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Posted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 11:46 pm


	TootsieFruity Sibeiko Roy almost seems crazy to the point where you wouldn't want to take him outdoors... o_o( ) And more bio info is <3. ^_^ Quote: Roy looked up to Amigo, putting his fingers down. "But it feels like work. If there was a bit of fun in it, I--" You mean cute, right? gonk @Edmond- Sim's gonna die. No j/k. lol I'll bet you 100 gold that he doesn't die! D: He can't die! HE'S SIM!

Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2008 1:07 am


	Edmond Dantes TootsieFruity Sibeiko Roy almost seems crazy to the point where you wouldn't want to take him outdoors... o_o( ) And more bio info is <3. ^_^ Quote: Roy looked up to Amigo, putting his fingers down. "But it feels like work. If there was a bit of fun in it, I--" You mean cute, right? gonk @Edmond- Sim's gonna die. No j/k. lol I'll bet you 100 gold that he doesn't die! D: He can't die! HE'S SIM! He won't die in the next chapter BUT he will die. Possibly by Q. If you agree we shall shake on it. 3nodding Also, this is Sim, who's coming to kill you question you.

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Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2008 10:51 am


	Wow, glad to see everyone posting more! xD Amigo: Roy will have something based on him soon. Amigo does have a resonance soul, but it's different from what Maggeh's Amigo's rez is. Right now my favorite character is Opal, believe it or not. I like using her since she has so many powers, but it's hard to fit her in sometimes. @Edmond: Oh, you! xd I should stop giving you the chapters ahead of time! But thank you for posting =) @Tootsie: Roy is cute. But he's also a badass. Or he will be. At some point in the future. You'll see. xP I'll stay quiet about Sim. I'm actually not sure what I want to do with him I don't want to spoil the story. ninja Anyway, I'm putting chapter 8 up RIGHT NOW xd

Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2008 11:00 am


	This story is quite interesting. Its cool to see Ismaru have the power I initially gave him. In another note, I feel that you need to start bringing some back story to the forefront on characters other then Q when you get the chance. I want to know how everyone got to the position that they are in.

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Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2008 11:08 am


	Ismaru! Oh my god, you posted! Chapter 10 has more of you in it. The reason there's not much backstory is because... Well, I haven't thought of it, honestly. BUT ALSO because as soon as this book is over, it's going to focus on other people. I swear. The Phoenix group will probably be th elast group to be focused on. I wanted to stay off them since Maggeh's story is all about them. I wanted a story more focusing on the "bad guys". There's some character growth with Mercain in chapter 9, but it's not much. 10 leaves Q completely and is about the Phoenix group, and there's growth there, but no... It's not history. What I'm planning to do here is resolve Q's limiter issue. And once that's over with, the story can progress to what the overall theme is. Which Maggeh helped me come up with. Edit: But you're right. I will make more of an effort to put more history for characters other than Q and Edmond in there.

Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2008 4:31 pm


	Well, I wrote chapter 11 and started writing chapter 12... So I decided before I get TOO far ahead of myself, I'll just release a second chapter today. So here's chapter 9. It's pretty much All Mercain and Edmond.

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Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2008 6:22 pm


	I've been lurking around way to much recently. ^_^;; I'll do my best to post more.

Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2008 8:46 pm


	[Q] @Tootsie: Roy is cute. But he's also a badass. Or he will be. At some point in the future. You'll see. xP I could imagine that. lol (He would throw fingers as weapons.) (That would be creepy.)

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Posted: Sat Mar 15, 2008 12:03 am


	gogo chapter 10!

Posted: Sat Mar 15, 2008 12:51 am


	Another good chapter. 3nodding Insom is sloooow. I think Fort's taking it out on her a bit too much...but I'd probably throw something at her for being that slow about things. >.> I hope Toastie's character lives, or shows up in flashbacks at least. Just to get an idea of what her character is like. Aine too. I hope the Pheonix group gets to be as bad a** as the rest soon. And fast updates are <3 because they're great story fixes.

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Posted: Sat Mar 15, 2008 1:50 am


	You can just tell I'm smiling. (Perhaps I'm egocentric, too?) Thanks Q for including me in the story. heart

Posted: Sat Mar 15, 2008 4:30 am


	Insomnesiac Another good chapter. 3nodding Insom is sloooow. I think Fort's taking it out on her a bit too much...but I'd probably throw something at her for being that slow about things. >.> I hope Toastie's character lives, or shows up in flashbacks at least. Just to get an idea of what her character is like. Aine too. I hope the Pheonix group gets to be as bad a** as the rest soon. And fast updates are <3 because they're great story fixes. I'M SORRY INSOM FOR LATE UPDATES AND BEING TOTALLY WORTHLESS AND STUFF AND THAT I'M NOT A GOOD A WRITER AS Q I THINK I SHOULD KILL MYSELF IN SHAME. D8

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Posted: Sat Mar 15, 2008 7:24 am


	Zepia Eltnam Oberon Insomnesiac Another good chapter. 3nodding Insom is sloooow. I think Fort's taking it out on her a bit too much...but I'd probably throw something at her for being that slow about things. >.> I hope Toastie's character lives, or shows up in flashbacks at least. Just to get an idea of what her character is like. Aine too. I hope the Pheonix group gets to be as bad a** as the rest soon. And fast updates are <3 because they're great story fixes. I'M SORRY INSOM FOR LATE UPDATES AND BEING TOTALLY WORTHLESS AND STUFF AND THAT I'M NOT A GOOD A WRITER AS Q I THINK I SHOULD KILL MYSELF IN SHAME. D8 Danm it Maggeh, IF IT WASN'T FOR YOUR AWESOME STORY THIS STORY WOULDN'T EVEN BE HERE. IT'S LIKE A TRIBUTE TO THE GREATNESS OF YOUR STORY. D< I'm like addicted to stories that are easy to access. Which is why I always have a tab open to that site that has Doubt on it. Heck I was even debating if I should post to ask what your essays are about to see if people could help since there is a little bit of time before they are due. D< Both of your stories are good in their own way. D<

Posted: Sat Mar 15, 2008 9:09 am


	Insomnesiac Zepia Eltnam Oberon Insomnesiac Another good chapter. 3nodding Insom is sloooow. I think Fort's taking it out on her a bit too much...but I'd probably throw something at her for being that slow about things. >.> I hope Toastie's character lives, or shows up in flashbacks at least. Just to get an idea of what her character is like. Aine too. I hope the Pheonix group gets to be as bad a as the rest soon. And fast updates are <3 because they're great story fixes. I'M SORRY INSOM FOR LATE UPDATES AND BEING TOTALLY WORTHLESS AND STUFF AND THAT I'M NOT A GOOD A WRITER AS Q I THINK I SHOULD KILL MYSELF IN SHAME. Danm it Maggeh, IF IT WASN'T FOR YOUR AWESOME STORY THIS STORY WOULDN'T EVEN BE HERE. IT'S LIKE A TRIBUTE TO THE GREATNESS OF YOUR STORY. D< IT'S TRUE MAGGEH! crying My story is only here because of your story, if you didn't write yours, mine wouldn't be here at all. Besides, I think you're one up on me. I think your story will get way better than my story very soon (since now I know what's going to happen) and I also think that you're a better writer than me since you can write things not obviously revolving around your character. Before I even started writing chapter 1, I wanted Q to be one of those minor but likeable characters. And here I am, as a bad writer, just throwing him in as this one bigass plot device and I am ashamed of it. gonk (But at least Q is still a kickass character... emo** )