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 Posted: Tue Jul 26, 2005 7:12 pm
BeeBrittney Rainy Cloud Here's a link to my newest fic, No One Knows What It's Like. n.n; It's actually a song fic. I enjoyed the song so I wrote it. Fanfiction.net name - Reni BlueStar CC; also my AOL screenname, but I hardly check my e-mail. Reviews - leave them. xD Summary - A piece of Sirius Black?s life before Hogwarts. Songfic. One-shot.
Oh wow. That was very good. I have never really thought deeply about Sirius' childhood. But this makes sense to me, living in a family which such different views on life, and people. It must have been difficult on him.
Wow. That was good.
And now I will be thinking about Sirius' childhood for the rest of the evening. 3nodding
I'm glad that someone likes it! I check my email hour upon the hour to see if anyone reviewed on fanfiction, but nothing. I was starting to get disheartened, then I came on here and saw this little note. n.n I'm thinking about writing a story about when Sirius started to disagree with his parents and such...still in the works.
But I'm glad you like it. Which is the whole point of this message. rolleyes at me.
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Posted: Tue Jul 26, 2005 9:03 pm
Rainy Cloud Two days later and I finally get back to you...-sigh- I'm pitiful.
I'm glad that someone likes it! I check my email hour upon the hour to see if anyone reviewed on fanfiction, but nothing. I was starting to get disheartened, then I came on here and saw this little note. n.n I'm thinking about writing a story about when Sirius started to disagree with his parents and such...still in the works.
But I'm glad you like it. Which is the whole point of this message. rolleyes at me. No, not pitiful. I myself have not be as active as I should be, so I understand.
Aw. ^_^ Well I am glad to hear that.
And I would like to read your story if you did, because I really have been thinking about this subject lately.
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Posted: Mon Aug 01, 2005 5:11 pm
If you do not like male close-to-shagging, don't read. You have been warned...
Disclamer: None, kthx. We all know these are Jo's.
"Reeeeemuuuus..."
"What, Sirius?" Remus asked in a more snappy tone than usual, looking up at the boy sitting across from his in the Library, which smelled of pine needles and freshly dusted books.
"You look tense." Sirius smiled deviously, pulling out a flask of something. He un-corked it, and handed it to an annoyed Remus, who put it up to his nose suspiciously.
"I am not drinking this. Love potion. I know because I can smell-" Remus turned maroon, matching the red on his Gryffendor scarf that was up in his trunk, "Well, nevermind that. You know I don't need to take this," Remus whispered disgruntledly, "I'm already in love with you."
A sly smile crossed Sirius' face. He took Remus' hand, which Remus pulled away. "Aw, c'mon, Remus, lighten up a bit."
"No public shows of affection, Sirius please," Remus pleaded to the raven-haired seventeen year old sitting across from him.
Sirius put on a convincing look of being offended. "Fine, then, maybe I'll ask Peter to go to Hogsmeade with me on a date, then."
Remus made retching noises. "Oi, Pads, you wouldn't do that if I payed you. And, I will go to Hogmeade with you. When's next Hogmeade weekend?"
"March seventeenth." Sirius watched Remus twitch at the sound of his bithday.
"Won't the others want to spend my eighteenth birthday with me?" Remus looked worried. Of course he'd only want to be with his boyfriend on his special day, but he couldn't help if the other two Marauders would want to celebrate with him.
"James will be on a date with Lily, and Peter is going to go spy on them. We'll have until dusk, when we can return to the common room for your party," Sirius said happily, as if they had been planning this for weeks.
"Mmm, sounds good, Siri."
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The next two weeks, Remus had tensed up even more, waiting for his date with Sirius. On the day of their date, he woke early. It was four thirty to be precise.
Remus rolled out of bed, landing on all fours, making a low growling noise for no particular reason. The tawny-haired male stood up at his full height, picking up a clean towel from a pile of them by his bed. He trudged into the bathroom, pulling off his blue plaid pajamas, and putting them over a metal poll that was fastined into the wall to hold clothes and towels.
The eighteen year old turned the shower cold, and stepped in quietly. Remus took nearly an hour before stepping out, pulling the clean white towel over himself, his pale, scar strewn back and chest visible over the towel. He pulled open the door to the boys dormitory, stepping in quickly, to find the rest of the boys still sleeping, and, in Peter's case, snoring loudly.
Remus wrinkled his nose at the deep inhailing and exhailing from Peter's bed, before pulling off the towel, drying his chest and neck. He through the towel over in a pile of laundery, picking up some clean robes, throwing them on, and smoothing out the wrinkles with a thin finger.
He looked at the clock. Six. The other boys wouldn't be up for at least an hour, so, twirling a strand of hair in his fingers and looking preoccupied, Remus walked into the Common room, where a bunch of giggly girls sat, whispering. He passed them cooly, walking out into the seventh floor corridor. Remus only used two secret passege ways before arriving at the Great Hall, and sitting near Lily, and her two best friends, Amber, and Dawn.
"Oh, hey Remus," Lily said, looking up from a magizine, "Happy Birthday."
"Thanks, Lily." Remus nibbled at a piece of toast, which he had covered with a thin layer of marmalade.
"What's on your mind, Remus?" Lily had not glanced back down at her article about a kind of 'witches' acne since Remus had sat down; she was now stareing at him intently.
Remus looked up wairily, "Just Si- well, nevermind. It's nothing."
Lily, who was very observent, caught the second word, and raised her eyebrows, "Are you guys having another row?"
"Ye- no. It's just... Lily, I really think you wouldn't understand, sorry." He heaved a sigh, looking at his sort-of-friend across the table and a few seats away.
"Well, fine, than, Remus," Lily said, slightly disgruntled, "But, if you need anything, juist ask."
Before Remus could reply, Sirius came in, followed by James, and than Peter. Sirius sat next to Remus, with Peter across from him. Jamkes sat ascross from Remus, next to Lily, who smiled like a love-sick puppy.
Remus and Sirius thought it was quite discusting, the way James and Lily turned to great globs of mush around eachother. They, even with Lily's personality, could be found snogging in the common room in a corner, or more often, in James' bed, fully clothed, mind you.
"C'mon, Remmy, eat up," Sirius said, piling kippers and scrambled eggs, and potatos on Remus' plate, "You're going to need energy for today."
Lily raised her eyebrows for a moment before turning back to a glob of mush, and stareing at James mindlessly.
Remus stabbed a potato, and stuffed it in his mouth grumpily. Sirius looked at him, cocking an eyebrow.
"C'mon, Remus, why are you in such a bad mood?" Sirius whispered quietly, fastening a hand on Remus' knee.
"I'm just nervous, that's all, Sirius," Remus said quietly, yearning to kiss him. "Just so you know, I'm kissing you in my mind."
Three Mauraders got up, exiting the Great Hall noisily. They left Peter there, inhaling scrambled eggs, his third plate of them, and muffins, his seventh, along with goblets of pumpkin juice, his tenth, and coffee, his seventh cup.
Remus gave Sirius a sidelong glance, and Sirius pateted his back reassuringly.Just then, Peter darted out, holding three pieces of toast. He hurridly walked past the caretaker, Eggorm. Once he was outside, he slipped on James' invisibility cloak, and followed James and Lily quietly.
Remus and Sirius walked outside, not surprised to find that it was snowing. In March. They moved cloaser together, pulling their cloaks about them tightly. When they entered Hogsmeade, Sirius and Remus hurried over to The Three Broomsticks. Remus entered first, heading for a table in the corner by the window.
Sirius walked over to Madame Rosmerta, who, Sirius swore, could not be a day over twenty-one. He came back to the table he and Remus were to share, putting down two Butterbeers, then getting up on one of the chairs that went high, the one closest to Remus.
Remus flicked his wand at the cieling behind them, and a small groove appeared there, which a large curtain fell down from, hanging there. On the other side, printed in red, said, Buissiness, do not desturb, please.
The seventeen year old, raven haired male leaned on Remus' shoulder, looking at the frosted-over windows, which were from the ceiling to floor. The tawny haired male patted his lap, and Sirius moved over from his seat, sitting on his boyfriend.
"I don't understand, Sirius, how, if we're both so light, we can hold eachother equally."
Sirius mearly shrugged, turning around. He now sat just below his boyfriends pelvis, wrapping his arms around his neck, and laying his head on Remus' shoulder slightly. "I love you."
"I love you, as well, Siri," Remus breathed, his arms around Sirius' back, pulling him onto his pelvis, and their chests touching. He leaned forward slightly, to kiss Sirius lightly, but Sirius cupped Remus' face in his hands, deepening the kiss.
They broke apart slowly, smiling quickly. Sirius got down, sitting across from Remus on his own seat. He took Remus' hand, tracing circles and squares on it quietly. Remus smiled. Even just that sensation was wonderful, if it was done by the right person.
"Sirius," Remus said unexpectedly, "I want to shag you silly."
"Mmm, same to you, but I don't think we should do it here."
"Oh, c'mon, you're always trying to get me to engage in 'daring things' in History of magic."
"Yeah, well, that's in History of magic."
"Well, this is The Three Broomticks, Siri, c'mon." Remus was never good at puppy dog eyes, or pouting.
"You're rubbish at pouting, Remus." A sly smile appeared on his face nonetheless. He pulled out his wand, casting a charm on the table. A large comforter appeared there.
Remus jumbed onto it, and Sirius climbed on quietly, getting ontop of his lover quickly. He didn't remove any clothes, just aligned their hips, moving left and right.
"Mmm, Sirius, don't stop," Remus whispered, then came a sort of whimpering moan, as he kissed Sirius quickly.
Sirius didn't stop for about five more minutes. He then rolled over, next to Remus, taking his hand. They both turned towards eachother, and Sirius leaned in to kiss his boyfriend, and his tongue ran over Remus' lips, which opened of their own accord. Sirius let his tongue slither into Remus' hot mouth, exploring the familiar cave. Every time their tongues collided, Sirius felt a shiver go down his spine.
They pulled away, panting, to say the least. They moved off the table, which due to Sirius mediocre charming skills, was now turning hard. They each sat in their own chairs, and Sirius took Remus's hand again across the table, before looking at a clock. Five minutes.
"Remus, can I ask you something?"
"Sure, anything."
"What did you smell when you sniffed that love potion?"
"Well, chocolate, and freshly dusted books, and dusty old books, and old parchment, and-" Remus blushed slightly, "-You."
A large smile crossed Sirius' face, and Remus smiled hesitantly. It was a bit mushy, sure, but true, very true. In fact, Remus could small Sirius in everything, not to mention see him in things. His morning porrige, clouds, in Divination, in his crystal ball.
The two males got up, passing the curtain, and walking out of the pub. They met up with James, who hld peter by the scruff of his collar, and by the buldge in his pocket, he had his invisibility cloak there, and Lily, who was looking at Peter with distaste. Peter looked as if he'd already gotten a scolding (not to mention looking like he'd seen a ghost).
"What were you guys doing all day?" James asked.
Sirius and Remus chanced a glance at eachother. "Nothing important, Prongs."
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Posted: Mon Aug 01, 2005 5:51 pm
Gred and Forge: Aww! That was teh cuteness!! Adorable...
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Posted: Mon Aug 01, 2005 5:54 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 01, 2005 6:07 pm
Empress_Kat Gred and Forge: Aww! That was teh cuteness!! Adorable...
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Posted: Thu Aug 04, 2005 9:12 pm
Truth or Dare
If you do not support slash(male/male) couplings, do not read on.
Disclamer: All the characters belong to Jo, kthx. 'Cept the music.
A/N: All music is AU, as in some of Green Day's recent things are in here, despite the fact that this is in the 80's. Don't point it out.
This will be five chapters. It revolves around a consert the Marauders go to in their seventh year, and a revealing game of Truth or Dare.
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"Don't wanna be an American Idiot!" Sirius mimed doing drums in midair as he sung his favorite song. He didn't hear Remus come in, looking highly amused.
Remus shut the door loudly, looking at Sirius, who opened his eyes, and quit jumping up and down on his bed. "Really, Sirius, you're doing a good enough job at being an English git, you don't need to go international."
He ducked the pillow that Sirius chucked at him, before bending down, and grabbing it, jumping on Sirius' bed, and smothering Sirius with it. It took Sirius a few moments to recover, and they both lay there, panting.
"So," Sirius said, "Where're James and Pete?"
"In the kitchens."
"Makes sence, Mr. Moony."
"Oh, but doesn't it, Mr. Padfoot?"
Remus and Sirius erupted into a fit of uncontrollable laughter, just as James and Peter walked in. "What's with you two?"
"It's nothing, Prongs," Remus said, before doubling over on the bed, laughing again. As soon as Remus and Sirius got control of their legs, they stood up.
It was currently Christmas Eve, the first day of their brake, and the Marauders, along with another good chunk of seventh years had chosen to stay at Hogwarts. Already, for half of the seventh years, it had started to get boring.
"What do you want to dooooo?" Sirius whined, pulling on Remus' arm. Remus wrenched his arm away, sticking a hand in his pocket. "Remus! Do that while we're not around! OW!"
Sirius rubbed his head where James' hand had struck him, then five pieces of paper were stuck in front of his face, being waved around by Remus. "Oi, Remus, keep those still. I'm dizzy enough."
Sirius grabbed the papers, and he scanned them. His dark black eyes widened, before he dropped thm, and wrapping his arms around Remus awkwardly. Sirius begand screaming and bouncing around. James snatched up the papers, and nearly turned as giddly, but resisted. "A joint concert between Green Day and The Killers! AHHHHHH!"
Remus and Sirius covered their ears and James ecstatic shriek permeated the room. Peter was awakened from his standing half-slumber by James. "Christ," he mumbled, picking up the tickets. "Tomorrow, eh?"
Remus nodded, as James spoke again, "What's the fifth ticket for?"
"Severus Snape," Remus said calmly.
"Really?" James and Sirius said in unison.
"No, you dolts," Remus smacked them over their heads, "Its for Lily."
"Fantastic!" James exclamed. "I'll go tell her!"
It was silent in the room for a moment, then, "ARGH!"
The three Marauders in the boys Dormitories rushed down to the Common Room just in time to see James slide down the newly formed slide up to the Girls Dormitories, and land on his rump at the bottom.
Lily came out, laughing at her boyfriend, who was still sitting, disgruntled at the bottom, a scowl on his face. Lily got on the grey slide, going down neatly, then standing up.
Remus took the fist he'd stuffed in his mouth out, and looked at James, fighting a bout of laughter. "How many times do I have to tell you, James, guys aren't allowed into the girls Dormitories. I read it in-"
"Hogwarts, a History," Sirius supplied quickly. "We all know, Remmy."
Remus shot Sirius a glare before helping James up.
"ANYWAY," James got Lily's attention quickly, "As I was going to say, Lily, is that Remus is taking us all-" His voice was steadily rising- "To a Green Day AND THE KILLERS JOINT CONCERT!"
"Lily was torn between telling James to calm down or jumping up and down like an idiot." She chose the latter, and started jumping around, holding James' hands. Remus rolled his eyes.
"OI! You, bloody dolts, get off your arses," Remus said, refering to James, Lily, and Sirius, who'd joined them, and all three were now sitting, having fallen while acting like complete prats.
"Ooooooh," Sirius said, scrambling up, "Moony swore!"
"Shut your bloody mouth, Padfoot," Remus said irritably.
"Oh, is it THAT time on month again?" Some people in the Common Room stared, and Lily giggled.
"You know perfectly well that it is NOT that time of month, Mr. Black," Remus said curtly, "I merely wanted to suggust a game of Truth or Dare, magic style.
"Hell yes," James said, getting up, and pulling Lily up as well. James walked into the middle of the Common Room, "Oi, all who aren't the Marauders or Lily, clear your arses out."
Several fifth years left, and a few sixth and seventh. And a whole group of first years, mingling with second years, scurried away from the seventh years.
Remus waved his wand, and the table dissapeared, and the five people plopped down simultainously, and Remus waved his wand again, and casted a charm around the circle, which made the truths, the thruth, and made it do the dares would be withheld. As it was, none of them had ever refused a dare anyway. Although, they could switch once per game.
"So, I prepose Messer Prongs should go first," Remus said quickly.
"Why thank you, Mr. Moony. So, Padfoot, Truth or Dare?"
Sirius hesitated. "Dare," he said firmly.
"Um, I dare you to erm... eat the chocolate that I hid from Remus a month ago under his bed. The whole bar."
"Hey, I knew that went somewhere!" Remus said, and Peter and Lily snorted.
Sirius walked upstairs, and came back down with a bar of chocolate only wrapped in the silver part. Remus had a hungry look in his eyes. "Come off it, Moony, it's moldy," Sirius said, before quickly unwrapping it.
The rest of the group, even Remus recoiled from the sight of it. Sirius stuffed the whole thing in the mouth, and swollowed without chewing. "EWW!"
"Man, I can't BELIEVE you just ate that," Peter said, repulsed.
"It was acctually kind of good; the mold was rather springy. Anyway, Evans, Truth or Dare?"
"Er, Truth," she said uncertainly.
"How far would you go with James?"
Lily blushed crimson. "Erm, well, I've been thinking about kids." By that time, James had gone red as well. "Anyway, Peter, Truth or Dare?"
"Truth."
"If you had to snog any boy in the school, who would it be?"
Peter turned parchment white. "Er... er... Well, I always liked blond hair, so Malfoy, I suppose..."
"Eww, that's gross, Peter," James said, sticking out his tongue.
"Remus, Truth or Dare?"
"Truth."
"How cute, on a one to ten scale is the girl you like."
"Erm... twelve."
"Ooh, Remus," James teased.
"Shut UP, Prongs," Remus said, whacking him upside the head, "James, Truth or Dare?"
"Dare, naturally."
Remus rolled his eyes. "Erm, I dare you to go put on Lily's dress, the black velvet one, and do a riverdance in front of us all, then stay in it until bed."
James grumbled, attempting to go get Lily's dress. They heard another thump and mumble of curse words, than James stomped back. "LILY, go get your dress." Lily went off to get it, returning quickly. James stomped off to change.
When he came back, he did a quick river dance to his friends amusement, before sitting down grumpily. "Alright, Peter, Truth or Dare?"
"Truth."
"Do you wank more than twice a week?"
"Erm, James, how daft are you? It's more than that a day." Peter clamped a hand over his mouth, emitting a small sqeak.
"Alright, Wormtail, too much information," Remus said, covering his ears.
"Hrrrumph. Padfoot, Truth or Dare."
"Truth."
"How cute is the girl YOU like, Padfoot?"
"Seventeen, easily. He-" He covered his hmouth with his hand before he could say anything else. "Oh, s**t."
"HE?" James bit back a laugh.
"SHUT UP!"
"Ha, ha, Sirius-" James was cut off by Sirius jumping on top of him, and a hand clamped around his neck.
"Quit it, Prongs!"
Sirius got up, storming off to the Boys Dormitory in a huff. Remus felt a jolt in his stomach. "Er, I guess this game is over."
He followed Sirius slowly, finding the door to the Boys Dormitory locked. "Alohamora!" Remus opened the unlocked door, crossing the room to his bed, noticing the curtains drawn on Sirius' bed. He decided not to say anything as he was joined by James and Peter.
James ripped off the dress, and they all pulled on their pajamas, not saying a word. Hopefully they would all be in a better mood tomarrow.
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 9:39 am
Awe, you're really good Gred and Forge! ^-^
Love your name, by the way. I thought that was one of the best parts in the whole series. 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 9:52 am
I do write fanfictions too
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 7:04 pm
Finora Lupin Awe, you're really good Gred and Forge! ^-^
Love your name, by the way. I thought that was one of the best parts in the whole series. 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 11:52 am
@Gred and Forge: Aah, Sirius/Remus! *floats away in a cloud of blissful slashy goodness* Erhm, anyway, you're pretty good. You've got a cute writing style and I enjoyed reading the 1 and 1/5 stories you've got up so far. How-ever, there are quite a few typos scattered throughout the story; mispellings, misplaced punctuation, etc. You could probably use a beta reader.
Anyway, looking forward to the next 4 parts. 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 7:48 pm
Quid
Remus awoke in the morning with a painful migrane. He looked at the clock. Six. He drew back his curtains farther, only to find Sirius watching him. "Oh, hey Pads. What's up?"
"Oh, nothing," Sirius mumbled, pulling his robe onto his bed, and shutting the curtains. Remus did the same, pulling on his robes quickly. They got out, not speaking a word.
Neglecting his gifts for the moment, Remus crossed the room, pulling open the door. The two males walked down the curved staircase, into the common room, and onto the Seventh floor corridor, unrosponsive to the Fat Lady's mumblings. They made their way down to the Great Hall. In the Entrance Hall, Remus grabbed Sirius' wrist. "Listen, Sirius, about last night-"
"I don't want to talk about it," Sirius mumbled, tearing away, and walking into the Great Hall. Remus followed, somewhat surprised that they were the first, teacher or student to be in the hall.
Remus spread a thin layer of marmalade on a piece of toast, and nibbled at it, not really having much of an appitite.
Sirius, however, shoveled eggs, toast, and potatos into his mouth. Remus looked up, sipping from his goblet of pumpking juice, five minutes later, to see Sirius already getting up. Remus scrambled up, and followed after him. in the Entrance hall, Remus cursed, as he couldn't see his friend any longer.
The boy started up the many staircases, until he reached the far lady's portrait, where he mumbled 'Eggnog', and entered, going up into the Boy's Dormitory. He opened the door, to find his three friends opening presents, wrapping paper flying everywhere. Remus was glad to see Sirius in a better mood, and he walked over to his bed, sitting by his own pile, a bit smaller than the others.
He opened the largest present first, folding the wrapping paper neatly next to the gift. It was from Sirius. Three books, one on Charms, one on Transfiguration, and the thickest was about The Killers. Remus gave Sirius an awkward squeeze. "Thanks a lot, Sirius. These books are brill!"
He opened another gift. It was from his parents. He pulled out a scarf that, aparently, his mother had made. It was gold and maroon, like his regular one, but it looked a lot better. Remus folded it carefully, putting it on his bed.
Remus opened a third gift, a medium sized box, and found that James had gotten him a box full of chocolate frogs. Another box told him that Peter had gotten him a small, leather bound book with no writing in it. "Thanks James, and Peter."
He turned to the last box, which was just big enough to fit something long and thin in. He opened it, unwrapping the paper carefully, and tuned it over. Three chocolate bars fell out. He snatched up a note, and read an unfamiliar curly writing.
Mr. Lupin,
It has come to my attention that you have an infatuation with chocolate. I hope you enjoy the chocolate that I have enclosed.
Have a very Happy Christmas.
Sirius snatched it from Remus, reading it. Then James and Peter read it. They looked up at Remus, mirroring his shocked face. "What's infatuation?" They all asked at the same time.
Remus rolled his eyes. "An extreme like of. Or, obsession over something."
"I'll say you obsess over chocolate," Peter said, to chucklings of James and Sirius.
"Hey," Sirius blurted, "I know that writing."
"Yeah, me too," James said, "It's-"
"Dumbledore," Sirius finished.
"You guys sure?" Remus questioned.
"Yes," They said.
Remus unwrapped some chocolate, smelling it. He crammed half the bar in his mouth. "Mmm. What time is it?"
"Nine. How can you talk with your mouth full like that, Remmy?"
"I, dunno, Siri, just a talent."
"Hey, Remus," Peter ejaculated, "What's that?"
Peter pointed to a long, thin package in between Remus' and Sirius' bed.
"It's probably for Sirius," Remus said, scooting over to look at it. On the top, in large, bold letters, it said: REMUS LUPIN. "Well," he murmered, "I suppose it's for me."
Remus pulled it over to the middle of the circle. He tore off the brown paper, throwing it to the side.
"WOW!" James, and Peter exclaimed. "That's a Nimbus 1000, Remus!"
"That's better than my broom," James said in amazment. "Hey, look, a note!"
Remus snatched the paper up, and again saw a strange handwriting.
Dear Remus Lupin,
I hope you enjoy this. have a very Happy Christmas.
Your secret lover.
James picked up the note, when Remus accidentally dropped it. "Ooh, Remus, you have a secret lover. OW! Peter, don't smack me, my brain is damaged enough, thanks."
"Shut up, James," Remus, said, snatching the note, and ripping it, throwing the remains in his trunk.
"C'mon," Sirius said, "Let's go have a broom ride."
They four boys got up, picking up their brooms from under their beds, exept Remus, who was still holding his. Sirius followed James, and, behind him, he could've sworn he heard a "Reparo!" and Remus stuffing a piece of paper in his pocket before following the other three.
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James led the way, down the sloping path to the Quidditch Pitch. When they got in, James got the four balls out from Madame Hooch's office.
"Alright," He said. "We'll be playing a variation of Quidditch. It'll be called Quid-" Sirius sniggered- "Anyway, it'll be called Quid, and we all get a beaters' bat, and we all have to hit the quaffle into the other peoples' goals, and block our own as well. Whoever hits the snitch into the other persons goal gets two hundred points, and the game is over. Peter and I will be on a team. And, Sirius and Remus."
"Sounds good," the other three said, mounting their brooms, and beginning to fly up.
James dropped the Quaffle into the middle of the Pitch, and Sirius hit it to Remus, who hit it back, when Peter intercepted it, hitting it to James, who smnashed it into Sirius and Remus' goal, scoring ten points. "WOO!"
Half an hour later, Sirius and Remus were leading, 130, to 50. Just then, Sirius saw something gold glinting in the sunlight. He dived towards it, mustering up his strength, hitting it half-way across the pitch, and into James and Peters' goal.
Sirius stood up on his broom, which did a victory lap of it's own accord, him standing on it. He sat, flying over to Remus, and they high-fived, before diving down to land, where Peter and James already were, tapping their feet impatiently.
"It's starting to get dark," Remus said, "We should get back up to the castle."
The others nodded in agreement, and they walked up to the castle. Peter opened the large oak doors, and they all walked in, making their way up the large stairs. When they came to the portrait hole, Peter murmered the password, and they entered.
"You guys stay in the Common Room, I'm not changing in the loo," Remus said, before walking up into the Boys Dormitory.
"Er, I call next!" Sirius said to James and Peter.
After about fifteen minutes, Sirius grew impatient, and walked up the stairs. He opened the door to the Boys Dormitory, and his jaw dropped.
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Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 8:31 pm
NO! A cliffhanger! crying
Oh well, update soon.
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Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 4:09 am
I'm not saying this to act dumb but what is fanfiction? A story made up by a reader that goes into another book? Like our version of a story?
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Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 11:32 am
I am making one. It''s going where my journal is. Take a look! I only made chapter 1 though
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