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Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 4:07 pm
Woo-hoo! *does wiggle dance*
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2007 7:39 pm
As masaru was walking to the ramin shop, He suddenly saw two squirrals casing eachother along the street. When the squirrals ran away he remebered Vividly what happened today. He trained hard all day by throwing Kunai knifes around all the trees around him. He remebered he accidently threw a kunai at a innocent squirrel through the heart. Laying lifeless with a knife directly through the heart. Masaru couldnt help but to feel sorry for the poor creature. So he gave the squirral a proper Funural and said a couple of words, "He was a good squirral and i wish i didnt kill him." Then the image of the funural faded away once he smelled the scent of the ramin noodles.
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2007 5:36 am
eek
A rather interesting sample...
Can you do a more normal one? sweatdrop xd Note your caps!
edit: Updated graduates so yeah.
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2007 3:50 pm
((Note my caps? What do you mean?))
Masaru was seating at the ramin shop then suddenly he noticed a very cute girl. He observed that she was wearing a sand village headband. He usually wouldnt have interest with a girl from another village because it would cause too much trouble but he couldnt help it. Masaru smirked,
" 1 egg noodle ramin plz, and one special ramin for this lady."
He looked smiled at the pretty young lady from Sunagakure. Smiling back the girl moved her spot to seat next to him. Masaru asked, "You come here often?"
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2007 7:03 pm
Japster As masaru was walking to the ramin shop, He suddenly saw two squirrals casing eachother along the street. When the squirrals ran away he remebered Vividly what happened today. He trained hard all day by throwing Kunai knifes around all the trees around him. He remebered he accidently threw a kunai at a innocent squirrel through the heart. Laying lifeless with a knife directly through the heart. Masaru couldnt help but to feel sorry for the poor creature. So he gave the squirral a proper Funural and said a couple of words, "He was a good squirral and i wish i didnt kill him." Then the image of the funural faded away once he smelled the scent of the ramin noodles. Its just those ones in red. You have Caps where you don't need them and your missing caps in areas you need them.
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 4:07 am
rp sample: Deciding that my room would be the wrong place to battle with Moraion, I waited atop the roof. Once again I felt his hand on my shoulder. Not allowing him to do anything else, I elbowed him in the gut, took the knife he was planning to stick me with, and held it to his throat. "No, Triox." He begged. "You wouldn't kill me would you? After all I've done for you--!" I stabbed him in the heart, not allowing him to finish. "That was for everything you've done to me!" I said as I withdrew the dagger and hurled him off the roof. I watched him fall to the ground. I felt relief... it was like all that pain had melted away. And Moraion... I wouldn't shed a single tear for that b*****d. I felt a large sense of accomplishment as if a large weight had been lifted from my shoulders. My blood was pulsing strongly through my body. Then the reality of it hit me: I just killed someone. That's what was causing this feeling. Murder was invigorating... In the excitement of it, I licked the knife once, wiping some blood off of it. No one would know I killed him. I had traveled down the path of darkness once again...
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 6:29 am
@Icheti and Japster: And the vividly as well :3
Pass! But uh.. keep in mind you can't godmod the girl unless she is an NPC..
@triox: eek You seem perfect for the bloody Mist! But that is like story telling >.< You are controlling that Moraion dude. Can you do one with just you?
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 8:09 am
@Kouri: I said it was some! emo I thought I was being a good little member by helping too. lol.
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 8:36 am
Indeed! ^-^' And I thank you for that :3
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 8:59 am
*Makes a victory thumb pose*OKAY!!!
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 6:17 pm
Kool. Thanks. It proud to be a graducate of this ademeny.
*salutes*
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 2:12 pm
This is my RP sample. I hope this is to your satisfactory...
The smell of dead leaves filled the air, accompanied with the ringing symphony of screams filling the moist, humid night air.
"Its like music to my ears...." said Kazan as he twisted the kunai into the chest cavity of the fallen ninja. A younger ninja, clothed in black and red garb, was backed against the bark of a tree. The insanity of Kazan seeped into his mind and pounded his own humanity like a drum. Kazan saw this, and his smile twisted the same way all the others saw him smile just before they were gutted like the pigs Kazan saw them to be.
"Y'know...", Kazan said as his slowly walked to his new prey. " ...the final breath you take is like the finally note of a song...and the screams are like the orcestra playing..." He breathed deep and looked up at the black sky, he seemed to calm as he smelled the drying blood's salty aroma. The young ninja looked at him in petrified fear, wishing this nightmare would end.
Kazan looked down at his soon to be victim, "...prepare to play a solo boy...you're are going to play the finale of the night...", he said with a twisted, digusted voice. He charged laughing in a demented voice, and drew his kunai for the final song of the evening. The young ninja's screams filled the night, with a blood curdling shrill of pure terror. It was truely beautiful to Kazan as he conducted his symphony.
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 7:07 pm
eek
I think you would love Kirigakure.
Pass.
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 7:25 pm
It was a pleasure kouri-sensei. Thank you kindly..
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 10:08 pm
I'm not completely sure how to start this off. RP Sample:
Akio had been traing since dawn out in the forest. Eagerly preparing himself for his first day at the ninja academy. He was exhasted from all the push-ups, sit-ups, and jump ropes, drops of sweat tumbled down his face.
Akio took a deep sigh, "Ah man, I still have a lot of training to do if I'm tired already." He stretched for a few minutes then resumed his training.
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