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PostPosted: Wed Jun 08, 2011 9:27 pm


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Username: SorceressJacklyn

RPC name: Sabal Temil Dalburn

Is it a Free skill?: yes

Type of skill: Trickster

Skill name: HIding in Speed

Rank: B

If it uses ammo how much:

Limits: Adept Rank

Skill description: Using your speed with a boost from your energy, you can make it appear there are 6 of you instead of just one. All 5 copies move with you, look like you, and show as the same energy when someone who sees energy looks at you and your copies. They just can't do any actual damage to an opponent. You will roll a D6 to know which image you really are. Whenever your opponent attacks, they must roll a D6 to see if they hit you or a copy. You're hit (no doge) if your opponent rolls the number you rolled. This lasts for 5 posts or until you are hit, whichever comes first. This has a three post cooldown.

Sample: Sabal spat at the ground, pissed at the man gloating over him. Getting up, he mentally checked his legs. So long as he could run, he could do one last thing. Taking off, he started to shimmer in the man's vision until Sabal split into six copies. "Who's who now?" they said in unison as they circled the man. "Find me and win a prize!" All six coppies drew their swords and pointed them inwards towards the man, slowly closing in the circle they ran. Lashing out, his attack went through one of them without resistance. The spinning image of the sword sliced into the man, circle cutting him until it reached his spine. Sabal stopped moving, the copies of himself vanishing as he looked at the body in disgust and contempt. "That's what you ******** get."

Change the name to something, because "Mirror Image" is the same skill name in our Ninja class Skills, so you better pick something else that will not be confused later on in the future. :/

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 08, 2011 9:28 pm


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Username: XSK Ambrosia

RPC name: Makyo Nagareboshi

Is it a Free skill?: Yeah sure

Type of skill: Dreadnaught Darkness Element

Skill name: Shadow Cape Coffin

Rank: B-rank

If it uses ammo how much: N/A

Limits: Must know Natural Cape skill

Skill description: With the same Natural Cape that grows around a Dreadnaught who has learned such a skill, he can literally use the long cape, as it extends with the small layer of carapace, and cover around the enemy, using it as a sort of coffin all around his body, and crush him to bits. Basically, you can use the cape as tentacles of sorts and then cover the enemy like a coffin.

Sample: Makyo is hiding in the shadows, as he is still unseen due to his darkness aura around him. He needs to stay hidden, and he uses the Shadow Cape Coffin technique to extend his cape further, and confuse the enemy first tapping on his shoulder, but when he moves to shoot at what tapped his shoulder, the cape grabs him by the feet, and starts moving all around his body, covering him completely. Makyo then says to the man "You kill Rachel! The only one who loved me! Burn in hell!" and then crushes him into tiny bits of pieces out of pure anger, even if he normally isn't a very violent person, and never looks for a fight.
still waiting for this to be accepted or not D:

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 09, 2011 6:58 am


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the only reason I suggested passive was because that was going to be the form cherry hides in to feel better. But we can do e rank


Tis accepted. And I don't mean for every post. just for the change to wolf. Not back to human. Back to human is free.

Mayvine: Your forge skill, accepted.
PostPosted: Thu Jun 09, 2011 4:59 pm


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Is it a Free skill?: Free

Type of skill: Mechanist

Skill name: Magnetic Disruption

Rank: C

If it uses ammo how much:None

Limits: Must know Magnetic Field

Skill description: This skill disrupts any and all magnetic skills. It is useful when in a battle with another mechanist, or in a battle with a seriously op lightning style.

Sample: Antonio was at a disadvantage. He was wearing a suit of metal armor, and was fighting someone who knew the King of Nocturnes Lighting Style. They were trying to mess with him by using the magnetic skill in that style to throw him around. "Will you ******** stop that." Antonio was pissed. The person he was fighting just laughed. Knowing it would mess with the magnets on his armor, Antonio used the Magnetic Disruption skill. The person he was fighting didn't have any control over him, and Antonio's weapons fell to the ground. Using this to his advantage, Antonio picked up his revolver and shot the man three times in the head.

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 09, 2011 5:20 pm


Arashikage2
Lols, nice description rofl . Erm.... As for actual judging, I'll need more for a description. How does Magnetic Disruption work? Is it a sustained effect? If so, for how many posts? Does it need to be re-used for each lightning skill it counteracts? I need details.


XSK Ambrosia
Honestly, dreadnoughts are probably the thing I'm least qualified to judge. Don't ask why, it just seems that way for me gonk . Same problem as with Kage2's skill. I need more details. How strong is this cape (offense and defense)? Is wrapping around and then crushing the opponent the only thing you do with the cape? How close must the opponent be? How fast is the cape?
PostPosted: Thu Jun 09, 2011 5:23 pm


Kagetsukiko


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Username: (...)

RPC name:

Is it a Free skill?: Free

Type of skill: Mechanist

Skill name: Magnetic Disruption

Rank: C

If it uses ammo how much:None

Limits: Must know Magnetic Field

Skill description: This skill disrupts any and all magnetic skills. It is useful when in a battle with another mechanist, or in a battle with a seriously op lightning style. It can stop the skill entirely for three posts. Magnetic Disruption can only be used against a magnetic, or electromagnetic skill.

Sample: Antonio was at a disadvantage. He was wearing a suit of metal armor, and was fighting someone who knew the King of Nocturnes Lighting Style. They were trying to mess with him by using the magnetic skill in that style to throw him around. "Will you ******** stop that." Antonio was pissed. The person he was fighting just laughed. Knowing it would mess with the magnets on his armor, Antonio used the Magnetic Disruption skill. The person he was fighting didn't have any control over him, and Antonio's weapons fell to the ground. Using this to his advantage, Antonio picked up his revolver and shot the man three times in the head.

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 09, 2011 5:29 pm


Kagetsukiko
Alright I edited it with the info you specified. Any more?

Username: XSK Ambrosia

RPC name: Makyo Nagareboshi

Is it a Free skill?: Yeah sure

Type of skill: Dreadnaught Darkness Element

Skill name: Shadow Cape Coffin

Rank: B-rank

If it uses ammo how much: N/A

Limits: Must know Natural Cape skill

Skill description: With the same Natural Cape that grows around a Dreadnaught who has learned such a skill, he can literally use the long cape, as it extends with the small layer of carapace, and cover around the enemy, using it as a sort of coffin all around his body, and crush him to bits. Basically, you can use the cape as tentacles of sorts and then cover the enemy like a coffin. The Cape is as strong as the Carapace of the user, and is very fast when used for wrapping. Must be within 15 feet of the user for this technique to work. It can also be used for just wrapping the opponent, or taunting him by poking. You can bend the cape to your will for 5 turns, but not more than that.

Sample: Makyo is hiding in the shadows, as he is still unseen due to his darkness aura around him. He needs to stay hidden, and he uses the Shadow Cape Coffin technique to extend his cape further, and confuse the enemy first tapping on his shoulder, but when he moves to shoot at what tapped his shoulder, the cape grabs him by the feet, and starts moving all around his body, covering him completely. Makyo then says to the man "You kill Rachel! The only one who loved me! Burn in hell!" and then crushes him into tiny bits of pieces out of pure anger, even if he normally isn't a very violent person, and never looks for a fight.
PostPosted: Thu Jun 09, 2011 5:46 pm


Arashikage2
Right, just want to clarify some things. Rather than preventing all magnetic/electromagnetic skills for three posts, it prevents only one specific skill for three posts? Really, if you want, you can have it prevent all magnetic/electromagnetic skills for three posts.


XSK Ambrosia
Let's see. The phrase "very fast" is too general. Also, in my opinion, having the cape be as strong as the dreadnaught, faster than the dreadnaught (sorry if I'm wrong, but I think transformed dreadnaughts are really slow?), and be able to reach as far as it does makes it unfair to have it last for five posts with only B-rank energy. Erm.... How about lowering it to three posts with a one post cool-down period every six posts (every two times it's used)?

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 09, 2011 5:49 pm


XSK Ambrosia
Let's see. The phrase "very fast" is too general. Also, in my opinion, having the cape be as strong as the dreadnaught, faster than the dreadnaught (sorry if I'm wrong, but I think transformed dreadnaughts are really slow?), and be able to reach as far as it does makes it unfair to have it last for five posts with only B-rank energy. Erm.... How about lowering it to three posts with a one post cool-down period every six posts (every two times it's used)?


Read the cape information on Ambro's customs. The cape is strong like carapace, but not as strong. It can only block up to D-ranked attacks, and is very light. It's a B-rank attack, it's supposed to move fast, as fast as a B-ranked person at least. You definitely have probs with dreadnaught abilities, we do this all the time xD
PostPosted: Thu Jun 09, 2011 5:54 pm


Kagetsukiko
Arashikage2
Right, just want to clarify some things. Rather than preventing all magnetic/electromagnetic skills for three posts, it prevents only one specific skill for three posts? Really, if you want, you can have it prevent all magnetic/electromagnetic skills for three posts.


XSK Ambrosia
Let's see. The phrase "very fast" is too general. Also, in my opinion, having the cape be as strong as the dreadnaught, faster than the dreadnaught (sorry if I'm wrong, but I think transformed dreadnaughts are really slow?), and be able to reach as far as it does makes it unfair to have it last for five posts with only B-rank energy. Erm.... How about lowering it to three posts with a one post cool-down period every six posts (every two times it's used)?


No it blocks all...

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 10, 2011 10:19 pm


Username: Ambro

RPC name: Makyo Nagareboshi

Is it a Free skill?: Nope

Type of skill: Shadowknight skill

Skill name: Eyes of Abyss

Rank: C-rank

Limits: Must be Darkness element

Skill description: This technique is passive, and doesn't require energy. The user can see even in pitch black darkness.

Sample: Makyo walks alongside the dessert itself with his heavy steps, and covering himself with his cape. He needs shelter to take off his lower carapace that's heavy, and hide for a bit from the harshness of the dessert. He enteres inside a cave hidden amongst the sand, and hides himself in it, but going deeper. His eyes glow with a dark aura as the cave gets deeper and deeper, and the pitch black darkness all around, but Makyo can see every detail perfectly, and admires the beauty of the darkness itself, as he sees the scorpions and bats inside the cave.
PostPosted: Fri Jun 10, 2011 10:38 pm


Username: Ambro

RPC name: Makyo Nagareboshi

Is it a Free skill?: Nope

Type of skill: Shadowknight

Skill name: Immortal Solstice

Rank: Expert

Limits: Only Darkness element shadowknights can use this technique. Must be Master ranked to do this skill as well.

Skill description: This technique is most effective onle when used in an enclosed area like a cave, building, or any area that's enclosed. If it's an unenclosed area, it can cover up to 50 feet in width, length, and height of an area around the user himself. This technique allows the user to consume an entire area with pitch black darkness as the darkness element energy consumes every bit of light around it. It can turn the area completely pitch black with no one able to see. It even consumes the light of a flashlight, or anything that shines in the dark from how powerful it is, but it's only good until the user moves his legs. Any leg movement that is made while this technique is active, will automatically disrupt the technique. If he is moved by any means from where he stands, the technique will break. He can cover up to a quarter mile of pitch black darkness in an enclosed area.

Sample: It seems two Expert Bandits, and one Master Knight have invaded Kusana, and have taken Lady Kora as a hostage. Makyo is now Master ranked and is standing right inside a large wooden room that is enclosed. He had just stepped there to check for the bandits and found them holding on to his queen. He says calmly to them with his velvet cape dangling down mysteriously, and not revealing his body by holding it shut "Let her go." but the Bandits laughed at his face, and charged straight at Makyo.

The light suddenly began to bleak as the whole room slowly turned pitch black, and all that energy consumes the room, making it impossible for them to see clearly. With the pitch black, the bandits stopped, since they couldn't see anything. They didn't know if their enemy was standing right in front of them or somewhere else now. They grew scared, as Makyo shot his shadow bullets and one of them screamed, but he wasn't being killed, the shadow bullets were holding him down and the other bandot soon enough as well on the ground. The knight holding the Queen got too scared, and ran away. The knight first hit himself against the wall of the exit, and then started to feel for the doorknob, as he ran away from the area speedily and let the Queen there. Makyo seemed almost demon-like with such a power, yet he did not kill anyone, and when the darkness got out, he was still standing in the same place with two culprits tied down by the shadow tentacles.

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 11, 2011 9:38 am


Username: Darion72

RPC name: Darion Nystrom

Is it a Free skill?: HELL NO!
Type of skill: Fire skill

Skill name: Flame Purge

Rank:A rank

If it uses ammo how much:

Limits: Must be Darion

Skill description: Darion conjures up 11 swords of flame behind him, Once they are conjured up the all point at his enemy and fly at them if one stabs the enemy it's most likely they will all stab.

Has a readying time of 2 post
The swords last for 3 posts so if one stabs into the ground it will brake out of the ground and try again
Has a cool down of 10 posts


Sample:
Darion looked forwards as the Shadow Guardian was holding off a Orc Boss. Luckly The Orc boss was stupid enough to not come after Darion.

Finally Darion was ready to kill the Orc.
Darion had summoned up eleven sword made of flame and suddenly all of the swords pointed towards the Orc.
Darion grinned and glared at the Orc Boss."Draw your last breath..." Darion said as the swords flew towards the Orc in different directions Stabbing him in different directions killing him quickly.
PostPosted: Sat Jun 11, 2011 11:48 am


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Username: SorceressJacklyn

RPC name: Sabal Temil Dalburn

Is it a Free skill?: yes

Type of skill: Trickster

Skill name: HIding in Speed

Rank: B

If it uses ammo how much:

Limits: Adept Rank

Skill description: Using your speed with a boost from your energy, you can make it appear there are 6 of you instead of just one. All 5 copies move with you, look like you, and show as the same energy when someone who sees energy looks at you and your copies. They just can't do any actual damage to an opponent. You will roll a D6 to know which image you really are. Whenever your opponent attacks, they must roll a D6 to see if they hit you or a copy. You're hit (no doge) if your opponent rolls the number you rolled. This lasts for 5 posts or until you are hit, whichever comes first. This has a three post cooldown.

Sample: Sabal spat at the ground, pissed at the man gloating over him. Getting up, he mentally checked his legs. So long as he could run, he could do one last thing. Taking off, he started to shimmer in the man's vision until Sabal split into six copies. "Who's who now?" they said in unison as they circled the man. "Find me and win a prize!" All six coppies drew their swords and pointed them inwards towards the man, slowly closing in the circle they ran. Lashing out, his attack went through one of them without resistance. The spinning image of the sword sliced into the man, circle cutting him until it reached his spine. Sabal stopped moving, the copies of himself vanishing as he looked at the body in disgust and contempt. "That's what you ******** get."

Change the name to something, because "Mirror Image" is the same skill name in our Ninja class Skills, so you better pick something else that will not be confused later on in the future. :/

Changed for you. Is it okay?

bumping since it's been three days now and the rule is for 2.

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