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Posted: Thu Mar 14, 2013 6:10 pm
Overall I like it, just a couple corrections I'd request. Majesty destructs those Sestran uses it on because his own power has been so corrupted and his spiritual pressure is inherently destructive in the first place. Unless her's is also just inherently destructive I don't think she would cause that effect.
Also, I like the idea of Acquittal but I think that perhaps since it draws so much out of her that we should limit how often she can reliable use it to once a week.
Otherwise once those changes are made. I approve Sestran's sister. Yay!
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Posted: Fri Mar 15, 2013 2:04 pm
Hey guys~! I figured since I'm not RP'ing Rukia this time around, I'd rewrite Hisana's history a little. History: Hisana was born twenty years after the Winter War to her parents Ichigo and Rukia Kurosaki. Her birth was celebrated highly amongst them, as well as her big brother Toru, who was 5 years old at the time. The four grew up in an apartment complex—small, but cozy and inhabitable. Her childhood was relatively peaceful, as she grew up the same way any other child did. She had friends, a family that loved her, and a roof over her head. Her brother Toru was not only a sibling, but a bodyguard, and stood up for her almost all the time, even when it wasn't necessary. This led to many humorous events, not to mention his discovery of being a shinigami. Once she was six, Hisana saw a Plus for the first time, wondering why others around her couldn't see it. Either way, she ignored it and moved on, unaware of what was about to take. It was only a week later, when the small family went on a trip to Tokyo, Japan. It was a big city, and Ichigo and Rukia were extremely cautious of their wellbeing. Though it was a vacation to the kids, the parents were there on a shinigami assignment, tasked with eliminating a Vasto Lorde that had been stalking the metropolis's civilians. One minute, they were all in a busy shopping center. The next, the crowd was running and screaming, under a Hollow attack. Rukia and Ichigo ushered their children inside, intent on defeating it. Willing to help, Hisana ran out and tried to help, only to be hit and left in critical condition. She was rushed to the nearest hospital, extending the trip from a week to well over a month. The entire right half of her body had been permanently scarred, and her right eye badly torn and blinded. Since then, she has never forgotten that day, and lived in infamy for the next ten years. Eventually, when she was thirteen, Toru went off to college, and her parents took extreme precautions to ensure she would be safe. As such, they had a good friend (really another shinigami) escort her to and from school almost every day. She attended school regularly, and quickly rose to the top of the social food chain, asserting her dominance as the school's number one badass. Though this only occurred due to the others' fear of her, she didn't care any less than she possibly could, moving on like everything was just fine. Years have passed, and Hisana is sixteen. This is where we leave off.
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Posted: Fri Mar 15, 2013 8:57 pm
✣✚╚═════════════════════════════════════════╝ ✚✣ Gaia Username: Revolution Evolution ╔═════════════════════════════════════════╗ ✣ ══════════════════════[ Personal Information ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Name: Pantherlily Race: Exceed/Shinigami Gender: Male Birth Date: Unknown Age: 765 Blood Type: B-
✣ ══════════════════════[ Appearance ]═══════════════════════ ✣ Appearance: Lily (Origin Form) Lily
Orignially his head is that of a black panther's, but with a white muzzle and a scar going down across his left eye. he used to ware a personal set of battle armor with a long cape draped around his body, as well as a helmet. However, when he lost his memories , he took the form of a small, bipedal black cat with round ears. His facial features are retained, albeit in a super-deformed manner. Although he can return to his former form, he can only do so for a very limited amount of time.
Height: about knee level when he's not using his ability. and about Komamura height when he uses his ability - 9'5 Weight: Eye Color: Orange Hair Color: Black Fur Tattoos or Scars: Scar over his Left eye Anything Unusual: Hes a cat... er...well Panther. Also! He's got wings~ o:
✣ ══════════════════════[ Spiritual Connections ]═══════════════════════ ✣ Kido: Surprisingly! he's skilled in Kido, Whic gives him the indication that he was of High ranking in his past life. He is able to perform High level Kido with little effort, though that is only in his Origin Form, in his small cat form he can only use low level Kido, possibly High level but with great difficulty. Shunpo Level: His Shunpo is called Sūifuto hikō which translates to {Swift Flight} Using his own magical power he sprouts two wings from his back, the glow and he shoots off at great speed, His speed at best could reach a captains but only in his Origin Form. In his small cat form its just below Lieutenant.
Hakuda: In his Origin form he has great skill in Hakuda, being able to take on opponents with weapons quite easily, but in his Cat form he's not to skilled in Hakuda since well, his punches wouldnt hurt someone...
Zanpakuto Name: Ribenji senshi {Fallen Warrior} Zanpakuto Appearance: Ribenji Senshi is in a state of Constant half release. The blade itself is miniaturized and strapped onto his back. {Description in Shikai}
✣ ══════════════════════[ Shikai {Optional} ]═══════════════════════ ✣ Shikai Incantation: "Futatabi jōshō, Ribenji Senshi!" "Rise again, Ribenji Senshi" Shikai Appearance: Ribenji Senshi possesses a long, curved blade, which is light-colored on the edges and dark on the rest, and which protrudes on both sides near its top, and has a large, light symbol carved near its hilt, representing a musical note. The design of the handguard is intricate and decorated: it extends over the blade itself, with a shiny decoration similar to a large curved claw placed horizontally towards the weapon’s cutting edge, where a large, shiny curved part seemingly acting as a rough front protection of sort is placed. On the other side, the “claw” ends in a wing-like ornament, consisting of three large metal feathers. The part connecting the hilt to the blade curves towards the latter, and is divided into a series of rectangular forms by a series on line on it; the blade’s back edge is also shown slightly emerging from under such part, protruding downwards. The hilt is long and covered in leather stripes, and it ends into a large pommel yet again similar to a claw pointing towards the blade, or maybe a stylized bird’s head, ending in a wing-like ornament, with its three feathers pointing downwards, which is smaller and less-detailed than the one on the blade. Shikai Abilities:
Origin Form Constant: {Passive}; This ability allows lily to stay in his Origin form, essentially giving him enhanced Speed, Strength, endurance and Kido spell casting.
Jinsokuna dageki; {Rapid Blow}; Letting his body tense and his Reiatsu to quickly rush through his body Lily is able to increase his speed quite insanely, Vanishing and appearing in front of his foe he will unleash a barrage of strikes with great power and speed behind them. Because this move uses his body to such an extreme he cannot use it too many times in a row since after each time he must let his body recover (1 post, but increase with each use, 2nd use = 2 posts cool down etc.).
Mabayui sutoraiki; {Resplendent Strike} Lily's blade will begin to glow as he holds it out to one of his side's, the light from the blade shines so brightly that it can easily blind the foe, this gives lily the chance to strike. Slashing with the glowing blade he will unleash an attack similar in appearance to Ichigo Kurosaki's Getsuga tensho, though it is white and yellow in color.
{May add another later in the RP}
✣ ══════════════════════[ Bankai {Optional} ]═══════════════════════ ✣
I will update his Bankai Later in the Roleplay and have it approved. Due to the memory loss He has fogotten his Bankai. Also the reason is I still have yet to come up with it~ Heh . u.~
Bankai Name: Fukkatsu shi senshi {Restored Warrior} Bankai Appearance: Bankai Abilities: (limited to 4 or 5. Ask Captain or Vice-Captain for more)
✣ ══════════════════════[ Background Information ]═══════════════════════ ✣ Personality: Pantherlily seems to have a grumpy disposition and detests noisy people. Pantherlily does not discriminate against shinigami or humans and treats them as equals. He is also a very Proud person....er...cat... Personal Likes: Kiwi's, Oversized weapons, battling tough opponents Personal Dislikes: Thunder, Loud people, people who constantly talk. History:
Lily was once the Captain of the 7th Division, His Lieutenant being Sajin Komamura.
Born in District 80 of the Rukongai Lily had always been poor, He lived with a large family of other souls for many years, helping them to survive in this harsh district. Lily as a kid was always different from the others, his appearance being the reason. He was always made fun of because of his Panther like appearance. Putting all of this aside Lily possessed great skill and had the choice to enroll in the academy, which was a great Honor for the people in the 80th district since it was rare for them to attend the academy. Once entered in the academy Lily kept to his studies, trained every day and studied on his skills. This all payed off come Graduation day. During his time at the Academy he met a similar Shinigami to him, His name being Sajin Komamura. The two hit it off very well and became great friends in no time. When Graduation came around both of them were happy that they passed and not long they both joined the 7th Division.
Both men trained hard every day and kept up with their work, even staying after hours to finish. Within no time they both climbed the ranks and within what seemed like no time at all Lily became the Captain and Komamura became his Lieutenant. Though, Lily's Captaincy only lasted for a brief period. There was a large operation going on in the world of the living, it seemed that some powerful Hollow had attacked a group of shinigami and killed many, this was when Lily was dispatched to the scene. Leaving Komamura behind to look after the Squad. When Lily appeared at the Scene it turned out that it was an Unknown shinigami that was controlling the Hollow with some strange device. Lily battled with the shinigami and soon learned who he was. Souske Aizen. Lily was shocked that the Captain was killing shinigami so he could study the hollow. When he found out who the shinigami was Lily tried his best to kill Aizen, but Aizen got the better of him, using a powerful Kurohitsugi and some other powerful Kido spells. Aizen told Lily how pathetic he was and how the world would be better without him. Dealing a blow to him Lily was knocked unconscious and Aizen left him for dead. After Aizen had Left it seemed that instead of Dying Lily simply shrunk and his power became sealed. The blow that aizen dealt left him with a scar on his left eye, this also resulted in memory Loss. Lily remembers only fragments of his past, some of his training, His name and techniques. However it seemed that the memory loss was so sever that he even forgot about his Zanpakuto, causing him to go back to the beginning. He has since unlocked his Shikai with great difficulty. All of these years Lily has been living in the World of the living. Because of his small size he was never detected by any shinigami as being alive. Family Line: Unknown Mother {Deceased} Unkown Father {Deceased} Friends/Acquaintances: Sajin Komamura {Status Unknown} Rivals/Enemies: None Love Interest: None
Affiliation: Seireitei - {Previous} Squad: 7th - {Previous} Rank: Captain - {Previous}
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Posted: Sat Mar 16, 2013 4:53 am
*sigh* Revo, it's a nice character, but we're kind of trying to avoid universe-hopping at this point. I don't know what Raine or Twi would think of this, but I just don't approve. Sorry, Revo.
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Posted: Sat Mar 16, 2013 11:10 am
Ergh. I needed to redo this really bad. And yes, this is the first time Hisana wears an eyepatch. XD
✣✚╚═════════════════════════════════════════╝ ✚✣ Gaia Username: OriSODEhime ╔═════════════════════════════════════════╗ ✣ ══════════════════════[ Personal Information ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Name: Hisana Kurosaki Race: Substitute Shinigami Gender: Female Birth Date: December 8th Age: 16 Blood Type: O-
✣ ══════════════════════[ Appearance ]═══════════════════════ ✣
 Appearance: Most of the time, Hisana can be found with her strikingly bright orange hair hanging in silky waves over the right half of her face down to her waist. What stands out above all is the amazing scarification on the right half of her body, from the top of her forehead, down through her right eye, across her neck and chest, ending at her hip and the fingertips of her right hand. All of which create an interesting design similar to a tree-branch. She usually wears long-sleeved clothes and an eyepatch to cover all of this. Other than that, her casual attire is pretty standard, either consisting of her charcoal gray school uniform with the red bow undone over her white collar shirt—or a red sweat jacket over a black tank top and denim shorts, with a pair of polished black running sneakers to match. Her shinigami attire is a whole other story. It's completely black, from the high-collar, V-cut halter top to the tattered hakama around her legs. To keep some of this in place, Hisana wears several belts. One is the collar around her neck, another being the harness on her right shoulder. There are two more encasing the shoulder-to-fingertip-length glove on her right arm, unlike her left arm, which is completely bare. Her shirt has a high collar, as mentioned before, and overlaps like a kimono under her bust—except the right part with the silver stripe flies outwards. Most of Hisana's stomach and naval area can be seen, much to her indifference. Her hakama is completely torn up on her right leg from the knee down, showing her calf-high silver sock entwined by the black strings of her wajari sandals. Despite being a beginner, this is the face of a shinigami most people will not forget.
Height: 5ft. 8in. Weight: 130lbs. Eye Color: The left eye is deep purple, her right being completely white from her demi-blindness. Hair Color: Bright orange Tattoos or Scars: Crack-like scars all over the right half of her body Anything Unusual: Besides the scars, nothing at all.
✣ ══════════════════════[ Spiritual Connections ]═══════════════════════ ✣ Kido: None, really. Shunpo Level: Beginner Oto Tejun (音手順 Viz: Sonic Step) ◇ This ability grants her the power to enhance her shunpo speed up to the levels of a sonic boom, capable of moving a mile and a half in three seconds. Upon the sudden jolt of a take off, the only remnant of Hisana's having used the ability will be what sounds like a thunder bolt hitting solid concrete. Hakuda: None
Zanpakuto Name: Naku no Bijonashi (泣くのビジョンなし Viz: Cry of the Blind) Zanpakuto Appearance: Click here~. Naku no Bijonashi's sealed state appears with a bronze tsuba and a hilt wrapped intricately by a dark red fabric. All of which lock firmly in place over the end of a thin, sharp, gleaming silver blade.
✣ ══════════════════════[ Shikai {Optional} ]═══════════════════════ ✣ Shikai Incantation: "Open your eyes, Naku no Bijonashi." Shikai Appearance: {Shown here.} All designs on the tsuba and hilt darken in color until they vanish into the metal of the katana, turning the blade itself into a silver short-sword. The blade is warped in a way that gives it another two sharp, hook-like edges in the middle, and one on the end of the hilt, capable of snagging onto various things or making it easier to slice someone's limbs off.
Shikai Abilities: Himei no Mekura (悲鳴の盲 Viz: Scream of the Blind) ◇ Himei no Mekura is the first offensive ability possessed by the zanpakuto. In order to use it, Hisana calls out the attack's name, thrusting her hands forward (palms open/fingers flat) as the destructive power of a Getsuga Tensho is unleashed in the form of a sonic boom. It is capable of blowing back and destroying a multitude of objects and other things in its path, such as ripping up a street or smashing in the side of a building. It takes Hisana 3 posts to recharge/use her next attack. Shūen no Koe (終焉の声 Viz: Voice of Demise) ◇ This ability is more of the trap-type move. Hisana's voice molds into that which is almost ungodly, beautiful and alluring, as to reel in the prey or targets that she aims to attack or kill. As long as she's talking or singing in a whispery voice, the trance will not break. That is, unless she is attacked or caught off-guard. {OriSODEhime will always ask permission before using this ability.} Suitai Kokyū (衰退呼吸 Viz: Fading Breath) ◇ If this ability is used, the zanpakuto will revert back into its sealed state. Suitai Kokyū is a defensive move unto which drains Hisana of enough reiatsu to form a massive dome-shaped shield around her, capable of blocking most things from getting in or out. Anything that hits either side will create a technicolored ripple that rebounds it back.
✣ ══════════════════════[ Bankai {Optional} ]═══════════════════════ ✣ Bankai Name: Zetsumei no Bijonashi (絶命のビジョンなし Viz: Death of the Blind)
 Bankai Appearance:
 The zanpakuto's blade sharpens and expands into a sharp, almost rectangular shape with the characters for "Blind" and "Voice" carved through it. Two parallel corners of the tsuba extend, one curving upwards, the other curving down into distinct points. The design is of radial symmetry, those of the inside appearing like curbing checkmarks, those of the outside being simple black stripes. The entire hilt, as well, turns a bloody shade of red. Overall, the zanpakuto appears to be Hisana's height, if not an extra foot taller.
Bankai Abilities: Namitsu Reiatsu Nami Kyōdo 波打つ霊圧 波強度 Viz: Rippling Reiatsu Wave Intensity) ◇ Probably one of her most useful moves by far, Namitsu Reiatsu Nami Kyōdo is a barrier technique that darkens a portion of space around Hisana and the opponent(s), creating the sense of nighttime under a very distant moonlight, seeing how a small white light barely illuminates the field high above their heads. With every step she takes, every leap, and every swift motion of the hands, the air around them ripples like sound waves with each little motion, emanating a soft note or a harsh drum beat from each one, altogether harmonizing to create a score of any possible genre. When combined, it creates an amazing song that booms through the air like enormous speakers fifty feet high. The catch: each ripple is composed of a small portion of Hisana's reiatsu, making it difficult to identify her location when she's moving so fast. This ability allows her to move faster than the speed of sound, sometimes—upon maximum use—creating a supersonic boom.
Migurushī Oto (見苦しい音 Viz: Unsightly Sound) ◇ This is a relatively simple. All sound is removed from the area for a brief period of time {About 3-4 posts. Will ask before using.}
Kōzanden no Oto Nami (鉱山れの音波 Viz: Mine Field of Sound Waves) ◇ Hisana releases an ear-shattering scream, which can release enormous, visible, tangible sounds waves within a two-mile radius, or a loud, yet beautiful melody that releases every little ripple in an outstanding blast of energy. The moment Hisana stops screaming/singing, the sound waves released float in place, capable of being touched or attacked. When attacked, they detonate and explode. The blade of her zanpakuto turns black and glows a bright red. When Hisana vigorously slams down the sword, she creates a massive crevice in the ground at her feet, and every sound wave explodes on command, regardless of where it is. The detonation altogether creates a blast almost equivalent to the size of Hado Number 96—Itto Kaso. After using the limits of this ability, Zetsumei will revert to her lowest possible sealed state (takes about 20 posts to recharge).
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Personality: Hisana is a bit difficult to describe. While she seems to be a bit scary to most strangers, she can actually be quite friendly once approached. That is, unless she doesn't know them. Her demeanor is a bit cold, though mocking in some cases. Those she takes a liking to will find the kinder side of her to be enjoyable—that is, unless they tick her off. At that point, she becomes quite bullheaded, almost impossible to Personal Likes: Nighttime, rain, dark clouds, fights, roses, loneliness, the "dark side," guys with emo haircuts, dark angels Personal Dislikes: Daytime, sunshine, heat, death, bright colors, girlish people with girlish personalities, right things in general, personal enemies, Hollows, demons of any kind History: Hisana was born twenty years after the Winter War to her parents Ichigo and Rukia Kurosaki. Her birth was celebrated highly amongst them, as well as her big brother Toru, who was 5 years old at the time. The four grew up in an apartment complex—small, but cozy and inhabitable. Her childhood was relatively peaceful, as she grew up the same way any other child did. She had friends, a family that loved her, and a roof over her head. Her brother Toru was not only a sibling, but a bodyguard, and stood up for her almost all the time, even when it wasn't necessary. This led to many humorous events, not to mention his discovery of being a shinigami. Once she was six, Hisana saw a Plus for the first time, wondering why others around her couldn't see it. Either way, she ignored it and moved on, unaware of what was about to take. It was only a week later, when the small family went on a trip to Tokyo, Japan. It was a big city, and Ichigo and Rukia were extremely cautious of their wellbeing. Though it was a vacation to the kids, the parents were there on a shinigami assignment, tasked with eliminating a Vasto Lorde that had been stalking the metropolis's civilians. One minute, they were all in a busy shopping center. The next, the crowd was running and screaming, under a Hollow attack. Rukia and Ichigo ushered their children inside, intent on defeating it. Willing to help, Hisana ran out and tried to help, only to be hit and left in critical condition. She was rushed to the nearest hospital, extending the trip from a week to well over a month. The entire right half of her body had been permanently scarred, and her right eye badly torn and blinded. Since then, she has never forgotten that day, and lived in infamy for the next ten years. Eventually, when she was thirteen, Toru went off to college, and her parents took extreme precautions to ensure she would be safe. As such, they had a good friend (really another shinigami) escort her to and from school almost every day. She attended school regularly, and quickly rose to the top of the social food chain, asserting her dominance as the school's number one badass. Though this only occurred due to the others' fear of her, she didn't care any less than she possibly could, moving on like everything was just fine. Years have passed, and Hisana is sixteen. This is where we leave off.
Family Line: Please refer here, if confused. Ichigo Kurosaki {Father} Rukia Kurosaki (nee Kuchiki) {Mother} Toru Kurosaki {Brother} Karin Kurosaki {Aunt} Yuzu Kurosaki {Aunt} Hisana Kuchiki {Aunt, deceased} Byakuya Kuchiki {Uncle, Active} Sojun Kuchiki {Grandfather, deceased} Koga Kuchiki {Step Grandfather, deceased} Ginrei Kuchiki {Great Grandfather, deceased} Isshin Kurosaki (nee Shiba) {Grandfather} Masaki Kurosaki {Grandmother, deceased} Kukaku Shiba {Cousin-Aunt} Ganju Shiba {Cousin-Uncle} Kaien Shiba {Cousin-Uncle, deceased} Raine Shiba {Second Cousin} Miyako Shiba (nee Maruyama) {Cousin-Aunt, deceased} Taichi Maruyama {Cousin-Uncle, Twice Removed} Miyuki Maruyama {Cousin-Aunt, Twice Removed} Ringo Maruyama {Second Cousin, Once removed} Terumi Maruyama {Second Cousin, Once Removed)
Friends/Acquaintances: •Raine Shiba {To-Be} •Dawn Rhys {To-Be} •Ringo Maruyama {To-Be} •Ruka Kusabana {To-Be} Rivals/Enemies: •Hellfires and Hollows {To-Be} •Byakuya Kuchiki (Personal Feud) {To-Be} Love Interest: Ringo Maruyama (To-Be)
Affiliation: Gotei 14 {To-Be} Squad: Alt. Squad Zero {To-Be} Rank: Captain {To-Be}
Theme Song: She ••• Atomic
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Posted: Sat Mar 16, 2013 4:40 pm
OriSODEhime *sigh* Revo, it's a nice character, but we're kind of trying to avoid universe-hopping at this point. I don't know what Raine or Twi would think of this, but I just don't approve. Sorry, Revo.
Alright, so I edited him ^ .^ His Bio mainly, Hope it's alright now? . u.~
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Posted: Sat Mar 16, 2013 5:17 pm
Pending approval for Zoe Kaisen (Rimida) she is in page 4 and I edited the info per Somber Ash's request.
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Posted: Sun Mar 17, 2013 8:48 pm
✣✚╚═════════════════════════════════════════╝ ✚✣ Gaia Username: ALEX DID IT ╔═════════════════════════════════════════╗ ✣ ══════════════════════[ Personal Information ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Name: Ayame Okino Race: Shinigami Gender: Female Birth Date: 7/13 Age: 101 Blood Type: AB
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Height: 5'4 Weight: 120 Eye Color: Blue Hair Color: White-Gold Tattoos or Scars: Along her back and to the front of her hips, her skin is covered in fine, thin white tattoos which all form to make a pool of white lotus flowers and koi in design. Anything Unusual: Ayame has a knack to befriend cats, she usually will bring one into her Captain's office if it's been following her around all day.
✣ ══════════════════════[ Spiritual Connections ]═══════════════════════ ✣ Kido: Ayame has learned no farther than #30, she never has found a way to gracefully or effieciently use it in her fighting technique therefor her need for it is almost non-existent. Shunpo Level: Ayame is proficient in Leitenant-Level Shunpo. Hakuda: N/A
Zanpakuto Name: Shiro Yurierufu Zanpakuto Appearance: [❂]
✣ ══════════════════════[ Shikai {Optional} ]═══════════════════════ ✣ Shikai Incantation: "Hikari no Erufu." Shikai Appearance: Blade becomes complete crystal and hand holding Zanpakuto is encased in crystal. Shikai Abilities: With every strike of the Shikai, the opponent is given a normal blow to the body, but microscopic shards of crystal are left in for a long-term effect, causing the body to heal 20% slower. 1: Blade becomes Crystalized. 2: With every blow to opponent, (microscopic) shards of crystal that remain in the body decrease healing by 20%.
✣ ══════════════════════[ Bankai {Optional} ]═══════════════════════ ✣ Bankai Name: Shiroi Kesshō no Erufu Bankai Wielder Appearance: Ayame's arms become encased in Crystal, again creating a disability of broken bones. Bankai Zanpakuto Appearance: Blade duplicates and each hand is infused with the crystal blades. Bankai Abilities: Ayame becomes a bit faster and is famous for using flash step while using Bankai. Again, Ayame is coated in the crystal, but instead of to her wrists- the crystal reaches her mid forearm. 1: Faster. 2: Dual (crystal) Blades. 3: Crystal Attaches arms to Swords.
✣ ══════════════════════[ Background Information ]═══════════════════════ ✣ Personality: Intelligent, Confident, Headstrong, Stubborn, Friendly. Giggles when anything about an 'office desk' is mentioned. Personal Likes: Cats, Romance Novels (or books in general), Warm Sake, Bothering Kilk, Laughing, and Cooking. Personal Dislikes: Paperwork, Compliments, Dogs, Bugs, and Loss of Sleep. History: Ayame was a very plain young lady in her human life. Excelling in schooling, Ayame found academics to be helpful as she was on a journey to business school. However at the untimely event of her death, Ayame's hopes and dreams of becoming a business woman were shattered. Undergoing a fatal attack to the immune system, Ayame spent the last year of her life connected to machines and fluids in a hospital.
Once crossing over from her plain life as a business major, Ayame now walked the lands of the dead. This however, was when she learned of the Shinigami. Ayame, being still so young, decided to enroll in the academy at the Soul Society. Again, excelling in more academics than physical training. She finished schooling as a Shinigami and soon was fully employed as a professional Shinigami for the Gotei 13.
Family Line: N/A, she comes from nowhere important. Friends/Acquaintances: The only person she's really close with would be her Captain, Kilk Nagara. Rivals/Enemies: N/A Love Interest: None, Ayame seems to only fall in love with fictional characters from her romance novels.
Affiliation: Gotei 13 Squad: 13 Rank: Lieutenant
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Posted: Sun Mar 17, 2013 8:51 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 17, 2013 10:07 pm
LOL, there are a bunch of rpc's. All of them? XD As a side note: For Ayame, with each strike does the lack of healing go up by 20%? Cause I'd say 0 healing after five strikes is a little too powerful for a Shikai (or a Bankai really) I'd recommend if you meant for it to stack to go with diminishing returns: One strike - 20, two - 30, three - 35, four - 37, five - 40. With a maximum effect of 40%. With a Bankai effect of slightly higher: one strike - 25, two - 37, three - 43, four - 50. With a maximum effect of 50% for this one. Some characters are based solely in healing so I'd rather not render them completely ineffective. If some sort of change is made then I approve.
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Posted: Mon Mar 18, 2013 12:09 pm
Somber Ash LOL, there are a bunch of rpc's. All of them? XD As a side note: For Ayame, with each strike does the lack of healing go up by 20%? Cause I'd say 0 healing after five strikes is a little too powerful for a Shikai (or a Bankai really) I'd recommend if you meant for it to stack to go with diminishing returns: One strike - 20, two - 30, three - 35, four - 37, five - 40. With a maximum effect of 40%. With a Bankai effect of slightly higher: one strike - 25, two - 37, three - 43, four - 50. With a maximum effect of 50% for this one. Some characters are based solely in healing so I'd rather not render them completely ineffective. If some sort of change is made then I approve. I see what you mean and agree for the most part, however I feel that bankai should allow for more than 50% of healing damage percentage. With enough spiritual pressure I feel that 80% maximum is a fair enough number. Naturally it should allow for significant spiritual energy depletion (from Ayame) to reach this level. That way it weakens her slightly, but significantly weakens the opponent and therefore remains (for the most part) fair. And yes... all of the RPC's lol
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Posted: Tue Mar 19, 2013 12:31 pm
Revo~! It is to my general understanding that Pantherlily was removed from being a captain at around the time of Aizen's scheme where he turned the Captains into Vizards. If I remember correctly, the Captain and Lieutenant of Squad 7 (canon-wise) is Love Aikawa (Captain, now Vizard) and Jin'emon Kotsubaki (the Lieutenant). This means Sajin Komamura would not have been able to have become the Lieutenant until after those events. I recommend you can say that in some mission that required Pantherlily to leave the confines of the Sereitei, he managed to go missing- and was missing for so long that he had technically been forgotten- only to return with the majority of his memory removed. That way it would explain why Komamura became Captain. Overall I like the character
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Posted: Tue Mar 19, 2013 1:15 pm
No, the healing does not stack or any of that. It simply slows the healing down by 20%, no gain no loss. It doesn't do much to her opponent except give Ayame maybe like a step in staying ahead. If her opponent were to continue to get hurt and take damage, say if they were fighting Ayame along with someone else, it would be more of a significant damage to them because the healing process would be slower.
I also placed the fact that her arms encased in crystal as a weak point to level out my ability. Her causing people to heal slower could make damage, but so could aiming for Ayame's arms. Break through the crystal, her bone is broken which in Bankai mode takes away one of her dual swords. I have no intention of creating over powered characters and Ayame is in no way one of them. I swear!
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Posted: Wed Mar 20, 2013 1:33 pm
I approve of Zoe, Hisana, Pantherlily, and I'm pretty shore I approve of Ayame.
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TwiDawnLight Vice Captain
High-functioning Bibliophile
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Posted: Fri Mar 22, 2013 10:16 am
By my count its been 3 approves so... I can post up Zoe in a single thread?
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