|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
 Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 4:34 pm
[1500? I doubt I can do that...but I'll try.]
Nagasone Doku observed his target, standing in a crowd about a hundred, a hundred and fifty feet from the target. He was sitting on a bench, the target was standing, wearing distinctive robes of rich purple and gold. This man was nothing more than a thief...but a thief that stole from his people through taxes, not by stealing directly from them. And to Nagasone, that was not a good deed.
To Nagasone, that was a deed punishable by death.
The Doku clan member fiddled with the number of glass vials inside his jacket, deciding on which one he should use...perhaps a nerve poison? That would definitely take his target out, but it might take a while. His fingers brushed over one and he got an idea, grinning slightly to himself. A slow acting nerve toxin...synthetic, so he had to be careful, but it would act slowly, taking a week for the symptoms to show. But the poison was designed to be hard to detect, so he knew the target would die. It would just be a matter of time...
A few handseals were performed, hidded by the fact Nagasone's hands were between his legs, so his hands were concealed by his knees and legs. He mumbled a word to himself, making it sound like a cough, and he felt the chakara move. It transported the poison to his hand, where it swirled around in a bubble of chakara to keep him safe. Nagasone slipped his personal combat knife, semi serated on the back but razor sharp on the front side, from inside his sleeve into his left hand. He moved his right over to the knife and gently ran his fingers along the cold, steel edge. The poison seeped into the deep blood groove along the middle of the knife's blade, where it stayed, and would stay, until the deed was performed.
Nagasone ran the plan through his mind one last time. The target would never suspect an assassination...his people were scared, and he had many, many soldiers patrolling the streets daily to make sure no uprisings would happen...but the idiot was expecting organized resistance.
Nagasone's blade was not expected.
The target was going to leave a bank across the street from Nagasone and walk towards his palace. While he moved across the town square he'd be exposed, and then Nagasone would strike, and disappear into the crowd before the hit was even noticed. And he wouldn't need to hit hard either to make the poison affect the man...just a light scratch, enough to draw blood, was enough.
The door to the bank opened, and the man stepped out. He was portly, and the robes fit poorly the massive frame of the man. He started to walk, and Nagasone got up, concealing the blade in his overly long sleeves. No poison seeped out of the blade, with the chakara running through it keeping the poison in the blood groove and along the edges. It was a perfect assassination tool, when combined with the Doku's knowledge of poisons.
Nagasone moved at a walking pace, the pace of a man that had a destination but wasn't in a hurry to get there. That way no suspicion would be drawn to him. He had to move quickly...as soon as his target left the square he'd be in sight of guards, and Nagasone would have a hard time getting close without arousing suspicion. But if he moved fast enough, he could get through the crowd and deliver the blow.
His feet carried him swiftly across the stones as he made his way closer to the target. He could of course simply stab him at the range he was going to be at...but then escape would be harder. Guards would be on alert, people would see the blood on his hand and sleeve...too messy. Besides, poison meant he could be safely out of the city by the time this man died.
The target was close...only about six feet now. It was going to be all too easy...he wasn't paying attention to anyone around him. The blade in Nagasone's hand slipped slightly out of the sleeve, exposing just the tip and a bit of the razor edge. The light green toxin shone and shimmered on the blade, shifting like water but not dripping, held in place by invisible wisps of chakara, powered by a gem in the handle of the knife, filled every few days by Nagasone's own chakara. He was even closer now...five feet. Four feet.
The target was still unsuspecting...three feet...Nagasone felt himself slip into a state of intense concentration...two feet...this was it.
Nagasone's left hand quickly moved out, cutting a decent cut across his target's elbow. Enough to draw blood. And Nagasone knew the poison was in the target's system. "Ow...watch it!" the target snapped at a man walking past with a heavy crate. Nagasone nearly laughed when he realized how dense the man was, thinking he'd scratched his arm on the crate. How wrong was he.
Nagasone slipped the blade back up his sleeve and into it's purpose made sheath, and started to leave the square. He'd have to get out of here quickly before the guards noticed him...he was a little notorious after all, and the hood pulled low over his green eyes often drew attention, even around his own village. Still, it was necessary to conceal his identity in case of that rare moment he was discovered. He could simply change and reveal his face...the face nobody knew.
[I know it's not long enough...not nearly long enough, but I was hoping getting this on more content over total length, because really, how many posts are going to be this long?]
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 5:00 pm
Should I post my Tsuchikage app here? Or should I just continue through until Yuki is open?
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
A City Of Fools Vice Captain
|
Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 5:02 pm
Tsuchikage. Its gonna be a long time till Yuki is open, and we will need a kage for iwa before we even think of opening another village.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 5:06 pm
" Tsuchikage! Tsuchikage! " A frantic villager said, running up to his Kage. " The Kumo ninja that were here, they've all began to massacre our people! " The Villager said, looking at his Tsuchikage hoping to see his hidden ability.
" Fine. But you must get everyone and take them into my office immediatly. Watch from there. I will hold a public execution for any of their alliesthat might be hiding amoung our own ninja that when you cross the village Iwagakure, you shall be ripped apart. " The Tsuchikage said, Sighing and letting his arms unfold revealing six arms. " Now go! " He said pointing with his bottom left arm at his office, and drawing five blades with all his other arms. His skin began to secrete an odd yellow substance which immediatly hardened, and then Spikes began to protrude out of it. He let out a howl of laughter as he jumped, Clearing the building in his way, and landing ontop of the one just passed it.
" What have we done? That guy is insane! " The Villager said, a kunai wissing past his head made him snap out of it, and remember what the Tsuchikage had said. " Everyone quickly! We have to get to the Kage's office! " He said, ushering people over to the office. An anbu squad showed up next to the man.
" We will gather the people from now on. If you need assistance, open this scroll. It is a summoning scroll. You are incharge of guarding this area, please, when you get inside, pull upon the Book on his shelf entitled War & Peace. it will barracade everything in the Office. We will have to take the others to a different safe house. " The Anbu said, Handing him a scroll, and Juping away, Leaving the Villager yet again dumbfounded.
" are all of the ninja here completely insane? The Man said, A kunai grasing his ear snapping him out of it, and he ran inside quickly, pulling the War & Peace novel on the shelf, sighing in relief as the doors sealed, and the windows gained a purple tint, anything that hit is, Bouncing off like it was nothing.
~ On the edge of the chaos ~
" Come on come on! Is that the best you Kumo ninja can do? " The tsuchikage said, Hacking and slashing his way through many many genin ranks, laughing as he began to return to his former nature. " Come on! I want to have some fun! " he said, having made it to the center of the battle between his ninja and the Kumo ninja. " all right, Let's do this. " He said, sheathing two of his swords, and making multiple handsigns. " Multi shadow clone jutsu. " he said, one hundred of him appearing, Nearly doubling his force. " Now, take the higher ranks alive! They will be the ones on the poles when we begin." He said, regaining his composure as ten of his clones were defeated. " well well well... it seems that these aren't Kumo ninja after all, are they... my old sannin. " He said, looking at his one eyed ex ally.
" Tch! You were never Tsuchikage when we were allies. You weren't even good enough to be a sannin! " The Hyuuga said, His Byakugan becoming more veiny and detailed as he began pumping more chakra into it. " you were always the Tsuchikage's favorite! That's why you won! if I hadn't of had to deal with him first, then you would have never gotten my eye! " He said letting out a low growl.
" I beg to disagree, I had just gotten back from an A ranked mission in which you didn't show up for, so I had to kill that entire squadren of Deserters. But that was just a decoy by you, wasn't it? " The Tsuchikage said smiling, His ninja gathering up all of the opponents, except for this one. " Men, tie them up, and then tie yourselves up. We are going to settle this once and for all. Me verses my Anti-thesis. " He said laughing. " which ever one of us wins, then we will become the Tsuchikage, or keep our rank. The match isn't over until someone is dead. " He said, sighing, taking off his Eyepatch and replacing it over his other eye. He revealed a slightly pale purple eye, and Stared at his old friend with it, the Veins around it suddenly bulging. " I've trained quite a bit with this, and I'd like to think I'm as good as a regular Hyuuga. " He said smiling at his friend who, let out a roar of hatred and charged him.
" I shall destroy you, and this entire village! then I will carve out a new one in my image! " He said beginning to use the Hyuuga style Eight trigrams. He crouched down, and began attempting to jab his opponent with his fingers. " Eight trigrams four thousand ninty-six palms! " He yelled, using his very own self created Technique. it was essentially sixty-four sets of sixty-four palms, guarrenteed to get through any jutsu of armor he could be up against.
" Heh, that technique? Well, let's try this out... " He said, Getting into the same position. " Eight trigrams sixty four palms! " He said, Hitting his fingers against his opponents, sixty four times in a row, with all three sets of arms. totaling the amount of collisions to one hundred ninty-two. He smiled, and stopped his attack, standing there as his opponent pushed him back, little flakes of his armor falling off. " Is that all you've got? He said smiing, drawing one of his blades, he swung it, smiling as it connected with his opponent's right arm. He shook his entire body, Every last peice of armor falling off, and a new set appearing on his body.
" What the!?!?!? How did you manage to survive that attack? That is an insatant kill! " He said, breathing heavily. It was an instant kill because it took way too much of his chakra for it not to be.
" How? Look at your fingers. I sealed your chakra points in the tips. Granted, mine are sealed as well, because I couldn't aim just right. I haven't tried on a target that was moving as fast as you were. " He said smiling. " I actually sealed off your wrist first on accident. " He said laughing. " If I had just been able to hit your fingers first, Then I would have been able to keep my fingers from being sealed. " He said laughing. " Well, with that large gash on your arm, I'd be willing to bet that I have won. " The Tsuichikage said smiling. He drew his favorite blade, and slew. He then turned to his loyal ninja, who had all tied themselves up, he snapped his fingers, and his Clones untied them. " all right men, We have defeated the enemy, by cutting off the head of the serpent... Have a hay day. " he said laughing, Shaking off his armor and breathing deeply, regaining his composure. " We no longer need to hole up in the safe houses. " he said, one of his anbu appearing behind him. " Go and unlock them. Remember, War & Peace is only compatable with Crime & Punishment. " He said, His anbu disappearing to go tell the people to pull that book just mentioned.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
A City Of Fools Vice Captain
|
Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 5:07 pm
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 5:10 pm
Darn... I was hoping to continue with my small Guy who would become Yukikage... oh well. I guess I'll make a new profile now. Also, are the Sharingan jutsu up yet?
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 5:31 pm
What about my post? I think it's good for Jounin (I think the count was about 980 or so words), but would you let me go for Sannin on the content and the length?
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 1:45 pm
I would say around Iwa Jonin. Because, it was really good and all, but it felt like you were playing assassin's creed, more than naruto. also, I've seen your posts in Pots, and some of them lack quite a bit, and I want a person who posts very literate posts of atleast one paragraph with 4 sentences. And that is considered their one liners.
EDIT: But that is just me as the Tsuchikage. I'm not a mod, so I really don't have much say so i think.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 2:41 pm
actually, kumo, since you are the tsuchikage, you decide personally who gets what ranks in Iwakagure, though don't go overboard and promote any bumbling idiot who just started roleplaying to sannin just because he likes your name or something......but yea, if you wanna promote demon to jounin, its your call cool
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 2:43 pm
Yo NERD!!!! I GOTZ NEWZ FO YA!
I decided to just accept whatever rank you gave me for the sample I gave you and forget about Sanbi... so what are we talkin spec jo or chu-chu?
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 3:04 pm
Golden Spider of Kumo I would say around Iwa Jonin. Because, it was really good and all, but it felt like you were playing assassin's creed, more than naruto. also, I've seen your posts in Pots, and some of them lack quite a bit, and I want a person who posts very literate posts of atleast one paragraph with 4 sentences. And that is considered their one liners. EDIT: But that is just me as the Tsuchikage. I'm not a mod, so I really don't have much say so i think. I was playing AC, and the reason was I'm currently in love with that game ^^' first thing that came to mind when I thought about a sample with a guy with poison based abilities. Anywho, thanks for at least the Jounin rank. I know my PoTS posts are small, but I can do better...for some reason, however, I can't seem to write a lot in PoTS, ever. I'll try harder here though. It'll be a bit till I get a profile...not on my home PC, so I don't have any saved pics or anything that I need for my profile.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 3:34 pm
kayavient_thundergod Yo NERD!!!! I GOTZ NEWZ FO YA! I decided to just accept whatever rank you gave me for the sample I gave you and forget about Sanbi... so what are we talkin spec jo or chu-chu?
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 4:21 pm
The Nerdbot kayavient_thundergod Yo NERD!!!! I GOTZ NEWZ FO YA! I decided to just accept whatever rank you gave me for the sample I gave you and forget about Sanbi... so what are we talkin spec jo or chu-chu? Lol aiight bro.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 6:37 pm
DemonDays2 Golden Spider of Kumo I would say around Iwa Jonin. Because, it was really good and all, but it felt like you were playing assassin's creed, more than naruto. also, I've seen your posts in Pots, and some of them lack quite a bit, and I want a person who posts very literate posts of atleast one paragraph with 4 sentences. And that is considered their one liners. EDIT: But that is just me as the Tsuchikage. I'm not a mod, so I really don't have much say so i think. I was playing AC, and the reason was I'm currently in love with that game ^^' first thing that came to mind when I thought about a sample with a guy with poison based abilities. Anywho, thanks for at least the Jounin rank. I know my PoTS posts are small, but I can do better...for some reason, however, I can't seem to write a lot in PoTS, ever. I'll try harder here though. It'll be a bit till I get a profile...not on my home PC, so I don't have any saved pics or anything that I need for my profile. hey, as long as you keep literate posts, You can have it.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 6:44 pm
Of course I keep to literate posts, man. Even if I don't post a lot I make sure it's at least got quality.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Reply
