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 Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 11:15 am
Thanks, I am glad that this is relatively getting a positive response
@Godstone-Thank you
@Fish-Thanks I am surprised you are reading it sweatdrop , but any how, yeah I noticed it is a bit on the jumpy side but that is only because the ambiance is a scared uproar that make all of the culties stationed at the base quite paranoid and manic. Yeah I have had an idea on how Skitty would be portrayed in the later chapters so she had to go in. And if you don't mind me asking what do you think the Secret weapon ninja is?
@fireonimusha- Thanks, compliments are always good, the space pirates invasion was based on two factors, one I am addicted to Zero mission, Fusion and super Metroid right now and the second is a major plot element in the future chapters.
@Skitty-thanks, Glad you like your part you will have a major role in future chapters
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 11:18 am
the story is awesome and I'm curious what Fish thinks the Secret weapon ninja is.
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 1:09 pm
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 1:11 pm
This is a nice story, good job.
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 1:21 pm
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 1:27 pm
Shorter then the other two, but it was pretty good.
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 1:31 pm
@ FS-thanks, I didnt think you read this story
@ Lavable, yeah
@ Seaphron,yeah sory about that I wanted to use this chapter as a set up the next chapter will be longer
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 3:17 pm
Lolz fear my special super bouncy sharp sporks of death.
Next time I'll be introducing the Spork of Castration and the Spork of Doooooom
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Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.]
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 3:17 pm
Don't be, I was just pointing it out.
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 4:01 pm
Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.] Lolz fear my special super bouncy sharp sporks of death.
Next time I'll be introducing the Spork of Castration and the Spork of Doooooom
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 4:08 pm
Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.] Lolz fear my special super bouncy sharp sporks of death.
Next time I'll be introducing the Spork of Castration and the Spork of Doooooom the Spork of Doooooom it is xd @Seaphron ok I am not sorry...I think confused @Fangs, You will soon find that the Cult slowly lowers you into insanity, but its a hell of a fun ride
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 4:09 pm
@Sauvie - Whatever works for you XD
@Fangs - Don't think I have said this but welcome to the Cult. You haven't seen anything yet!
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 4:11 pm
Seaphron @Sauvie - Whatever works for you XD
@Fangs - Don't think I have said this but welcome to the Cult. You haven't seen anything yet! actually Seaphron she is a friend of mine...She has seen plenty
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 5:33 pm
It's good, Sauvie. I've got to say, even though your spelling and punctuation isn't that good, I still wholeheartedly enjoy reading your story. It's actually good, and interesting, and has some emotion to it. The whole Skitty part kinda tore at my fishy heartstrings. *sniff*
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 5:35 pm
Meta Fish It's good, Sauvie. I've got to say, even though your spelling and punctuation isn't that good, I still wholeheartedly enjoy reading your story. It's actually good, and interesting, and has some emotion to it. The whole Skitty part kinda tore at my fishy heartstrings. *sniff* I am glad you like it, and I am working on the punctuation and spelling. Fishy heartstrings, sorry Fish but that truly is nuff said And I thought you didnt read that many cult stories (not that I am complaining)
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