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 Posted: Tue Jun 14, 2011 1:21 am
Kagetsukiko XSK Ambrosia Shadow Cape Coffin: Hmm…. Good point sweatdrop . Sorry…. Umm…. Accepted 3nodding . Eyes of Abyss: Yes, that would be much more understandable. Now then, on to judging the skill. I think it's alright. Makes sense for people to have darkness as an element to be able to learn how to passively see in the dark. Put in the edits and if I can understand it, it'll most likely be accepted. Immortal Solstice: That sounds good. Add that in and I think it'll be alright. The Urban Superstition Erm…. 10 strength for D-rank energy? Even if it is at S-rank, that seems a bit much for me burning_eyes . I'd suggest increasing the energy cost for the stronger versions. It doesn't need to be every rank, just every other rank would be good. I'm assuming, since I can't seem to find the original strength/speed of psychomancers, that the class generally isn't very strong because of their inability to take physical attacks. With that, B-rank energy to get 10 strength to lift/pull objects should be fair… right sweatdrop ? Hiro_Uzaki Who are you confused ? Lols, jk xd . What's the extent of confusion and can you specify it in your skill description? When I was reading the skill, I was thinking of a slight, momentary confusion. Kind of like how when you forget what you're doing in the kitchen for a bit but then remember that you're inside to get a bottle of water. Basically, the kind that leaves the target open for just a moment. From the looks of your sample, though, it's a lot more. It looks like it causes some serious short-term amnesia o_O . Another thing, why Athena? Isn't she one of the maiden goddesses? A bit ironic, no? You can they get some sort of short term amnesia. Also I like irony, its exciting. xd jk, Athena was the Goddess of Love in Greek myths. So natually she is the the epitome of the Succubus/Incubus BL.
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Posted: Tue Jun 14, 2011 4:47 am
((@ Hiro, Athena was the goddess of wisdom/ knowledge and to a lesser degree war. Aphrodite was the goddess of love.))
Username: wolf4life13
RPC name: Kuro Usagi
Is it a Free skill?: No
Type of skill: Water element
Skill name: Red Streaming
Rank: E
If it uses ammo how much:
Limits: Waktu
Skill description: Allows the user to manipulate blood the same way as water so long as it is not in a person's body. Mainly used for collecting or drawing without touch.
Sample: (heading to work I'll add the sample later.)
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Posted: Tue Jun 14, 2011 10:58 am
Hiro_Uzaki First of all, read wolf's post, he basically said what I was going to say xd . Now then, on to your skill.... Umm.... Well, before that, what do you mean by your first line? I can't make heads or tails of it sweatdrop . wolf4life13 Thank you for pointing that out 3nodding . I think I'll wait for the sample. Also, just to clarify, this skill can't be combined with a water element attack to create a blood-version of it, right? An example would be putting an extra E-rank amount of energy into Water Spout when you have a lot of blood around you to use that blood and create a Blood Spout. SorceressJacklyn Umm.... Not sure on this one, especially since I can feel some bias creeping up on me.... If this was a skill for a specific summon, I'd be alright with it, but.... Truthfully, I'd suggest asking another crew member to look this over, I don't feel I'll be able to judge fairly sweatdrop . Now, to make sure my stuff doesn't get lost.... Alright, I admit, my ranks are probably screwed up. I'm willing to change them, just tell me what I should change them to. Username: Kagetsukiko RPC name: Nai Free skill: None of these are. Type of skill: Chaos Skill name: Chaotic Energy Rank: - Limits: Must somehow be able to control chaos through either a talent, bloodline, sin, etc.. Must know at least 5 chaos skills. Skill description: A passive skill that comes naturally after learning at least five chaos skills, Chaotic Energy is present when the chaos within the user reaches the point where it effects the way their energy is seen. It causes the energy to relay absolutely no concrete information (ex: class, rank, sins). Energy sensors will still be able to sense the affected person's energy. However, the energy will be such a mixed up mess that they will be unable to extract any information out of it. At most, they will know that something is unusual with the user. However, what this abnormality is will be unknown as the messed-up patterns of energy hint at nothing. Sample: Without fear, Nai passed by the notorious sin hunter. Even when he glanced suspiciously at the girl, she made no sign of fear. She knew that he would soon turn away, and he did turn away. Her energy was interesting, she wouldn't deny that. However, it was also nothing like that of a sin host, or anything else for that matter. Type of skill: Chaos Skill name: Fragmented Senses Rank: D Limits: Must somehow be able to control chaos through either a talent, bloodline, sin, etc.. Must firmly and surely touch the target, no glancing touches. A direct touch is not needed (ex: touching a power suit with the target inside still messes up the target's senses). Skill description: Fragmented Senses is a skill that uses chaos to mess with the target's physical senses rather than their energy. With a firm touch, doesn't matter how long the touch lasts, the user can completely mix up all of the senses (including the ability to sense energy and other miscellaneous senses) of their target for three posts. The target will still be able to see, hear, taste, feel, and smell clearly. However, everything they sense will be mixed up. The first post of this effect will be the most confusing, as it will feel as if the target could hear tastes, see feelings, and other such nonsense. By the second post, this confusion will have worn out but the senses will still be mixed up. Now, even though they've managed to match up everything, everything is in the wrong place. Sometimes, something heard on the left side will actually be on the left side but other times it would actually be on the right side. Things seen in one spot, could be in that spot or in a completely different area of the target's vision. The target might feel a rock with their chest, but it might actually be felt with the left hand or the right side of the head or it really could have been felt with the chest. Sample: Nai dodged the weapon master's broadsword as she came in close. Grasping her opponent's shoulder firmly, the girl vaulted over his head while simultaneously using the Fragmented Senses skill as she endured the pain that suddenly shot up her right leg as it was brutally slashed. A burst of chaos shot through the target's body, and completely mixed up his senses. For several moments, he stood there, completely confused about everything around him. Taking the chance, Nai prepared for an attack and aimed several bullets at the opponent. By the time she reached him, the opponent had gotten used to hearing what he saw and whatnot. However, there was another layer to the skill, one that Nai's target obviously did not know about yet as he dodged… the wrong way. Instead of dodging to the side as he should have, the opponent apparently thought that the bullets were coming from his side and so he leaned back. Admittedly, though, the move did save his life. Rather than hitting him in the heart and lungs, Nai's bullets simply lodged themselves in his shoulders. Still, it was a lot better than having him dodge completely. Best of all for the weapon master, the confused pain made him extremely suspicious and before Nai could get in another round of shots, her target had surrounded himself in a vortex of wind that her bullets couldn't penetrate. Type of skill: Chaos Skill name: Touch of Disruption Rank: C Limits: Must somehow be able to control chaos through either a talent, bloodline, sin, etc.. Must directly touch the target for at least one whole post (must touch a body part such as skin or hair) Skill description: After directly touching the target for an entire post (two posts for berserkers), it is possible to throw their muscles into disorder, thus preventing them from using their muscles at all for three entire posts (not including the post that the target is touched). To be more exact, the target will collapse from whatever position they were in and be unable to move at all. Consequently, they will also be unable to use any skills that require physical movement. However, they can still use skills that don't require physical movement (ex: most forms of magic). This skill can only be used twice in battle before the target's energy becomes temporarily immune. Sample: Nai was finding the trickster she was squaring off against extremely hard to hit. As a result, she let the trickster hit her and took the chance to firmly grip onto him, digging the blade of her knife into him to make sure he couldn't escape. The girl only needed several seconds. Gripping onto his bare wrist, the girl began to send chaos into him. However, before long, he managed to break free and ran off once more. Nevertheless, the skill had been successful. Mid-stride, the trickster suddenly crumpled onto the ground, unable to get his muscles, which were now like jelly, to do anything. Nai immediately moved to take advantage of the situation and shot several bullets at her target. However, seeing as only the tricksters muscles were damaged, he was free to erect an elemental shield. As Nai's bullets approached, an earthern wall erupted from the ground, stopping her attack in its tracks.
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Posted: Tue Jun 14, 2011 1:27 pm
Username: wolf4life13
RPC name: Kuro Usagi
Is it a Free skill?: No
Type of skill: Water magic
Skill name: Water draw
Rank: D
If it uses ammo how much: N/A
Limits: Water streaming, Waktu
Skill description: User is able to draw with water or things that are mostly water and in a liquid state from a distance. This is a slightly more complex form of streaming used by Kuro to draw with blood or gather blood but it only works on blood that has been shed not blood in a body.
Sample: Kuro hissed as he heard gunshots and ducked back behind cover moments before bullets whizzed through the air where his head had been moments before. He squinted at the dead body lying just out of reach and further across an alley to his machine that was too slow to cross the alley mouth unless he could speed it up with his blood script. Biting his lip he stood and moved further behind the wall before stretching out his energy and pulling on the blood seeping out of the corpse. As he did the scarlet fluid stirred before rising upwards like a serpent and flowing towards him before a shifting forward of his body and hand directed it across the alley to the machine. Several bullets struck the stream scattering minor parts of it before it reached the machine and drew a simple outline. Once done he twisted his right hand and activated the blood script. It glowed red on his machine before he pointed and the machine shot across the alley fast enough that it was only clipped by a bullet to reach his side.
(I hope that description change clarifies that this is only a variation of streaming and not a supplemental technique to use blood as water. Though that is something I had considered working on at higher levels.)
Username: wolf4life13
RPC name: Kuro Usagi
Is it a Free skill?: No
Type of skill: Water magic
Skill name: Water Needles
Rank: D
If it uses ammo how much: N/A
Limits: Water streaming
Skill description: User is able to form water into a half dozen needles and fire them at an opponent. This is a very fast paced attack once the needles form that can be done from any angle or held over extra posts by paying E rank energy each post to release them later. Needles are only as strong as wood.
Sample: Kuro shifted as he looked at the puddle on the floor that was all the water he had been able to gather in his time imprisoned, it was not enough to do any spectacular techniques but it was just enough to provide a nasty surprise. Shaping them with his energy into six needles he lifted the needles into the air and held them above the doorway as he heard his captives coming to check on him. Moving away from the door he watched as the two men entered the room before he glanced upwards. As both men looked upwards as well the needles shot downwards and stabbed into their eyes even as Kuro dashed forward and pushed past the two towards freedom.
Username: wolf4life13
RPC name: Demitrius Weaver
Is it a Free skill?: No
Type of skill: Earth magic
Skill name: Stoning
Rank: B
If it uses ammo how much: N/A
Limits: Stone Rock Levitation, Adept
Skill description: User is able to levitate and control up to a dozen fist sized stones for three posts moving them without hand gestures. This has offensive and defensive purposes but the stones can only be moved where the user can see. This skill can be extended an extra 3 turns by paying A rank energy and a final 3 turns by paying S rank energy. After this skill is used it has a cool down period equal to how long it was active.
Sample: Demitrius ground his teeth as he worked on figuring out how to take out the vermin swarming into the tunnel. They were not tough but they were small and numerous, as he considered that he decided to try an attack that was the same. Focusing his energy he lifted a dozen fist sized stone and sent them hurtling towards the rodents aiming at skulls and after the first strikes sweeping back around to strike others. Even as he worked to counteract the swarm he could feel the strain of controlling the stones weighing more and more heavily upon him.
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Posted: Thu Jun 16, 2011 12:43 pm
Username: Ambro
RPC name: Makyo Nagareboshi
Is it a Free skill?: Nope
Type of skill: For Any Class
Skill name: Life through Death
Rank: D-rank
Limits: Must have a telent similar to Makyo's that gives life to trees.
Skill description: This technique is not really for attacking at all. You need a seed or various seeds, and can plant them on the ground, then accelerate the pace of their growth and make actual large trees with your own energy. More than 5 seeds cost the energy of a C-rank, and you cannot accelerate the growth of more then 10 seeds. It can be used simply to "create life" or make even a wall of nature itself if used with the proper plants. The beauty of this technique is up to the user.
Sample: After Makyo's arrival back to his home of Kranila, he looked at the beautiful, yet lone place that would be his home. He had 9 Cherry blossom tree seeds, and another mysterious seed he had found from a great tree. He planted them on the ground in distinct areas, as he used his Life through Death technique, and they all started growing at accelerated ways, and beautiful cheery blossom trees came out of the ground, and a wooden tree home was made right in a tree itself. Makyo felt happy and warm inside that he had even made a home, but all natural through his own abilities.
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Username: Ambro
RPC name: Makyo Nagareboshi
Is it a Free skill?: Nope
Type of skill: Any Class
Skill name: Master of Nature
Rank: SS-rank
Limits: Must have an ability at least similar to Makyo taht gives life to trees.
Skill description: Can use the roots and vines of any trees within 50 feet of himself, and manipulate them to hit, tackle, slash, trap, or multiple things against the enemy. This ability lasts 3 posts, and is extremely deadly. The user can control up to 100 vines, roots, and branches. It can tear the enemy apart the same as even just shake a branch so the flower petals float downward in a beautiful motiong. Truly many things can be done with this technique, and it also very deadly. The beauty of this technique, depends on the threat. It is mostly used against multiple enemies or just one really fast one, since vines and roots have about 12 speed.
Sample: Makyo is unmoving in front of a battlefield that he trees all around it, and a werewolf pack of 50 werewolf adepts surround him thinking they have the upper chance to win against him. The surround him greatly, and look at him only, as the crach os the roots against the dirt start to sound, and the branches of the trees start to move, and they look around wondering what the hell was happening since Makyo hadn't even moved on simple finger. Makyo stay standing there, as one by one the branches took his enemies up and ripped them to shreds with only their screams being heard. Makyo then slowly whispered "You should've never attacked my nation.... I wish I really didn't have to kill you, but you destroyed everything that is near and dear to me." and with that all the werewolves started running for their lives, as Makyo now moved his head to look downward, feeling the branches and tress moving as they took his enemies and destroyed them. Only a bloody field was left now of the werewolves that attacked his home.
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Posted: Thu Jun 16, 2011 12:57 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 16, 2011 1:41 pm
wolf4life13 Water draw: Ermm.... Your second sentence is a bit confusing. I think I get what you're trying to say, but could you edit it so I can be sure sweatdrop ? Also, I can understand why you'd want Water Draw to be only for Waktus but I think I'll have to ask you to allow it for all races. If you want, you can make it so that only Waktus can draw blood, but that's it. Water Needles: This is the skill that made makes Water Draw necessary for all classes. I see nothing about Water Needles that makes it usable only be Waktus. However, it's limit of needing to know Water Streaming restricts it to only Waktus. While this attack isn't very strong or covers a very wide area, I'm going to have to say this is more of a C-rank attack because of its speed and versatility. Furthermore, last I checked, water was more of a defensive element. Having something offensive like sharp needles as a D-rank move doesn't seem right for a defensive element. Besides, even if they're only wood, those needles still hurt. Stoning: Approved. Ambrosia: I didn't quote you because I didn't want to attract your attention needlessly and because I didn't want to make it seem that I judged your stuff. For Life Through Death, I'm not sure whether or not the type of plant should also effect the energy. I mean, look at the difference between a sequoia and a fern. Furthermore, when I consider how useful this skill can be for you next one well.... Let's just say that a sequoia, despite needing only the same amount of energy to grow as a fern, will be a lot more useful. For Master of Nature, I'm not good at judging S-rank stuff in general. To me, a good number of them seem op, even if they're not sweatdrop . As a result, I'll leave your stuff up to another crew member (whoever else is in charge of custom skills) to check, sorry sweatdrop . Just to make sure... I DID NOT CHECK XSK AMBROSIA'S SKILLS. COULD SOMEONE ELSE PLEASE CHECK THEM?
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Posted: Thu Jun 16, 2011 6:00 pm
wolf4life13 Username: wolf4life13 RPC name: Kuro Usagi Is it a Free skill?: No Type of skill: Water magic Skill name: Water draw Rank: D If it uses ammo how much: N/A Limits: Water streaming Skill description: User is able to draw with water or things that are mostly water and in a liquid state from a distance. This can be used on things like blood, soda, juice, etc. It was developed by Waktu to draw with blood or gather blood but it only works on blood that has been shed not blood in a body. Sample: Kuro hissed as he heard gunshots and ducked back behind cover moments before bullets whizzed through the air where his head had been moments before. He squinted at the dead body lying just out of reach and further across an alley to his machine that was too slow to cross the alley mouth unless he could speed it up with his blood script. Biting his lip he stood and moved further behind the wall before stretching out his energy and pulling on the blood seeping out of the corpse. As he did the scarlet fluid stirred before rising upwards like a serpent and flowing towards him before a shifting forward of his body and hand directed it across the alley to the machine. Several bullets struck the stream scattering minor parts of it before it reached the machine and drew a simple outline. Once done he twisted his right hand and activated the blood script. It glowed red on his machine before he pointed and the machine shot across the alley fast enough that it was only clipped by a bullet to reach his side. (I hope that description change clarifies that this is only a variation of streaming and not a supplemental technique to use blood as water. Though that is something I had considered working on at higher levels.) Username: wolf4life13 RPC name: Kuro Usagi Is it a Free skill?: No Type of skill: Water magic Skill name: Water Needles Rank: C If it uses ammo how much: N/A Limits: Water streaming Skill description: User is able to form water into a half dozen needles and fire them at an opponent. This is a very fast paced attack once the needles form that can be done from any angle or held over extra posts by paying E rank energy each post to release them later. Needles are only as strong as wood. Sample: Kuro shifted as he looked at the puddle on the floor that was all the water he had been able to gather in his time imprisoned, it was not enough to do any spectacular techniques but it was just enough to provide a nasty surprise. Shaping them with his energy into six needles he lifted the needles into the air and held them above the doorway as he heard his captives coming to check on him. Moving away from the door he watched as the two men entered the room before he glanced upwards. As both men looked upwards as well the needles shot downwards and stabbed into their eyes even as Kuro dashed forward and pushed past the two towards freedom. Username: wolf4life13 RPC name: Demitrius Weaver Is it a Free skill?: No Type of skill: Earth magic Skill name: Stoning Rank: B If it uses ammo how much: N/A Limits: Stone Rock Levitation, Adept Skill description: User is able to levitate and control up to a dozen fist sized stones for three posts moving them without hand gestures. This has offensive and defensive purposes but the stones can only be moved where the user can see. This skill can be extended an extra 3 turns by paying A rank energy and a final 3 turns by paying S rank energy. After this skill is used it has a cool down period equal to how long it was active. Sample: Demitrius ground his teeth as he worked on figuring out how to take out the vermin swarming into the tunnel. They were not tough but they were small and numerous, as he considered that he decided to try an attack that was the same. Focusing his energy he lifted a dozen fist sized stone and sent them hurtling towards the rodents aiming at skulls and after the first strikes sweeping back around to strike others. Even as he worked to counteract the swarm he could feel the strain of controlling the stones weighing more and more heavily upon him. Edited however water needles requires water streaming which is the E rank skill required for all water techniques not water draw. I removed the Waktu requirement from water draw but I wanted to emphasize that I did not make this set free skills because they are special to how my characters fight.
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Posted: Thu Jun 16, 2011 7:43 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 16, 2011 7:45 pm
XSK Ambrosia Username: Ambro RPC name: Makyo Nagareboshi Is it a Free skill?: Nope Type of skill: For Any Class Skill name: Life through Death Rank: D-rank Limits: Must have a telent similar to Makyo's that gives life to trees. Skill description: This technique is not really for attacking at all. You need a seed or various seeds, and can plant them on the ground, then accelerate the pace of their growth and make actual large trees with your own energy. More than 5 seeds cost the energy of a C-rank, and you cannot accelerate the growth of more then 10 seeds. It can be used simply to "create life" or make even a wall of nature itself if used with the proper plants. The beauty of this technique is up to the user. Sample: After Makyo's arrival back to his home of Kranila, he looked at the beautiful, yet lone place that would be his home. He had 9 Cherry blossom tree seeds, and another mysterious seed he had found from a great tree. He planted them on the ground in distinct areas, as he used his Life through Death technique, and they all started growing at accelerated ways, and beautiful cheery blossom trees came out of the ground, and a wooden tree home was made right in a tree itself. Makyo felt happy and warm inside that he had even made a home, but all natural through his own abilities. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Username: Ambro RPC name: Makyo Nagareboshi Is it a Free skill?: Nope Type of skill: Any Class Skill name: Master of Nature Rank: SS-rank Limits: Must have an ability at least similar to Makyo taht gives life to trees. Skill description: Can use the roots and vines of any trees within 50 feet of himself, and manipulate them to hit, tackle, slash, trap, or multiple things against the enemy. This ability lasts 3 posts, and is extremely deadly. The user can control up to 200 vines, roots, and branches. It can tear the enemy apart the same as even just shake a branch so the flower petals float downward in a beautiful motiong. Truly many things can be done with this technique, and it also very deadly. The beauty of this technique, depends on the threat. It is mostly used against multiple enemies or just one really fast one, since vines and roots have about 12 speed. Sample: Makyo is unmoving in front of a battlefield that he trees all around it, and a werewolf pack of 50 werewolf adepts surround him thinking they have the upper chance to win against him. The surround him greatly, and look at him only, as the crach os the roots against the dirt start to sound, and the branches of the trees start to move, and they look around wondering what the hell was happening since Makyo hadn't even moved on simple finger. Makyo stay standing there, as one by one the branches took his enemies up and ripped them to shreds with only their screams being heard. Makyo then slowly whispered " You should've never attacked my nation.... I wish I really didn't have to kill you, but you destroyed everything that is near and dear to me." and with that all the werewolves started running for their lives, as Makyo now moved his head to look downward, feeling the branches and tress moving as they took his enemies and destroyed them. Only a bloody field was left now of the werewolves that attacked his home. The first one is accepted. Second one...200 roots...>.>...I think that is overkill. How about a smaller number...a much...much...smaller number.
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Posted: Thu Jun 16, 2011 7:48 pm
100 is the most I can lower it. It is an SS-rank skill after all.
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Posted: Thu Jun 16, 2011 11:06 pm
Chilling2 Username: chilling2 RPC name: Kora Summer Is it a Free skill?: Free Type of skill: Cleric/Paladin Skill name: Holy chains Rank: C Skill description: Enemys, wanted men, and opponents usually don't want to be captured without a fight. Furthermore, in the name of the lord, clerics and sometimes even paladins don't want to hurt them, but have to in order to defeat and bring their targets to justice. But this can be changed with the wave of a hand; the holy class can create a bright yellow chain made from their own holy energy. After taking one full post of remaining still to charge up the energy for the spell, the user can move the chains around at will to wrap around the target that needs to be hold down. Only a person with a strength of 8 or higher can brake free. Also, because the chain is holy, it can weaken any unholy (ex: necromancer) person's strength down by 1, making it much harder to break free. The victim will only feel a slight burn but will not suffer from any physical damage. Once restrained, the person can neither attack nor be attacked because of the chains both restrain and protect the person. Sample: There been some mean man just that are missing up peoples stand. They been doing this some time now and not even the guards could stop them. " Please, stop what are you doing! I'm warning you." Kora tried to stop them from destroying the citizens shop stand. The man just pushed her away as he tour the sigh and bite down on the fallen food from the stand. He wasn't paying any attention of a starring hatred look from all the citizen eying on him. Who ever tried to make a move, he would just punch the lights out of them. He's 7 1/2 feet tail, having the giants exstream strength that is helping him to get away with everything. Though there's always a way to hold down this big boy. Having just enough, Kora decided to caster her skill. She holded up her pointed to the man at the far and gather up her energy. chains shooted out of her hands in it brightly color ad wrap it around the giant. Of course he got startle and tried to brake free with his grate strength. luckily he wasn't that strong as she thought. He fell over to the floor as the chains also gotten his legs and arms, unable to move. " You can take him away now, guards." She said as they gather around from the fallen man. Doing team work, them carry the giant out of the area and head over to prison so he doesn't do this again. Chilling2 RPC name: Kora Summer Is it a Free skill?: No Type of skill: Non Skill name: Helping Hand Rank: B Limits: Transport Portal or has a strong connection to people (like seer's) Skill description: When crying out for help, there may be times when it seems like no one can hear you. However, you are never truly alone if you have someone in your heart to protect you. Thus, shouldn't this person always come to you when ever in you are trouble? Many times you would be separated from your protector, leaving yourself vulnerable. Therefore, when in doubt, call for help! It may be seem dramatic but it should work. Hold out one of your hands, stretching out in the air for someone to grab. Send out a message to your friends, people you know that can help. Wherever they may be in the world, you will be able to send a faint image of your hand reaching out for them (any amount of people), for people you know are strong and willing to help you. If the person agrees to protect you and grabs your hand, they will be taken away from wherever they are and appear right in front of you, holding your hand and ready to protect you. Now you have a buddy to help you. Although, the person you're asking for help must be above Novice since a weak rank won't be able to be transported. Also, this can only work once a month (real life). Sample: Kora has gotten captured and badly harmed on the way, locking her up in a cell with metal chains attach on her hands. She still can move around the cell, but solid metal she can not get herself free from. Even if she could got out, there's still a lot of men she would have to get threw. Kora is no fighter, she's just a healer. All alone, even at master rank, she wouldn't be able to win. She doesn't know if anyone would be able to find her. It seam like the men did a well job of covering any tracks or sent of Kora wile taking her away. It's been days now that she been taken. Did anyone even notice that she hasn't return to the city? What can she do? Kora reached out her hand, calling out to the lord. " Please.... Lord please help me... I wish to get out of here. I don't want to take it any longer... Please... help... " She said lowly in her voice, calling out to be rescue from her pity in this caged place. She didn't realize that she was sending a message to all the people out there. the people that she knows that it. Soon Kora notice a hand appeared to her hand. Not just one, but 8! Mayko, Srin, Yensen, Cherry, Liliana, Cain, Conner, and Rachel appeared once grabbed hold onto Kora's hand. They all stood there as a group with all hands together like a team work. " Do not worry... We are here." Cherry finally said among the group. Now she has someone to help her.
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Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2011 5:02 am
Influence Life
Rank: B
The Psychomancer has opened a new gateway of skills. These skills are based solely on helping your allies and making life difficult for your enemies. This is strictly a passive skill that unlocks other skills. It does nothing. It can't be directly used in battle, or out for that matter.
Increase Metabolism
Requires:Influence Life
Rank: C
The Psychomancer will use their energy to influence their own, or another's metabolism, giving them both regenitive capabilities, and a higher speed (+1) Whomever it's used on, they'll be hungry afterwards. Lasts 10 posts. Can't regenerate anything serious like lost limbs or organs. Cuts, scrapes, an bruises are about it. It can highly enhance someone who already has regenitive capabilities, making their healing time cost half.
Pump Energy
Requires: Influence Life
Rank: A
The Psychomancer will preserve someone on the brink of death by pumping energy from the surroundings, through themselves, and through someone else. This doesn't heal them. It doesn't revive them from the dead. It's only use is to keep someone alive long enough for real aid to arrive. It can only be used consecutively, 5 times, and has an equal cool down time for however long you used it.
^^^Obviously Psychomancer skills
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Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2011 10:12 am
Chilling2 Uwah! Sorry, didn't know you'd put up a skill >_< ! Holy chains: Well, hmm.... Chill, judging from you description, you're only expecting this to restrain and not to open the enemy up to further attacks, right? Or are you also going to allow people to restrain the enemy and then attack them? If it's the former, then I suggest putting in that once the that is restrained, they can't be attacked. Helping Hand: Other than grammar and spelling, I see nothing wrong with it. Accepted 3nodding . Now, as for the grammar corrections, how's the one below? Did I manage to fix it without mangling anything? When crying out for help, there may be times when it seems like no one can hear you. However, you are never truly alone if you have someone in your heart to protect you. Thus, shouldn't this person always come to you when ever in you are trouble? Many times you would be separated from your protector, leaving yourself vulnerable. Therefore, when in doubt, call for help! It may be seem dramatic but it should work. Hold out one of your hands, stretching out in the air for someone to grab. Send out a message to your friends, people you know that can help. Wherever they may be in the world, you will be able to send a faint image of your hand reaching out for them (any amount of people), for people you know are strong and willing to help you. If the person agrees to protect you and grabs your hand, they will be taken away from wherever they are and appear right in front of you, holding your hand and ready to protect you. Now you have a buddy to help you. Although, the person you're asking for help must be above Novice since a weak rank won't be able to be transported. Also, this can only work once a month (real life). Urban: Right, since this opens up a completely new branch of skills for psychomancers, I'm going to ask Neko to look this over. Sorry sweatdrop .
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Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2011 1:15 pm
Alright, how is it know? >.>
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