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Chapter Forty is, after all this time, finally up and ready for reading.

Ew! Ew ew ew!!!! Ick!

It was FABULOUS!!!! heart

One small thing... "but was knocked back my the necromancer's free hand." Shouldn't that be "by the necromancer's free hand"?

YAYdeathanddestruction. Sexy, Gendou. Love it.

OMG. Best. Chapter. EVER. *_* I'mstillreadingI'mstillreadingdon'tstopwritingyetomgno. heart

Because of two things, Katane.

1: He still has a role to play according to Gendou's plans.
2: Gendou's ******** with him.

Now, as to what role he has left to play, I've only got a couple guesses. But it seems like the wound in his leg will be important somehow; perhaps Gendou left a poison or some sort of blight that will either control DV somehow or affect his perceptions. Or it will cripple him at a crucial moment.

I'm not sure, but I can't wait to find out. heart

Despite the fact that you horribly and brutually murdered me and one of my favorite comrades in a most undesirable way, I still love your story and your descriptions, Gendou. heart

Natas.... crying

A couple of quick literary points:

I'm not too sure about the grammar here: "far too much force than."

I think it ought to be something like, "Natas flew through the air and slammed against the far wall with far too much force for Gendou's gaunt form to possibly have generated naturally."

Or, "Natas flew through the air and slammed against the far wall with far more force than Gendou's gaunt form could possibly have generated naturally."

Superlative/comparative distinction.

I can accept that, "way," could be applicable, but quoted just in case you meant, "away."

Still, a nice, long very cool chapter. And a dragon. Nice to see he took the werewolf destruction so personally as to prevent Ally from hurting them. 3nodding

Poor ol' Ananel. I suppose Kia and Natas deserve some sympathy, but really, they were fated to die by Gendou's hand.