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Dapper Lunatic

PostPosted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 11:31 am


Hmm...haven't seen Fruits Basket, But after thinking the way the sisters react between each other reminds me of the two witches off of Spirited Away. One's good, kind, the other is evil and cold.
PostPosted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 11:37 am


Ah, but it's not so black and white here. And if you remember, the sister with the bathhouse in Spirited Away wasn't evil, she was just greedy. But she really did love her baby, even if she was way overprotective.

I try to avoid "good and evil" stereotypes in my writing, though when Valentyne's story takes off, it will get...morally sound.

Love and Vale,
-LD

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KiyoshiKyokai

PostPosted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 3:06 pm


From one Fruits Basket fan to another, thanks for the big compliment, Leav. biggrin I have yet to see Spirited Away though... it's on my long Anime to-do list.

There is definitely some Black, though not so much white. I think in a story, it's important to have a few characters, like Lydia, who are "pure evil", just to put the anti-heroes like Cosette back into perspective. Still, we have yet to find a "pure good" character in DMO...
PostPosted: Sun Aug 12, 2007 8:41 pm


Tenth Movement - Nidhhoggr

A soft rain fell outside upon the countryside of Romania, where a secluded villa stood alone between the ancient forest and the once hallowed plains. Before time was counted, ancient rituals had been held in these very fields, and the ruined structures of old stone altars sat atop the bones of mortals slain in rituals and sacrifice. Today, however, the tired grey sky saw no such atrocious acts, nor even slightest indication that anything but peaceful folk now dwelt upon the lands below.

Cosette Garidion lounged in her study, smoking lazily upon several oriental cushions. In one hand she held her old pipe, and in the other, a small novel she had acquired at a train station on her trip to England only a few months prior. The Hobbit, the cover had read--a story about little creatures going on a grand adventure, or so she had heard. She had bought it for the dragon that was promised at the end--she had always had a passing interest in the creatures--but so far she was finding the book frustrating.

These English authors, they just used so many words. If something is happening, say it and get it done with. Cosette thought wearily, as she fought her way through an incredibly boring description of a table laden with food. Perhaps it was her grasp of English that made the book wearisome, for she was eventually forced to put it down as her head gave a slight ache.

The day had been uneventful at best. Earlier in the morning, Narshe had wanted her to try inbibing several experimental potions--which she of course refused. Worse even, Malgrave had taken up residence in the house. Though he kept to himself for the most part, the man unnerved Cosette, and she knew it was only a matter of time before something else happened to put them at odds. Hylie was quiet enough. She had disregarded the rain, and gone to spend a day down in the town below--probably drinking in some tavern right now.

Cosette stood before the large glass window of her study. Outside, fall showers fell beneath a darkening sky. Her studies for the day had finished, and she was awaiting a message--or so her divinations had told her. Fortune-telling was always a little vauge on these points.

From her window, the heiress could see a decently size village in the distance. Her ancestors had once served as allies, and friends to this village--and Narshe probably still had documents somewhere proving that she owned all the land, as sole heir to her clan. Still, it had been long since anyone had heard from the eccentric nobles living deep in the forest, or from the renowned dark witch they were reported to keep.

It was doubtful that anyone realized it was Cosette who lived in that old manor, despite her many trips to the town. It had grown to the point where people no longer know their neighbors names, much less those of the old legends of their fathers.

As she meditated on these things, a heavy knocking came at the door to the mansion. Normally she might not have heard it, but with her senses accentuated by the Ritherwhyte coursing through her veins, she took a notice to the small disturbance.

Gracefully, she stepped down the flight of stairs to the foyer, then into the entryway, stopping to glance at a portrait of her mother, Rozalina. Where was her mother, gone these past few years? Without a trace Cosette had been left alone. Well, alone with Narshe, but alone all the same--in her own mind at least.

An unfamiliar man was pounding his fist against the door. Cosette could see his face clearly straight through the wood, lined with rain and sweat, fear and anxiety. The pounding against the door continued, and Cosette wondered why Narshe was not coming to answer as she normally would.

"Yes?" Cosette answered the knock quietly, but somehow her calm voice carried over the rain and the pounding, conveying a chilling sensation right into the ears of the man outside, and down into his soul.

"P... Please... let me in." He called. The storm outside was picking up strength now, and the rain and thunder were sounding as loud as his pounding upon the door.

Cosette stepped back from the door and made a beckoning motion. At her command, the monolithic wooden entrance to the villa swung open on its hinges, and the frightened man stumbled in, drenched in rain. As he fell upon the tiled floor of the foyer, Cosette made another simple motion, and the door slammed shut, several locks and a deadbolt falling down into place.

"Are you... the Landraner witch?" The man looked up to her with a bit of desperation in his eyes.

"Landraner? No, that would be my servant." Cosette realized that her family would have been considered a part of Narshe's in the past, and not vice versa, since this house was once the Landraner clan's headquarters. The people in the area had considered them eccentric nobility, while the existence of the Garidion line was more of a secret to the outside world. "But speak what business brought you to my house," she paused, exhaling a condescending puff of hazy purple smoke, "in such an unbecoming state."

"Please... I beg your help..." the man began between gasping breaths, "there is a demon in our town!"

A demon... "Oh, Hylie? She's hardly any danger to--" Cosette began with a laugh, when a colossal roar of thunder drowned out her voice. Her ears perked up a bit, as she listened more closely. Behind the thunder, she could hear an actual roar--the clear voice of a massive feral animal.

Narshe walked out of the heavy door that led to her laboratories shakily. A kind of red haze surrounded her as though she were unsure of whether to take her human or mist form, and was caught between both at once. Body covered in splotches of dark blood, her glasses were off and her fangs were bared long over her full red lips. Her eyes were half closed, and her tongue ran slowly over the edges of her teeth as she looked over the room, fixing her scarlet eyes on the man kneeling before Cosette.

"Missstressssss.... who's our guesssst?" Narshe hissed as she moved closer, half gliding and half walking. Her eyes glowed a hungry red as she appraised the man, like one might look over a shank of meat behind a butcher's counter.

Meeting her gaze, a visage of sheer terror crept across the man's bearded face, and he fell back, crawling until his back reached the door.

"Someone who came here for your help, Narshe." Cosette answered her.

"Well, well... you look more like a decent meal to me... rather than help you... I think I'll help myself..." Narshe's eyes glowed a deep crimson as she stared at the man, and his body relaxed slowly, settling into a deep sleep. She was breathing heavily in anticipation.

"It looks to me like you've just eaten." Cosette gave her a disgusted look, "I told you no more than one each month. Do you want a mob with torches and pitchforks collecting before our door?"

"You forget, misssstresssss...." Narshe swept behind Cosette, leaning over her shoulder, "you have two vampires living in Villa Vivikadvra now... we both need to eat."

Cosette whirled her body around, spinning out of Narshe's shadow and standing between her and the man. "I disapprove. At least wait a few weeks. You took one yesterday, after all."

"Missstresss, of course I can understand your sympathy for your own race." Narshe was licking her fangs, "but I'm your servant, not this human. You have to take care of me, not him. Don't deny me a meal that walks up and lies down before my door. A servant follows his master, and the master shelters him," She quoted, "If you're to use me, you have to keep me as well."

"Very well," Cosette gave a grudging look to the man, "but how does it feel to murder the innocent?"

Narshe smiled as she grabbed the man and hefted his heavy form over one shoulder easily, "It must be the same way you feel after eating shepherd's pie, milady." She met Cosette's gold eyes as she walked back towards her quarters. "And besides, I'm the kindest sort of killer... my victims beg for more to the very end!" She gave a shrieking laugh, and closed the laboratory door behind her.

Vampires each had their own way of killing humans. Cosette supposed it must be the only way to kill something so similar to yourself--making an art form of it. Still, better to have Narshe do the killing that had to be done. She shuddered at the thought of what the sadistic Lord Malgrave would do to his victims.

And then the villa was silent, save for the storm outside... Cosette had forgotten in the course of her encounter with Narshe, but there was a real trouble at hand, and close by as well. Well, she won't be helping me at any rate. Cosette sighed, but a demon attacking the town, that could bid ominously for us soon.

She walked slowly up to her study, closing the door and setting down her pipe for a few moments in its holder upon her desk. A small basin of water stood in the corner of the room, and Cosette took a few vials of powder from her desk drawers, making a mixture of them in her hand. As she cast the dust over the surface of the ornately worked silver and bronze basin, she spoke a few words quietly.

"A servant gives all to the master--service and soul, heart and mind. My slave, Askimilar, today I demand to receive your eyes." She took a deep breath and pulled back her hair, plunging her face into the basin.

-----

Hylie Mignon, the demon once known as Askimilar sat in a shady bar off of the main street of Dolhasca, a town situated in the Northern part of Romania. Old stone buildings decorated the small town, resisting as best they could the heavy storm outside.

"Ya shee, what thish world needsh," the demon leaned heavily upon the bar counter, speaking to the bartender, the only other soul in the room, "ish shtronger drinksh, an' weaker women!" She laughed, knocking back another shot.

"I think most of my regulars would echo your sentiments, Hylie." The bartender laughed with her as best he could, being quite sober himself.

"Yoush prob'bly think thatsh an odd thing fer a girl ta' shay..." Hylie let out another bellowing laugh, "but I wash a man before that witsh made me look like thish."

The bartender had to laugh again, this time at Hylie rather than with her. She had become a bit of a town fool, though people seemed to like her well enough. The girl was always claiming that she was a demon, and worked for a witch living somewhere deep in the forests North of town. Of course, the townsfolk took it all as the idle babble of a drunken, wayward girl.

"The storm's getting a bit worse." The bartender shook his head as a peal of thunder cracked outside. The bells of one of the Gothic cathedrals in the town rang warning for the townsfolk to take cover in their homes. "I think we may close up soon."

"Are yesh telling me to git out?" Hylie asked, making a beckoning motion with two fingers that meant she wanted another glass.

"For your own safety, t'would be best." The bartender sighed, grudgingly pouring her another drink.

"I'm perfectly shafe thanksh." Hylie drank down her shot, then noticed the bartender's gaze on her. "Aye, fine." She got up to leave, pocketing the shot glass discreetly as she set some coins on the counter--money she had found in a chest in one of the villa's vaults.

Hylie staggered out of the bar, and looked up to the sky. A massive storm was brewing overhead. More than that, however, it seemed that the nexus of the thing was coming ever closer--a colossal torrent of angry winds and vicious debris on a path of rampant chaos straight for the town. The demon had to admire the beautiful destructive power of it all.

She pulled out the shotglass and ate it, crushing it between three rows of razor-sharp teeth before starting toward the storm. There was no way she could head home without seeing the masterful, undoing hand of nature herself.

As she took her first step, however, she had the most peculiar sensation, as though someone else were watching the world through her eyes. Whether it were so or not, there was little the Destroyer could do to resist it, and she was too sedated to care much anyway.

As she neared the center of the town, the thunder grew deafening, and the destruction wrought by the storm became deathly obvious. Several corpses--killed on impact as they were struck by debris or thrown against the stone sides of buildings--littered the area, and buildings collapsed as she watched, almost as though the wind and earth were working together to break their foundations and topple them upon their inhabitants.

Then the eye of the storm passed overhead, and Hylie saw for the first time a figure which Cosette recognized immediately.

Tania Mapht'ali, the African shamaness Cosette had encountered once in Africa stood in the center of the town. Her clothes were untouched by the wind, yet as dirty as ever, and the tattoos which riddled her young body glowed with a soft blue light, as though they were circuits channeling mysterious power.

"Hey!" Hylie waved to her with a wide, toothy smile. She could tell that the girl was not a demon like herself, but a fellow agent of disaster was a friend--regardless of race.

Tania gave the demon a sideways look, as though unsure of what to expect from the strange creature before her. Deciding that Hylie looked too humanoid to be anything else, Tania lifted a hand, and a strike of lightning flashed down from the storm above, electrifying Hylie Mignon in a wave of pure energy and searing flesh. It was not a simple bolt that fell upon Hylie--but a continuous surge of power channeling out of the air above and into her mortal form.

"Ahhhhhhh!" Hylie gave a cry of surprise, pain, and relishing. Her skin turned to ash on her body, and her hair singed into glass from the heat of the blast. Feet froze to the ground, fusing with stones below, as electricity jumped between her canines and vaulted through her eyes.

The demon stood, petrified in a column of burned-out carbon.

"Ha...ha...hahahahahaaa..." Hylie's body quaked with a laugh that grew to battle the storm for power. She took a step forward, pulling her melted foot apart from the stones below. Blackened ash crumbled away from her to reveal smooth skin underneath, and her crystallized hair fell--revealing new like wheat being purged of chaff. She stood before Tania, green eyes blazing with hellfire, three rows of razorlike teeth flashing in the thunders of the storm.

"Am I to take that as a challenge, mortal?" She asked with her eyes, staring down to meet the little girl's gaze.

Hylie slammed a fist into the ground, spewing shrapnel and stones through the air, reflecting off of every brick wall in the square to rush toward Tania. The shamaness countered her assault with a burst of wind, conjured with a wave of her painted arms, which sent the debris back into the demon's face. Making a sweeping motion with her arm--as though to swat away a fly in her gaze. In response to this simple motion, the tower of the town hall smashed from its resting place--as though sundered by the hand of god--and hurtled to the ground, becoming a shield for the demon.

As the bell tower crashed to the ground, separating Hylie from Tania--who was still standing alone in the square--a crack like a cannon blast seemed to rise from the earth in response. Tania looked around, in a moment of confusion, before the entire town square gave away. Earth weakened by Hylie's first strike lost its bearing beneath the crash of the tower, and dropped her in a load of stones, steel, brick and mortar fifteen feet into the earth. The shamaness fought back, climbing above the stones as best she could, swallowed up in the mire of water and dirt that had once been the town well.

Looking onto the scene, Hylie laughed again--a laugh that seemed to come from everywhere. Silly kid... no idea what she's doing... She clapped her hands together in a wide sweep, and the buildings that formed the town square toppled inward, crushing down upon the girl once and for all.

The thundering of the storm raged for a final moment overhead and died. Something like silence seemed to fill the air, when a shuffling of bricks and stones and muddy earth revealed the girl once more, pushing her way out of the rubble with strength beyond her stature. She was defeated, however--her robes were torn until they could barely be called clothing, and her body was covered in blood too thick to show the markings beneath. Hylie could marvel that she was alive at all. I have to admire her tenacity... the demon laughed again.

The townsfolk were still boarded up in their homes--those that were left alive, anyway. Dolhasca's population had certainly suffered a crushing blow that day.

"What... what are you?" Tania stood straighter, though still wounded, and approached the demon. The gashes and bruises upon her body seemed to have healed quickly, though the pain of defeat still marred her pride. She spoke in a guttural language--Primal--the language of strength and survival. It was a language Hylie knew well.

"A being who has done for two millenia what you seem to have taken up as a passing hobby, girl." She spoke down to the shamaness.

Primal is not one language, but two--the languages of strength and submission. As the stronger between them had been decided, Hylie would keep using the language of the victor, while Tania was forced to communicate in the lower tongue--a continual reminder of her failure.

"Master sent me here to summon the witch." Tania spoke, "I have work..." she trailed off, and something of in her eyes spoke that she was looking for proper words to use. "...but, in time... teach me, great one." She bowed before the demon.

Hylie smiled, her eyes gleaming with triumph at the girl's words. "Well spoken, wretch. Well spoken indeed. I'll take you to my master, the witch," Hylie motioned for her to stand, "and then I'll show you the true art of Destruction."

* * *

"Master--" Hylie pushed open the door of Villa Vivkadvra, calling out for Cosette, but the young woman was already flying in her face. So livid was she that she had forgotten to use the stairs, descending from the second story of the foyer like a descending angel on wings of darkness.

"You... you idiot!" Cosette grabbed Hylie by the ring of bone around her neck, pulling her down to eye level. "What have you done to the town below? What have you done?" She threw the demon away, pacing back and talking to herself, "we'll have to move the villa--there'll be no way around it." She paced the floor, looking back to Tania, "and what possesses you, who once dared call yourself my ally, to come to my door in such a fury?"

"I was sent by my Master, the Great Beast, to summon you." Tania stepped forward in a display of strength.

"Summon me?" Cosette took a deep breath, regaining her composure and turning about to face Tania, her yellow eyes ablaze. "No one summons me--I receive polite invitations, which I accept or decline at my leisure. Do try again."

"My master, Nidhhoggr, bids you come to him." Tania spoke again. Her strength of character burned bright, standing alone in foreign territory, facing down Black Cosette, the witch queen, the most feared being in Europe. To the eyes, however, the lone African child, in the last scraps of a torn robe, with her leather bracelets and undone braids and talon jewelry, was a rather pathetic sight.

"Nidhhoggr... the dragon that gnaws at the root of the World's Tree, growing fat upon wisdom and power..." Cosette mused, "so that great beast is the one you spoke of." Her face kept its composure, though she had a small, secret leap in heart. She had always dreamed of meeting a real dragon, but as of hence, they had only appeared in her novels. "And what does he wish to communicate to me by upsetting my servants, pray tell?"

The young girl continued to stand firm, "Fath--Master has seen mankind grow too heavy for the tree to bear. I took the burden of relieving the tree upon myself."

"Hmph." The empress contemplated this, "one day all humans upon this earth will bow to me--the reightful heir of the Imperial Line. To attack my subjects, is to attack me. Are you really willing to make an enemy of me?" Her golden eyes burned into Tania's black ones, and the girl took a step back in instinctive fear of unknown powers. "I imagined not."

Tania clenched her fists in anger, half at her own weakness, and half at an attack upon her beliefs. "And what shall I tell master?"

"You may relate to Malice Striker," Cosette used the dragon's translated name, "that I will answer his invitation when it suits me. As for you... leave my sight, or prepare to feel the vengeance of those whose blood stains your hands." Her words dripped venom--filled with anger at the girl's callous actions.

Tania nodded, still unwilling to acknowledge Cosette's power with a full bow, and turned to leave the villa. As Cosette turned her back, Hylie followed the girl out.

"What will you teach her, Askimilar?" Knale sat at the coffee table in the foyer, casually flipping through a titleless book of incantations that was set there for guests. "I wonder..."

"You..." Cosette turned back to the demon who had just appeared. "What are you here for?" She felt her normal dislike for the demon growing up within her, but aided by something else deeper within--a hatred too ancient to be her own.

"Tsk tsk, no way to speak to the one who saved your life. I just came to see you off, my pet." Knale put her book down. "Who could pass up the chance to meet Nighhoggr in person? I've never turned down an invitation, for certain." She smiled one of her smiles that seemed to keep the stars shining and the world turning. She seemed to be waiting for Cosette to say something.

"A question, devil." Cosette spoke, feeling the uncharacteristic rage burning within her breast, "what do you know of Carmine?"

The demon did not rise from her seat, but leaned back deeper into the couch, "Ah, so you've finally done it--You've asked me for something!" Knale looked interested in her painted nails. "A critical mistake, to ask information from one you distrust--the words you hear will only deepen the doubt in your heart." Cosette continued to stare at her, until the demon at last produced an answer. "Carmine was someone without your wisdom, but with far more power, dear. She did something you believe you are too smart to ever try."

The blood red emblem which held Knale's cloak together seemed to glow slightly, and Cosette realized that it was not a cloak-clasp at all, but an artifact of some sort. It was... alive? Or something near. Cosette felt a grim lump in her throat as she anticipated Knale's next words. Like a puzzle where the edges are just coming together, Cosette was beginning to see what plot surrounded her--if only faintly.

"Your ancestor Carmine," Knale's calm features formed an uncharacteristically sinister smile as she placed a slender finger upon the emblem resting on her chest, "made a deal with the devil."

KiyoshiKyokai


Leavaros
Crew

PostPosted: Sun Aug 12, 2007 10:35 pm


Interesting. I'll try to edit tomorrow.
-LD
PostPosted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 7:40 am


There's also alot of new art/wallpapers on the main site.

KiyoshiKyokai


Leavaros
Crew

PostPosted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 2:17 pm


It won't load on my computer. I'll try again tomorrow--maybe it's the connection.
-LD

P.S. Good edits. I'm sorry, KiyoKyo--there's been a whole lot of crazy here....
PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:23 am


Cosette gets nicer? I wanted her to stay mean! gonk

l Vae Victus l


KiyoshiKyokai

PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 4:02 pm


Does she seem nicer? I'll have to make her do something really atrocious in the next chapter then.

However, she is becoming more human--revealing a softer side beneath her thick exterior. It's hard to make her a figure the reader can sympathize with, while still maintaining her aloof nature.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 4:04 pm


But if anyone can pull it off, it's you, KiyoKyo! heart heart heart
-LD

Leavaros
Crew


KiyoshiKyokai

PostPosted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 8:30 am


You know, the comments I really like best are the ones where readers say "I wonder what happened to Archeme..." or "I'd like to know more about Knale's history..." or so forth. Which parts of the story really beg for more?

On another note, the next DMO is almost finished. In this one, we'll meet the European order of mystics and mages who revere Cosette as their Empress. (After all, she couldn't be "The witch queen Black Cosette" without subjects, right?)
PostPosted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 3:34 pm


I expect that those things will come with time, dear KiyoKyo. I'm developing patience--it's long overdue, I know, but there it is. Perhaps it is one all authors and readers should employ.

But if you're looking for "parts begging for more", than you might consider expanding on Hylie's character, the Vampires and their "mission", Archeme's whereabouts, and of course, Carmine's history.

Love and Vale,
-LD

Leavaros
Crew


KiyoshiKyokai

PostPosted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 10:47 pm


Eleventh Movement -- The Darkest Empire
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"So, Cosette, just going to say the word?" Etlinde stood before her cousin, a pistol leveled at the girl's head. They were standing atop a balcony of an old monastery in Cosette's home of Suceava county, Romania--a headquarters of one of the many clans of European witches which esteemed Black Cosette as their true queen. It was without warning that the armies of her cousin Etlinde had attacked, and the small coven here had all but been wiped out. Worse than that, however, was the fact that Cosette and her allies had been the first and so far only forces to respond to the attack.

"It would be bad for my reputation if I just used a kill spell every time we met." The little empress responded. While Cosette's risen banes, undead, and lesser demons faltered against the might of Etlinde's soldiers and their powerful weaponry, the girl herself was in a perilous place. On a balcony, between two sets of pews in the second story of the altar of an old, stone monastery, Cosette faced down a cousin intent on eliminating her for good. Having shamed Etlinde in their last encounter, Cosette was sure that her opponent was ready for her tricks. She had used a death spell once, and was confident it wouldn't work twice--not against a foe like Etlinde who learned from her mistakes. "Since you're intent on using swords, I suppose I'll match your hand."

Cosette murmured a simple spell, and a large dark blade of obsidian coalesced from the air around into her hands. Glowing with mystic power, Cosette could feel the spirit of the daemonic blade enter her. It would teach her how to fight, and it would give her the strength she needed to use it. In a rush, the two of them charged forward, tempered steel clashing with the glassy obsidian blade again and again, while the cries of battle raged on outside. A drop of sweat rolled down her face as she parried and struck, entrusting her life to forces beyond herself which filled her body and made her to fight with inhuman skill--enough to barely keep to pace with Etlinde.

"Shame you'll be dying here, dear." Kartika Eckhart, the chairwoman of Etlinde's occultist Thule Society stared down at Narshe through her dark spectacles. She had a thick German accent, and spoke calmly, unaffected by the sounds of war and death that filled the monastery from the outside. Her long coat breezed back as a cold wind whipped through the monastery, and the thick ponytail her hair was bound into blustered about. "The Thule have granted me heaven's holiest magicks, vampire. Do you imaine you can defeat us?" She raised both of her open hands, which glowed with a white aether.

"Honestly? I'm scared to death." Narshe's face showed a nervous smile, as she raised her own hands, cryomantic energy subliming in the air around her. "I have no idea what to expect, since I've never even heard of your gods before."

"Heh." Eckhart gritted her teeth in an affronted look, and whipped her hands around, causing flashed of light to click into being, and dart towards Narshe at dangerous speeds. The vampire made a curving motion with her hands, forming mirrors of ice which redirected the bolts into a nearby wall, where they left holes like a thousand bullets. As she made a pushing motion towards Kartika, Narshe's mirrors of ice turned sideways and became high-speed projectiles, shooting through the air to cut down the Thule Chairwoman.

With a brush of her arm, Kartika redirected the attack up towards the balcony, where one mirror slashed through the back of Cosette's ankle. The attack cut through the girl's leg badly, spilling blood and dropping her to the floor before Etlinde, who leveled a saber under the girl's nose.

"Now, I'll teach you a new trick, dear cousin--how to di--" She was cut off as the wall of the monastery exploded, and the body of a man in military gear hit her full force, knocking her off of her feet and putting the two of them in a heap against the opposite wall. Hylie jumped up to the balcony, both fists clenched and ready for battle.

"You cut it close." Cosette looked up to the demon as indignantly as she could manage through her relief. Hylie just returned a smug smile.

Richtoffen Kriegger, Etlinde's golden-haired second-in-command general disentangled his body from hers, and stood up, helping Etlinde to her feet with one hand as he turned to face another charging attack from Hylie. He was dressed in a long military coat, covered in decorated medals. A short military cut adorned his pale, Aryan features, and his right arm was cased in a gauntlet whose hi-tech look must have come from science fiction. With his gauntleted hand, Richtoffen caught the demon's punch, and in a single motion diverted her momentum behind him into another wall, which exploded in a shower of stone and mortar, all crashing down upon Narshe below.

"Ahhh!" The vampire cried, too busy casting a spell to transform into a mist and dodge the crash. The jagged mortar and heavy stones cut her to shreds, separating and crushing limbs and bones in a surge of blood. Only one frantically blinking eye moved on the whole of the vampire's dismembered body.

In Kartika's hands, the final spell of Narshe's undoing wove itself together. Etlinde regained her composure and walked resolutely towards the defenseless Cosette, her saber flashing with malice in the setting sun above. Atop the pile of broken stones, Hylie seemed to be knocked out.

All at once, noise seemed to be sucked out of the room, replaced by a powerful static buzz. Eckhart and Kriegger fell to their knees, clutching ears as the sound intensified, almost to the point of bringing tears to their eyes. The air surged with power, which congealed together around Etlinde. At the end of an instant which seemed to last minutes, Etlinde's body seized up, and her skin visibly bubbled and melted away, leaving only a standing skeleton in uniform. The remains of Etlinde's form clattered to the ground, a lifeless pile of bones.

A group of men and women, wearing robes of assorted colors and carrying various implements of battle came in through the wall, several rushing to Cosette's side. At the front of those who entered stood a gaunt woman, advanced in years, carrying a massive staff in one hand and an open book in the other. Apparently she had just cast the spell to destroy Etlinde. Her black glasses obscured her eyes, but it was clear from her face that she intended to make either Kriegger or Eckhart the target of her next spell.

"Unglück! Richtoffen, rückzug! Schnell!" Kartika shouted up to her ally. The robed woman began chanting a long incantation as Eckhart traced her own spell in the air in a haste born of desperation. Just as the general managed to grab a hold of her, she clapped her hands together in completion of the spell. A burst of white light flashed through the room, as the two of them vanished.

"They haven't gone far!" The lead woman's shrill voice cut the air, cracking in her throat as she stooped over to give several heaving coughs. "Secure the empress, secure the grounds!" She ordered, and her followers obeyed. One stooped beside Cosette, murmuring a few spells to close the wound in her leg, and helping her to her feet afterwards. Exhausted from the mental and physical exertions of the battle, it was all the girl could do to walk over and lean against the wall near her savior.

"Stellaluna..." Cosette began.

"Save your breath, fool child. My Empress may you be, but I shall reprimand you dear for endangering yourself as such." The woman did not turn her head to look at Cosette, but kept facing ahead. She was blind, thin white hair trailing down over empty eye sockets, covered barely by opaque black glasses. The book before her turned listlessly in the evening breeze, as the sounds of magic and military weaponry filled the air. She did not need to read the book, the decrepit witch could feel its power innately. Words for those who did not speak the language of pure magic.

"The vampire is... she may be damaged beyond repair..." a young mage in thick battle robes reported to Stellaluna.

"Cut out the heart. Six days bathed of blood shall raise anew those who taste death eternal." Stellaluna conjured a knife into being with a twist of her heavy staff. The old wooden implement, covered in rings and runes and talismans and other adornments seemed to rattle as if possessed of its own life as the spell was channeled through it. A drop of light fell from the staff's crooked tip, and lengthened into a rune-covered dagger forged of green glass. Taking the dagger from the air with a nod, the young man went to work extracting Narshe's heart. "Collect five corpses, female." The archmagus turned to another attendant who had been watching the exchange.

"Ugh..." the pile of rubble shifted as Hylie looked up and shook her head. How could a simple knock on the head have sent her unconscious? There was an odd stabbing pain in her hand, and when she looked down to check it, she saw that it had been pierced clean through, and was covered with a number of puncture marks. When that gauntlet had grabbed her hand, they had injected her with something... something powerful enough to knock out a demon? She looked down again, willing her torn flesh shut by her own power. A wound inflicted directly by human hands would not simply heal on its own.

"Ah! It bit me!" The mage cutting at Narshe's flesh pulled back, as something wet fell from his hands with a wet plop to the stone floor. Narshe's heart was a dark red, covered in black veins. More than that, however, no less than three fanged, circular mouths caked the outside of the hideous thing. It was a truly horrific sight.

"To put an accursed relic in your bare hands... have you no training, boy?" The old witch screeched. Her staff balanced itself as she let go of it, making a plucking motion with her hand. The heart lifted off of the ground, and floated toward her, finally falling into a jar presented by another of her attendants as she released it.

"And her majesty requires a chair." The witch said at last, as Cosette fell unconscious in the arms of a nearby mage.

* * *

Cosette awoke in a soft bed, in a room dimly lit by an old-fashioned fireplace--the kind designed for personal use in one's room. By the fire sat the old witch Stellaluna, circling her hands over the fire and muttering softly to herself. The two of them were alone in the room, which was decorated in a spartan fashion, with only bed, armoire, and desk to furnish it.

"Awake at last, child?" Stellaluna asked without turning. She was wearing robes which looked slightly more comfortable than what Cosette had last seen her in. Glittering vermillion silks covered her gaunt figure, while her long, thinning white hair was tied together in a jet-colored wrap that shimmered in the firelight. Her voice was softer than before, some of the passion of battle and the force of command having left her spirit. Still, she spoke resolutely, and Cosette could tell from the way she said it that there was a speech to come. "You were baited for a conflict, and foolishly followed a road to destruction. Praise the stars that your time is yet."

Cosette reflected on events that had occurred just before her near-fatal encounter with Etlinde. She had received word that a small attack had occurred--members of a coven only a county away had fallen under an attack by some foe. Lydia was the first suspect, but in all truth Cosette hadn't really taken time to consider who could be behind the infraction. In a rush, she had simply raised the fallen champions who waited beneath her Villa and marched them off to address the problem. She was confident that a puny assault would crumble quickly before her. Too confident.

The problem seemed to be small indeed--a group of fanatics striking out against what they rightly believed to be a gathering of practitioners of the darker arts. Quickly dispatched by and resurrected into the dead which followed Cosette's lead. As she stood upon the floor of victory in the empty monastery was when the real attack came.

Masses of artillery, soldiers, and her cousin's Thule mages had sprung upon them in a vicious pincer attack. It was a guaranteed and decisive victory for the Reich until Stellaluna had come to save her.

"How did you know to come?" Cosette stacked the two pillows on the bed behind her for better support and sat back.

"Concerning your wellbeing, some of your servants think more carefully." Stellluna seemed to be able to speak and murmur at the fire at the same time. The sounds of her voice working double felt eerie, as shadows danced around the room in patterns which fire should not readily be able to create. "Lord Malgrave sent me word that without notice you had left."

"I..." Cosette began, but wasn't sure how to justify herself.

"Rozalina has left a spoiled child to lead us!" Stellaluna shook her head, her shrill voice cracking as she spoke with passion once again. "Real wisdom is a trait you would do well to acquire, else you bring to ruin all that your faithful have worked so to create."

"The Renaissance Empire..." The empire Cosette was charged to recreate--the one her family had survived a thousand years with the sole goal of seeing manifest.

"For truth. A rebirth to the kingdom of high art and magic that bloomed for an age upon this continent--from history wiped by the Church of the dark ages. Your ancestors--the pure blood line of masters whose hands by which this world did turn--those have laid on you their burdens, and yet you would endanger your legacies--all our hopes--by doing anything without forethought!?" Stellaluna was almost yelling by the time she was through, and her voice dissolved into a coughing hiss after these last words. She caught her breath and continued, "many covens serve the Imperial Family in hope of reward, once the Darkest Empire is again reborn. Centuries of service... living, dying, fighting... don't dare to betray us." She gave another choking cough... or a sob? It was too difficult to tell through the crackling of the fire.

"Auntie Stella..." Cosette sensed something amiss with the woman she had grown up beside--one whom she affectionately named a surrogate aunt in her youth.

"Jael and Parom... great grandchildren of mine own with whom once you gamboled in your youth..." she took a deep breath, "murdered were they in the atrocities of war. I felt their spirits scream to me as flesh burned from bones in the incinerators of the death camps. They died for that they served you, as children of the Roma, and bent no knee the damnable Furher." Stellaluna's voice raised again, angry, "I inflicted their suffering upon her... if only she would die for a last."

"Etlinde dies not for so much as--" Cosette murmured, then caught herself slipping unconsciously into the old witch's strange personal dialect, "I mean, she won't die, not as long as the ideals of her Reich stand."

"Why is it, Eminence, that you forsake counsels of your servants most willing? Are our dreams not as one? They call you to stand before them--those who trust in you--to account of yourself."

It was difficult to understand the old witch through her tripping speech, but Cosette saw through deep enough to realize that she was in deeper trouble than the reproach of one single crone. "They summon me?"

"Indeed. Mayhap they find you unfit. Power is meaningless without cunning or patience. Most certainly is contexts such as these." The old witch stood stiffly, gathering together the silks pooled at her feet into one gnarled, liver-spotted hand. She walked carefully out of the room, fragile with age now that the fires of emotion had left her body--forced out by her own will. "You are of age, though you bear yet a child's heart. Burn out that heart to make way for a callous leader's iron will. It is the way of survival. For you, for us. She can teach you, the eldest can." The door clicked open on its own as Stellaluna approached, and closed quietly as she left Cosette alone.

Sighing with a grumble to herself the girl looked around once more. She was not in her own home--she must be in the manor of one of her vassals. Stellaluna had no home--a gypsy by birth, she had chosen that path in life as well. Before she could work up the urge to explore, the fire's crackling formed words to speak to her. It told her something hazy, warm, and comfortable, like a lullaby humming through her head. Is this Aunt Stella's spell...? She wondered halfheartedly, unable to focus through the daze that was infusing into her senses.

* * *

A figure stood in infinite darkness, alone. It was beside another--though despite their companionship, the two figures were most certainly alone--separated from each other, and the world. The stars in space hung around them--all too far to reach--too distant to fathom.

As Cosette looked into the golden eyes of Carmine, she saw a being much like herself--silver hair, soft flesh, youth, power, nobility... but as she looked longer and deeper into the soul of the other, something changed. It was a subtle change, as though she were noticing little things that she had missed before. The skin was not as tight as she had first thought, sagging here and there. the hair was thinner, the eyes sunken deeper, the youth was only an illusion--a trick of light for the casual observer. So vanity proceeds you even in death. Cosette thought to herself.

More than just skin-deep beauty had dissolved before her eyes, however. Unlike her waning youth, the ambient power surrounding Carmine had grown, towering over her like a great black tree fighting against heaven to inherit the sky, roots snaking about to conquer the earth. Cosette stepped forward, and her ancestor bid her to sit down at the root of this tree by her side. The girl obeyed, and the old woman looked off into the vastness of space, as if waiting for the proper moment to speak.

Perhaps a hundred years passed, or no time at all. There was no time in this place, after all. Carmine spoke to Cosette at last.

"What meaning does one life have in the scope of history, Cosette?" Her voice was cracked and dry and old, but something in it reminded the girl of how her mother used to speak to her. She remembered that Carmine's spirit must once have come upon her mother as well. Rather than answer, Cosette awaited for Carmine to continue. "You belong to me--have no illusions that you are anything else but a work of my will." She did not gaze into Cosette's eyes, but continued to stare out into the stars. "You are a stepping stone to my glory, as I was a tool of the Imperial Family. As they made demands of me, I think it not so great to burden you with demands of my own." She spoke in an elder tongue, and Cosette could understand her meaning by the weight of words, not through their pronunciation.

"You can't deny me." She looked at Cosette at last, and the fire in her yellow eyes burned bright like an expectant and malicious child. "But I will not take without giving in return. It is through my hand that you possess such great legacies of magic and mystery--I will teach you what Narshe and your mother could not. I will teach you to wield true power. In return, I will demand... certain favors." Cosette realized that she could not answer, even if she wished. Her will was meaningless in this place, she could do nothing but obey. "Look about you, my child." Carmine waved a hand upwards, to the tree they sat beneath.

As though removed from herself, she could view the entire black tree at once in a single vision, from its roots in time to its branches in heaven. Upon those branches hung many fruits, each filled with power and wisdom. Upon the tree were written in blood thirteen secrets, which she could not read by her own skill. "The root of the Imperial Line is your legacy, Cosette, but you have only tapped into its meanest parts. Return to me here, when you seek power, and I will aid you." Cosette could feel herself lifting--moving away from this place, back to a world of light. "I will come into your world when I seek your power. Do not resist me then, and we shall be in accord. Anger me, and I will devour your soul from within." All she could see now were Carmine's glowing golden eyes, at last swallowed up in light as her own eyes burst open.

* * *

The counsel convened that next day, Cosette led reluctantly to stand upon a central dais before a hundred aged warlocks and witches--leaders of covens and societies and collectives all across Europe. All with their hopes hung upon her. Some served for power, others for glory, others for the sake of their own legacies. Still, each was faithful--each desired the success of their Witch Queen in her quest to restore the glory of their craft to a world which had forgotten, suppressed, and destroyed it. It was daunting to look at each of them, their cold eyes and stern expressions set against her and her alone.

Narshe was still incapacitated, but improving in condition. It was the lack of her closest adviser that left Cosette most unprepared to give account of herself. Through even the long-sleeved, dress she wore and the many petticoats beneath, she felt the chill of uncertainty cut through to her bones. No one was showing up to save her now from her own. Her ankles felt weak from standing, but she knew it was just nerves. The girl felt she should say something, but it was Stellaluna who spoke first, standing from her place on the circular benches that wrapped the room.

"We Lords of the Most Dark Empire stand before her Eminence, Cosette Garidion, in inquisition this day, for to search out what deeds she hath wrought to the glory of the Empire and of our most holy order." The elder witch slammed her heavy staff on the ground, and it echoed through the hall with a heavy crack of metal on stone. "Counsel convenes. Members may address her Eminence with your pleas."

"Lady Garidion, what progress have you made recently toward the reestablishment of the Empire?" An elder mage stood, his beard falling to the middle of his waist.

"I have been--" Cosette searched for the right words to answer, but they seemed to scurry away from her tongue in fear under the man's gaze.

"When shall we strike down the Church? Know you their weakness?" Another witch,with dirty black hair and dark skin crowed.

"They are--" She stumbled over her words.

"What do you mean to do, thrusting yourself into the heart of battle?" A crone in a tall hat, whose hair covered her face completely howled.

"Have you secured us a weapon to crush the Babylon Foundation? A champion of some sort?" asked a short warlock wearing large red tinted glasses.

"We hear you've been consorting with the Eastern Mystics, what do you mean by this?"

"Is it true you assisted the Reich--despite their attempts to kill you?"

"The Domesday Clock still ticks! Their Science is cutting out the Magic from our world!"

Shouts began to fill the room as the councilmen and women stood and voiced complaint and query, each like the thrust of a knife into Cosette's back. Something inside her was seething. She saw something like that tree forming black in her vision.

A young, impetuous looking witch cried out at last. "Your incompetence with lead us all to ru--Aaaaaaahhh!" Her eyes widened and a scream ripped through the room as her face drained of color and life. After a few seconds of living agony, she looked more decrepit than Stellaluna.

From the dais, Cosette pointed a finger delicately at the woman. "Ah, blessed silence." A smile crossed her features. Her voice projected and boomed through the small, circular chamber, though she spoke softly. The effect was like a chorus of smaller voices echoing her words in a near whisper, just audible over the crackle of torches lighting the chamber. "I am as a god before you--each of your lives a simple flame to snuff out as it suits me." She emphasized the last words, whirling around so the whole room could fall under her gaze, "it would do to show more respect, considering your position." Something was speaking for her--Carmine--teaching her what to say. It was the practiced voice of a leader with power, and of a master who knew how to wield that power.

"Who dares question me, let him stand here, and we will settle things as my fathers did in the Most Dark Empire. By a show of strength." She held out an open hand, inviting any to come forth. One particularly bold soul stood, indignation written bold on his face, under a bald head and thick spectacles.

"Now listen here--" before he could even begin, Cosette's fingers snapped, and a bolt of energy cracked through the air, deep red and black with vile magic, ending the man's life in an unholy splendor. A faint gasp elicited from the other counsel members, who sat at a more rapt attention. This power... Cosette felt that she was standing beside herself, watching someone else wearing her skin.She was frightened--not by the experience, or by the fearsome magics she had just proved, but that what she was doing... it feels good.

"No more? No? Just one?" She surveyed the room again, beckoning with two fingers. Her subjects sat silent before her. "Good. In the old days, we killed for less, and there are so many more of you now than there were then. Insubordinates simply can't be tolerated." She paused, one hand crossed over her chest, and another resting her chin. Her mind felt like it was in a haze--she wasn't sure who was controlling her--maybe she was doing this, maybe not. It felt easy, natural, practiced. "Though dethroned, we--those gifted with the Eldritch might of magic, are indeed the true and rightful masters of this world--but similar powers fight against us--intent to lay their hands unjustly on our inheritance. Do not dare to question my way--each of you have with me the darkest accord, forfeiting your lives to my holy will. The time will come when I collect that boon, and call upon your powers--I have numbered the days even now." Cosette's golden eyes fell over the room, as she turned upon the dais slowly while speaking. "Strengthen yourselves for that day, and steel your black souls for the trials to come. In that glorious day, you may not all die--but you shall all surely be glorified."

Her eyes darted down to Stellaluna, and she held one pale hand out before her, ready to give the same motion that had ended those who previously dared question her. "Does the council pose further questions?" She asked, a smirk crossing her features.

There was silence. Even the torches seemed afraid to crackle too loudly.

"We declare this inquiry adjourned." Stellaluna cracked her staff against the ground once more, and Cosette turned to leave through the back door.

The council members decided to take the other exit.

Cosette leaned upon the papered walls of the mansion where the council had met. A rush of weariness fell over her as the adrenaline and tension of the interview dropped away.

A steady clap, clap, clap sounded from down the hall, as Lord Malgrave walked toward her, applauding quietly. "A most excellent show, milady." His crimson red lips curved to smile in an unnerving way, as he clicked his painted nails together in a thoughtful manner. "Perhaps you'll learn yet what it takes to rule the world."

"I'd prefer a rule by popularity." Cosette said honestly.

"Ah, but then you would need to please everyone. A rule by force is so much simpler. You just do whatever pleases you." The nobleman's cold gray eyes were hard and cruel, despite his calm smile. "I daresay you'll see that force makes you more popular with noble society. Do take my word for it."

"Mistressssss..." A familiar cooing voice called from down the hall.

"Is Narshe well?" Cosette asked, not answering the voice. It would take the vampire's heart four more days to stitch a new body for itself from flesh and dark magic. It would look like the old Narshe, on the outside, of course, but not until it was over. The process was hideous to say the least. Thinking of what the vampire must look like right now, Cosette almost gagged.

"She's in a rather pathetic state at the moment... just recovered her voice, so she's been calling for you. Quite disdainful." He shook his head. "But beyond that, I'm dearly curious," he leaned down to meet her face level, "as to who gave that magnificent speech. Was it you, or her?"

Cosette took a look up to meet his stare with a resolute gaze of her own. She wasn't sure what had moved inside her, but she had given it license to work. Perhaps she had not specifically said those words, but it had been in her power not to say them, had she willed it. Of this she was certain. Or... had the sinister spirit already begun to affect her mind from within?

The golden eyes of Black Cosette flashed with brilliant confidence, and her gaze beamed a smug assurance completely different from the fear and confusion within her. "It was I." She spoke calmly. At least, she thought that it must be her speaking...
PostPosted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 12:20 pm


And I got the first paper copy of DMO in the mail in my hands! So exciting! biggrin biggrin biggrin

Maybe I'll upload a picture, once I get my camera unpacked...

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 12:49 am


Do that, please!
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