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Stormold

PostPosted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 10:38 am


Hinote Tosatsu
Sorry, I kind of forgot about these for awhile there.

Kumo: You're going to have to define that a lot better before I'll even think about it. Denied.

Storm: I'm not so sure on the prepared jutsu part of this. Most jutsu used in this guild are just fired immediately, so is this referring to jutsu that last several posts after use, or something else? Other than that, it looks alright to me.

Zin: If Lance approved it, there's not much left for me to do but approve as well. If he didn't though, he can recall this at any time. Approved.


Yeah, but it would be like you do the handseals. Teleport, then use the jutsu type of thing.
PostPosted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 11:42 am


I'm not sure what the rules on that are... But alright. Approved.

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Hikaro_rin
Crew

PostPosted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 6:30 pm


hey Shira, umm... noone wants to touch the jutsus you were working with so, can you take a look at the jutsu again? changes in red.

Name of Jutsu:Fuuton: Soothing Breeze
Rank of Jutsu:E
Jutsu's Element:Fuuton
Range: Surrounds the character in a small bubble. Another ninja could be affected only if they were themselves very close to the target (ex: hugging them)
Description:A support jutsu which can be used to raise morale and effectiveness in a battle. The Fuuton user, wraps their teammates (or themselves) in a relaxing breeze, that clears their mind of emotion and minor pains. This allows the affected ninja to think rationally, and put their emotions and physical pains aside. The breeze surrounds the character for a post, but the length of the affects depends on how emotional/injured the affected ninja is, as well as their state of mind. If used on a tired shinobi, it may cause drowsiness. This can be useful outside of battle, or against a fatigued ninja. It can also be extremely dangerous if used on a tired teammate (or ones-self). Can be used on multiple ninja on the same turn. Chakra drain is per affected ninja. So if one was to use it on three ninja, it would drain E-rank chakra 3 times.
Rp Sample Nagisa could sense that her comrades were unable to put their emotions out of the way. Their best friend was captured, and they had allowed their temper to rise to dangerous levels, and she did not know that she could trust them to carry out the mission. It was hard, Nagisa knew, to have to fight one of your long-time friends. “Everyone stop. We need to take a moment to collect ourselves.” She declared loudly. They all stopped in a clearing, as Nagisa began her work. After a short series of seals, a soothing wind began to surround the whole team as she began to speak. “Everyone, listen up! The shinobi we are chasing is no longer your comrade. The Raikage has assigned you all, because you know him the best. I know this is asking a lot, but if you can not put aside your emotions during this battle then our whole village will soon fall.” As she spoke, she worked on lowering their stress. When the jutsu wore off, she called the wind once more, knowing once would not be enough in this situation. The team began to return to their collected selves, and she could tell that reason was beginning to win them over. This would help keep them from doing something stupid, but she still had to watch them carefully.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 07, 2010 10:49 am


Your Rank: Sannin
Name of Jutsu: Shoton: Kongou Chiri Buriza-do (Crystal Release: Diamond Dust Blizzard)
Rank of Jutsu: S
Range of Jutsu: -
Jutsu's Element: Hari (Crystal)
Description:
One of Zaiaku's most powerful yet majestic techniques he keeps in his arsonel. In order to use this technique, crystal must already be present in large quantaties. During the first post, crystals begin floating into the air, hovering around the user and target, as well as about 50ft around the user. During this post they are only floating, drifting around. During the second post, the user makes a seal and then rotates around at high speed. All the floating crystals around the area will begin to rotate around the area faster and faster until the point where all the crystals shatter into tiny shards which rotate around the user outward to the limit of 200ft. The small shards of crystals move so fast around the user when light hits the area it looks like a sphere of glowing light, which light is reflected everywhere giving it a beautiful appearance. Those within 200ft radius of the user will more then likely be shredded into nothing from the speed of the shards moving, not to mention the high number of crystal shards flying around. At the speed of the crystals are moving, it can even puncture steel several inches, and even then after a few seconds of the barrage holes would be torn, with that known even stone would be destroyed. Chances of surviving this technique is slim to none. Using ninjutsu thats of the fire, wind, and lightning nature would be pointless to use, as they would be caught up in the rotation adding to the danger level.
Rp Sample
The sannin merely smiled at his opponent, who looked rather tired from the fight they have been raging for awhile now. Crystal spikes were everywhere from his techniques, and he knew he was starting to run low on chakra. It was time to end this in a grand finale. Weaving handsigns Zaiaku smirked as crystals within 200ft around him begin lifting into the air, hovering and slowly moving around. The opponent looked confused, yet in awe at the crystals which captured his attention from the beauty of the light moving through the crystal. He then closed in on the sannin, raising his sword to strike him in a chopping fashion. The sannin smiled and brought up a sword, blocking the man's strike. But in his other hand he threw a kunai, embedding it deep into the man's kneecap. The man howled in pain as Zaiaku kicked him away. Several more shinobi were starting to run into the area, heading for Zaiaku. Making a seal, Zaiaku started spinning around rapidly. The crystals responded to the seal and his rotation, began moving around and around the area with increasing speed. Suddenly all the crystal exploded into a storm of small crystal shards, which rotated around the shinobi, cutting through them and their weak armor. The sun emerged from the clouds, the rays beaming onto the spinning storm of crystal shards which multiple rays of purple light going off everywhere, like a light show. Spots of red scattering everywhere from the blood from the shredded men on the shards, giving off a beautiful yet ominous color. Zaiaku stopped spinning, his arms hung at his sides as he raised up to stand up straight. A smile was on his face, as the crystals fell to the ground spearing the remains of the corpses. To the distance, on the cliffside a young boy stared with awe, a tubby kid with a hand around an ice cream cone. The ice cream he was eating fell to the floor off of his cone, he was too occupied with what he just saw. "cool..." He said with mouth agaped.


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Your Rank: Sannin
Name of Jutsu: Kuchiyose: Rashomon (Summoning Jutsu: Rashomon)
Rank of Jutsu: B
Range of Jutsu: In front
Jutsu's Element: Universal (Non elemental)
Description:
This summoning creates a demonic form of the main gate of old Kyoto which is capable of blocking almost any attack. The user strings together a series of handsigns and bites his thumb, slamming the bitten hand onto the ground. The ground will tremble as several feet in front of the user this massive gate will appear. It is capable of blocking any technique that is up to its own rank (B). A ranked techniques it can take up to five hits before crumbling, it can take up to two S rank techniques before crumbling.
Rp Sample
Zaiaku leaped back, the dust settling between the two combatants. Seeing handsigns formed, he recognized the seals that most uchihas perform. s**t He said as he bit his thumb and weaved handsigns. He slammed his hand onto the ground just as from the man a large spinning beam of concentrated lightning fired off homing in on the sannin's location. An explosion of dust and debries went off everywhere. The man stood there, smiling thinking the fight is over. However, as the cloud and dust settled down a massive shadow fell over the man. He looked up, seeing a massive wall with a demonic face on it. On top of it, the sannin stood, one arm by his side and the other on his hip. A smile on his face as he muttered a few words. "Well, shall we get started?" He asked, the man in disbelief at the massive wall that stood before him. Realizing he just wasted precious chakra, that'll now cost him the fight.

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Your Rank: Sannin
Name of Jutsu: Gogyō Fūin (Five Element Seal)
Rank of Jutsu: A
Range of Jutsu: contact is required
Jutsu's Element: Sealing
Description:
A technique that was once seen by Orochimaru, one of the legendary sannins of Konoha. This technique is a powerful sealing technique where the user's dominant hand purple flames will emit from each finger tip on their hand. Within two posts, the user must thrust their hand into the target, which will inject the flames and a seal is set. Once the seal is set, the target will fall unconscious, and incapable of fighting for awhile. Until the seal is removed by a shinobi same rank as the user, the victim will be incapable of utalizing any ninjutsu or genjutsu making combat very difficult. Even those with expert chakra control will barely be able to use jutsu from struggling to control it. If this technique is used on a jinchuuriki, the demon's chakra will be sealed away from them, and they will be struggling with controlling their own chakra. It was once stated by Orochimaru, that very few shinobi can break the seal.
Rp Sample
Zaiaku was getting rather annoyed by this Uchiha's braggery of his chakra. Despite respect for the uchiha clan due to their sharingan this was pushing it. The uchiha ran at him, being a taijutsu specialist he leaped into the air performing a round house kick. As he went into the air the sannin weaved handsigns, his hands glowing with raiton chakra as he grabbed the kicker's leg, eletricity pulsing into his leg paralyzing the muscle making him incapable of running anymore. The shinobi cried out as he rolled across the ground from impact, breaking his arm from trying to brace himself for impact. However, Orochi came from the opposing side, kicking him into the air to where he was rolling in midair. Falling back down, the sannin watched, a hand behind his back where each finger tip sparked and purple flames danced from each finger tip. With precise aiming, he did a uppercut motion, catching the shinobi full in the stomach. He cried out in pain, being cut short as he fell unconscious. Zaiaku rolled the man off his knee, which his shirt was torn and a seal was visible on his stomach. Stepping over the man, he walked onwards towards Iwagakure. Instead of punishing him by death, he punished him by making fighting extremely tough on him. Eventually, he'll get it removed by a kage who probably knows how to remove it.

Shruikan Tenshi


Hikaro_rin
Crew

PostPosted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 3:03 pm


Ok, my jutsu that i just reposted for Shira (my last post) since she hasn't been able to look at it (the updated version) has been waiting since the 19th of Aug, could whoever reviews apps next look at it? I understand that Shira has other things to do, but i think both the jutsu's and the changes she requested were pretty straightforward, so theres not much point delaying it's approval so she can look herself. Thanks! ^^
PostPosted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 3:55 pm


Your Rank:
Academy student

Name of Jutsu:
Sealing style: First seal

Rank of Jutsu:
Academy student

Range of Jutsu:
N/a

Jutsu's Element:
Fuinjutsu

Description:
This is a Jutsu used to Seal off the first Gate of someone, hindering their chakra flow for a short period of time, until the opponent's chakra destroy the seal. The Seal is made through manipulating chakra on the hand, the chakra brings with it some blood which is placed underneath the opponent's skin, making a visible seal. The Blood is imbuned with chakra that unless overpowered will continue to hinder the flow of the opponent's chakra. The seal is placed on the forhead and slightly to the left. It takes the shape of Ichi, or one. There are five prongs around the seal, that when a chakra point is placed into it, they begin to glow one by one. They light up from right to left, and are symbols for one through five, or Ichi through Go ( in the demon prefix names )

Note: Five points of chakra destroy the seal, making the user able to use jutsu, and Elemental Taijutsu, or the Eight gates.

Note: Konaga CAN Still be affected by this jutsu.

Rp Sample
" Well, let's see here... " Akaishi said, Watching as his opponent bent his knees and began to release chakra rapidly. " Oh, So that's what you are going for huh? " He said, making handsigns, and placing his hand on his oponent's forehead. chakra welled up onto his palm, blood seeming out of his hand as well. It formed a line across his palm, and when placed on his opponent's head, imbedded the blood deep enough it would stay, but kept the blood from going too deep and infecting the opponent. he smiled and said. " Sealing style First Seal. " He said trumphantly as his opponent quit releasing chakra, and was just sitting there yelling. " Heh, How stupid can you be? " Akaishi said jumping back laughing at his opponent.

" What the hell did you do? " The Leaf shinobi said, touching is forhead and yelling as he could feel an odd design on his head. " You Sealed off my gate! " He Said, getting angry, he made some quick handsigns, to focus his chakra beter, and got back into position he started to yell again, the Prongs on the Seal turning blue one by one until all five turned blue, the seal disappated as Five points of chakra were placed into the seal, unlocking it and removing it.

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 11:09 pm


Spider:I'm sorry but i'm going to have to deny it due to the fact that i really don't think an academy student should know how to use or be able to use a fuinjutsu,so change the rank of the jutsu then i will look at it

Shuriken:
Crystal Release:It's a good jutsu,but it doesn't seem like it can be countered,it probably can,but i don't see it on your description.So for now denied

Rashomon:Approved

Five Element Seal:I might be wrong on this,but i think we already have something close to that,but if not it's approved

Rin:Hmm i will go ahead and approve it,but remember it can be over turned ok

Note:my jugdements can be overturned
PostPosted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 12:12 am


Alpha_Misa-of_the_wolfs
Spider:I'm sorry but i'm going to have to deny it due to the fact that i really don't think an academy student should know how to use or be able to use a fuinjutsu,so change the rank of the jutsu then i will look at it

Shuriken:
Crystal Release:It's a good jutsu,but it doesn't seem like it can be countered,it probably can,but i don't see it on your description.So for now denied

Rashomon:Approved

Five Element Seal:I might be wrong on this,but i think we already have something close to that,but if not it's approved

Rin:Hmm i will go ahead and approve it,but remember it can be over turned ok

Note:my jugdements can be overturned


lol it can be, same way you would counter other techniques that are S ranked. If you have something that can withstand attacks via earth wall, or something then you can pretty much defend yourself. I just didn't put it out there because it'll be suddenly "the ninja knows...." ya know? So thats why I said its very low survival chance, but its not impossible. If I was to bluntly state how to coutner/defend against it, the chances of shinobi magically thinking it would be high. Still want me to or no?

As for five elemental seal, I looked everywhere and saw it nowhere sadly

Shruikan Tenshi


Hinote Tosatsu
Vice Captain

Eloquent Lunatic

PostPosted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 8:35 am


Rashomon: B rank is a bit low for this technique considering the abilities you've given it don't you think? I'd say it'd be a lot more realistic if you jumped it to S-rank, with the same capabilities as it has now. Completely blocking anything B and below, and surviving two S ranks is pretty impressive even for an S ranked technique.

Five Element Seal: I already denied this technique once, for the same problems as I am seeing here now. The seal only had the effect it did in the anime/manga, because it was put on top of an incompatible seal. If you used it on a normal person, I personally don't think it would have much effect at all. Naruto already had a seal on him restricting his chakra flow, and the seal added by Orochimaru blocked off what was still being released. That is the only reason it had the results that your jutsu lists as the main use of the seal.

In case you didn't notice, that was a recall/overturn.
PostPosted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 8:53 am


It could, and alright. Though the reason it was set as B rank because one its stationary, its not moving anywhere. So if you really wanted to you can simply move around it. So why not B or A ranked since anyone can merely move around it after hitting it the first time? Unless your a total idiot and continously hit it over and over when you don't have to, its a simple technique to move around. So making it S rank would instead be stupid because its incapable of moving so its not like it'll continously block attacks unless they are aimed at it. And once its broken, thats that. If anything, it'll be like a tree or something after its first hit.

Five Elemental Seal: Ah, I understand. I was more aiming for the effect it had in the games. Though it was temperary, and after awhile you can start regaining chakra/using chakra. According to the effect though, on jinchuuriki it still let naruto use chakra of his own, not his demon. Where other people who had no demons would lose their chakra till the seal is removed, since they don't have another set of chakra like jinchuuriki has. Only making logic here, and going off the information of the internet. If so, then why not make it unique, alter the effects to where it can be used???

edit: Honestly, the five elemental seal im not too concerned about, but the other two I am. Rashomon ought to be at most A rank, though in the anime its B ranked, because its so easy to move around.

Shruikan Tenshi


Golden Spider of Kumo

PostPosted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 1:43 pm


Alpha_Misa-of_the_wolfs
Spider:I'm sorry but i'm going to have to deny it due to the fact that i really don't think an academy student should know how to use or be able to use a fuinjutsu,so change the rank of the jutsu then i will look at it

Then what would a Sealing master ninja have while they are an academy student? no, I'm building up the Fuinjutsu, because I said i Would.

You'd think that Academy students shouldn't be handling LIGHTNING, but they still can. So I really don't see the problem with an Academy student being able to seal off a Gate. Seeing as if that is what they Devote their First chakra type to, then they should be allowed to have something besides universal.

I'm not trying to pick a fight, I'm just saying that would suck to have to wait until Chuunin or Jonin rank to be able to use something your ENTIRE character is based upon.

So yeah, Not changing the rank for it. and I'm going to continue making Sealing Style: Second, third, fourth, fifth, sixth, seventh, and eigth seals.
PostPosted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 1:51 pm


Golden Spider of Kumo
Alpha_Misa-of_the_wolfs
Spider:I'm sorry but i'm going to have to deny it due to the fact that i really don't think an academy student should know how to use or be able to use a fuinjutsu,so change the rank of the jutsu then i will look at it

Then what would a Sealing master ninja have while they are an academy student? no, I'm building up the Fuinjutsu, because I said i Would.

You'd think that Academy students shouldn't be handling LIGHTNING, but they still can. So I really don't see the problem with an Academy student being able to seal off a Gate. Seeing as if that is what they Devote their First chakra type to, then they should be allowed to have something besides universal.

I'm not trying to pick a fight, I'm just saying that would suck to have to wait until Chuunin or Jonin rank to be able to use something your ENTIRE character is based upon.

So yeah, Not changing the rank for it. and I'm going to continue making Sealing Style: Second, third, fourth, fifth, sixth, seventh, and eigth seals.


The reason you base your character off something isn't for immediate results, it's for long term and more important feats you plan to achieve later... you know, AFTER you earn them. So sealing off the gates is just plain overpowered, even for a chuunin rank that might be a bit much. You have plenty to look forward to... just nothing great as an academy student. Oh by the way... how many fight do you plan to be in at that low of a rank?

Stormold


Golden Spider of Kumo

PostPosted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 1:56 pm


Idk, But to a host, that could come in handy. Plus with that whole Can't beat a person two ranks above you, and the akatsuki is made up of ONLY people Kage/sannin rank, besides one jonin, two genin, and an academy student, I'm fairly sure there is a need for a jutsu like this...

But my decision stands, I'm not changing it.

again, not trying to fight, I'm just saying it is my idea, and ths is how it is. so unless you guys like having the Bijuu seals be obscure and undefined, then Just don't listen to me. Most of the crew seems to have mastered this. ( ok, that last part is kinda picking at the crew for something, but that is not here, but it is there. )
PostPosted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 1:59 pm


keep at it, but the idea won't happen. to seal off chakra flow is something the hyuuga do... or a sealing specialist of extremely high rank. Like Orochimaru did, but at academy level it won't happen. Sorry

Stormold


Golden Spider of Kumo

PostPosted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 2:09 pm


Well then I guess that unless anyone else decides to make Sealing jutsu then No one is getting any, for the plain and simple fact, all the ones Martin Spiralware makes he tries to turn into a Clan jutsu, and all the ones I ry to make keep getting denied because people don't understand that if someone picks their chakra type as soon as they post, Most of the mods here won't let them change it. so they'd go through the Chunnin exams with s**t besides universal stuff that everyone should know. plus their clan/ bloodline abilities. Not to mention already at a disadvantage because they have one of their Ninja types gone because of Sealing master. So they instantly start off with pretty much this.
One ninja type, which does not count as a central focus.
NO Chakra type because all the jutsu are above their rank, until they turn to Genin, and even that would have completely sucky seals like Sealing Style: First Seal.
NO edge on ninja of their rank, one rank above, and one rank below.
NO chance of changing their chakra type.
NO possible way for their character to pass an exam to become Genin, unless the Kage will accept them using jutsu ANYONE could use.
NO variation on how they can attack besides Nin tai, or nin gen.
NO hope of getting new jutsu until chunnin rank ( Which is basically unobtainable )
And I feel like I'm forgetting things...

And I know that most of the Kage's would pass them, but seriously, FIVE points of chakra. That is it. FIVE little points of chakra. In higher ranks it wouldn't mater for s**t. But in the lower ranks it is a fairly useful jutsu. as soon as you hit chunnin rank, and everyone has like 50-80 chakra, it won't matter if they lose five. At academy and genin, it will matter. I like making jutsu that when used on opponents of the same rank, it actually can do something.
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