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Blessed Blade

PostPosted: Fri Aug 27, 2004 12:12 pm


Father said "hehe, I'll fix her."
Threw mother in a concrete mixer.
She whirled about and called "Come Hither!"
Looked like fun, so he jumped in with her!
Then in to join the dixxy dance,
Jumped auntie Bee and Uncle Ants
Then in jumped my sister Lena
And Cuckling Chuck her pet Hyena
I jumped on in and got all scrambly
What a crazy mixed up family!
PostPosted: Tue Oct 12, 2004 2:36 pm


Blessed Blade
Father said "hehe, I'll fix her."
Threw mother in a concrete mixer.
She whirled about and called "Come Hither!"
Looked like fun, so he jumped in with her!
Then in to join the dixxy dance,
Jumped auntie Bee and Uncle Ants
Then in jumped my sister Lena
And Cuckling Chuck her pet Hyena
I jumped on in and got all scrambly
What a crazy mixed up family!
haha! did you write that? how funny, i love it! i write a lot of poetry too, i'll post it in a sec.....

drama_tiki439


drama_tiki439

PostPosted: Tue Oct 12, 2004 2:46 pm


here i go:

i had a little kitty cat
his name wasmr. hair
but when i was out playing tag
he ran and hid. but where?

i looked inside the cabinets
to see if he was hiding
i looked out in the stables
to see if he was riding

but now, he was not anywhere
that i had ever checked
a tiny tear ran down my cheek
my entire life was wrecked!

i felt so angry, sad, and mad
i screamed "oh, woe is me!"
he wasnt in the corner and he wasnt in the tree

oh, wheres my little kitty?
wheres my kitty cat?
i'd probably just get a new one
guess thats the end of that.

but when i saw that trail of fur
boy did i have a scare!
because there, curled up with some tiny kittens.....

was mr, now mrs. hair!!!


its been in contests and even published. i wrote it when i was in 3rd grade, so suggestions are needed, so dont be afraid to speak up! and comment, please, tell me if you liked it. i like to know what others think of my writing.
PostPosted: Tue Oct 12, 2004 2:48 pm


biggrin

drama_tiki439


CpainsorVio7

PostPosted: Tue Oct 12, 2004 5:42 pm


Awwwwwww!!! That's such a cute poem heart
PostPosted: Tue Oct 12, 2004 11:12 pm


This one's a bit rude. My Grandfather taught it to me. Beware, there's some swearing, but I'll asterix it out.

If I were a blackbird I'd sit on the grass
My Wings neatly folded, my beak up my a**
And from this position I seldom would flit
For who could say 'Cukoo' with a beakful of s**t?

Corporeal Mirage


drama_tiki439

PostPosted: Wed Oct 13, 2004 3:40 pm


here's another one:

Candle

a candle flame, a marvolous thing
so bright and burning tall
the prettiest thing i've ever seen
a light thats free to all

it tells about the world today
the way the earth turns round
each one of us a candle flame
thats slowly burning down

and when its time to blow it out
the light, it flickers so,
begging to be kept right here
burning, burning. BLOW!

now the room is dark and deep
without the precious light
still suffering from that horrid loss
of candle flame tonight

so think about the loved ones past
and now its time to learn
to cherish your time, make your own flame go high
before you start to burn.


i wrote that one recently for my sister's bat mitsvah. hope you like it. biggrin
PostPosted: Wed Oct 13, 2004 3:49 pm


I heart your poems! I can't write rhyme poems myself. sweatdrop

CpainsorVio7


drama_tiki439

PostPosted: Thu Oct 14, 2004 1:38 pm


CpainsorVio7
I heart your poems! I can't write rhyme poems myself. sweatdrop
thanks! its ok, its still poetry even if it doesnt rhyme. i like your poems a lot myself.
PostPosted: Thu Oct 14, 2004 6:15 pm


i've written some nonrhyming poems too. this is about my grandpa:


i remember the wheelchair bed
i remember hearing the breathing machine
Tasting treats at parties
Touching the scratchy blue afgan
feeling he would live forever.

I remember feeling curious
wondering what happened
where he was.
still touching the blue afgan
tasting the tears

still hearing my papa try to talk
still seeing him touch the board
telling us how he feels.

I was just three when he died.
they think i didnt remember him
they think i didnt understand.

I see my papa no more.

.........................................................................................................

That one makes me cry! crying my grandpa had ALS. its a fatal disease that attacks your muscles. first your arms, then legs, then you cant talk, then you cant breathe on your own, then it shuts down your brain and heart. comment on the poetry, please, not the situation it was based on.

drama_tiki439


CpainsorVio7

PostPosted: Thu Oct 14, 2004 6:51 pm


drama_tiki439

i remember the wheelchair bed
i remember hearing the breathing machine

crying ......... I remember the ventalator..... but I live with the wheelchair, take care of the wheelchair, feed, cloth, water, wash, empty the legbag, scratch the face or the wheelchair everyday. My brother is a quad....
PostPosted: Sat Oct 16, 2004 5:55 pm


Our Dark Fate

Please
come out of your trance
And take a glance out the window

Take a look at
Our sick and sad little world
Watch, as we all are doomed to our shackles

Come take a look out the window.
It only last but a short while
Till all your pain and suffering is ended.

So come!!
Come take a look
Watch, as we all are lost in the dark mindless abyss

So come, come outside
And march with us
March with us to our dark cruel fate

Hatebreed809


drama_tiki439

PostPosted: Sun Oct 17, 2004 4:17 pm


Hatebreed809
Our Dark Fate

Please
come out of your trance
And take a glance out the window

Take a look at
Our sick and sad little world
Watch, as we all are doomed to our shackles

Come take a look out the window.
It only last but a short while
Till all your pain and suffering is ended.

So come!!
Come take a look
Watch, as we all are lost in the dark mindless abyss

So come, come outside
And march with us
March with us to our dark cruel fate
wow. so true. you new here? havn't seen you before. or it could just be me, i guess.
PostPosted: Sat Nov 13, 2004 6:21 am


surprised heart You are like Dr. Seuss.

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beyond_all_help

PostPosted: Tue Nov 16, 2004 1:19 pm


always trying harder,
never getting far,
the pressure to do better,
to be someone that you arent,
escape this crushing pressure,
bleed yourself away,
so maybe, just maybe,
they will morn you on that day.

meh... i wrote that one for my friend.... i have some more... but i dunna think they be good enough... crying
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