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 Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2012 7:16 pm
ok is that a yes or a no.
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2012 7:18 pm
Doctor Rem ok is that a yes or a no. I think...I was pretty clear that you need to give him two more flaws before he can be approved. LoL
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2012 7:26 pm
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2012 7:31 pm
No.......... That list of flaws I gave you was trying to show you why they were wrong. I did not mean you needed to use the ones I gave. Those were summaries of the ones you already had. I'm sorry if I'm not being clear. But here. Go to this thread: Character FlawsRead through the whole thing carefully. Then select three flaws from there and add them to your profile. Then QUOTE me here so I will see that you've posted again. Thank you. And I really apologize if I'm being confusing. I'm not trying to be.
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2012 7:34 pm
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2012 7:35 pm
StrawberryZ0mbie Alrighty. I discussed this with the rest of the crew and we agree that she is still unbalanced. I'm pretty sure that while you did remove abilities, you added in more skills because I don't recall her previously being talented in music and sewing in addition to the others. I realize it's fun to play a really powerful, talented character but your character really just can't be skilled in everything. She can heal. Shapeshift partially, has enhanced senses, can still do some manipulation of shadows. And on top of that, she's a great artist, seamstress, musician and cook. She also has a photographic memory and knowledge of poisons, as well as being trained in a special form of hand to hand combat. I hope that by reading it you can understand that is just way too much. You really need to remove some of her non-magic skills. And it was suggested by the rest of the crew that you remove one of her magic skills as well. Honestly, given the nature of Rosentale, there's not a lot of need for such a powerful character. The only times any characters have showed off extreme powers was for a few random scenes where they power surged, then went back to normal. There is not a single other character that is this powerful and this talented all the time. Please consider how to balance her out and make her more realistic. She has only the bare minimum of flaws, so you really need to remove some of her talents and powers. ok. cut down on the skills/abilities
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2012 7:38 pm
xdarkxinnocencex StrawberryZ0mbie Alrighty. I discussed this with the rest of the crew and we agree that she is still unbalanced. I'm pretty sure that while you did remove abilities, you added in more skills because I don't recall her previously being talented in music and sewing in addition to the others. I realize it's fun to play a really powerful, talented character but your character really just can't be skilled in everything. She can heal. Shapeshift partially, has enhanced senses, can still do some manipulation of shadows. And on top of that, she's a great artist, seamstress, musician and cook. She also has a photographic memory and knowledge of poisons, as well as being trained in a special form of hand to hand combat. I hope that by reading it you can understand that is just way too much. You really need to remove some of her non-magic skills. And it was suggested by the rest of the crew that you remove one of her magic skills as well. Honestly, given the nature of Rosentale, there's not a lot of need for such a powerful character. The only times any characters have showed off extreme powers was for a few random scenes where they power surged, then went back to normal. There is not a single other character that is this powerful and this talented all the time. Please consider how to balance her out and make her more realistic. She has only the bare minimum of flaws, so you really need to remove some of her talents and powers. ok. cut down on the skills/abilities Okay! She looks good now. =3 I'm glad to see another character who likes to cook. Maybe she can hang out with Sethrian and Renivere since they like it as well. I'm going to go figure out which dorm she needs to go in. In the mean time, select a schedule for her and post up a thread in the accepted characters subforum. Also, I forgot to mention earlier, that I went into your post and edited your code to make the picture work for you. whee edit: She'll be in Sapphire Dorm. Today is also Saturday in the RP so there's no class and your character can roam wherever she likes.
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2012 7:41 pm
StrawberryZ0mbie xdarkxinnocencex StrawberryZ0mbie Alrighty. I discussed this with the rest of the crew and we agree that she is still unbalanced. I'm pretty sure that while you did remove abilities, you added in more skills because I don't recall her previously being talented in music and sewing in addition to the others. I realize it's fun to play a really powerful, talented character but your character really just can't be skilled in everything. She can heal. Shapeshift partially, has enhanced senses, can still do some manipulation of shadows. And on top of that, she's a great artist, seamstress, musician and cook. She also has a photographic memory and knowledge of poisons, as well as being trained in a special form of hand to hand combat. I hope that by reading it you can understand that is just way too much. You really need to remove some of her non-magic skills. And it was suggested by the rest of the crew that you remove one of her magic skills as well. Honestly, given the nature of Rosentale, there's not a lot of need for such a powerful character. The only times any characters have showed off extreme powers was for a few random scenes where they power surged, then went back to normal. There is not a single other character that is this powerful and this talented all the time. Please consider how to balance her out and make her more realistic. She has only the bare minimum of flaws, so you really need to remove some of her talents and powers. ok. cut down on the skills/abilities Okay! She looks good now. =3 I'm glad to see another character who likes to cook. Maybe she can hang out with Sethrian and Renivere since they like it as well. I'm going to go figure out which dorm she needs to go in. In the mean time, select a schedule for her and post up a thread in the accepted characters subforum. Also, I forgot to mention earlier, that I went into your post and edited your code to make the picture work for you. whee oh thank you so much! ok smile sorry it took forever sweatdrop more used to war type rps lol
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2012 7:44 pm
Character Information:
Student  Name: Sien O'Neil
Species: Vampire/ Elf
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Appearance description: 4'9 and silver eyes but pretty much the picture is all of the rest
Personality: Looks young but has a very wise mind. Listens much and tries to help with problems as much as possible. Is a romanticist and loves to feel free and happy. Hospitable to all and many. Doesn't expect anything back from anyone and accepts you for who you are. Practical at times and prefers to keep it that way. Change is not on his to do list but will change if there has to be change. Stubborn and once mind is set on what he wants to get done it will be done.
Bio: Sien never really got to know his parents because when he turned two they were killed. His mother Satrina, an Elf, and his father Augustine, a Vampire, where not allowed to be together because her family comes from a royal Elvin society. His father was a middle class worker. He worked in the palace where he met Satrina. Their love for one another was so strong that when they decided to confess to her father was the day they had become pregnant. Things didn't go as well planned but her father accepted it. Months went by and Sien had been born. Elizabeth the care-taker would always take Sien on walks late at night until one day they returned home to find that everyone was killed.
As time went by Elizabeth and Sien had restored the palace back to new and took in more people to work there. Sien never knew who his parents where and Elizabeth would tell him stories of them but not mentioning that the characters in her stories were really his mother and father. Elizabeth was always scared to tell him because she didn't want him to hate her. When Sien turned eight Elizabeth passed away. Sien saw no reason to stay at the palace anymore because his only true friend had moved on from the world leaving him in charge of everything. Sien then decided that he would leave and go find new livings and get away from that place where his memories wont be able to haunt him.
He came across this house that seemed normal but he heard the thought of many different demons and vampires so he decided to take a look. Transforming in to a beautiful black cat he went to go check out the place. Noriko caught him and thought he was a real cat and took him in and asked Shoji if she could keep him. But before Shoji could say yes Sien turned back into his original form which scared Nori and made Shoji angery. After Sien explained his reasoning's for spying on the house he later became a new residence with them and 15 others.
Sien enjoyed living there but felt that he needed to do something besides doing chores and cooking for the house hold. He wanted to learn in a real school and be around other people who aren't the usual people you would find in town after all those years of living there. So now he is applying to many schools just hoping to be accepted.
Skills and Abilities: Telepathy/ Shape Shifting- Form is a cat
Character Flaws: Is very oblivious when someone is doing something romantic with him and he wont notice it till the next day. Saying something about it is in the best judgement. Also can be very klutzy when walking down the stairs and talking at the same time but can multitask doing anything else. Is afraid of baby dolls and will freak out when is in the same room as one if it is noticed.
Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual
Status: Single
Likes: (at least 3)
- Cooking
- The rain
- Beaches
Dislikes: (at least 3)
- Chocolate
- Light
- Humans who judge the way he looks
Extra Information: Born May 4th
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2012 7:45 pm
xdarkxinnocencex StrawberryZ0mbie xdarkxinnocencex StrawberryZ0mbie Alrighty. I discussed this with the rest of the crew and we agree that she is still unbalanced. I'm pretty sure that while you did remove abilities, you added in more skills because I don't recall her previously being talented in music and sewing in addition to the others. I realize it's fun to play a really powerful, talented character but your character really just can't be skilled in everything. She can heal. Shapeshift partially, has enhanced senses, can still do some manipulation of shadows. And on top of that, she's a great artist, seamstress, musician and cook. She also has a photographic memory and knowledge of poisons, as well as being trained in a special form of hand to hand combat. I hope that by reading it you can understand that is just way too much. You really need to remove some of her non-magic skills. And it was suggested by the rest of the crew that you remove one of her magic skills as well. Honestly, given the nature of Rosentale, there's not a lot of need for such a powerful character. The only times any characters have showed off extreme powers was for a few random scenes where they power surged, then went back to normal. There is not a single other character that is this powerful and this talented all the time. Please consider how to balance her out and make her more realistic. She has only the bare minimum of flaws, so you really need to remove some of her talents and powers. ok. cut down on the skills/abilities Okay! She looks good now. =3 I'm glad to see another character who likes to cook. Maybe she can hang out with Sethrian and Renivere since they like it as well. I'm going to go figure out which dorm she needs to go in. In the mean time, select a schedule for her and post up a thread in the accepted characters subforum. Also, I forgot to mention earlier, that I went into your post and edited your code to make the picture work for you. whee oh thank you so much! ok smile sorry it took forever sweatdrop more used to war type rps lol No worries! We see that a lot, which is one reason why we're careful about abilities. We see a lot of people who are clearly coming in from heavily combat oriented RPs and that just doesn't fit with Rosentale. XD There is some fighting here and there but it's definitely not a focus at all. =3 But it's all good. You worked with me through the process patiently, which is a lot more than I can say for some. <3 Welcome to the guild!
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2012 7:46 pm
Okay. I will just remove you from the guild, then. Sorry for the inconvenience. Have a nice day. =)
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2012 7:59 pm
StrawberryZ0mbie Okay. I will just remove you from the guild, then. Sorry for the inconvenience. HAVe A nICe dAY. =) Fix'd. *obscure reference that no one will understand* *cough* ...... *backs out of topic slowly*
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2012 8:02 pm
ChocolateXCheese StrawberryZ0mbie Okay. I will just remove you from the guild, then. Sorry for the inconvenience. HAVe A nICe dAY. =) Fix'd. *obscure reference that no one will understand* *cough* ...... *backs out of topic slowly* >_>
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2012 8:55 pm
Before I can accept your character, you'll need to make a few changes. We don't allow Telepathy as an ability because there are way too many things that can go wrong with that ability in the setting and Rosentale's plot. So you'll need to get rid of that ability. As for the flaws, we can't accept any of them. Being oblivious to romance usually is a normal thing. Some people notice it right away and some people don't. It's not a flaw at all. A flaw is something that impacts your character negatively and makes it difficult for people to like your character. Being clumsy can be a flaw, but we won't accept it because there are a lot of people who listed it as a flaw but we have yet to see someone portray an actually clumsy person. You can keep it if your character is clumsy, but it won't be counted as a flaw. As for being afraid of baby dolls, there aren't very many baby dolls around the school and I doubt he'll ever see one in Rosentale since it's a high school. So it can't be counted as a flaw because it'll rarely be seen. Why don't you check the the "Resources for better characters and coding" subforum and look into the "Character Flaws - Doing it right" thread. It has a long list of flaws that can give you ideas of what we're looking for. I hope it helps. ^^
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2012 9:36 pm
My_Red_Stars My_Red_Stars  Character Information:
Student Name: Susan Chang
Species: Neko
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Personality: Susan is very fun-loving, she cares about the people close to her very much and will never let anyone hurt them. Susan is also very flirtaious and out-going.
Bio: When Susan was growing up she was always teased by her siblings because she was the only one out of them who had picked up the gene of being neko from ther great grandmother. Susan's parents keep her locked inside the house all day, they didn't want anyone to know about their daughters species, Susan had little contact with people, but she is still out-going and willing to get to know anyone she meets.
Skills and Abilities:
SKILLS: Susan is very fast on her feet, she can also go faster than a cheetah,
Character Flaws:
- Incredibly caring for those she loves over-protective
- Nervous tendencies
- Rambling
Sexual Orientation: Bi-sexual
Status: Single
Likes: (at least 3)
- School
- Reading
- Making and drinking tea
Dislikes: (at least 3)
- Her siblings
- Dog fur
- The colour yellow
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