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 Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 4:30 pm
ALL OF YOU HAD BETTER SHUT UP RIGHT NOW BEFORE I DENY BOTH OF YOU WITHOUT A CHANCE OF APPROVAL!!!!!!!
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Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 4:34 pm
Thank you Greg, Anyways I'm giving you a chance Zetsu.. Change or Info or its Denied...
ONLY PEOPLE WHO WERE RECENTLY DENIED MAY POST THEIR APPS AT THIS TIME. ANYONE WHO POSTS WHO WAS NOT DENIED RECENTLY WILL BE AUTODENIED.
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Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 4:35 pm
Kimimaro Kaguya-sama Gregar828 ALL OF YOU HAD BETTER SHUT UP RIGHT NOW BEFORE I DENY BOTH OF YOU WITHOUT A CHANCE OF APPROVAL!!!!!!! Put your claws away. Go ahead deny me, I dare you. Wow...........You just talked that way to the Vice Captain AND Profile Acceptor. Your not too bright, are you?
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Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 4:39 pm
Kimimaro Kaguya-sama Gregar828 Kimimaro Kaguya-sama Gregar828 ALL OF YOU HAD BETTER SHUT UP RIGHT NOW BEFORE I DENY BOTH OF YOU WITHOUT A CHANCE OF APPROVAL!!!!!!! Put your claws away. Go ahead deny me, I dare you. Wow...........You just talked that way to the Vice Captain AND Profile Acceptor. Your not too bright, are you? You're not bright enough to check if I'm even in this guild. Then leave now. How are you even posting here if your not a member?
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Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 4:54 pm
Rpc Name: Ichigo Yuki
Village: Kiri
Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Ink Artistry
What you know about the clan/bl: Ink Artistry bloodline uses scroll and ink as weapons. Using ninja ink this bloodline can create a variety of animals do to various things. Birds for flying, Lions/Bears for attack and can even create small animals to sneak up on an opponent.
Rp Sample: Ichigo looked at the time. It's time to train. He walked out into the garden to practice his ninjutsu. "Sumi Buushin no Jutsu," He said making a ink clone of himself. The ink clone ran off into the distance of the garden. Ichigo pulled out his sword Jezumo and ran after his clone. The clone threw some kunais at him; he dodged and sheathed his sword and took out a scroll and drew a tiger, "Choujuu Giga," Ichigo said, rapidly moving the brush on the paper. The tiger jumped out of the scroll ran after the clone. The clone had ran off, and tried going behind Ichigo, spraying senbon needles everywhere. He whipped around, and grabbed his scroll, moving the brush across the paper again and started to draw an umbrella that had each symbol of each village. "Choujuu Giga," Ichigo said summoning the umbrella. The umbrella dispersed, and the ink went everywhere, when it was hit.
Ichigo got closer and tried a new technique, "Sumi Gasumi no Jutsu," the area started to fog up with ink. He unsheathed his sword and attacked the clone but the clone, reacted by jumping back, I'm becoming stronger then usual my clones would have died by now. Where will he hit me next? Will it use some taijutsu or my genjutsu? The clone came behind Ichigo and pulled out some shurikens into his hand and threw them at him. Ichigo had to jump back but he had ,gotten hit by one of the shurikens. "Good, Good, let us end this right now," Ichigo said. The clone drew out his sword and they both were ready to strike each other down. They ran at each other and slashed upward at the same time. It seemed minutes had gone by and then The clone dissipated back into ink. "I took a good blow from that attack. I think I might need medical attention," Ichigo said walking off to the hospital, favoring his wound.
[[Reposting because of it being buried by OOC]]
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Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 5:04 pm
@tsubaka: Could you add a more to your rp sample? There's not enough there for me to decide..
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Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 5:16 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 7:07 pm
Rpc Name:
Okuribi ( Cerimonial bonfire )
Village:
Kirigakure
Rank:
Academy student
Bloodline or Clan applied for:
Mokuton
What you know about the clan/bl:
They combine Suiton and doton chakra to create Mokuton. They can produce wood from anywhere, including their own bodies as they literally turn their chakra into a source of life. While around natural wood their Jutsu are increased by Sixty percent. The first Hokage mastered this technique, Creating the Forest around Konoha with his Secret art Dense forest Creation Technique, but no one else could. That is until Orochimaru injected sixty text subjects with the DNA of the First Hokage. Out of the sixty test subjects only one survived, and that was Tenzo Yamamoto. He was capable of using the Techniques, but not to the extent of the First Hokage.
Rp Sample:
" Are you in position? " Leader asked, looking at OkuRibi's clone. " Answer now. " He said, that being the command he had to give to let Okuribi know that he had better deem this worthy of a time to talk, otherwise he would die.
" Yes, And the Ninja is thirty Kilometers in closing... " Okuribi's clone said, sitting next to the Leader. " Before he gets here, swallow this Pill, It will allow you to read my thoughts, and allow me to read yours. you will be updated on the fight, and I'll be able to contact you. " Okuribi's clone said, Starting to fold in on himself. The edges of his body turning to the color of Lumber, a noise like wood sliding across itself coming into the clearing. Soon he had turned into a small pill, able to be easily swallowed without liquid, with a smooth surface so that the Target would not get splinters. He also changed his color to look like candy, Just incase the Leader felt like eating something sweet. However it had no taste.
" Oh, So this is one of your of Mokuton Pills huh? I've never encountered this Technique before. " He said swallowing the pill. " Okuribi you there? Answer now. " Leader said, standing up and jumping into a tree.
~ Miles away ~
" Yes. He is almost here... I'll intercept and contain... " Okuribi said, sighing as he made some handsigns, the Jinjuuriki Jumping into the Forest clearing, Which to anyone besides Okuribi it looked natural, but he had moved a couple of the Trees around, so he could better use his jutsu. " ..." He said, a wall of wood appearing out of the ground, first starting as green wood, then progressing rapidly into yellow wood, then growing bark all in a matter of seconds. Sudenly the edges of the wall bent backwards enlongating behind him, about ten feet, making a cave like structure. All of this happened in little segments of one foot, continueously. He jumped back as he heard a crackling sound, A Raiton Jutsu bursting through the end of the Colclave he had made.
" Graaaah!!!!" The Jinjuuriki yelled, it's eyes glowing Blue. It let out a roar that Sent Okuribi Flying backwards, into a tree. " Grahhh!!! " It roared again, running forward, at it's slow pace, it's mouth Glowing with Raiton chakra. it seemed about ready to fire a ball of Raiton directly at Okuribi.
" ..." Okuribi said, picking himself out of the Tree, little splinters in his body, but it didn't seem to phase him, he sighed picking out a couple of them, he Made some handsigns, and sighed again, returning to his picking. Many Bamboo Blades apeaered infront of him. All five of them were connected to the ground, and each one had five growing out of it, making a weird kind of tree looking structure.
The Jinjuuriki fired the Raiton ball, it connected with the Forward points of the Bamboo Blades, Destroying all thirty of the Blades, but Discharging into the Ground. The jinjuuriki yelled in anger, and started to run at Okuribi, still at it's slow pace.
" Wasted the Chakra seed... " He said, reffering to the jutsu he had placed earlier onto the Jinjuuriki, right before killing it's teammates infront of it. " ... " Okuribi said, finishing his plucking as the Jinjuuriki popped up onto his little ledge Okuribi sighed, this one was stupider than he had expected, but then again it was a Giant slug. " ..." he said, moving his hands blindingly fast, faster than the Rokubi jinjuuriki could comprehend, so it just looked like he moved his arms up and made a blur with his hands. Suudenly a large tree sprouted out of the existing tree, and hit the Jinjuuriki square in the stomach, exactly as it connected, branches formed around the Host, Making evading impossible. It began draining away the Chakra that surrounded the Host. " ..." Okuribi said, making more handsigns, Wooden pillars coming out and binding the host to the Tree. "... " Okuribi said, watching as the tree gained more chakra, and the Host was starting to lose more and more of it's cloak.
" Grahhh!!!!! Grahh Grah... Gra... Gr... " The Host said, it's cloak almost completely gone. It's eyes began to return to the normal white, and it began to struggle less. In a last attempt to Free itself, It shot out Poison gas, enveloping the Tree and Okuribi with it.
Okuribi, not knowing what the Expelled gas was, Held the breath he had, and made some handsigns, He jumped through the air, over the Tree, and out of the Gases. He gasped for breath, having exhaled directly before the gas was expelled. " Stupid Demon... You're about to die... " he said, his jutsu activating, Bamboo blades shooting up through the Chakra tree, pinning the Demon host to the tree, it didn't hit any vital organs what so ever, but only because the leader, using the pill technique told him not to kill it at the last second, Okuribi had been filling in the leader the entire time, and the Leader had been listening. " Understood... " Okuribi said, obtaining the order to begin transport. He moved his hands a bit more, canceling all the jutsu he had used before. the Binding Pillars set it on the ground, the wounds of the Bamboo blades already begining to heal. " ..." Okuribi said, making more handsigns, Binding pillars appearing and wrapping around theHost, making it immobile. Also a shield of wood, exactly like the first one he created appeared around the Host. Okuribi sighed, and made another Shield, this time the opposite way from the first, both wrapped around the Demon host, Okuribi sat down for a scond to catch his breath, he was starting to run low on chakra. He stood up again, Figuring he had enough chakra to finish this. He created two Wood clones, and then two more, all four of which were incomplete, and were only Legs, but their Heads were on each side, Making the Capsule able to walk, and see in four directions, Front, back, left, and right. Okuribi sighed, he hadn't taken that fight seriously enough, but no matter, next time he would be sure to obtain more info than it was the jinjuuriki. " March. " He said, pointing towards the Hideout, The Capsule took off, slowly, but easily enough, since it had perfect stamina. it never had to stop moving, and right now it was slow enough He could catch it easily, but that would have to wait, He still had to fix the area. He sat down and took a deep breath, and exhaled, he then stood up and began Recreating the Forest as it had been. Lastly, he walked up to the tree that he had flown into because of the Jinjuuriki's roar attack. He moved his hands quickly, making the Barrier, it moved seamlessly into place, hiding the hole. " Good... " He said, sighing and catching the capsule, sitting on it, he took out some food and began eating, then he laid down and slowly drifted off into sleep.
~ Miles away ~
" I'm sorry Okuribi, but I could not allow myself to have my thoughts read. " The real Leader said, standing next to his Katon clone that had eaten the Pill. He dispelled the Katon clone, the pill incinerating as it turned into flames. " Good job, You won't have to find another one for a while. " The Leader said, smiling at the success of capturing one of the jinjuuriki.
( Also if it doesn't bother anyone, I'm using the actual Rokubi's Jinjuuriki, not this Guild's version
I only did this because I decided it is Bloodline head once I hit Chunnin or nothing... And I don't like nothing...)
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Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 7:16 pm
Cobra_X Vexin_Dono i edited it and fixed the spelling and i donated 10k to blue already so i think im covered there do you approve it now or do i need to try again
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Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 8:38 pm
Vexin_Dono i edited it and fixed the spelling
I'm not saying the RP was bad, but it needs to be a of a higher caliber to be approved. I would suggest you try for a different Bloodline. (I really hope this doesn't sound too harsh...)
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Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 9:06 pm
Zetsu... I'm looking for 1 thing in your Info Section that is a major part of mokuton.. Once it is there I will say Accepted... Adding a longer rp sample wont help when I told you the problem remains in your Info Section.
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