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Posted: Sun Jul 11, 2010 2:59 pm
That's true, that's why i didn't use no website this time i use what I know from the show
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Posted: Sun Jul 11, 2010 3:11 pm
Hinote Tosatsu The fact either of you had to look up the info would be enough for me to fail both of you. Lucky for you, I'm not a judge. =) Good thing mine was approved. =D
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Posted: Sun Jul 11, 2010 3:21 pm
I read it over again and see you fixed it. Good work! ^^ Remember Kumurai is always watching you. XD
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Posted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 5:48 pm
Blaze115 Rpc Name:Kinto AburameVillage:LeafRank:Academy studentBloodline or Clan applied for:The Aburame ClanWhat you know about the clan/bl:The aburame clan is a clan that live in the leaf village, they specialize in using bug jutsu. The bugs live inside the host body from the day they are born. The host body is used for a nest for the bugs to live. The bugs are that live in the host body are called kikaichū better know as Destruction bug's. These bugs can be use in many way's such as defensive offensives and tracking. In most ever attack the aburame clan uses with the bugs it had something to do with draining there opponent charka. Rp Sample:Kinto would move from behind the tree showing himself to the enemy. "Enough of the games." Kinto would make both his left and right hand rise into the air as from underneath his sleeve his kikaichū bugs would being to come out and filling up the air around Kinto and his enemy. "Your options are looking slim, you could either surrender and life or fight and die. Which one shall it be? By the way my bugs are pretty hungry." The enemy looked around in amazement to how many bugs was in the air and they all came form this little kid, but he wasn’t about to give up so easily like that. He did a couple of hand signs and took in a deep breath and blew out fire at some of Kinto bugs. "O0o someone's been doing there home work." Kinto watched as some of his bugs were being burned and killed by the fire but that didn't mean anything to him cause he could easily make more come out as he did. "You picked your choice." Kinto did about four hand signs and yelled out. "Secret Technique: Insect Sphere!" All of the bugs that were in the air from Kinto would being to surround the enemy making a globe of bugs around him to completely trap him. Once the bugs had the target trapped into place they would being to drain the target charka and slowly swallow him. The victim could be heard crying for help as the bugs were doing Kinto bidding. (ok i know i did a bit of godmodding. But that was cause i had to give an RP, and i'm a bit rusty at this just got back to Gaia in like a WHILE. so try to take it easy on me and if anything can you show me what i need to fix and how i could do better thank you.) well, this was a pretty difficult app to read simply because of grammar and spelling mistakes, but that's not what you're being judged on so let's see. One thing I noticed is that when the bugs were killed by the fire you were unphased because "he could easily make more come out as he did", I just want to make sure that you are aware that you do in fact have a limited supply of bugs. The biggest issue however is that there just wasn't a whole lot to this rp sample, so I can't really tell if you have a decent understanding of the clan or not.
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Posted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 8:35 pm
Lance Fulgurant Blaze115 Rpc Name:Kinto AburameVillage:LeafRank:Academy studentBloodline or Clan applied for:The Aburame ClanWhat you know about the clan/bl:The aburame clan is a clan that live in the leaf village, they specialize in using bug jutsu. The bugs live inside the host body from the day they are born. The host body is used for a nest for the bugs to live. The bugs are that live in the host body are called kikaichū better know as Destruction bug's. These bugs can be use in many way's such as defensive offensives and tracking. In most ever attack the aburame clan uses with the bugs it had something to do with draining there opponent charka. Rp Sample:Kinto would move from behind the tree showing himself to the enemy. "Enough of the games." Kinto would make both his left and right hand rise into the air as from underneath his sleeve his kikaichū bugs would being to come out and filling up the air around Kinto and his enemy. "Your options are looking slim, you could either surrender and life or fight and die. Which one shall it be? By the way my bugs are pretty hungry." The enemy looked around in amazement to how many bugs was in the air and they all came form this little kid, but he wasn’t about to give up so easily like that. He did a couple of hand signs and took in a deep breath and blew out fire at some of Kinto bugs. "O0o someone's been doing there home work." Kinto watched as some of his bugs were being burned and killed by the fire but that didn't mean anything to him cause he could easily make more come out as he did. "You picked your choice." Kinto did about four hand signs and yelled out. "Secret Technique: Insect Sphere!" All of the bugs that were in the air from Kinto would being to surround the enemy making a globe of bugs around him to completely trap him. Once the bugs had the target trapped into place they would being to drain the target charka and slowly swallow him. The victim could be heard crying for help as the bugs were doing Kinto bidding. (ok i know i did a bit of godmodding. But that was cause i had to give an RP, and i'm a bit rusty at this just got back to Gaia in like a WHILE. so try to take it easy on me and if anything can you show me what i need to fix and how i could do better thank you.) well, this was a pretty difficult app to read simply because of grammar and spelling mistakes, but that's not what you're being judged on so let's see. One thing I noticed is that when the bugs were killed by the fire you were unphased because "he could easily make more come out as he did", I just want to make sure that you are aware that you do in fact have a limited supply of bugs. The biggest issue however is that there just wasn't a whole lot to this rp sample, so I can't really tell if you have a decent understanding of the clan or not. Yea i seen the system about the bugs after i had made the rp sample and stuff, and i understand i have a limit of bugs and the clan but the only issue is im not good at samples i can show you better in a fight agastines another person. cause samples is not my thing sweatdrop I also know that my bugs only got up to 6 hours to live and all that other stuff. I'm not gonna lie this is the first time im useing this clan.
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Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 7:09 pm
Rpc Name: Ichigo Yuki Village: Kiri Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Ink Artistry What you know about the clan/bl: Ink Artistry bloodline uses scroll and ink as weapons. Using ninja ink this bloodline can create a variety of animals do to various things. Birds for flying, Lions/Bears for attack and can even create small animals to sneak up on an opponent. Rp Sample: Ichigo looked at the time. It's time to train. He walked out into the garden to practice his ninjutsu. "Sumi Buushin no Jutsu," He said making a ink clone of himself. The ink clone ran off into the distance of the garden. Ichigo pulled out his sword Jezumo and ran after his clone. The clone threw some kunais at him; he dodged and sheathed his sword and took out a scroll and drew a tiger, "Choujuu Giga," Ichigo said, rapidly moving the brush on the paper. The tiger jumped out of the scroll ran after the clone. The clone had ran off, and tried going behind Ichigo, spraying senbon needles everywhere. He whipped around, and grabbed his scroll, moving the brush across the paper again and started to draw an umbrella that had each symbol of each village. "Choujuu Giga," Ichigo said summoning the umbrella. The umbrella dispersed, and the ink went everywhere, when it was hit.
Ichigo got closer and tried a new technique, "Sumi Gasumi no Jutsu," the area started to fog up with ink. He unsheathed his sword and attacked the clone but the clone, reacted by jumping back, I'm becoming stronger then usual my clones would have died by now. Where will he hit me next? Will it use some taijutsu or my genjutsu? The clone came behind Ichigo and pulled out some shurikens into his hand and threw them at him. Ichigo had to jump back but he had ,gotten hit by one of the shurikens. "Good, Good, let us end this right now," Ichigo said. The clone drew out his sword and they both were ready to strike each other down. They ran at each other and slashed upward at the same time. It seemed minutes had gone by and then The clone dissipated back into ink. "I took a good blow from that attack. I think I might need medical attention," Ichigo said walking off to the hospital, favoring his wound.
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Posted: Wed Jul 14, 2010 6:29 am
@Tsubaka: How come this rp sample sounds soo familiar!?
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Posted: Wed Jul 14, 2010 10:37 am
@Sosay: um... idk I had some help.
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Posted: Sun Jul 18, 2010 4:22 pm
Rpc Name: Zetsubou Tenshi Village: Kumogakure Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Anigan What you know about the clan/bl: I know that you must see at least ten animals to achieves first stage. You can only turn into animals at the last stage, but, you'll have to see twenty animals. Within the first stage you can only gain traits such as speed and strength. Second stage gives you features; and so forth. Rp Sample: Zet dodged the enemy's kunai and jumped back onto the branch of a large tree. His pupil shifted; turning brown with a slit. He jumped to a different limb, landing on all four and ran on all fours also. He had made his presence behind the ninja unclear as he smirked wildly. He jumped to his enemy; but missed barely as the new ninja threw a kick at him. He grabbed his enemies leg and threw him into a tree. The ninja ran at him; tossing kunai and shuriken at him. Zet's fangs disappeared as he felt a surge of speed he dodged with a cheetah-like speed. Strength rushed into him again as he decked the ninja int he face with a punch like a gorilla; shattering the ninja's jaw. The ninja started to get up as Zet loomed over the ninja and kciked him in the face with a kangaroo's pressure; causing his face to become smashed in; killing the ninja as he walked from the forest. "I win... Epicly!"
Wasn't too amazing but I had no clue how to really activate it. Sorry.
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Posted: Sun Jul 18, 2010 6:00 pm
Rpc Name: Toryuuku Shinjuku Village: Konoha Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Nara What you know about the clan/bl: (If you put everything it will be denied on the spot) I know this clan uses the shadows as their primary weapon and they also have a portion of the forest that only they can enter. Most people in this clan are battlefield geniuses and that they are quick at taking down an enermy Rp Sample: (at least 2 paragraphs of at least 10 lines using said BL or Clan) As Tory walked through the forest with a smile on his face his says ," My, my what a beautiful day for a walk." Then from beyond the trees a kunai is thrown and Tory dodges with a jump. Tory then says, "Whoever you are show yourself." A rouge ninja steps out of the forestation and says, "I want everything that's in your pockets." Tory then says, with a smile, "I'm sorry but I can't do that." He then performs handsigns for the Fireball technique and the rouge ninja dodges it. Tory uses the the shadows the fireball caused to use and extend his Shadow Possesion Technique. He catches the rouge ninja and with a smile he says, "Now I'm going to let you go. Only if you turn around and promise to forget about this battle." As the rouge ninja looked into Tory's eyes he said, "I-I promise." Tory released his jutsu and began to walk away. Just a Tory took his second step the rouge ninja attempted to assassinate him. Tory knew he was going to try something so he performed the Shadow Possesion Technique once again, but instead of possesing him he added another hand sign and turned into the the Shadow Sewing Technique and launched a tendril through the rouge ninjas' neck, mouth and left eye. As the rouge ninja was down on his knees gasping for life, with a smile Tory whispered, " Next time... you should keep your promise. Now die for Justice."
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Posted: Mon Jul 19, 2010 3:32 pm
Rpc Name: Koshinki, Retsuga
Village: Kanoha
Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Kaguya
What you know about the clan/bl: What i know about the clan is that they manipulate their bones as weapons. The bones can be used as projectiles or o close range weapon such as a large bone spike that comes out of their arm lol.
Rp Sample : Retsuga walked into an open field with a piece of blue licorice in his mouth. He hears wind resistance in the distance. A kunai is coming straight for him. He turns quickly and shoots a fragment of bone from his hand at the kunai deflecting it. Retsuga locks his sights on the area where the kunai came flying from. He makes a larger bone fragment and hurls it at the area. Hearing a cry of pain Retsuga knows that he has landed a hit. But just to make sure it's not a trick he checks out the scene. Retsuga sees a man with the bone fragment lodged into his stomach. So Retsuga continues walking through the open field. He finishes the piece of blue licorice feeling satisfied with his skill. He then makes a small bone fragment rolling it in his hand waiting on another confrontation.
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Posted: Mon Jul 19, 2010 5:50 pm
Rpc Name: Konaga Senna Village: Sand village Rank: Academy Bloodline or Clan applied for: Konaga Clan What you know about the clan/bl: Konaga clan is known for their kekkei Genkai pain effects it has on the body of the users burning their skin causing never ending pain.Bright end of this clan is there unlimted chakra supply.User most go into mediation for at least 6 hours to heal enjurys or pain they have done by using their clans Jutsu. Rp Sample:The Day of Senna's birthday.She was awakend by her fathers cry down the hallway.She walked slowly and quitly down towards the door where he let out a rampage's cry again."Father are you okay."He gave no reply back but a loud crash from inside.Senna scared felling a bit of pain rushed in only to trip on her mothers body laying coverd in blood.Her father back facing her turned slowly showing his bloodie hands stained red with burns all over his body,eyes cold darkend red."Mom..mom dad what did you do."As she said this he was charging forward making a chakra blade. Senna quickly moved right dodging it.His arm turned reder than it was leaving him rolling in pain for a moment.Senna grabbed on to his back shaking him,turning around quick he slamed her into the wall making both of them breaking throught it.Senna gets up slowly holding her head in pain has a arm grabbed her by the neck slaming her against ground,his other hand formed a chakra blade. Senna closed her eyes then opend them finding herself in the Suna hospital tied down in bed."Doctors she wake."two doctors walk in observeing Senna."Tell me child do you remember anything from last night like coverd in blood.She shakes her head side to side."Do you remeber anything like your name or your family."my... name its Senna Konaga, i dont seem to remeber them strange."Few months later grew up living on her own training to master in her Blood line trait.
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Posted: Mon Jul 19, 2010 7:45 pm
Rpc Name: Okuribi ( Cerimonial bonfire )
Village: Kirigakure
Rank: Academy student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Mokuton
What you know about the clan/bl: They combine Doton and Suiton together to create wood, and they are the only ones capable of using these techniques. The only known user of this technique is only able to do so because he was created from some of the first hokage's chakra, and the first Hokage develpoed how to do this, but could never master it. The Created being mastered it, and sired an entire clan, now Mokuton users are Fairly easy to find.
Rp Sample: "Where is he? " The leader said, looking down at Okuribi's clone. " He is fifty kilometers form Okuribi, and closing. The original is preparing for the Target. " The clone said, standing and bowing. " Hold out your hand so The original can communicate with you. The wood clone said, placing it's hand in the Leader's, and turning into a pill, resting in the Leader's hand. " Oh, I heard about this technique, but I've never tried it. " The leader said, eating the pill. 'you there Okuribi? ' Leader thought, supposedly now he would be able to communicate to Okuribi.
~ Miles away ~
" Yeah, I'm here, good thing you ate that pill... He is just arriving. " Okuribi said laughing, turning to the edge of the clearing. " Hello there, I'm Okuribi, The one who is going to capture your sorry little hide. " He said smiling, looking at the One tailed Genin Jinjuuriki.
" Grahhhh!!!! The Genin said, running forwards, faster than Okuribi, even though he was two ranks higher could percieve, that is if he hadn't placed a chakra seed on the Jinjuuriki earlier.
" Now, What is that? " He said, A wood Barrier popping up infront of him, the Jinjuuriki slamming into the wall he just created. " Now time for my second attack. " He said, placing his hands on the ground, he used Bamboo Blade Rising Skill, knowing exactly where the Jinjuuriki was with his Chakra seed Technique. " Hmph... " Okuribi said, walking out and looking at the Jinjuuriki impaled on the Bamboo blades. " Pity... I think I killed it. " He said, sighing. " Collect it anyways? All right you got it. but since it still has it's cloak on, I think I'll put it in the capsule before gathering it. " He said, sighing again, Wooden pillars coming out of the ground, and restraining the Jinjuuriki. " Binding pillars.. and now let's use these two... " He said using two small wood barriers, the jinjuuriki in the middle. " Now, Time to use this final jutsu. " He said sighing, making ten Wood clones, They all sighed in unison as they picked up the Capsule. " All right boys, let's head back to the Base. " He said sighing, turning to his old jutsus that were left behind after the fight was over. " Time to get rid of the Evidence. " He said, inhaling, expelling a Giant fireball jutsu, incinerating all the wood that he created besides the Clones and the Capsule containing the Jinjuuriki.
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Posted: Tue Jul 20, 2010 2:33 pm
Rpc Name: Kaito Ginryuu Village: Konoha Rank: Academy Bloodline or Clan applied for: Hyoton What you know about the clan: Using the combination of wind and water elements, the user is able to maniplutale and create ice to do their bidding. Whether to create walls, weapons of ice, or basic ice elemental attacks. It is highly resistant to physical attacks, the ice. Though just like normal ice, when coming in contact with fire, it will of course melt.
Rp Sample:
Only but a moment ago was the world quiet. As if nonexsistant yet at the same time exsisting like a shadow. The occasionaly cry of the mocking bird broke the silence. Quite suddenly, the trees above billowed with the wind, lashing violently like whips. A sea of green flushed the area. Animals scurried through the underbrush in great haste. A rabbit burrowed into it's hole, though now where near safe from the harm yet to come. A deer flitted through the trees, only now but a large brown blur racing to santuary traveling like the wind itself.
A large group of figures where to be seen in this flurry of sounds and shapes, pointed out to be the leafs of the trees. From the group, a total of five were counted. Their outfits blandly showing that they were shinobi. Their headbands showed that they were of Konohagure. Their movements from tree limb to tree limb were nimble and frantick. A man panted, out of breath. "I don't know how long we'll be able to evade them Captian!" Another man, large in statute looked back the the man how had panted earlier. "We'll have to some way or another." said the man posing to be Captain. Kaito cried out "We can't keep this up forever! We have to fight them!" Asahi's captain nodded at the motion, seeing how there was no other way. They all stopped on which ever tree branch they were on.
Fed up with running like a coward, Kaito stood firm at his spot. His captain moved over towards him. His eyes said everything. "How many?" Kaito breath. "Seven if not more.' A grimace played Kaito's visage. Suddenly a large boulder was sent hurdling out of now where. Kaito and co. leaped out of the boulder's path of destruction as it tumbled through the shrubbery. Attached to the boulder was a paper bomb. No. Not just one. The entire thing was covered with it. A light enshouded the rock, the light bouncing off the trees creating large shadows black as the night sky itself. "Hyoton: Kori Kabe no Jutsu! (Ice Barrier)" Kaito exclaimed. A deafening roar filled Asahi's ears. Trees were sent flying. Shrubs were burnt to a crips. and animals breathed their last breath of oxygen as the force of the explosion wiped out the flames of their lives. A large crater from where the boulder had exploded was left. Like a pack of wolves surrounding a innocent lamb, several shinobi made a circle around Kaito's team. Around Kaito and whom ever was near him a barrier of ice veiled them from the attack, but had taken quite a toll on Kaito and he did not save everyone. Only his captain and another shinobi survived the blast. Swaet beaded his forehead, moistening his head band. Luckily in the team there was a medical ninja to attend to Kaito. He was given a pill which he ate in a hurry. His chakra rose exponentially. "You can yell at me later. After I finish this." his voice quivering but held fast onto it's stubborness. His captain gave him an incredulous look. "Don't be stupid you can't take on all of them on your own!" Kaito smirked. "Watch me." Dog, Rabbit, Boar, Dog, Dragon. He did a series of complicated hand signs. To their enemy it was if they were sitting ducks. They launched themselves onto the dome without much second thought. One of the enemy used a flame based attack, causing the ice of the barriar to melt. "s**t.." Kaito muttered. A hole was made through the dome, and Asahi made no waste of time. Suiton: Mizurappa!"(Violent Water Wave)" A wave of water rushed through the hole hitting the enemy square in the chest and was sent flying to hit a tree truck with a loud 'Thud'. With water available to him now,as it soaked the ground, he cried out making another set of hand signs "Hyoton: Shimobashira (Ice Needles)". He put his hands out from either sideof him. The dome surrounding them broke and reformed into large needle like projectiles. At the flick of Kaito's finger they shot out in all directions, impaling all of those who assualted the dome or where foolish to come even close to the hemisphere. The world went silent, as the enemy either retreated or was already dead. "Y-you did it!" eclaimed the medical ninja beside him. Kaito couldn't hear the man, he had already passed out.
(( Only an example correct? My first time doing something like this... [iz a newbie] : ))
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Posted: Tue Jul 20, 2010 11:43 pm
Rpc Name: Sin BlackWitch Village: Kumo Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Satetsu What you know about the clan/bl: The Iron Sand is a special technique used by the Third Kazekage (Woot), in combination with his unique ability to convert chakra into magnetic forces. The Third studied a host of the One-Tailed Shukaku and learned to imitate the power to control sand. However, when he imitated sand techniques, he used iron powder instead, thanks to his special magnetic powers. He could use it to crush his opponents or even mold the sand into weapons. The Iron Sand can also clot up the joints of puppets, making them unusable in battle as long as the Third Kazekage's magnetic field is in effect. Chiyo referred this technique as "the most feared weapon in the history of Sunagakure". (There wasn't really any info about the bloodline in the bloodline page..) Rp Sample: Sin rested her hands on the blunt side of her sword which rested in its carrier that was on the small of her back, she had just spent the day at the academy teaching the young up rising Academy Students of Kumo. She was now bored and had nothing to do but to go home and go to bed but she wasn't that kind of person, she wanted to test her abilities and grow farther as a ninja. She shrugged as she decided it would be best to go on a walk around the perimeter of the village, on her way to the gate she held the clash of metal and the final screams of a few of the Shinobi who guarded her village. She instantly pulled out a few kunai and shuriken before preforming her Ninja Bihin Ejin Giryou Jutsu, (guessing it dose not take hand seals or words?) almost instantly the kunai and shuriken broken a part into what seemed to be Iron sand. She grinned at this easy feat before sending the sand down deep into the ground. She knew this would take some time but it would be better for her to go prepared for going to what ever was causing the screams. After a little while of waiting a large amount of iron sand rose from the ground, she then nodded to her self before heading off quickly towards the sounds of fighting, her iron sand soaring through the air behind her. Once there she stood there in shock at the horrible scene laid in front of her, at least 12 Anbu Black Ops and a few guards slaughtered into countless pieces. "No way.." She then shook her head as she saw a single shinobi going through the belongings of a fallen guard, instantly her hands began to form hand seals and said, "Kaneton Release - Hagane Dama" After gathering a little of the Iron sand in her hands it formed into pellets of steel before shooting at high speeds towards the unknown shinobi. The shinobi happened to be waiting for someone to arrive but didn't expect someone to preform such a fast jutsu after just getting there. The shinobi jumped quickly into the air barely making it out of the way in time. "Got you now!" Sin yelled to him before forming another set of hand seals, normally she wasn't one to attack fist and ask questions later but when it came to her village she was forced to be like that. "Satetsu Kesshuu!" The Iron sand around her quickly formed into two large and heavy blocks in which she was able to control. After the two blocks were made they were sent flying towards the shinobi in attempt to crush him but the shinobi used a body substitution jutsu before the blocks got close enough to smash him. "Dam where did he-?" Before she was able to finish, the shinobi's leg slammed into her stomach and sent her crashing into a building, her body remained lifeless for a few seconds before she got up out of the rubble. "Is that all you've got?" She grinned as the two blocks were now above the Shinobi, after quickly forming a set of hand seals she said, "Satetsu Shigure!" Suddenly the two large blocks broke apart into iron sand once again before forming into small piercing clumps that suddenly rained down upon the shinobi. Instead of running like any other shinobi would he formed a set of hand seals before breathing in and putting a hand up to his mouth, after doing this he quickly blew a giant fireball from his mouth which ended up melting all of Sin's Iron sand. Before any of the heated metal rained down on him he preformed another Substitution jutsu to get get out the way. "Is that all you've got?" The Shinobi spoke slowly as to mock her.
There.. Its done! If its not good or needs more let me know.
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