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Support abilities are manually-activated abilities that help you or your allies out. Passive abilities are abilities that take no effort or energy, and are always activated (or automatically kick in without any thought) no matter what.

Well, he's not a Nobody, so that's not really a possibility >> Only Nobodies can control/summon other Nobodies.

Alright, I will edit soon, but for now, I am incredibly busy.

Eisen, a few things I noticed that you might want to look over.

-You label yourself Berseker, which is fine, but...Berserker is basically a purely physical physical aspect. Which means that a lot of the abilities you have wouldn't really be used...I think if you switched that to fighter, or even warrior, that would make a lot more sense.

-Full power...doesn't quite make sense to me? Cause...I guess it might just be me, but common sense would make you think you'd already be using abilities at their best potential. Maybe something more like "Powered Shot", perhaps? An increase to the techniques basic power.

-...I'm sorry, but a sucker for pretty women isn't a combat weakness. It's...like...I don't know the words I want to say, but it just isn't a combat weakness(saying it's a BIG weakness doesn't change that).
-Add-on: Also, you say great fighter, tactician, adaptable, for strengths, but with weaknesses you just say only pretty women. That's quite unbalanced, in my opinion.

-...I'd like to see more written for personality, and some quotes, actually.

-...Actually, this makes me think of someone I've heard of before...like...Trunks, from DBZ...but that could be just me?

((Mind you, seeing as how I'm not a mod of the guild, nor a mod of HA, this is just constructive criticism, which you can either take into consideration, or completely ignore))

Starlit Struggle

Name: Itazura Ginsa no Kyuugatari no Kinme Nisenakiko
Translation: Golden Eyed Two Thousand Autumn Child of the Nine Tales of Mischievous Silver Deception
Shortened Name: Aiko
Nickname/Alias: The Wraith of Reverie
Age: 2000+ (anywhere over two thousand, really; she stopped counting long ago)
Gender: Female

Appearance:

• Standing Height: 1'9" [head -> ground]
  
• Length: 3'7" [head + body = 1'7" | tail = 2'0"]
  
• Weight: Weightless
  
• Body Type: She's a fox ._.
  
• Skin type: Fur
  
• Eye Color: Piercing amber; pupils dilate into slits at will
  
• Coat Color: Silver; kissed by a gold shimmer, with all tips and markings a dappled carmine
  
• Unusual Body Art/Parts:
  • Nine tails
    
  • Various markings scattered across her coat, all a dappled carmine
• Race: Nobody [Kitsune (Kyuubi)]

Theme Song(s):

• "Title Theme (The Last Emperor)" - David Byrne
  
• "Priest Mikazuki's Theme (Okami)" - Akari Groves

Significant Traits: Witty | Wise | Prankish (yes, it's a word ._o)
Quotes:

• "The early bird gets the worm, but the second mouse gets the cheese. So it all comes down to what you want. Worms, or cheese."
  
• "They say you can't have your cake and eat it too. But what good is cake if you can't eat it?"
  
• "You use statistics like a drunkard uses a lamp-post. For support rather than illumination."
  
• "What do you mean, 'life is short'? It's the longest thing anyone ever does."
  
• "They say it's always the last place you look. Because they expect you to keep looking after you have found it."
  
• "The early bird gets the worm, and the early worm gets the bird. So which one are you; the bird, or the worm?"

Good/Evil: Amoral
Homeworld: ???
Main Weapon: Wagasa-Tanto
Additional Equipment: A string of glass-like, crystalline beads threaded through a blue thread with tassels at the ends, which she keeps wrapped around her right paw/wrist | An ornate fan that is just that; a fan [only used in human forms]
Job Class: Assassin/Illusionist
Nobody Element: Illusion

Attack Abilities:

• Illusion Mastery - Grants complete control over illusions that can manipulate the five senses; the more senses being tampered with, the more effort it takes. The five senses in order of difficulty are: sight, smell, taste, hearing, touch.
  
• Kitsune Mahou [Fox Magic]
  • Kitsune Bi [Fox Fire] - She can create fire, but nothing too extreme, and utilize it for her own amusement or as a means of attack
    • Eikou no Hono'o [Blaze of Glory] - By rubbing her tails together, she can create flames that either coat her tails entirely, coat the ends, or appear as flames that float above the tips of each of tail
      
    • Yojin no Uta [Song of Embers] - Basically allows her to breathe fire, but not to any vast distances
      
    • Homura no Mai [Dance of Fire] - She envelops her two paws and hind legs in flames
      
    • Sora no Terasu [Illuminate the Sky] - She can make a 'fox lantern' so to speak, by producing small balls of fire that float around as she wants them to; they can act as means of lighting to guide her, as toys, or as weapons

Support Abilities:

• Kitsune Mahou [Fox Magic]
  • Henke [Transformation] - As a Kitsune, she can transform into other forms; trees, forests, rocks, water, cars, pens, paperclips, calculators, or even other folk. The catch is, though, that she doesn't gain the innate abilities of the form she has taken, and is vulnerable to what can harm that form. She can duplicate existing people or objects, and even extend the lengths of her teeth and claws
    
  • Mupojutsu [Art of Dreamwalking] - Being a spirit, she can control, and even appear in, the dreams of others

Passive Abilities:

• Totsume [Piercing Eyes] - With regards to her breed's notorious skill, Aiko can spot the weaknesses in others, both physical and mental; with millennia to hone the talent, she is quite a master in the art

Limit Breaks:

• Mukai [Dream World] - Basically an all-encompassing illusion where she sets down the rules of nature. Everything is to her design - she is the 'god' of this world. If she wants fire to be icy cold, then so be it. All fire would feel cold, but it would still burn, because it's just an illusion; unless, of course, she decides to make fire freeze and ice burn, in which case she changes fact completely. Because it's built on thoughts, time flows much faster in these false realities because of the incredible speed at which the mind thinks; hours can pass in mere seconds, days in mere minutes. She designates who is within that realm, and they are affected by whatever rules she has in place. As is she.
  
  Because it grants total total control over a person's senses, in reality, their minds would be completely detached from their bodies, and their lifeless forms would just be lying there with no idea, with them without a clue as to what is happening to their actual bodies. The only slight exception to this is Aiko. Despite being well aware of her surroundings, because keeping Dreamscape in place takes complete concentration, any distraction would break the illusion. So basically, she knows what's going on around her, but she can't do anything at the risk of the realm collapsing
  
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Strengths: Cunning | Patient | Canny | Swift | Multi-tasking | Dissembling | Acting | Deft | Nimble | Witty | Adroit | Vigilant
Weaknesses: Brute strength | Low defense

Personality: Prankish, witty, and wise in equal parts, Aiko delights in playing tricks and engaging in vexing, amusing, or baffling conversations. Living up to an infamous trait in her breed, she is an expert at spotting weakness in others, but unlike other Kitsune, does not aggravate them through their flaws and ultimately drive them to self-destruction. Rather, she prefers to watch and see if, and how, it brings about their demise - though she can't help but choke out a few subtle remarks along the way.

By Kitsune nature, Aiko will not accept unwilling charity. Those who wish to help her must do so of their own free will. She is a loath to ask for help, and will not accept help that is not freely given. As such, it is often up to the third party to initiate the aid. Mind you, it's not often you see her in a position of need, as she prefers to keep out of the business of others, albeit slipping a few astute comments when the need to vex arises.

This little vixen is crafty and sly, but not in a spiteful manner. Childish in many ways, she utilizes her wit and repertoire of tricks to her own entertainment, but it is not in her nature to be malevolent without due cause.
Though impish, Aiko is far from ungrateful; once you have her trust, you will have a friendship that will last many trials. If treated respectfully, she will use her powers for the benefits of her hosts and companions, and will strive to repay any favours she owes. Aiko never breaks a promise, and suggests you do the same; though there are more ways to anger her than simply breaking your word, once you have her enmity, you have gained a deadly enemy that will not hesitate to seek vengeance.

Quite literally, as a spirit, Aiko embodies the concept of the amoral; those who do not accept, or understand, the concept of Good or Evil, but pave the way of balance between the two. Instead, they bring the idea of 'right' and 'wrong' into play. Aiko, like all Kitsune, follows her own code of ethics; if someone offends what she sees as 'correct', she can become malicious, evil and disruptive. Accordingly, if someone behaves in a manner positive to her morals, she may become kind, polite and helpful.

Likes: Playing tricks | Sweets | Tea | Children | Vexing and baffling others | Her freedom, which is of utmost importance to Kitsune - they do not like being bound or trapped, and will not accept being forced into something they don't wish
Dislikes: People/things that do certain things or act in a way that makes them annoying
Hates: People who break their promises | Being trapped or bound or forced into things against her will
Fears: ???
Desires: ??? | ???

Miscellaneous Abilities:

Racial Abilities
• Zenkenme [All-Seeing Eyes] - Upon gaining her ninth tail, Aiko, like all Kyuubi, was granted infinite vision; she can see miles and miles ahead, so long is there is nothing physically blocking her view

Family: To be revealed at a later date

Bio: Aiko has kept her trap firmly shut on her motive(s) for joining the Conclave, the reasons for which she guards just as closely. Combined with her tendency to all but flee when questioned about her life before becoming a Nobody, she is one shockingly mysterious individual.

Alright, Repa, looks pretty good! Just a few things:

-That picture, since it's not owned by your, nor was it commissioned by you, cannot be used in the official profile. As such, you might want to write out a description, or maybe commission another artist in the guild to redo it with your own personal additions?

-There is a slight issue with your abilities and your origin. Destiny Islands is a very peaceful place. Yeah, children spar, but there's no magic or 'special gifts', as far as anyone can tell. If anything, it's the closest thing to Earth in KH. I'm not saying change the abilities or the origin, but... you might want to explain how you got such abilities despite coming from a very peaceful, ordinary world.

-Tears of Justice is too powerful for an ordinary Attack Ability, but it seems to be more like a Limit Break anyway, from the way you describe it. 'In dire situations'. I would heavily suggest moving that to the Limit Breaks category. Otherwise, tone it down somewhat.

-Surface Shatter is pretty over-powered, too, but unlike Tears of Justice, this one doesn't really fit in at all. It doesn't make too much sense. Please replace this with a different ability ^^

-Unless you're suggesting that you're more focused in healing (or magic in general) instead of fighting, narrow it down to Cure for now. You can learn the more powerful versions later, but this is just the beginning of the RP.

-The 'Passive Abilities' you listed seem more like simple Strengths than actual Passives. I would suggest just listing them there and coming up with a new Passive or two ^^

-For your strengths and weaknesses, you say that you're strong in the Light and weak in the Dark. Are you Light elemental? Like, Holy? If not, then there's really no need to list that.

-Could you give the personality a little more depth? It's meant to be more than a few descriptive words- describe him in a paragraph or two.

-The sample post is necessary. The only reason our past few applicants haven't needed one is that they were profiles from one of our deleted RPs.

I know it seems like a lot of corrections, but I'm just trying to help you out ^^

Ah, well, the whole Ventus-Ground-Break thing isn't the actual ground breaking, that's him having a Dive Into the Heart, leaving the physical realm all-together. That's not something that can be forcibly done, I'm afraid ^^;;

And I understand about the Destiny-Islands thing, it's just that it doesn't make too much sense, you know? Imagine, if you would, your character actually living on earth. It doesn't make sense for him to have all of those special abilities and talents in such an ordinary world, right?

Now, maybe if he was raised on DI, but then traveled around and learned his abilities as he traveled? It has been four years since the Gummi Shower and the Fall of Radiant Garden, so it's entirely possible ^^