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Set in alternate timeline, after the third great ninja war. The Land of Fire unites the land, abolishing all shinobi in other countries. 

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 16, 2016 6:19 pm


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Naephyrea stood on top of Tsunade's head and waited for Myr. It was a nice view here. She could see the whole city. She leaned over and looked straight down. Really high up too. Kinda made you nauseous if you stared down at the ground. Perfect.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 16, 2016 7:03 pm


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” "Be extremely subtle, even to the point of formlessness. Be extremely mysterious, even to the point of soundless. Thereby you can be the director of the opponent's fate."


Story/Arc: 3 - The Ecstasy Of Progress




The sensory training he secretly was using. Had proved useful since Mayr was able to follow Naephyrea. Smoke would poof 10ft from behind Naephyrea. Out of the smoke was Uchiha Mayr standing there. With one hand in his pocket. A smile on his face that made him look more friendly. Confident and unpredictable. Mayr nodded. Wearing his Uchiha clothing the wind swayed his hair and cloths. Both his attitude and appearance seemed worthy of a jounin's presence. Mayr was looking at Naephyrea. His head lowered slightly though. "Tell me. Naephyrea-sensei. Why do the Hyuuga. Or that Hyuuga guy back in the Hyuuga district. Have a rash dislike for people outside of the Hyuuga clan, or Uchiha? I didn't need my sensory to feel the hate coming from him. Do the Hyuuga think they're better than everyone? That's kind of the idea I got from him. That.. he's a mean person." Mayr raised his head smiling.

Mayr didn't know how his jounin would react. He was wondering this the entire time he raced here with body flicker. Mayr wasn't sure if Naephyrea would have an answer. His face became more focused. As if his last question wasn't important. Mayr took out a kunai holding it easily in his hand. Naephyrea mentioned punishment. This meant he should be on his guard. Mayr was a genin. This kind of thing might of been easily misconstrued by the young Uchiha.



- Increasing Chakra = +2
- Training, Sensory = 4/5
*Training with someone who has mastery in a (Sensory)stat will cost 50% less





“For to win one hundred victories in one hundred battles is not the acme of skill. To subdue the enemy without fighting is the acme of skill. "
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 16, 2016 7:35 pm


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"First of all... 'that Hyuuga guy' is my son. Careful what you say about him."

Naephyrea thought about his question. "I could say that the Hyuuga and the Uchiha are rival clans. Or I could point to the Uchihas history of violence... But if you want to know the real reason Kyofu dislikes the Uchiha, its probably because of me."

Naephyrea shrugged. "I taught him to be strong and he sees me as some kind of brute who will do anything to get stronger. He gives me a pass, but he probably resents people like me."

Had she really raised him all that well? Her father had raised her the same way and she had turned out fine. Did Kyofu resent her? Perhaps she would do things a little differently with Mayr's training.

She reached into her leg pouch and pulled out some bandages. "If you're willing to undergo this dangerous training, first bind your hands and feet. There's going to be some real risks for you, and this will make it more difficult to avoid dying. Of course, you can back out now if your afraid." She taunted. He would turn out stronger if he chose this than if she forced it on him

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 17, 2016 9:24 am


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Chakra: 100/100, Endurance/Energy - 100

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” "Be extremely subtle, even to the point of formlessness. Be extremely mysterious, even to the point of soundless. Thereby you can be the director of the opponent's fate."


Story/Arc: 3 - The Ecstasy Of Progress




"Sensei. I should of spoke up the moment we met back in the Hyuuga district. Sensei. You're a Taijutsu specialist. That's what the Hyuuga clan are known for. My toughness is already at the peak of what a genin should be. I trained my toughness before we met. Inevitably I got into this fight. I don't have much experience with Taijutsu. I got beat up. I didn't use ninjutsu because he was only using his fist. It would be dishonorable as an Uchiha. If I cheated. I got beat up pretty bad. From that pain my toughness rose considerably." Mayr said putting his hand on his waist.

"Sensei. Can you teach me Taijutsu?" Mayr wasn't rushing. Mayr spoke calmly and elegantly. Mayr had a lot to learn. Even though he tried his best to improve everything everyday. Mayr embraced his new Jounin Naephyrea. Mayr was confident he could meet Naephyrea standards.



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“For to win one hundred victories in one hundred battles is not the acme of skill. To subdue the enemy without fighting is the acme of skill. "
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 17, 2016 3:05 pm


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Naephyrea stood there rather coldly when Mayr embraced her. The kid was energetic and overly affectionate on top of that. Though she liked his spirit.

So, his toughness was already maxed out... And it didn't seem that he was lying to get out of her intense training, no, he seemed really straight forward. "If your toughness cannot go any further, then, yes, we cannot proceed with what I had plan," She said a tinge of disappointment in her voice. Actually, she had planned to toss him off of the mountain once he was bound up to begin with.

"I can't teach you the Hyuga's style of taijutsu, but there is still plenty to learn by fighting against it. You will learn taijutsu by fighting with me. Take your position."



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PostPosted: Wed Aug 17, 2016 3:36 pm


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Chakra: 114/114, Endurance/Energy - 100

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” "Be extremely subtle, even to the point of formlessness. Be extremely mysterious, even to the point of soundless. Thereby you can be the director of the opponent's fate."


Story/Arc: 3 - The Ecstasy Of Progress





Mayr was improving his life. His face was somber but somewhat more relaxed than most genin. Mayr was concentrating on the task at hand. Mayr couldn't afford to disobey his Jounin. In terms of skill Mayr was still ahead of all of his peers. "I inherited this Kekkai Genkai. I am an Uchiha. My power is the Sharingan!" Mayr opened his eyes wide. Mayr activated his 3 Tomoe Sharingan! The crimson glow with piercing intimidation that could cut through the air. Mayr was thinking this was going to be real tough. He clenched his fists, balling his fist up real hard.

You could tell in Mayr's stance that he had little skill in Taijutsu. He was wide open everywhere. However, those Sharingan eyes were another story. If Naephyrea's experience was as it should be. She would know what those 3 Tomoe Sharingan meant. He might of been a genius, after all. He always wished to learn Taiutsu some how. This way would be the best way for the Uchiha boy. Mayr would rid his inexperience in hand to hand.




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*Training with someone who has mastery in a stat will cost 50% less
-Sharingan Activated



“For to win one hundred victories in one hundred battles is not the acme of skill. To subdue the enemy without fighting is the acme of skill. "
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 17, 2016 5:11 pm


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Naephyrea took note of his sharingan, fully mastered already. He would grow quickly, and her intense training would suit him. She could tell already.

Most Jounin would probably go easy on their student at this point, and they'd probably allow the genin to attack first but she didn't train weaklings. She'd throw him right into the thick. She activated the Byakugan in her left eye and said, "Go!" Mayr may notice that her right eye was still covered by an eyepatch. Of course, she wasn't going to go as far as to pull out THAT.

She took a step toward that was almost a turn, the circular motion that the Hyuuga moved in. She came at him turned to the side, and would make two quick Juken strikes at his head with the Juken. She could see the path that the sharingan could see with her Byakugan and use that to her advantage. Her left arm would follow behind her right arm so that it remained out of sight until it was right up on Mayr's face, so that he wouldn't be able to use the sharingan to predict it.



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PostPosted: Thu Aug 18, 2016 9:29 am


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” "Be extremely subtle, even to the point of formlessness. Be extremely mysterious, even to the point of soundless. Thereby you can be the director of the opponent's fate."


Story/Arc: 3 - The Ecstasy Of Progress




Mayr's eyes raised even more. Jounin level's were fast. And this Taijutsu was beyond Mayr's expectations! However, he had the Sharingan. So he could see Naephyrea movement a lot more clearer. Than her Byakugan could perceive. Firstly, the Sharingan could see vivid detailed movement, step by step. In slow motion might I add. That's why Uchiha seem to be steps ahead of someone they use the Sharingan on. Mayr's Sharingan was so trained. That he could see her movement. Before she even made it. That was one of the true powers of the Sharingan. The Byakugan only gave the best far-sightedness. The Sharingan, only the well-trained ones. Gave it's Uchiha clear images of the opponent's future move. A scary ability of the Sharingan that let's them peer into the future. The Sharingan works best in split second decisions and paces. The Byakugan being able to see chakra points, and chakra in the body. Mayr could see her chakra signature, not the chakra points. Along with her movement that was moving in slower motion than she actually moved.

However, Mayr was a genin. And she was a full-fledged Jounin. Mayr noticed that his body couldn't keep up with Naephyrea. True. Even if he could keep up. Her Taijutsu far surpassed his. Much like a white belt fighting a black belt in karate! Mayr gulped. His Sharingan allowing him to know where he stands in this situation. His Sharingan told his brain Naephyrea's speed, and his reflexes were worlds apart. Mayr used the Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Replacement Technique) before she could hit him. To switch places with a nearby big rock. When Naephyrea would crush the big rock.

If she possessed the strength. Mayr would be directly behind her. Moving in for a sweep kick to trip her in a low stance. If the sweep-kick didn't work. Mayr would push up from the ground with his hands upside-down. In an attempt to drop kick her upper body. The Uchiha was using Taijutsu as he was told. He always kept his Sharingan focused on her. Just in case he needed to use some split second moves and thinking.

Mayr could read this all very clear. Without a 3 Tomoe Sharingan. As a genin. He wouldn't even able to fight back against her superior Taijutsu. His Sharingan gave him images of the future. To make split-second decisions. Naturally a genin wouldn't be able to react against a Jounin, at any rate. This goes to show you that Mayr was one of the strongest genin in konoha currently.



- Training, Taijutsu = 2/5
*Training with someone who has mastery in a stat will cost 50% less
-Sharingan Activated
-Used Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Replacement Technique)



“For to win one hundred victories in one hundred battles is not the acme of skill. To subdue the enemy without fighting is the acme of skill. "
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 18, 2016 3:37 pm


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Perhaps one of the Byakugan's better and less understood abilities was that of being able to read the opponen'ts body language and gain insight to their thoughts. Watching Mayr's face, Naephyrea could tell he had not caught on to her second attack, but was simply been overwhelmed.

She turned her steel palm into a steel fist and smashed the rock apart.

Of course, she noticed the leg sweep withe her nearly perfect field of vision and picked her legs up allowing his leg to pass just under her feet.

But she didn't bother dodging his next attack. It hurt, but she could easily take it. Instead, she would grab his ankle as soon as it connected with her torso. Her hand was fast enough, that Mayr wouldn't be able to get out of range at this proximity. "If your facing an overwhelming opponent, sometimes the best strategy is dive right into the beast's mouth and rip out its tongue."

She would strike at his foot in her hand, blocking the chakra flow to it, and if that succeeded, she'd toss him off the mountain, and jump off behind him. He had 1 foot and 2 hands to help him survive this fall. 2 more limbs than she'd been going to give him earlier.


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PostPosted: Fri Aug 19, 2016 3:27 pm


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” "Be extremely subtle, even to the point of formlessness. Be extremely mysterious, even to the point of soundless. Thereby you can be the director of the opponent's fate."


Story/Arc: 3 - The Ecstasy Of Progress





Thats a laugh. Mayr really didn't stand a chance against Naephyrea in Taijutsu! Heh! Mayr was hit in the foot, thrown off the mountain even. However, before his body could fall completely out of her view. His body would fade away slowly out of thin air. Yes his body literally faded away like a strong wind blowing smoke away. Why? Naephyrea-sensei right now was in a genjutsu. A strong, A rank, Genjutsu. That was only possible by having a 3 Tomoe Sharingan!

Literally behind Naephyrea without her being able to react, or even see it. Before it happened since she was in his genjutsu. A reality world in her mind that Uchiha Mayr created. Meaning she would have 0% control of this Genjutsu world. Since it was Genjutsu you couldn't control Genjutsu physically. Naephyrea reflexes and even Taijutsu had no place, or control in this genjutsu. A katana stabbed straight into her lower back. Straight through her stomach. The blood and pain would be extremely realistic, along with blood leaking from her mouth. This was the most realistic Genjutsu a ninja could fall prey to. A proud ultimate visual jutsu that belonged only to the Uchiha clan! "Sensei~ I got you. This is one of my abilities." Mayr was shown behind her in a throwing stance with his body.

You see? The moment Naephyrea saw his Sharingan eyes. The first time she noticed his 3 Tomoe. The Genjutsu was emitted. Naephyrea would be bleeding right now and in bad shape. From the pain and injury of having a katana impaling your back and out your stomach. Of course this was all Genjutsu though. None of it was real. Mayr was weaker in rank, barely had hand to hand combat skills, and much young. Still, there was the undeniable fact that Uchiha Mayr has mastered his Sharingan, fully. This was the most important outlook on her Uchiha student for later. As long as he had those eyes he was a threat to anyone!

As of right now Mayr was standing 4ft from her. Naephyrea was caught in his Genjutsu. She wouldn't know she was in a Genjutsu. The effects of her injury and pain were all too real. Along with Mayr not giving any hints to her being in a Genjutsu. In addition, Mayr didn't know this, but Naephyrea had basic skills with Ninjutsu. Along with absolutely no skill in Genjutsu. With Naephyrea knowledge in Ninjutsu. She wouldn't be able to break an A rank Genjutsu from the Uchiha clan's visual prowess! "Sensei. I am Uchiha Mayr. A genin from the leaf village. Your proud student who stands as the strongest genin in konoha.. An Uchiha clan member. The Uchiha clan's future head of the clan one day. A strong believer that absolute power will one day be inherited by me. To annihilate anyone or anything that dares threaten this village." Mayr said with his fists balled up.

There was absolutely no way Naephyrea could know she was in a Genjutsu. And if she tried to break the Genjutsu her ninjutsu would fail. This Genjutsu was too strong. In reality, Mayr was sitting on the floor next to her eating some food, and drinking soda. He had some time he guessed.

His Sharingan, was powerful!




- Training, Taijutsu = 3/5
*Training with someone who has mastery in a stat will cost 50% less
-Sharingan Activated
-Used Genjutsu: Sharingan (Lasts for 2 More Posts)




“For to win one hundred victories in one hundred battles is not the acme of skill. To subdue the enemy without fighting is the acme of skill. "
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 24, 2016 4:48 pm


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” "A knight will also not hesitate to strike down any violence willing to blow away innocents "








Hinote whistled. He's a Jounin in the leaf village. Whoever was fighting the Uchiha boy. Had just been defeated by a genin. Hinote couldn't believe his eyes. That Uchiha Mayr had defeated a Jounin. Hinote would be sure to stay on his toes. Hinote hoped he could be a great instructor for this kid. Hinote jumped down from the mountain place he was at. Then landed in front of Mayr. Talking without looking directly into the Uchiha's eyes. He didn't know how Mayr would use the Sharingan against someone unknown.

And he didn't like the idea of being overwhelmed by a mere genin. "This time you'll have a serious Jounin. Someone you cannot beat in only one move. Now then. You two were doing Taijutsu. Well, I'll help you with Taijutsu. But I have a softer approach, and more friendly. You're just getting started, huh. Well just do your best against me. I'll defend. You attack. I defend! The sky is blue. This is the perfect day for Taijutsu training." Hinote was trying to concentrate on not looking at this kid directly in the eyes. Hinote directed his vision towards Mayr's chest. That way he could at least fight without looking at his Sharingan!






“A Knight can put out a dragon’s flame in an instant with their blade. "
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 24, 2016 10:04 pm


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” "Be extremely subtle, even to the point of formlessness. Be extremely mysterious, even to the point of soundless. Thereby you can be the director of the opponent's fate."


Story/Arc: 3 - The Ecstasy Of Progress




Mayr couldn't sense the Jounin Hinote, until he was right in front of him. Mayr with his piercing Sharingan eyes were staring at Hinote. He noticed that this Jounin wasn't looking into his eyes as he talked. Mayr smiled. This guy was smarter. Mayr shrugged he was finished with the Hyuuga joinin. Guess she wasn't as strong as he thought she was. Sooner than later. Yes. Mayr was really getting into the Taijutsu training. Mayr did just as Hinote said. And began fighting using Taijutsu. Mayr was a beginner. Still, he learned at a rapid rate. Being an Uchiha with vast potential. Along with using the Sharingan to foresee, and capture Hinote-sensei's movement. Using his own taijutsu style to try and best his Jounin's defense fighting. He used punches, kicks, somersault for aerial strikes.




- Training, Taijutsu = 4/5
- Sensei's Ability - Can train pupils jutsu's more effectively reducing the posts when training with a student -1 paragraph per post
- Training with someone who has mastery in a stat will cost 50% less
-Sharingan Activated





“For to win one hundred victories in one hundred battles is not the acme of skill. To subdue the enemy without fighting is the acme of skill. "
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 25, 2016 4:52 am


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” "A knight will also not hesitate to strike down any violence willing to blow away innocents "








Hinote's Taijutsu was balanced and very controlled. Hinote was racing the Uchiha boy to defend against his attacks. Certain attacks of Mayr's were improving he could see this. Hinote didn't plan on making Mayr bleed. This was all a teaching experience. Hinote liked the look of Uchiha Mayr's Taijutsu. It was improving no doubt. Hinote had incredible muscle. Hinote had a lot of friends in the village. All the ninja knew how much he loved training genin. Hinote had come in for a dive then came up with an extremely fast uppercut to Mayr's jaw. However he stopped before the fist could contact. Just to show Mayr an example of his Taijutsu. And how overwhelming fast his Taijutsu was.

Hinote wore mostly black along with his Jounin vest. Hinote relied on Taijutsu outside of the use of his Ninjutsu. He wore his weapons, and accessories hidden. Hinote knew he couldn't look directly into Mayr's Sharingan. That spelled misfortune. His centre of gravity was never changed. He had his feet planted firmly on the ground. Hinote wasn't any different than any other Jounin in the village. Hinote wasn't surprised by the rate Mayr was learning in.






“A Knight can put out a dragon’s flame in an instant with their blade. "
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 25, 2016 12:20 pm


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” "Be extremely subtle, even to the point of formlessness. Be extremely mysterious, even to the point of soundless. Thereby you can be the director of the opponent's fate."


Story/Arc: 3 - The Ecstasy Of Progress



Mayr was happy that Hinote-Sensei was allowing him to use the Sharingan. He used punches and kicks in amazing variations. Mayr's head was filled with a bigger horizon in front of him. Mayr preferred this new Jounin, rather than the other one. Mayr had thrown a large number of kicks and punches. He could feel the swiftness of his body becoming more agile, and faster. Uchiha Mayr was probably going to try and use his Sharingan. In order to see every detail of Hinote-Sensei's movement. That way if he slipped up even in the slightest. Mayr would sock him in the face. Right now the situation was Mayr was improving his Taijutsu!



- Training, Taijutsu = 5/5
- Sensei's Ability - Can train pupils jutsu's more effectively reducing the posts when training with a student -1 paragraph per post
- Training with someone who has mastery in a stat will cost 50% less
-Sharingan Activated





“For to win one hundred victories in one hundred battles is not the acme of skill. To subdue the enemy without fighting is the acme of skill. "
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” "A knight will also not hesitate to strike down any violence willing to blow away innocents "








Hinote had mastery of Taijutsu at Jounin level. It was not possible for Mayr to get the jump on him. However, Hinote was inviting Mayr to try and overcome him. Hinote looked at the Uchiha's chest. Never looking into his eyes. With the chance of using Genjutsu. He knew that Mayr could definitely get him bad. If Hinote had peered into his eyes. The jounin had sent his arms around. Also raising his feet to block punches and kicks. He could feel the sharpness and quality of Mayr's Taijutsu. Improving which made his eyes narrow in admiration. Hinote was going to keep defending for the most part. It looked as if Mayr was enjoying himself.





“A Knight can put out a dragon’s flame in an instant with their blade. "
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