing, etc. Mixing of animal traits can only be achieved on the final stage. Amd last, but not least, the most important part, If you get hit directly by a raiton technique you lose the ability to use your anigan for two post.

Rp Sample:

" You get a very special mission today my a**," Yo complained seeing that he had no choice in the matter to do this mission. He was given the mission of doing a long, time consuming, boring task of doing recon. He wasnt allowed to fight or kill any members of a Rouge ninja pack. They were becoming powerful and their range of jutsus were growing. As he got closer, he saw a hawk fly by over head; he decided to use his Anigan to use the hawks natural ability to see vast distances. As he scanned the hawk his visoin was magnified 20x what it originally. Yo scanned the area, while doing so he made a map of the area to make for future attacks on this camp. He saw a wolf leave the campsite. He returned his eye sight to normal to use his anigan to copy almost everything about the wolf to get in undetected. Turning into the wolf he jumped down from the tree avoiding the wolf on the way into the campsite. As he walked the inner damp corridors of this campsites poorly made building making a mental map of the area as he walked in the wolf's form using its instincts to guide him. He eventually came to what appeared to be the center of the building. The whole rouge ninja pack was in that one room, conversing and making plans.


Yo still in wolf form moved forward towards the ninja pack and a few other wolves. One ninja had noticed the glowing ellow of Yo's Anigan. he slowly made his way to Yo from behind making sure he wasnt seen. Yo had used the wolf's sense of smell to realize that someone was sneaking from behind, but it was too late he was struck with a rai to jutsu. Not only did Yo have a deep burning cut on his back, but he was sent sliding into wall, and turning him back to normal. The loud bang caused everyone to look in his direction. He got up as quickly as possible. The cut had started to heal very very slowly. As the Rouges got closer they started walking towards him, then realizing their numbers they charged him him like a pack of wild animals. The wolves took a tactical approach, proving that they were smarter than their owners by waiting for Yoarashi's next move. Yo dodged everything they tried. They were unbalanced, and they were a waste of energy to fight so he used them as a stepping to get high above theor heads causing them damage in the process. The wolves were waiting for him on the otherside. They lunged at him. There was at least 8 wolves in that room attacking him in the air the first few wolves were decoys to distract him. They decoys tried to pierce his skin with their razor sharp fangs. Yo avoided them with ease, what he didnt see was that there was was coming from behind him sinking thier into his legs. He shook them off by touching the with raiton chakra causing them to forcibly let go of him. The rouges were on the move again, but this time Yo had to run at a normal ninja's speed. On the way out into the forest he saw a raccon and disapeared into the night sky to never be seen again this night. When the actual wolf returned home it was awhile before they could finnally trust it again after Yo's escapade.

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Orchid Moon

PostPosted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 10:44 am


@Zetsu: FINALLY >.> ACCEPTED!

@Lord Jimmy: Auto Denied, Disobeyed what I said on the last page. You need to wait.

@Sparxx: Auto Denied, Disobeyed what I said on the last page. You need to wait.
PostPosted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 11:50 am


Rpc Name: Chihiro Geitou
Village: Sand
Rank: AS
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Wind Sage
What you know about the clan/bl: I made it, I think I know enough about it. But just to humor you it gives the user control over the wind to the extent of their rank, makes them one rank faster in the air, and allows them to use powerful wind jutsu without the use of a fan. It also makes you weak to fire, but whatever. Also it came from a clan who followed the Sage of six paths, wind being one of the paths.

Rp Sample: Chihiro soared through the sky over Kumogakure, and without the use of any wind riding jutsu or aircraft he was getting some looks. He didn't mind though, as he liked the attention. However, too much attention can be a bad thing, and suddenly a lightning blast just missed him as it was fired from the ground below. Several dozen followed it, but Chihiro weaved in and out of the blasts as he shot down to the ground.

As soon as he landed two smoke bombs landed near Chihiro's feet and the entire area was engulfed in a purplish fog. Chihiro closed his eyes and concentrated on reading the wind around him, identifying two shinobi who were quickly making their way into through the smoke. Knowing that he'd need to see, Chihiro used a surrounding breeze to push the smoke away from him, giving him some room to see. Moments later the two ninja appeared before him, wielding kunais and posed to strike. "You're under arrest, spy. Come quietly or we'll be forced to use action." Chihiro grinned and playfully brought his hands up behind his head. "Nah, that's ok." Suddenly the two cloud ninja were blasted up into the sky by a sudden wind. They soon flew up so high that they disappeared from sight. Chihiro simply whistled as he walked away from the scene.

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Orchid Moon

PostPosted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 1:13 pm


I'm going to talk to lance about that clan, Seems he likes adding stuff for friends without telling the guild O.o
PostPosted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 5:27 pm


Rpc Name:
I haven't decided yet.
Village:
Suna
Rank:
Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for:
Sharingan
What you know about the clan/bl:
They are the masters of Genjutsu, They use their Dojutsu to create powerful Genjutsu, called the Tsukiyomi.
They also are exceptionally gifted in Katon jutsu, and have a certain knack for it. Some even go as far to as to learn Giant fireball jutsu as a child. But normally they just master Katon when they get older.
They also have a special flame, that only they can produce, called ameratsu. It is a black flame, said to be able to burn anything, and indefinately.
Itachi has shown a skill called Susanoo which protected him from orochimaru's 8 headed white snake attack after weakening Sasuke considerably in their fight. However he sucumbed to his illness and died. But before doing so, he gave his younger brother one last sentiment. He poked his forehead like when they were still living with their parents, and apologised for dieing like this.
Also their Eye, Called the Sharingan, is one that can copy opponents jutsu. At one tomoe, the user is fairly weak, and can not follow movements well, but they can do so quite a bit better than their fellow ninja, at least by one rank. At two tomoe, they can see movement considerably well, and with the correct training, they can even combat Taijutsu, seeing as their eyes are made specifically for Genjutsu and Ninjutsu. At three tomoe, it barely matters what kind of jutsu the opponent uses, The weilder of the Sharingan is able to dodge and almost always counter attack.
Rp Sample:

" So, You hope to defeat me? " The Uchiha clan member said smiling, Looking up he licked his lips, Activating his Mangekyo Sharingan. " You're going to wish you never said that!" He said, his eyes begining o spin, catching the attention of the opposing ninja, he smiled. " Tsukiyomi. " He said, the world around the two suddenly changing.

~ Inside Tsukiyomi ~

" Wh-What the hell did you do? " The opposing ninja said, looking around, angery. " I'll kill you! " He said, making handsigns, and trying to use a jutsu, nothing coming out.

" In this world, I control time and space. Even physical mass... " He said, smiling as the enemy ninja learned he was behind him. " You're in my way. " He said, taking a Kunai and throwing it through the Enemy ninja, a clone stepping out and catching the Kunai, throwing it through the ninja's body again, Taking out another. " Seventy one fifty-nine minutes fifty-nine seconds longer for this torture. " It said, stepping to the side, throwing it's second Kunai, another clone stepping out opposite this one, catching it, and throwing it back, stepping to the side and repeating the process.

" Grah... " The Enemy ninja said, Falling forward onto his knees and breathing heavily. " Wh-why are you doing this? " He said, breathing heavily, looking up at the other Uchiha. " What do you hope to gain!?!?!?" He yelled, the veins in his neck standing up.

" Because... I've opened the door and made mine into Mangekyo. Thus my eyes are beginning to Decline. And I plan on taking your Mangekyo, so reveal it, and let's get this over with. " He said, jumping back, his eyes wavering. " I will take your Mangekyo and add it to mine, Creating an Eternal mangekyo that shall not fail. " He said, shutting his eyes and allowing it to return to Three tomoe. " Now Reveal yours! Or else I will kill your entire village!" He said laughing.

" Damn you... You're going to make me use that jutsu aren't you? " He said, sighing, standing, seeming as if he was unphased by that Tsukiyomi he was hit with. " Now, You want me to use my Susanoo to combat yours dont you? " He said, activating his Mangekyo as well as his Susanoo ability. " Time to kill you Traitor!!! " He said running at him.

" Heh, You think that little Susanoo will save you? " He said, Activating his own Susanoo, He ran forward, Their Susanoo's clashing, and convusing on the other, Attacking and blocking indefinately. " Not, it is just between you and me!" He said, laughing, and letting out an Ameratsu fire, engulfing His opponent.

" Ha! Now you will never get my eyes, and when you let go of that Susanoo, You'll go blind!" The enemy ninja said smiling, His eyes widening. The ameratsu fire wasn't hurting. that could only mean it Wasn't an Ameratsu Fire. " No... It can't be!" He yelled, His eyes starting to throb with pain.

~ Outside of the Tsukiyomi ~
" I'm Surprised he stayed in there this long. " He said, He had not stopped his run forward after putting his opponent in that acursed world, He had even gone through the trouble of using more chakra to put everything in color. " Damn... I'm almost done with thee eyes... " He said, ripping his opponent's eye out, and absorbing it into his own. " There... Now atleast I have one of the two... " He said, jumping back and activating his susanoo as his opponent came out of his Tsukiyomi, activating his out of anger. They two Susanoo's actually clashed this time, sending both Uchihas back from the blast. Both susanoos cancelling eachother out. " There, now neither of us can use it for a little while. " He said smiling, licking his lips and running forewards, aiming to take the other eye. He fell upon the Enemy ninja, and plucked the final Mangekyo eye, He laughed in triumph as he fused the eye to his last one, laughing as his eyes became perfect. Became eternal. " Now I'm finally at my full power!!! " He said laughing, Falling on his back, completely crazed with happiness that he had won and become Eternal. at least his eyes that is.

Golden Spider of Kumo


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PostPosted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 5:57 pm


Um, in case you guys didn't notice...

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ONLY PEOPLE WHO WERE RECENTLY DENIED MAY POST THEIR APPS AT THIS TIME. ANYONE WHO POSTS WHO WAS NOT DENIED RECENTLY WILL BE AUTODENIED.
PostPosted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 6:51 pm


Oh really? Sorry I just joined today.

Golden Spider of Kumo


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PostPosted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 6:59 pm


I see. Well, looking closer at your application... Sharingan has been closed for quite awhile anyways.
PostPosted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 7:29 pm


No, there isn't ten members, and the bloodline says it will be closed when the number hits ten.

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 7:53 pm


The last topic in the bloodline forum. Please read it. Or even just the name would do.
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