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Thard_Verad
Vice Captain

Dangerous Genius

PostPosted: Mon Nov 30, 2009 9:51 pm


Preserved for posterity, just in case more out-of-place posts start deleting existing ones.

Ginji of Thunder
Ice_Wolf_Demon
Ginji of Thunder
Ice_Wolf_Demon
Knightmare Ace
MISSION- Fair thee Well, Slowpoke!

Azalea Town is getting ready for a festival in honor of Slowpoke. However, they need a Slowking for the opening ceremony. Kurt was supposed to go catch one, but he's hurt his back and can't go.

Your mission is to go to the Slowpoke Well and catch a Slowpoke. Once you have one, take it to either Kurt or Bugsy, the town's Gym Leader. They'll reward you for your work.

Pokemon:
Any Basic-stage Bug-type, if you trade Slowpoke to Bugsy.

Items:
5 of any kind of Ball (Except Aqua Ball, Master Ball or Luxury Master Ball), if you give Slowpoke to Kurt.

Reward:
P$600


Well... I have a slight problem with this... You see, you messed up with your Focus Blast, majorly, the attack would have been canceled. the way Focus palm works is that the user charges power at the beginning of the turn and attacks at the end of the turn. If the user id hurt by the opponent any time in between by the opponent, the attack is canceled. and obviously if you swap it out, you really wouldn't have attacked it...

I'm at a toss up here. I do think that this one huge screw up throws it all off balance and makes me wanna fail it... and the story was kinda short as well, but with this being a lower level mission, I won't hold that part against you.

*sigh* I'm sorry but that one mess up irks me so bad that I have to fail it. Of course you may get luck and my decision will get over turned.
Arekku, you may want to re-read the mission and your grade. Focus BLAST, FORCE palm, and Focus PUNCH are three different attacks. And I'm now confused. And they all have different effects.


After he sent his Riolu out into battle he clearly stated "Focus Punch" He used the end result before it was supposed to be used. As I said. my decision can be overturned... stare
Works for me. Grade stands.

Though a re-read through your grade wouldn't hurt. I think you meant Focus Punch in the second reference.


Ice_Wolf_Demon
Knightmare Ace
MISSION- Fair thee Well, Slowpoke! (Attempt 2)

Azalea Town is getting ready for a festival in honor of Slowpoke. However, they need a Slowking for the opening ceremony. Kurt was supposed to go catch one, but he's hurt his back and can't go.

Your mission is to go to the Slowpoke Well and catch a Slowpoke. Once you have one, take it to either Kurt or Bugsy, the town's Gym Leader. They'll reward you for your work.

Pokemon:
Any Basic-stage Bug-type, if you trade Slowpoke to Bugsy.

Items:
5 of any kind of Ball (Except Aqua Ball, Master Ball or Luxury Master Ball), if you give Slowpoke to Kurt.

Reward:
P$600


Well, not much detail added.... actually none aside from the fact that you paralyzed the Slowpoke, which was a good thing to do for your Focus Punch technique. But it's still out of order, Focus Punch isn't a charge then attack... It's a charge, wait for the opponent's move, then attack.

You're just one minor change away from a passing grade. And I know you'll find it after my little tid bit of advice.


Knightmare Ace
MISSION- Fair thee Well, Slowpoke!

Azalea Town is getting ready for a festival in honor of Slowpoke. However, they need a Slowking for the opening ceremony. Kurt was supposed to go catch one, but he's hurt his back and can't go.

Your mission is to go to the Slowpoke Well and catch a Slowpoke. Once you have one, take it to either Kurt or Bugsy, the town's Gym Leader. They'll reward you for your work.

Pokemon:
Any Basic-stage Bug-type, if you trade Slowpoke to Bugsy.

Items:
5 of any kind of Ball (Except Aqua Ball, Master Ball or Luxury Master Ball), if you give Slowpoke to Kurt.

Reward:
P$600










Max was lounging around Aqua HQ playing with Ripley, his Riolu. They were boxing to help Ripley with his reflexes. Max went for a jab that Ripley dodged and then Ripley kicked Max in the shin and Max went down. Ripley jumped on Max. “Ok..ok you win Ripley.” Max said patting the little blue jackal on the head. He got up and grabbed a towel, wiping his forehead clean of sweat. He set the towel down and went to get a bottle of water, when his TADS vibrated. He dove for it like a bat outta hell, he was anxious for a new mission. Ripley jumped on his head and read the message with him.

Your mission is to go to the Slowpoke Well and catch a Slowpoke. Once you have one, take it to either Kurt or Bugsy, the town's Gym Leader. They'll reward you for your work.

Max slapped his TADS shut and bounded to his feet, Ripley still on his head. “Read for your first mission Ripley?” he asked. “Ri-Riolu.” was the excited response. Max got a change of clothes, grabbed all the necessary equipment, and headed throught the Teleporter, going to Azalea Town.

He got out of the teleporter and was immediately bombarded with noises and smells. The festival was getting ready for the Slowpoke festival and that is why they needed the Slowpoke that Max was after. He looked around for awhile and found Kurt, the man who was originally supposed to go and get the Slowpoke.

“Hello Kurt. I'm Max.” Max said casually. Kurt turned and saw that Max was from Team Aqua so he assumed he was the sap, I mean lucky member, sent to get a Slowpoke.

“Hello Max, you're here to get the Slowpoke I'm guessin'” Kurt said.

Max nodded in agreement. “Yup, Just need you to show me to the well and then we can get this party goin', literally.” Kurt chuckled and signaled for Max to follow him.

Max followed Kurt to the well where to Slowpoke were supposed to be. Hence why they called it Slowpoke Well. Anyways.....

“I was supposed to go down there and get 'er but I threw out ma back.” he said leaning backwards and producing a rather loud cracking sound. He chuckled it off.

“Well don't worry Kurt, I'll go down there and get you the best Slowpoke you have ever seen. Or just a regular Slowpoke.” Max said with a grin. He liked being funny. Max jumped down the hole and landed on his feet at the bottom. When he looked up he realized it was only about a 7 foot drop.

“Be back later sonny!” Kurt said and went back to the town to help with preparations.

Max brushed the dirt off his pants and headed deeper into the well. He called out Torchic, who he told to use Ember and hold it in his mouth to light the cavern. He walked through until he heard some rocks shuffle. He signaled for Torchic to kill the fire and follow him slowly.

They came upon a Slowpoke who was just sitting there, either lost in thought of his thoughts were lost, Max could not tell. “It's just a Slowpoke, we can handle this.” he said to Torchic, who nodded in agreement.

“Use Peck!” Max said to announce his first move. Torchic sailed through the air and Pecked the Slowpoke, who still didn't even know other beings were in the well. The Slowpoke turned

“Slow?” it said. It looked at the Torchic angrily and used Water Gun and blasted it into the wall.

“Torchic!” Max said and returned Torchic. Being a fire Pokemon that really had to hurt. “You were very helpful.” he said before grabbing another Pokeball and releasing Ripley.

“Riolu!” it said, getting into a fighting stance.

“The Slowpoke doesn't stand a chance. We are way too fast.” Max remarked. “Force Palm!” he said.

Riolu ran in a zigzagged line, confusing the Slowpoke slightly, jumped, and smashed the Slowpoke right on the top of the head, scoring a critical hit and a paralyze. The Slowpoke tried using Rollout but the paralysis held it back.

“Finish it with Focus Punch!” Max said. The Slowpoke tried to use Tackle, but couldn't due to the paralysis. Riolu already had the Slowpoke right there so he used Focus Punch and knocked it right against the wall. As it tried to get up Max used his last Pokeball.

Wiggle,
Wiggle,
Wiggle...Ding!

Slowpoke was captured and ready for delivery. Ripley jumped up on Max's shoulder and leaned against his head, tired. “Why don't you take a rest.” he said beaming the jackal into his ball. He grabbed the ball with the Slowpoke and exited the well.

He walked back over to Kurt's hut and knocked on the door. Kurt answered with a surprised look on his face.

“I didn't expect ya back so soon.” he said astounded.

“It wasn't much trouble.” Max said with a grin. He handed the Slowpoke over to Kurt who set it down on the table.

“Now what kinda Pokeballs ya want?” he asked.

“5 Shiny Balls please.” Max said. Kurt handed him the Shiny balls, they exchanged goodbyes, and Max teleported back to Aqua HQ.

--------------------------------------------

Items Used: 1x pokeballs
Pokemon used: Torchic and Riolu

[I have to be the only person who has ever failed a level 1 mission. I might as well go hand myself.


Knightmare Ace
Ice_Wolf_Demon
Knightmare Ace
MISSION- Fair thee Well, Slowpoke!

Azalea Town is getting ready for a festival in honor of Slowpoke. However, they need a Slowking for the opening ceremony. Kurt was supposed to go catch one, but he's hurt his back and can't go.

Your mission is to go to the Slowpoke Well and catch a Slowpoke. Once you have one, take it to either Kurt or Bugsy, the town's Gym Leader. They'll reward you for your work.

Pokemon:
Any Basic-stage Bug-type, if you trade Slowpoke to Bugsy.

Items:
5 of any kind of Ball (Except Aqua Ball, Master Ball or Luxury Master Ball), if you give Slowpoke to Kurt.

Reward:
P$600


You forgot to mention you failed it twice, nah I'm just kiddin' ya! That really was the only thing holding you back seeing as though it's only a level one mission. Although next time I'd love to see more detail next time, you know make paragraphs instead of one liners?

Mission is a pass, but 100 PD is deducted from the number of attempts. Your other reward, 5 Shiny Balls, helps a lot though doesn't it?


YYESSS VICTORY IS MINE!


CX Sunny
_____________________________________________________________

MISSION- Flame on!
Go catch a fire pokémon!

Pokémon:
Any non evolved, non legendary fire pokémon

Money: 600

_____________________________________________________________

Sunny was writing up a mission report in her room in HQ. The peace there was making her want to fall to sleep. She was really organized, surprisingly really, since she wasn't usually a well-organized person. Her TADS lay beside her spare notepad, her pencils were in a neat stack near her bag and a cup of steaming coffee was sitting a few centimeters away, on a coaster in the middle of the table. Midri, her Eevee, was curled up on her knee. With her spare hand, Sunny occasionally stroked her Night sky patterned coat. As she scribbled away on her notepad, her TADS beeped. She picked it up.
"Hello?" she asked, sleepily.
"One mission received!" a message buzzed out. "One mission received!"
Sunny pressed a few buttons on the machine and it started telling her what the mission was.
"So, my mission is to catch a fire pokémon, hmm?" Sunny muttered, scrambling up quickly. She started to pack her backpack, muttering advice to herself. Midri leapt off her knee and ran to the door.
"Growlithe at Cinnebar... Vulpix outside Celadon... Ponyta on the bike path..." she mused aloud, wondering which pokémon she should set her sights on. As she finished packing her bag, she made up her mind. Midri leapt onto her left shoulder as she headed for the door.
"I've always wanted to see Celadon City, so it makes sense to go there and aim for Vulpix..." she decided, before stepping onto a teleporter.

She appeared behind a large, tall building in Celadon. The Sun was high in the sky and she basked in its warmth as she made her way down the busy, paved main street. People and pokémon were everywhere. After walking through the crowds, Sunny stumbled upon a great basin of white stone. It was the famous Celadon fountain! Sunny had no pokedollars of her own to throw in, so she threw in a small disc-shaped rock instead, for the sake of it. Afterwards, she looked carefully at the marvelous stone carving on top. It was in the shape of a Gyrados, with water spurting out into a large fountain from its mouth like a mini hydro pump. She stood there for a while, captivated, before she heard a cry.
"Bring that terror back!" a woman was yelling. What looked like a young Meowth was running off with some washing from the woman's line! Sunny immediately gave chase. Midri leapt off her shoulders and chased it out of the city gates. Sunny, who was slower than Midri, eventually had to stop and get out her bike. Midri, who Sunny had trained for speed, was able to follow Meowth all the way to the underground passage leading to Lavender town. She leapt onto it so it couldn't go any further, but the Meowth was also fast. It dodged - and ran back the way it had come!

Sunny was just about to pass a patch of tall grass on her bike when she noticed a streak of fur and washing dive into the undergrowth. Sunny saw Midri coming towards her.
"Ee, ee-vee!" she called, pointing to the grass. Sunny leapt off her bike and parted the grass. The Meowth the looking panicked. A wild Vulpix had caught up the other end of the washing Meowth had stolen. Meowth, determined to go on with the washing, was trying to pull it away. Sunny started forward. This was an opportunity to attack! She returned Midri to her Colourball.
"Go, Piplup!" she called, as the tiny penguin pokémon appeared in the air as she tossed her ball. "Use Bubblebeam!" Sunny commanded. Piplup used bubblebeam on Meowth. The Meowth finally let go of the washing. It leapt up and used bite on Piplup. Both weakened by the other's attack, they stood facing each other. The Vulpix ran out and joined Piplup.
"Pip, lup!" Piplup looked excited. Sunny pointed at the Meowth.
"Piplup, whirlpool!"
The Vulpix, who was faster than Piplup, first unleashed a flamethrower on the unsuspecting pokémon. Almost drained of HP, the Meowth stumbled back. Piplup finished off with a whirlpool. Because of the flamethrower, the Meowth's fur was very hot. When the cold water hit it, it caused an eruption of steam. Vulpix and Piplup backed away. Sunny held her breath. Had they done it? The steam cleared to reveal the Meowth lying on its back. Fainted.
Sunny was pleased. She called Piplup back to its ball, congratulating it as she did so. Then she turned to the Vulpix. It stood up when she met its gaze. It pointed a paw towards Sunny's backpack, where she kept her pokeballs.
"You want to battle?" Sunny enquired. "Well, ok... I was sent to catch a fire pokémon!"

Vulpix stood at one end of the grass patch. Sunny stood at the other. They were facing eachother determinedly. Sunny made the first move.
"Go, Gulpin!" she called. The poison pokémon appeared in a flash of silver light. "Use rollout!" As Gulpin fired itself at Vulpix, Vulpix unleashed a flamethrower. Gulpin managed to roll through the flames and hit Vulpix, but was burned in the process. "Now use sludge bomb!" Sunny continued. Gulpin spewed out sludge which fell all over Vulpix, damaging it further and poisoning it. However, Vulpix still had half of its HP left. It launched a fire blast on Gulpin. Gulpin was also hurt by its burn. It was almost at fainting stage! Sunny quickly returned it to prevent further injury. Once again, she sent out Piplup.
"Piplup! Use water gun!" Sunny commanded. Vulpix, who was fastest, tried to blast Piplup with a flamethrower, but as Piplup fired a strong water gun, it knocked the attack off-course so it missed Piplup. Vulpix was hit hard.
Sunny took out a Colourball from her bag. She threw it at Vulpix and it was encased in the ball in half a second. The ball wiggled once... twice... three times! Sunny picked up Piplup and cheered.
"I caught Vulpix!"
Sunny returned Piplup and put the pokeball and Colourball containing her new pokémon back in her backpack. She got on her bike and rode off back towards Celadon city and the teleporter to HQ. She had completed her third mission with success!
PostPosted: Mon Nov 30, 2009 10:01 pm


As expected, a post got deleted when it was bumped to page 5.

That's why I took the time to quote everything that looked important on page 4.

Thard_Verad
Vice Captain

Dangerous Genius


Thard_Verad
Vice Captain

Dangerous Genius

PostPosted: Mon Nov 30, 2009 10:04 pm


The only thing NOT saved is Max's second attempt at Fair Thee Well, Slowpoke. I figured since the third one passed, why waste space quoting it?
PostPosted: Mon Nov 30, 2009 10:07 pm


Oh hey, is it all fixed now? Good! That means I can unlock the Grading Room.
Only two posts got eaten by the bug, and as I said, I saved its contents.

Thard_Verad
Vice Captain

Dangerous Genius


Thard_Verad
Vice Captain

Dangerous Genius

PostPosted: Mon Nov 30, 2009 10:09 pm


Well that's a kick in the teeth. It was fixed for ONE post, and then it broke again.
PostPosted: Mon Nov 30, 2009 10:11 pm


Fixing... fixing ... fixing...

(Puts on bigger shoes)

Stomping the bug... stomping the bug...

Thard_Verad
Vice Captain

Dangerous Genius


Thard_Verad
Vice Captain

Dangerous Genius

PostPosted: Mon Nov 30, 2009 10:12 pm


Sigh. Looks like I'll have to bump all the posts off page four to fix the thread.
PostPosted: Mon Nov 30, 2009 10:13 pm


Five posts to go.

Thard_Verad
Vice Captain

Dangerous Genius


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Vice Captain

Dangerous Genius

PostPosted: Mon Nov 30, 2009 10:14 pm


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Five posts to go.
Four.
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Vice Captain

Dangerous Genius


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Vice Captain

Dangerous Genius

PostPosted: Mon Nov 30, 2009 10:19 pm


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Five posts to go.
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Five posts to go.
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One.... Please let this start working right.

Thard_Verad
Vice Captain

Dangerous Genius


Thard_Verad
Vice Captain

Dangerous Genius

PostPosted: Mon Nov 30, 2009 10:21 pm


Okay, if this post is on page 5, then the Grading Room is back in business.
PostPosted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 3:09 pm


MISSION- Mining in Granite Cave
Any Team Aqua member is asked to go to Granite Cave and get one of the rare stones (Fire Stone, Water Stone, Leaf Stone, Thunderstone, Moon Stone, Sun Stone) that are in it. But watch out for Steven. He often trains his pokemon in the cave, and won't hesitate to challenge you to a battle. (If you run into him, he'll use 3 basic stage Ground, Rock, or Steel-type Pokemon)

Pokemon:
Aron

Item: The evolution stone you bring back.

Funds upon completion: 600

Mission Level: 2

- - - - - - - - - -


Max woke up one morning at HQ, bright eyed and bushy-tailed. He struggled getting out of his blankets and fell out onto the floor, in a sprawling mess. He fumbled around for a few more minutes before finally dislodging himself from the blankets. He kicked them and insulted them, which made him feel better about himself. Feeling victorious, he got dressed and headed down the stairs to the Aqua HQ main room. He got very bored, considering there was absolutely nothing to do. He headed into the kitchen to get some breakfast.

While poring a bowl of cereal his TADS, which was in his pocket, vibrated, causing him to jerk and spill the cereal everywhere. No one was there to see him make such a fool of himself, so he hurriedly cleaned up his mess and put the cereal away. He left the room quickly, making sure not to get caught.

Back in the main room he sighed, no one had caught him. He reached into his pocket and flipped his TADS open, quickly reading his mission.

Go to Granite Cave, north of Dewford, and bring back an evolution stone. More details in the briefing.

A few seconds later Max received a few file documents via e-mail concerning his mission. He read them and snapped his TADS shut. Mission Time! He left Aqua HQ on Wailmer, who surfed him all the way there.

He arrived in Dewford later that evening and returned Wailmer. He stretched around and decided to make this a two day mission. One day collecting information, and the next devoted completely to finding that stone.

Max walked around chatting up the locals. He asked what kind of trouble he might run into in the cave and such things along the lines of that. He had heard a few rumors that a trainer named Steven trained in Granite Cave. He wasn't too worried. He had everything under control. He stayed the night at the Pokemon Center.

The next morning he was up early and at the cave before noon. He entered the cave like any other mission only to be surprise tackled by an Aron. He looked at the little creature that had just tackled him into the wall and threw out a pokeball. The pokemon that came out was Torchic

“Steel versus Fire.” Max smirked. “I like these odds.”

The Aron tried a Headbutt on the Torchic but the Torchic dodged. The Aron caught itself on a wall and Tackled this time hitting the Torchic. Torchic bounded against the wall.

“Jump off the wall and Flamethrower!” Max said. The little creature used it's relatively strong legs and jumped with fire streaming from it's beak. Aron took the blast and stood firm, though he looked hurt.

“Torchic Use Ember!” Max cried out to his pokemon. The little bird spit balls of fire at the Aron who stood it's ground. Max was shocked. This little guy was strong. The Aron had to be close to being defeated. It used Headbutt, and it was critical, wounding the poor Torchic badly.

Max returned the Torchic before it had to suffer through much more of this. He clipped the ball on his belt and on the back pull he grabbed Ripley's ball. He released Ripley, who would finish this fight quickly.

The Aron charged Ripley, but Ripley easily dodged the attack. Ripley turned and got ready for it's master's command.

“Use Force Palm! Finish it!” Max said. Ripley crashed into the Aron, who then flew into the wall. The little creature of steel tried to get up but Max threw a shiny ball at it.

Wiggle,
Wiggle,
Wiggle,
Ding!

Max captured the Aron. He returned Ripley and continued through the cave. It was really dark and he couldn't see much of anything. As he was walking he fell through what was probably supposed to be a ladder hole. He missed it entirely and on the fall down all he could think about was why he hadn't used Torchic as a torch. Torchic...Torch. He had just realized that little tidbit of information. He hit the ground with a sickening thud and laid there.

“Hey....hey...Are you all right?” A voice asked. Max opened on of his eyes to look up. He had a splitting headache and really just wanted to leave the dang cave. Max sat up slowly rubbing the back of his head. He looked straight forward and saw a Fire Stone. He got up to rush for it but the person whose voice he heard grabbed his wrist.

“Hey pal hold on a second. I came down here for those and they are mine. You may have found that one first, but I need them.” he said before letting Max go. Max straightened his sleeve and looked at the man, slightly threatening.

“I am on a mission to get that stone.” Max said as he got a mischievous look on his face. “How about we battle for it?” Max suggested.

“Sounds fair.” the other one said. “My name is Steven by the way.”
“Max.” Max said.

They squared off facing each other. Steven threw a ball and a Geodude appeared from it. It took everything Max had not to laugh. Almost half of his team were Water types. This was going to be an easy battle. Max threw a ball and his Wailmer appeared.

“Geodude Use Rock Throw.” Steven announced. The Geodude started tearing out large chunks of rock out of the ground and hurling them at Wailmer.

“Wailmer Use Rollout!” Wailmer rolled straight through the rocks, taking some damage, and careened into Geodude. Geodude halted Wailmer with his strength, but that left him vulnerable. “Wailmer use Water Gun.” Max said calmly. Geodude versus Wailmer. It was over before it began. The water gun barraged the rock creature in the face sending it flying into a wall. Steven returned Geodude as Max returned Wailmer.

“Hmm you aren't half bad.” Steven said.
“Neither are you.” Max said.

Steven threw another pokeball, releasing his Nosepass. It took everything Max had to stop from laughing. Was this guy's team made to be defeated easily? He shook the idea and tossed out his Totodile.

“Rock Tomb!” Steven said to his Nosepass. The pokemon started stomping it's feet. As Totodile looked up rocks were whistling through the air. Totodile attempted to dodge and managed to dodge most, save for the one that hit his tail. It yelped in pain as it looked at the Nosepass angrily.

“Water gun!” Max yelled. The Totodile unleashed a monsoon from it's mouth, aimed directly towards the Nosepass. It managed to score a hit, a critical hit, but the Nosepass still survived.

“Use Zap Cannon!” Steven said. The Nosepass stored energy near it's mouth as it prepared. When the sphere of light achieved the appropriate size, the Nosepass hurled it at the Totodile. Totodile managed to side step, but the cannon managed to graze his shoulder, and the Nosepass was defenseless.

“Water gun again!” Max yelled. The little blue gator unleashed it's fury again, K.O.ing the Nosepass. So far Max was 2-0. He was excited. He was about to beat Steven. The trainers returned their Pokemon and released their final ones. Steven's turned out to be an Aron and Max's was Ripley.

“Aron use Zen Headbutt!” Steven said. The little Steel creature came bounding at Ripley with a break neck speed. Max had to think fast.

“Use Force Palm!” he said. Ripley tried to side step, but was swiped by the Aron. Using the momentum from the hit, Ripley swung full force with Force Palm, sending him sailing, where he landed 8 feet away.

Both Aron and Ripley were wounded. Their next attacks might be their last. Max and Steven eyed each other down, preparing and anticipating, critical things to a Pokemon battle.

“Use Headbutt!” Steven cried out to his Pokemon. The Aron lunged towards Ripley, who stood their, with the will of steel. As Aron was about to collide with Ripley Max yelled.

“Ripley Use Counter!”

Ripley started to glow with a light that encased his body. The Aron slammed into the little blue jackal and sailed back through the air and was defeated. Steven returned his Aron and shook hands with Max.

“That was a great battle. You have good strategy.” he said.

Max took his hand and said. “You too. I thought I was gonna be done in there.” he said scratching the back of his head in his nervous fashion.

“Well the stone is all yours. Take it.” Steven said handing Max the Fire Stone. Max thanked him and put the stone in his bag. They exchanged goodbyes and Max left for Aqua Headquarters, with his mission completed.

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Items Used: Shiny Ball x1
Pokemon Used: Totodile, Wailmer, Torchic, Riolu

Knightmare Max


Thard_Verad
Vice Captain

Dangerous Genius

PostPosted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 5:01 pm


Knightmare Ace
MISSION- Mining in Granite Cave
Any Team Aqua member is asked to go to Granite Cave and get one of the rare stones (Fire Stone, Water Stone, Leaf Stone, Thunderstone, Moon Stone, Sun Stone) that are in it. But watch out for Steven. He often trains his pokemon in the cave, and won't hesitate to challenge you to a battle. (If you run into him, he'll use 3 basic stage Ground, Rock, or Steel-type Pokemon)

Pokemon:
Aron

Item: The evolution stone you bring back.

Funds upon completion: 600

Hm, not bad. I'd have expected more from a Hoenn Champion, but I guess he's using recently-caught pokemon. My inner grammar teacher wants to make an its-vs-it's remark, but he's easily suppressed. Overall it's a pretty good piece of writing.

In the battle, you seem to follow the anime rules a little more than the game rules. (As the use of Rollout makes evident) Counter doesn't stop the opponent's attack from hitting. Other than that, your battles were good, even if they were on the short side.

Side note: Aron is a Steel/Rock type. Grats on catching one and making it Shiny.

I guess you pass. Take the 600 and keep the Fire Stone.
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