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COULD SOMEONE TELL ME INWICH ORDER YOU SAY THE JAPANESE WORDS?

for example i said "ohayo gozaimasu,watshi no namae wa mukunururi ekko wa"[goodmorning my name is echo] and i was told it was in the wrong order do the japanese put the verbs first or what?! confused

Should be like this:

Konbanwa, Watashi no namae wa Ekko desu. Douzo yoroshiku.

こんばわ、わたしわきーて８６８です！はじめまして？
(Konbawa, watashi wa kitty868 des! Hajimemashite?)
(Good evening, I am kitty868 [My name is kitty868]! How do you do?)

ねえ！会話じゃないもん
Isn't it? It's not a conversation.

みなさん！　こんいちは～　僕の名前はキウィーで～す！十八歳です！大学一年生です。好きな食べ物は魚とハンバーガで～す！よろしくおねがいします！

かんじない
みなさん！こんいちは～　ぼくのなまえはキウィーで～す！じゅうはっさいです！だいがくいちねんせいです。すきなたべものはさかなとハンバーガで～す！よろしくおねがいします！

ローマ字
minasan!　konnichiha! boku no namae ha kiwi desu~ jyuhassai desu! daigaku ichinen sei desu~ sukina tabemono ha sakana to hanbaga (Hamburger) de~su! yoroshiku onegaishimasu!


英語
Hello everybody! My name is Kiwi! I'm 18 years old, and I'm a freshman in college. My favorite foods are fish and hamburgers! Nice to meet you! ^^;

「Kitty」はキッティと思う。　確信してじゃない。
私はステッラアです。 みんな元気ですか？
見事なクリスマスでした。　
みんなの趣味は何ですか？

"Kitty" wa kitti to omou. Kakushinshite janai. (is janai the right thing to use? x.x)
Watasha wa suterraa. Minna genki desu ka?
Migoto na kurisumasu deshita.　
Minna no shumi wa nan desu ka?

"Kitty" is kittei, I think. I'm not sure.
I'm Stellar. Is everyone good?
Christmas was great.　
What are everyone hobbies?

I'm no good with certain particles and sentence structures since I had to stop studying for a while, so I can't say much xP
I agree it's not much of a conversation here but I don't think many beginners know how to say much. When typing out stuff, I have to look up words and sometimes can't think of how to say something even if I know the words so...

てんき わ どう
凍えそうに 寒い です.
日本語わ わたし に むずかしいーです.
わたし わ これ で 失礼 します.


Tenki wa dou? sweatdrop
Kogoesouni samui desu.
Nihongo wa watashi ni muzukashii-desu.
Watashi wa kore de shitsurei shimasu.

(How's the weather?)
(It's freezing.)
(Japanese is dfficult for me)
(Please excuse me.)

On a seperate note, I can see why native Japanese people are tired of hearing fangirls/boys say "desu". It's in nearly every beginning type sentence. eek