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Posted: Sun Jan 29, 2012 6:47 pm
Sounds pretty good actually. The ball 'n' chain reminds me of Onox, and partially Veran, but probably because they're both villains in the Oracle games, since they're pretty much parallel.
Yeeaah, the clothes bit does sound a little brutal for a Hylian, even an evil one.
Overall, she could work. I'd just need to figure out what tripped in her brain to make her work for demons.
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Posted: Sun Jan 29, 2012 7:36 pm
Maybe they met her at a point in her life when she was already cruel and generally evil-ish, and pulled the "If you do our bidding, you'll get this and this and even this" shtick.
Or she could just be corrupted by her own means...er, her own experiences in life and whatnot, I mean.
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Posted: Sun Jan 29, 2012 7:40 pm
mmm, The first one sounds a little cliche (but then again, what isn't nowadays lol) The second has possibility, but it would need to be elaborated a little. That's how I feel about it, anyway.
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Posted: Sun Jan 29, 2012 7:54 pm
I had that exact thought just now. Writing a backstory as we speak. Let's pray my ADD doesn't kill it. XD
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Posted: Sun Jan 29, 2012 8:01 pm
I'm sure I can work around whatever you cook up. I don't have much besides the backstories of the ultimate boss and the main cast.
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Posted: Sun Jan 29, 2012 11:10 pm
Now, Banshee, you know as soon as you see a shiny object, you're gonna get distracted for five hours. XD
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Posted: Mon Jan 30, 2012 10:59 am
Alright, finally finished off the evils for the ar! Still gotta get 1 more good person (or not, I'll see how this goes) before I start rendering.
And Luke, I hope you're not offended, but I gave your character idea the title of Venomess (her name's still Aislin) I wish I could've gotten more of her on the cover art, but I was low on room to fit anything more than a bust, so yeah. I'm still working on armor and whatnot (aside from the awesome pauldrons I was able to fit in)
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Posted: Mon Jan 30, 2012 1:06 pm
That actually sounds great! Aislin the Venomess. I like it. XD
What I decided to do with her past:
She was on vacation with her parents around the Lost Woods area, and they were attacked by a horde of monsters (I figured Wolfos and Stalfos... I know it's not THAT important which kinds of monsters, but, well, I just can't stop myself XD) and a couple of exiled Knights of Hyrule (I'm doing my best to stop myself from making complicated back-stories for them O_o), almost pretty much at the same time. The monsters killed her parents, but she managed to take the ex-Knights' weapons and slay the monsters. The ex-Knights realized, oh s**t, we shouldn't have pissed this girl off! And run away into the woods, most likely to eventually become Stalfos, cause well, you know the drill.
Now keep in mind that Aislin's about thirteen at this point. Old enough to kill something, apparently, but not old enough to live on her own. So she wandered through the forest, making it out of the Lost Woods but still being lost in a sea of trees. She had to take care of herself from that point on, so she survived any way she could. She used the weapons (ball-and-chain and dagger) to kill whatever animals she was lucky enough to find for dinner, and when her clothes became run down and useless, she started to use the dagger to make new ones from the skins of her prey. Of course, she was horrible at it at first, with no experience, but after the first few times, she would start to get the hang of it. So she had her hunting prey for food as well as clothing, and she had streams and tiny gullies for water, and she had the thick forest full of trees, leaves, and moss to lie her. But she had nothing but her own gloomy and destructive thoughts to keep her company. Eventually, she became so full of hate and rage that it became all she was, even after the details of the event of those years ago started to blur in her mind. Twenty years had passed, and that was when she met... DUN DUN DUUNNNN!
I've started to feel bad for her! gonk Daddy's sorry, Aislin! It'll be okay someday!
<.< >.> Anywho.... What do you think?
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Posted: Mon Jan 30, 2012 1:26 pm
I'm trying to work my head around it fitting into the general storyline...
It looks like it could work though.
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Posted: Mon Jan 30, 2012 2:08 pm
Alrighty! If you need to change something, feel free. Or if you need me to change something, let me know. But I'm pretty much giving you complete control over her now.
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Posted: Thu Feb 02, 2012 10:05 am
Anyone there? *echoes*
>.>'
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Posted: Thu Feb 02, 2012 11:44 am
Hm...
Wonder where the Captain went to now...?
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Posted: Thu Feb 02, 2012 11:47 am
I don't know. I haven't seen either of you lately.
I'm also thinking bout making yet another character (good) but unsure about any villains. I'm not exactly great when it comes to portraying evil, even though I'm doing just that with Sons of Time.
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Posted: Thu Feb 02, 2012 12:20 pm
Yes, and I apologize for that, although I've finally gotten around to making my next post. :3
If you want to make another character, I'd say go for it, although we wouldn't want you to be weighed down by too many. But then again, that's coming from someone who finds it strenuous to play just two characters at the same time. sweatdrop
And yes, it can be hard to take a tremendous step outside of ourselves, so to speak, but it's something we all come to do at some point. It's one of the biggest challenges, if not THE biggest, that writers must face. I look forward to reading more of this intricate story of yours. biggrin
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Posted: Thu Feb 02, 2012 12:28 pm
Well look forward to posting more of it!
It's quite alright with another character, I'm managing 4 in the other zelda RP, not to mention countless others, even NPC's, in an original RP of mine called The Meteor, so I'll be fine.
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