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 Posted: Tue May 07, 2013 4:43 pm
Name of weapon: Daifu
Who owns the weapon:Siba Ono
Where it was found/Who made it: Siba
The Range of the weapon:65 inches (Average length of a "Great" katana, or Odachi
Weakness: Other than the size making it somewhat of a slower weapon, drawing the blade makes it impossible for Siba to hide his true intentions.
Description: So when Siba draws his blade it will cast a genjutsu onto who ever hear the "Shhhhhing" of the blade, and there will be one, of two results.
Hate: If intent is to kill (Or seriously injure in some less epic cases) when this sword is unsheathed those who hear it know it. The sword will lash out at pouring as much of Siba's hate at the enemy as it can (Varies by rank, will be explained below.) ranging from a simple ominous presence to a full blow visual scene of fallen foes taken by the blade.
E Rank: Super simple, a tinge of anger can be 'felt' if the genjutsu takes effect, no serious effect takes place.
D Rank: The hate toward the victim can be felt on a more physical level at this point, chill will rise though the enemy and can even cause fleeing in some foes. (At opponents discretion.)
--- Usable only after a real fight --
C Rank: Causing real emotional stress at this point the fear felt by the opponent starts a cold sweat, and questioning of ones own skill in comparison to his opponent.
--- Usable only after killing a RPC ---
B rank: A dead body will appear to the enemy and instantly it will know them as victims to the Daifu. The cold sweat worsens at this level and on top of ones ability being questioned the chance of being kill, of this being the end is made very clear.
--- Usable after killing two or more RPC---
A rank: Same as last rank only instead of the one body it is all slain rpcs and the thought of ones own death plays through the enemy's head over and over, seeing different ways they can be killed until the genjutsu is broken.
--- Only usable at a Jonin Rank ---
S rank: Seeing there self slain instantly the victim isn't sure weather or not this have or haven't been attacked. The genjutsu will cause 'real' pain but no damage, and force the enemy to feel, and deal with true fear during the fight. Only a strong enough Kai and dealing and overcoming whit what you think to be certain death can save you.
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Sorrow: This is not really a combat tool, when Siba's sword is dawn with no ill intent the sorrow he felt while making the blade, and thinking of his Father will flood into people hearing the blades cry. The emotions of Siba will flow through the person showing them his true feelings. Even emotionally hardened people will feel the emotions cause by the blade, even if they try to hide, or ignore it.
(For hate jutsu the needed amount of chakra will be drained per rank, and the strength will be at my own discretion. As for the sorrow, like I said there is no real way for me to use it in a fight since it only works when Siba is drawing his blade with no hate or anger. It has no rank up, or extra strength just something I really wanted to add to give more to the weapon than a Mwahahahaha super powers!!!! If a Chakra cost is needed I will be happy to add it as you see fit.)
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Posted: Wed May 08, 2013 12:55 pm
-o-Havik-o- The Range of the weapon:65 inches (Average length of a "Great" katana, or Odachi Not my area so I'm not going to comment much on this one (Though I'm sure you'll appreciate the bump to notify Luo. ... On that note actually, you should quote him. According to him he's pretty busy lately, and without that he likely won't even notice this for quite awhile.), but I do have one question. How is this sword sheathed? Or rather, what kind of sheath does it have? I skimmed your app in TUP just now and saw you were drawing it over the shoulder. Decided to do a test with a handy chunk of wood I've got, and tried "Drawing" it in that way, while holding it at the small of my back, since that's where a generic back sheath would, I would think, be strapped for stability. As I expected, it was impossible to draw. My arm was over-extended before it even began to come near free of the "Sheath". Same with a hip sheath. Basically, with a sword this size, if you want it to be realistic at all, you need to include details such as how it's transported, especially when drawing it relates to it's ability. Unless your character is about ten feet tall, using a normal sheath will leave this sword impossible to draw while wearing it.
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed May 08, 2013 1:13 pm
Hinote Tosatsu -o-Havik-o- The Range of the weapon:65 inches (Average length of a "Great" katana, or Odachi Not my area so I'm not going to comment much on this one (Though I'm sure you'll appreciate the bump to notify Luo. ... On that note actually, you should quote him. According to him he's pretty busy lately, and without that he likely won't even notice this for quite awhile.), but I do have one question. How is this sword sheathed? Or rather, what kind of sheath does it have? I skimmed your app in TUP just now and saw you were drawing it over the shoulder. Decided to do a test with a handy chunk of wood I've got, and tried "Drawing" it in that way, while holding it at the small of my back, since that's where a generic back sheath would, I would think, be strapped for stability. As I expected, it was impossible to draw. My arm was over-extended before it even began to come near free of the "Sheath". Same with a hip sheath. Basically, with a sword this size, if you want it to be realistic at all, you need to include details such as how it's transported, especially when drawing it relates to it's ability. Unless your character is about ten feet tall, using a normal sheath will leave this sword impossible to draw while wearing it.
A hip unsheathe you have to point the hillt toward the ground, and a sort of swing upward motion to get it all the way out. I have been thinking of a way to write it I like, kinda stuck there on the app (Granted it doesnt really have anything to do with the demon buuuuut yeah I am aloud to be a a** if I want to.) It is part of the being slow weakness now that I think of it I probably should of pointed it out specifically.
Thanks for letting me know to Q Luo
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Posted: Wed May 08, 2013 1:14 pm
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Posted: Sun May 12, 2013 10:40 pm
Processing Request Please allow two days for review and evaluation. Thank you. ~Luo
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Posted: Sat May 18, 2013 3:12 pm
Luo1304 Processing Request Please allow two days for review and evaluation. Thank you. ~Luo
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Posted: Fri May 24, 2013 8:15 am
Havik: Because of what ability this weapon is based around, I feel it necessary for it to have the caveat of only working on people at your rank or below. It wouldn't make sense for example, for the C-rank ability to question ones own skill against Siba to apply to a jounin when you're a genin/chuunin.
Apart from that and giving sorrow and E-rank chakra cost, it seems fine to me.
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Posted: Sat May 25, 2013 12:34 pm
I'd like to point out that there should be no "Unbreakable" genjutsu, especially not one created by a weapon, with no jutsu used. The genjutsu should follow the usual scale, and likely also be slightly weaker than normal due to the lack of a sentient creator.
I'd also like to point out that, at least to me, the "Sorrow" aspect sounds a hell of a lot more intimidating than the rest. The rest are creating false emotions and feelings in the target, which are easily identified as such and overcome, even if you cant quite break the genjutsu. The other however can be identified as originating from the user, and the victim is left to determine for themselves just what it's about. I'd be a lot more worried by a dude coming towards me exuding pure grief while swinging a giant sword than by an obvious attempt at making me fear them using pseudo-killing intent. Not really a critique or anything, just an interesting note.
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun May 26, 2013 4:13 pm
Luo1304 Havik: Because of what ability this weapon is based around, I feel it necessary for it to have the caveat of only working on people at your rank or below. It wouldn't make sense for example, for the C-rank ability to question ones own skill against Siba to apply to a jounin when you're a genin/chuunin. Apart from that and giving sorrow and E-rank chakra cost, it seems fine to me.
@Hinote: Not really my intention for the ability but ha...hahahahaha would be a funny off rp story just me being real sad, making my opponent real sad about having to kill him.
"Dude I am so sorry!" "
I know man, dont worry about I know know how you feel."
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Posted: Thu May 30, 2013 8:44 am
-o-Havik-o- Luo1304 Havik: Because of what ability this weapon is based around, I feel it necessary for it to have the caveat of only working on people at your rank or below. It wouldn't make sense for example, for the C-rank ability to question ones own skill against Siba to apply to a jounin when you're a genin/chuunin. Apart from that and giving sorrow and E-rank chakra cost, it seems fine to me.
@Hinote: Not really my intention for the ability but ha...hahahahaha would be a funny off rp story just me being real sad, making my opponent real sad about having to kill him.
"Dude I am so sorry!" "
I know man, dont worry about I know know how you feel."
Well I can't necessarily go off of what you like, but rather what makes sense. However, I can compromise with that seeing as how being a higher rank doesn't necessarily make you immune to genjutsu, but rather gives you a better chance at recognizing one. And yes, as Hinote pointed out (I felt I didn't need to), no jutsu is "unbreakable" which I'm going to assume you already knew. So of course it will follow the usual scale, however I'm not going to bust your balls over the ability coming from a half sentient sword and give you a reduction to its only ability because it doesn't come directly from you. You're paying the chakra costs for the genjutsu, so when it comes down to it they are coming from you.
Unless there's anything else to say, you're APPROVED.
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Posted: Tue Jul 02, 2013 9:46 pm
Name of weapon: Sword of the Prepared
Who owns the weapon: Whoever happens to find it.
Where it was found/Who made it: The tallest tower, on the tallest peak in lightning country. It is gaurded by the skeleton of a mighty dragon who didnt get enough to eat.
The Range of the weapon: 6' L X 4' H X6'W or 3' as a sword
Weakness: Turns into a tent at night whether you want it to or not.
Description: Turns into a tent at night whether you want it to or not.
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Posted: Tue Jul 02, 2013 9:49 pm
Hikaro: No message necessary.
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jul 03, 2013 4:24 am
Sorry to step on your toes here Luo, but I think we need to see stats and just more all around information on this dragon first. Have to be sure someone can actually get the thing after all. But not too easily.
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Posted: Wed Jul 03, 2013 7:20 am
its stats are all zero. its dead.
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Posted: Wed Jul 03, 2013 9:17 am
"It is guarded by the skeleton of a mighty dragon who didn't get enough to eat."
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