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 Posted: Sat Apr 16, 2005 2:18 am
Great action there! If it was not for the blatant pointing out of the word 'climbed' I would probably have overlooked it; but a few I think could be replaced for greater variety.
Waiting for 7... smile
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Posted: Sat Apr 16, 2005 12:14 pm
Lose Your Illusions A couple of words seemed misplaced, and I think a few of the phrases, but nothing wrong apart from that
And you can wait for 7, too darn tired at the moment to finish editting it.
And i'll change "Climbe d" *Space to stop it highlighting that dammed word...* when i get round to it...
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Posted: Sat Apr 16, 2005 12:23 pm
Ara Azdaja Lose Your Illusions A couple of words seemed misplaced, and I think a few of the phrases, but nothing wrong apart from that
And you can wait for 7, too darn tired at the moment to finish editting it.
And i'll change "Climbe d" *Space to stop it highlighting that dammed word...* when i get round to it...
He can wait really...
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Posted: Sat Apr 16, 2005 12:35 pm
Nebelstern Ara Azdaja Lose Your Illusions A couple of words seemed misplaced, and I think a few of the phrases, but nothing wrong apart from that
And you can wait for 7, too darn tired at the moment to finish editting it.
And i'll change "Climbe d" *Space to stop it highlighting that dammed word...* when i get round to it...
He can wait really...
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Posted: Sat Apr 16, 2005 1:02 pm
and_solo_said Some of us finished yesterday Simon *taps foot impatiently*
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Posted: Sat Apr 16, 2005 1:20 pm
Nebelstern and_solo_said Some of us finished yesterday Simon *taps foot impatiently*
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Posted: Sun Apr 17, 2005 5:31 am
[ Message temporarily off-line ]
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Posted: Sun Apr 17, 2005 5:43 am
Chapter 6 editted for you Si! ^_^
Chapter 7 up for scruntiny and Owen you still haven't said which words were out of place, or did you give me any idea which ones you were talking about confused
*Goes to edit 8 and any others she can be bothered to.*
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Posted: Sun Apr 17, 2005 8:56 am
Ara Azdaja Chapter 6 editted for you Si! ^_^
Chapter 7 up for scruntiny and Owen you still haven't said which words were out of place, or did you give me any idea which ones you were talking about confused
*Goes to edit 8 and any others she can be bothered to.*
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Posted: Sun Apr 17, 2005 9:03 am
Ara Azdaja Chapter 6 editted for you Si! ^_^
Chapter 7 up for scruntiny and Owen you still haven't said which words were out of place, or did you give me any idea which ones you were talking about confused
*Goes to edit 8 and any others she can be bothered to.*
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Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 5:11 am
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Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 6:47 am
smile
I'll wait for others to ctahc up before posting 8.
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Posted: Tue May 03, 2005 1:46 pm
*Still waiting so goes back to DIBI for a while.*
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Posted: Tue May 03, 2005 2:58 pm
Ara Azdaja *Still waiting so goes back to DIBI for a while.*
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Posted: Wed May 04, 2005 3:00 am
Thankyou for telling me o.o
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