Love to stamp this one way or the other for you but im not a mod anymore.
i hear u. i just didnt delete ur quote thing cuz i dont want no one calling me a fraud like im trying to escape approvals
Posted: Fri Apr 19, 2019 11:20 pm
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I know blessing of the earth doesn't increase the cap but I was just offering that as a possible alternative since doubling the rate is too much heart
Ward the of the depths is cool except for one itty bity line "She does not receive the penalties for wearing heavy armour" This conflicts with the buki class discipline so it has to be denied
I see. Ward of the Depths should probably say "does not recieve heavy armour penalties from this armour" but I've removed it entirely as I'm sure that would still run afoul. New PA just allows me to cast Jutsu in the ground or not centred on me when they should be.
Is Blessing of the Earth good as it just gives a constant meditation state (100 NE a round?)
Thanks
If you mean in combat it would 50 ne a round yo only get 100 when you are out of combat. So from this PA I am assuming you are wanting to always be able to gain 100 NE chakra out of combat without having to sit and meditate correct? Because if you mean in combat the number cannot go past 50 and to be honest even if I gave you that it would just conflict with your custom razz
Is 50 the hard cap for regeneration of Natural Energy in combat? I had thought it was 1/3 of your total pool of Stamina and Chakra as referred to in the Hoshigaki Sage Mode? I'm under the impression Hoshigaki Sage Mode is a little old though and might represent an older system?
I can't see anything about a cap on enhanced generation of Natural Energy to be honest and if you could show me where the cap of Natural Energy generation is referred to in the systems I'd be grateful. Perhaps this is part of the overhaul?
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Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2019 3:09 pm
Pad Chief
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I know blessing of the earth doesn't increase the cap but I was just offering that as a possible alternative since doubling the rate is too much heart
Ward the of the depths is cool except for one itty bity line "She does not receive the penalties for wearing heavy armour" This conflicts with the buki class discipline so it has to be denied
I see. Ward of the Depths should probably say "does not recieve heavy armour penalties from this armour" but I've removed it entirely as I'm sure that would still run afoul. New PA just allows me to cast Jutsu in the ground or not centred on me when they should be.
Is Blessing of the Earth good as it just gives a constant meditation state (100 NE a round?)
Thanks
If you mean in combat it would 50 ne a round yo only get 100 when you are out of combat. So from this PA I am assuming you are wanting to always be able to gain 100 NE chakra out of combat without having to sit and meditate correct? Because if you mean in combat the number cannot go past 50 and to be honest even if I gave you that it would just conflict with your custom razz
Is 50 the hard cap for regeneration of Natural Energy in combat? I had thought it was 1/3 of your total pool of Stamina and Chakra as referred to in the Hoshigaki Sage Mode? I'm under the impression Hoshigaki Sage Mode is a little old though and might represent an older system?
I can't see anything about a cap on enhanced generation of Natural Energy to be honest and if you could show me where the cap of Natural Energy generation is referred to in the systems I'd be grateful. Perhaps this is part of the overhaul?
We're in the process of changing them right now and the bloodline sage modes just haven't been updated with the new information yet! The cap to NE is now 750 chakra with you being able to gather 50 chakra per post or 100 chakra per post dedicated to meditation outside of combat. I know an announcement went out but it should just have replaced the old sage page in the systems subfourm! This was actually something I was going to bring up to you i the custom jutsu section with your keystone
Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2019 3:38 pm
Using my One free repsec fo Ikuyo -New class Buki -Updated chakra/stamina -Updated jutsu totals
Hair Color: Blonde Eye Color: Blue Height: 5 ' 4 ft Weight: 115lbs
Bloodline: Senju
Non-Combat Outfit: Generally wears animal skins and pelts made into smooth leather. Hair is woven into braids and thrown back over her shoulder like in the picture. Swords are commonly found strapped to her side or back. A pouch with delicious berries and dried jerky is always on hand.
Combat Outfit: Same as non combat outfit.
▰▰▰ SOCIAL AND PERSONALITY
Nindo: In time, everything will be returned to the earth.
Personality:
It is a rare occasion that Ikuyo shows what she is feeling to strangers as from birth she was taught by her tribe to hide such thoughts. One must always be pure of mind so as to better hear the call of the wild. This applied to Ikuyo more than any other with the power of her clans ancestors flowing strongly in her veins. Although it is not to say she feels,nothing at all, far from it in fact. Deep within her the easily excitable and interactive girl bustles within her, always driving her to ask questions and question her reality. This is doubled in strength with those from the villages as their customs and methods of handling things confuse her.
Above all of this however, Ikuyo values her freedom and the protection of the forests. She might enjoy learning the customs of others but will never except them as her own. She considers herself the unbridled embodiment of natures fury and justice.
Village: Kogarashi Rogue Title: n/a
Background:
Far from the sight of the villages Ikuyo was born in a small group of clans men who not only survived off of the land but worshiped it. As such they were primal and cruel to it's members, believing very much that only the strong should live.
This is the lived Ikuyo lived. From birth she was targeted for being weaker than others of her clan and yet supposedly carrying the purest of it's blood. Beaten and pushed to the edge every day of her life, those in her clan sought to awaken what they knew to be within her and day after day her failure disappointed them further.
Eventually she was driven off from the village as they believed she must be a bad luck omen. A sign of weak blood and a loss of favor from mother earth Ikuyo was forced to survive on her own in the wilds.
"My blood boiled with hatred for them and yet.. After months for starvation and being on the brink of death I started to consider that the safety the clan might have had been better than the endless suffering. I learned what it meant to have no people."
It was in this moment of weakness the Ikuyo offered herself to mother earth, the ancestors, any who would deliver her from this torment. That is where her prowess over nature itself awoken. The land itself fueled it's chakra into her and Ikuyo unleashed the full might of her anguish. Returning to her village Ikuyo decimated everyone and everything, returning all to the earth.
"No one living has heared of the village of my birth, and no one ever will."
▰▰▰ CLASSES AND STATS
First Class: Medic ▱▰▱ Medical Expert → Shinobi of this discipline are experts in medical nin in all aspects. Those who pick this discipline have their medical nin limitations mirrored between the three different types of medical ninjutsu; healing, situational, and offensive. If they have specialized; they may only trade in slots from one of these 3 types. The shinobi also obtains 3 custom techniques for medical ninjutsu.
Second Class: Bukijutsu ▱▰▱ Mystic Hero → You are much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into your personal arsenal. Through your great devotion to this path you can cast ninjutsu can cast ninjutsu up to your body rank without hand seals while wielding a weapon. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use and require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. They also cannot be molded during another attack, meaning you cannot be swinging a sword and using this discipline to charge a ninjutsu at the same time. You also gain 2 extra ninjutsu slots per rank. In addition, once every other post all three of your activations in a post can be used for offensive bukijutsu
Chakra Pool: 790 Stamina Pool: 485 Chakra Element: Doton and Suiton Chakra Color: Blue Chakra Materialization: Tribal tattoos covering her face and body. Passive Stats Increases: • Strength ► 4 →→ Phantom Slayer, Shigure Souen • Speed ► 5 →→ Phantom Slayer, Jiyūgata Senpū • Reflex ► 0 →→ N/A • Fortitude ► 2 →→ Shigure Souen
+50 Chakra April fools +150 Chakra from One Year +200 Chakra and Stamina AC
Strengths: • Always alert • Spent her life surviving outdoors
Weaknesses: • Close Combat • Poor social skills. Things like when to touch or not to touch and bargaining without offending.
Fears: • Loss of freedom. Sort of like claustrophobia but with someone else controlling her actions or boxing her in, aka being puppeted. • Being eaten. A primal fear that has been ingrained in her from childhood fairytales of large beasts on islands ruled by animals.
Modifiers: • Learns [2] more Medical technique per post. • Learn [2] extra Bukijutsu techniques per post • All Mokuton users learn 1 extra Doton [ Earth ] and Suiton [ Water ] ninjutsu per post.
Personal Attributes:
• Naturalization: With their connection to natural energy, the Senju have learned to eliminate the usage of handseals for mokuton, instead able to form ninjutsu with simplistic somatic actions such as claps, waves of the arms, stomps etc. In addition, they are capable of creating their Mokuton techniques from any surface that isn't in use by another ninja. This includes their own Mokuton techniques.
• Legends and Legacies: Senju have a bonus of +100 chakra to their chakra pools.
• Diversity is Key: The Senju can choose any two of the following: 10 Ninjutsu or Genjutsu, One Tai, One Buki Style. (I choose tai and buki)
• Studious Swordswoman - Ikuyo is capable of using a medium length blade in place of a buki style's traditional weapon type (Within reason).
Traits
• Senju are naturally able to access a specialized sage mode for them to use their own senjutsu with at A rank. It only requires 5 posts of deep meditation on their connection to life itself for them to access it. This sage mode follows guild sage mode rules, but does not provide any boosts on top of allowing the user to access those techniques. Compatible with human or animal sage mode simultaneously.
▰▰▰ JOBS AND MISSIONS
Ryo: 両0 AC: 10,000
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees • || → • || → • || → • || →
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Job Titles • || → • || →
Job Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Mission, Training, and Job Claims
Missions Claim: [ x ] Training Claim: [ x ] Jobs Claim: [ x ]
▰▰▰ INVENTORY • • • • • •
Weapon Specs
Holiday Rewards
+1 Tai style One Year
+25 training post coupons One Year
Worker's Package: Ability to have an additional custom crafted item of the user's highest available crafting tier, and able to max out a single crafting branch's skill line for free. One Year
• Kai | Rank X | Default • Henge no Jutsu | Rank E | Default • Bunshin no Jutsu | Rank E | Default • Substitution Technique | Rank E | Default • Art of Walking on Water | D Rank | Default • Art of Walking on Walls | D Rank | Default • Kekkai Massatsu no Jutsu [ Barrier Shatter Technique ]
Rank B • Gousuiwan no Jutsu [ Strong Water Arm Technique ] • Gufuu Suika no Jutsu [ Typhoon Water Vortex Technique ] • Goshokuzame [ Five Sharks Eating ]
Hair Color: Blonde Eye Color: Blue Height: 5 ' 4 ft Weight: 115lbs
Bloodline: Senju
Non-Combat Outfit: Generally wears animal skins and pelts made into smooth leather. Hair is woven into braids and thrown back over her shoulder like in the picture. Swords are commonly found strapped to her side or back. A pouch with delicious berries and dried jerky is always on hand.
Combat Outfit: Same as non combat outfit.
▰▰▰ SOCIAL AND PERSONALITY
Nindo: In time, everything will be returned to the earth.
Personality:
It is a rare occasion that Ikuyo shows what she is feeling to strangers as from birth she was taught by her tribe to hide such thoughts. One must always be pure of mind so as to better hear the call of the wild. This applied to Ikuyo more than any other with the power of her clans ancestors flowing strongly in her veins. Although it is not to say she feels,nothing at all, far from it in fact. Deep within her the easily excitable and interactive girl bustles within her, always driving her to ask questions and question her reality. This is doubled in strength with those from the villages as their customs and methods of handling things confuse her.
Above all of this however, Ikuyo values her freedom and the protection of the forests. She might enjoy learning the customs of others but will never except them as her own. She considers herself the unbridled embodiment of natures fury and justice.
Village: Kogarashi Rogue Title: n/a
Background:
Far from the sight of the villages Ikuyo was born in a small group of clans men who not only survived off of the land but worshiped it. As such they were primal and cruel to it's members, believing very much that only the strong should live.
This is the lived Ikuyo lived. From birth she was targeted for being weaker than others of her clan and yet supposedly carrying the purest of it's blood. Beaten and pushed to the edge every day of her life, those in her clan sought to awaken what they knew to be within her and day after day her failure disappointed them further.
Eventually she was driven off from the village as they believed she must be a bad luck omen. A sign of weak blood and a loss of favor from mother earth Ikuyo was forced to survive on her own in the wilds.
"My blood boiled with hatred for them and yet.. After months for starvation and being on the brink of death I started to consider that the safety the clan might have had been better than the endless suffering. I learned what it meant to have no people."
It was in this moment of weakness the Ikuyo offered herself to mother earth, the ancestors, any who would deliver her from this torment. That is where her prowess over nature itself awoken. The land itself fueled it's chakra into her and Ikuyo unleashed the full might of her anguish. Returning to her village Ikuyo decimated everyone and everything, returning all to the earth.
"No one living has heared of the village of my birth, and no one ever will."
▰▰▰ CLASSES AND STATS
First Class: Medic ▱▰▱ Medical Expert → Shinobi of this discipline are experts in medical nin in all aspects. Those who pick this discipline have their medical nin limitations mirrored between the three different types of medical ninjutsu; healing, situational, and offensive. If they have specialized; they may only trade in slots from one of these 3 types. The shinobi also obtains 3 custom techniques for medical ninjutsu.
Second Class: Bukijutsu ▱▰▱ Mystic Hero → You are much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into your personal arsenal. Through your great devotion to this path you can cast ninjutsu can cast ninjutsu up to your body rank without hand seals while wielding a weapon. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use and require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. They also cannot be molded during another attack, meaning you cannot be swinging a sword and using this discipline to charge a ninjutsu at the same time. You also gain 2 extra ninjutsu slots per rank. In addition, once every other post all three of your activations in a post can be used for offensive bukijutsu
Chakra Pool: 790 Stamina Pool: 485 Chakra Element: Doton and Suiton Chakra Color: Blue Chakra Materialization: Tribal tattoos covering her face and body. Passive Stats Increases: • Strength ► 4 →→ Phantom Slayer, Shigure Souen • Speed ► 5 →→ Phantom Slayer, Jiyūgata Senpū • Reflex ► 0 →→ N/A • Fortitude ► 2 →→ Shigure Souen
+50 Chakra April fools +150 Chakra from One Year +200 Chakra and Stamina AC
Strengths: • Always alert • Spent her life surviving outdoors
Weaknesses: • Close Combat • Poor social skills. Things like when to touch or not to touch and bargaining without offending.
Fears: • Loss of freedom. Sort of like claustrophobia but with someone else controlling her actions or boxing her in, aka being puppeted. • Being eaten. A primal fear that has been ingrained in her from childhood fairytales of large beasts on islands ruled by animals.
Modifiers: • Learns [2] more Medical technique per post. • Learn [2] extra Bukijutsu techniques per post • All Mokuton users learn 1 extra Doton [ Earth ] and Suiton [ Water ] ninjutsu per post.
Personal Attributes:
• Naturalization: With their connection to natural energy, the Senju have learned to eliminate the usage of handseals for mokuton, instead able to form ninjutsu with simplistic somatic actions such as claps, waves of the arms, stomps etc. In addition, they are capable of creating their Mokuton techniques from any surface that isn't in use by another ninja. This includes their own Mokuton techniques.
• Legends and Legacies: Senju have a bonus of +100 chakra to their chakra pools.
• Diversity is Key: The Senju can choose any two of the following: 10 Ninjutsu or Genjutsu, One Tai, One Buki Style. (I choose tai and buki)
• Studious Swordswoman - Ikuyo is capable of using a medium length blade in place of a buki style's traditional weapon type (Within reason).
Traits
• Senju are naturally able to access a specialized sage mode for them to use their own senjutsu with at A rank. It only requires 5 posts of deep meditation on their connection to life itself for them to access it. This sage mode follows guild sage mode rules, but does not provide any boosts on top of allowing the user to access those techniques. Compatible with human or animal sage mode simultaneously.
▰▰▰ JOBS AND MISSIONS
Ryo: 両0 AC: 10,000
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees • || → • || → • || → • || →
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Job Titles • || → • || →
Job Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Mission, Training, and Job Claims
Missions Claim: [ x ] Training Claim: [ x ] Jobs Claim: [ x ]
▰▰▰ INVENTORY • • • • • •
Weapon Specs
Holiday Rewards
+1 Tai style One Year
+25 training post coupons One Year
Worker's Package: Ability to have an additional custom crafted item of the user's highest available crafting tier, and able to max out a single crafting branch's skill line for free. One Year
• Kai | Rank X | Default • Henge no Jutsu | Rank E | Default • Bunshin no Jutsu | Rank E | Default • Substitution Technique | Rank E | Default • Art of Walking on Water | D Rank | Default • Art of Walking on Walls | D Rank | Default • Kekkai Massatsu no Jutsu [ Barrier Shatter Technique ]
Rank B • Gousuiwan no Jutsu [ Strong Water Arm Technique ] • Gufuu Suika no Jutsu [ Typhoon Water Vortex Technique ] • Goshokuzame [ Five Sharks Eating ]
Formless Styles • Soft Physical • Hard Physical • Medium Blades
Formless Techniques
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Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2019 7:26 pm
▰▰▰ PERSONAL DATA
Full Name: Kisuke Kaien Nickname: N/A Age: 18 Birthdate: Feb / 21 Gender: Male
▰▰▰ PHYSICAL CHARACTERISTICS
Body Rank: D
Eye Color: Amber Height: {ft + inches, centimeters, or both} Weight: {pounds, kilograms, or both}
Bloodline: S a k k a k u g a n
Wisdom: +1 PA, +2 custom techs, One Buki slot
Non-Combat Outfit: A long black hooded cloak that covers the body down to his feet. Combat Outfit: If not wearing the black hooded cloak, Kisuke will strip down to a black fitted tank top that is hidden underneath.
▰▰▰ SOCIAL AND PERSONALITY
Nindo: TBA Personality: Kisuke is a polite, soft-spoken intellectual, often addressing his Opponents/allies by their given names. He rarely shows any sign of alarm or distress, and often has entire situations planned out well in advance. Whenever confronted, Kisuke is casual and uncaring, attempting to draw out a conversation and make small talk, in hopes of often infuriating those he is talking to. But he also has another side of him due to his Sakkukagan. However, this was just a mask to disguise his manipulative, and very dangerous, nature. In truth, he cares very little for his underlings, and is willing to use almost everyone around him as pawns to achieve his goals. He is willing to stop at nothing to further his ambitions, including manipulating or killing anyone if he deems it to be necessary. If he does find some sort of loyalty; he will attempt to make it unbreakable.
Village: N/A Title: N/A
Background: { Personal history here. Please consider your character's traits carefully, and provide at least a paragraph of backstory explaining how they got to where they are today. While it's not required that you keep this section up to date, it's a good way to give other people detailed information about your character and their role through major guild arcs and events. }
▰▰▰ CLASSES AND STATS
First Class: Genjutsu ▱▰▱ Inception → • With Genjutsu, realism and the sensory ability of the target factor heavily into the ability of the victim to realize they are in a genjutsu. With practice and discipline, the shinobi may select one [1] genjutsu Sense that may be added as a Secondary sense to any technique, as well as choose one Sense of Choice that will forever cost one [1] rank less in cost as long as the casted genjutsu's primary sense is the chosen sense. Once these two [2] choices are made, they cannot be switched, so choose wisely. Second Class: Sensor ▱▰▱ Resolution → • You are more determined to get fine details from your sensory techniques, but in order to get this type of clarity the range of your techniques is reduced by half. You are able to discover things such as demon chakra, or the type of technique that is about to be active (Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, etc.), even specifics such as Bloodline type and rank. At body ranks D and C users of this discipline able to sense their enemy’s ninjutsu attacks and their composition, which grants a -1 rank deduction to dodging with the dodge mechanic X-ranked skill if you know the technique that was used. This only works for techniques which originate within the sensory area of the user. ▱▰▱ Cross Class or Specialization: → Genjutsu – Sensor: Genjutsu duration is increased by one post. Genjutsu of the chakra sense influence are one rank weaker against the user.
Chakra Pool: 325 Stamina Pool: 175 Chakra Element: Fuuton(Wind) / Raiton(Lightning) Chakra Color: Indigo Chakra Materialization: The chakra flows around him and then forms up behind him in the shape of tattered wings.
Passive Stats Increases: {Descriptive ranks may be used in place of numbers for this section if desired. All of these start at 0/no buff, with each increase of 1 denoting a one level increase in the descriptive rank bonus to that stat. When you gain a passive benefit, add it to these totals and denote the source in place of the N/A under the relevant stat.} • Strength ► 0 →→ N/A {Ex. Punch Hard PA, Move Fast Training} • Speed ► 0 →→ N/A • Reflex ► 0 →→ N/A • Fortitude ► 0 →→ N/A
Strengths: • Genjutsu • Strong determination. Weaknesses: • Taijutsu • His bipolar disorder causes him issues with relationships; which he tries to keep. Fears: • Not leaving a mark in history • Leading an uneventful life, what he would consider boring.
Modifiers: • Learn 1 extra Ninjutsu technique per post. • Learn 3 extra Genjutsu technique per post." • Potent Illusions: Genjutsu performed while Sakkakugan is active are treated to cost an extra [5] chakra per rank of the genjutsu to Kai
Personal Attributes: • Otherwordly Imagery: Genjutsu performed cannot be mimicked or reversed by any means. ( Genjutsu can still be broken, however. ) • Interweaving Fairytales: Because the Sakkakugan is so adept at weaving genjutsu together they are afforded a unique version of self korabo which is done in place of a normal korabo between two illusions. When more than one genjutsu is on the target their ranks are shifted so that the lower ranked genjutsus get their strength bumped up to highest ranked genjutsu on the target for the rest of it's duration. This is only useable up to the users self ranked korabo level and each genjutsu is still treated as separate when interacting with kai. Any upkeeps are also increased to reflect this change.
▰▰▰ JOBS AND MISSIONS
Ryo: 両0 {starts at 0} AC: 0 {starts at 0}
Missions Complete: {all start at 0} D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
Crafting Jobs Complete: {all start at 0, remove this} D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Job Missions Complete: {all start at 0} D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Mission, Training, Events, and Job Claims
{This spoiler is where you'll link to your character's relevant claim posts for missions, training, holidays/events, and jobs.} Missions Claim: [ x ] Training Claim: [ x ] Jobs Claim: [ x ] Events Claim: [ x ]
▰▰▰ INVENTORY • • • • • •
Weapon Specs
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▰▰▰ TECHNIQUES
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info, remove if you don't have access to jutsu. Remember that E rank nin/gen/eiseijutsu do not count towards these limits.} • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 10 • Genjutsu : : 00 / 15 • Eiseijutsu : : 00 / 00 • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
Maruton: {Everyone starts with the jutsu listed below, except Academy students. Do not remove them from the profile if starting as an Academy student, simply replace the "Default" designation with a training link if you choose to train them before taking your graduation exam.} • Kai | Rank X | Default • Henge no Jutsu | Rank E | Default • Bunshin no Jutsu | Rank E | Default • Substitution Technique | Rank E | Default • Art of Walking on Water | D Rank | Default • Art of Walking on Walls | D Rank | Default
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Bloodline • {Remove if none}
Genjutsu • {Remove if none}
Taijutsu {Remove if none} {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
Bukijutsu {Remove if none} {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▰▰▰ FORMLESS STYLES → 00 / 00 {REMOVE. Current formless slots.} {Find in Formless Style and Class information}
Formless Styles • {Formless style name}
Formless Techniques • {Formless technique name}
▰▰▰ ACADEMY STUDENT Learned E Rank Formless • {Formless type learning}
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Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2019 10:07 pm
▰▰▰ PERSONAL DATA
Full Name: Fayette Blanchette Nickname: Lil' Red Age: 16 Birthdate: 5/19 Gender: Female
▰▰▰ PHYSICAL CHARACTERISTICS
Body Rank: D
Hair Color: Blonde Eye Color: Heterochromatic - Amber & Blue Height: 162.7 cm Weight: 54.2 kg
Bloodline: Kemono Shinzo ---- Kemonomimi Variant
▰▰▰ SOCIAL AND PERSONALITY
Nindo: "Candy...?" || "*RAWR*" Personality: Passionate, Curious and Wild. These are the three words that describe the halfling Fayette as a woman born of a human and kemono. She takes after both of her parents, her calm nurturing mother to her wild carefree father. Faye is a very prideful individual who takes great offense to anyone or anything that she sees as an insult, a particular sensitive topic being her father or her kemono half. While she is carefree and happy-go-lucky, Faye has a quirky streak of indulging on more primal instincts when she uses powers of her bloodline that makes her persona do a complete swap to that of a cold, calculating predator which grows stronger depending on how far she invokes her bloodline. Faye suffers from a mild form of bipolar disorder of having constant mood swings and unexpected shifts in her mannerisms from repressed memories.
Village: Arashi Title: Genin
Background: Faye is the child of Suzuki Blanchette, having been born when she was 20 years old and she is now 16 years of age. She grown up in a slightly sheltered life and been raised by just her mother when her father disappeared when she was still young, her memory of him hazy and distant. Her mother had taken to becoming a Kunoichi of the cloud village and migrated to Arashi when events had transpired that forced their relocation. When Faye grew up, she spent most of her time in school and had been forbade by her mother from entering the academy to become a kunoichi herself. When she was growing up, Faye often would attend plays and theatrical performances and on some nights she would assume a wolf form and roam the village streets at night although her mother scolded her whenever she done such a thing. In recent years she been growing more concerned with recent events in the world and when her mother had been out on a task, she enlisted into the academy against her mother's wishes. It's been months since she made this life changing choice and had since graduated, recently becoming a shinobi just like her mother, Suzuki.
▰▰▰ CLASSES AND STATS
First Class: Bukijutsu ▱▰▱ Mystic Hero → You are much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into your personal arsenal. Through your great devotion to this path you can cast ninjutsu can cast ninjutsu up to your body rank without hand seals while wielding a weapon. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use and require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. They also cannot be molded during another attack, meaning you cannot be swinging a sword and using this discipline to charge a ninjutsu at the same time. You also gain 2 extra ninjutsu slots per rank. In addition, once every other post all three of your activations in a post can be used for offensive bukijutsu Second Class: Performer - Dancer ▱▰▱ Grand Performance → You take the initiative in a fight, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into your personal arsenal. You can cast ninjutsu can cast ninjutsu up to your body rank without hand seals while engaging in your performance type of choice. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use and require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the performance as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. They also cannot be molded during another attack, meaning you cannot be casting a genjutsu and channeling a ninjutsu at the same time, unless you are koraboing the two. You also gain 2 extra ninjutsu slots per rank. ▱▰▱ Cross Class or Specialization: → Bukijutsu – Performer: Able to make visual genjutsu one rank stronger when performing performance through dance. Gains two genjutsu per rank.
Chakra Pool: 250 Stamina Pool: 250 Chakra Element: Wind, Fire Chakra Color: Black Chakra Materialization: Fluctuates around the body with chakra use.
Strengths: • Versatility in numerous approaches to combat. • Body transformation abilities. Weaknesses: • Being cornered out of using her ninjutsu or transformations • Counter Illusions Fears: • Lightning/Thunder • Rats
Modifiers: • x1 Xtra Tai Per Post, x1 Xtra Buki Per Post, x1 Xtra Gen Per Post.
Personal Attributes: • Occultic Wildheart: Her anger spills over to others in her unnatural form. Gains the ability to make use of genjutsu through chakra materialization and auditory cues while in an Jujin Kaiki state. • Mournful Howl: With a howl, a howling gale beckons others to be spirited away. Maintains use of the Fuuton element while in a Jujin Kaiki state, abilities are used through auditory howls or significant movement (running, jumping, etc)
• Ruff and Tumble: {Canine} Gain +1 Bukijutsu OR Taijutsu Slot, Can apply their learning increases to either Bukijustu or Taijutsu due to canines quick thinking. Gains +4 Custom slots dedicated to Kemono Shinzō techniques for their ingenuity and ability to learn new tricks quickly.
▰▰▰ JOBS AND MISSIONS
Ryo: 両0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
Crafting Jobs Complete: {all start at 0, remove this} D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Maruton: • Kai | Rank X | Default • Henge no Jutsu | Rank E | Default • Bunshin no Jutsu | Rank E | Default • Substitution Technique | Rank E | Default • Art of Walking on Water | D Rank | Default • Art of Walking on Walls | D Rank | Default
Wind •
Fire •
Bloodline •
Genjutsu •
Taijutsu {Remove if none} {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
Bukijutsu {Remove if none} {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▰▰▰ FORMLESS STYLES → 00 / 03
Formless Styles • {Formless style name}
Formless Techniques • {Formless technique name}
NecroPlant
Evanescently Magnificent
Posted: Sun Apr 21, 2019 1:22 am
Evanescently Magnificent
Pad Chief
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I know blessing of the earth doesn't increase the cap but I was just offering that as a possible alternative since doubling the rate is too much heart
Ward the of the depths is cool except for one itty bity line "She does not receive the penalties for wearing heavy armour" This conflicts with the buki class discipline so it has to be denied
I see. Ward of the Depths should probably say "does not recieve heavy armour penalties from this armour" but I've removed it entirely as I'm sure that would still run afoul. New PA just allows me to cast Jutsu in the ground or not centred on me when they should be.
Is Blessing of the Earth good as it just gives a constant meditation state (100 NE a round?)
Thanks
If you mean in combat it would 50 ne a round yo only get 100 when you are out of combat. So from this PA I am assuming you are wanting to always be able to gain 100 NE chakra out of combat without having to sit and meditate correct? Because if you mean in combat the number cannot go past 50 and to be honest even if I gave you that it would just conflict with your custom razz
Is 50 the hard cap for regeneration of Natural Energy in combat? I had thought it was 1/3 of your total pool of Stamina and Chakra as referred to in the Hoshigaki Sage Mode? I'm under the impression Hoshigaki Sage Mode is a little old though and might represent an older system?
I can't see anything about a cap on enhanced generation of Natural Energy to be honest and if you could show me where the cap of Natural Energy generation is referred to in the systems I'd be grateful. Perhaps this is part of the overhaul?
We're in the process of changing them right now and the bloodline sage modes just haven't been updated with the new information yet! The cap to NE is now 750 chakra with you being able to gather 50 chakra per post or 100 chakra per post dedicated to meditation outside of combat. I know an announcement went out but it should just have replaced the old sage page in the systems subfourm! This was actually something I was going to bring up to you i the custom jutsu section with your keystone
Right but Sage Mode has no explicit cap on the generation of Natural Energy right?
If I was in a constant state of meditation I'd add the additional 50 to my Keystone which generates its own 50. It seems you can meditate in combat as per-
• Able to meditate, consuming an activation in exchange for 50 nature chakra.
I suppose it's a free activation so perhaps it's a little stronger than I'd thought. How about instead
Unable to meditate (so lose the 50 generation) but is considered in a state of meditation at all times gaining half of what would be gained during meditation. Generates 50 out of combat at all times.
By the by Hoshigaki Sage Mode generates its own 50 which is where the conditional 50 on the Keystone is coming from though it's a transfer/morph effect.
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Posted: Sun Apr 21, 2019 1:29 am
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Okay so you can't have wisdom along with a bloodline and also you get one more PA to do with whatever you want! C:
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Mattysandwich
Took a bit of thought on this one but I just think that even though it's a small effect like handseal replacement, it's just too much like Uzumaki's PA and ends up making it kinda useless.
Posted: Sun Apr 21, 2019 1:37 am
Pad Chief
Well yes it does sorta. The cap in combat is 50 Ne per post with a total cap of 750 but you don't meditate in combat you use the one jutsu or shadow clones. I think this meditation stuff is where the confusion is so lemme offer this. I don't care how much NE you generate while being outside of combat so write it as this: is considered in a state of meditation at all times. Generates and extra 50 out of combat at all times. So you're total out of combat NE regen is 150 and then clearly define something being out of combat as not taking or receiving hostile actions for one post.
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Posted: Sun Apr 21, 2019 1:57 am
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Well yes it does sorta. The cap in combat is 50 Ne per post with a total cap of 750 but you don't meditate in combat you use the one jutsu or shadow clones. I think this meditation stuff is where the confusion is so lemme offer this. I don't care how much NE you generate while being outside of combat so write it as this: is considered in a state of meditation at all times. Generates and extra 50 out of combat at all times. So you're total out of combat NE regen is 150 and then clearly define something being out of combat as not taking or receiving hostile actions for one post.
There we go. Done as suggested.
• Blessing of the Earth:
Geothermal heat flows willingly into Breezy and while not in combat she is considered to be in a meditation state and generates an additional 50 Natural Energy for each post made. Combat begins as soon as anyone makes an offensive action against her or she makes an offensive action against someone or something else including inanimate objects and animals. Combat ends when hostile action has ceased and the post thereafter her Natural Energy regeneration recommences.
It's kind of confusing honestly that there are two things referred to as meditation though and that the Hoshigaki Sage Mode has an alternate cap on generation.
Posted: Sun Apr 21, 2019 2:18 am
▰▰▰ PERSONAL DATA
Full Name: Kisuke Kaien Nickname: N/A Age: 18 Birthdate: Feb / 21 Gender: Male
▰▰▰ PHYSICAL CHARACTERISTICS
Body Rank: D
Eye Color: Amber Height: {ft + inches, centimeters, or both} Weight: {pounds, kilograms, or both}
Bloodline: S a k k a k u g a n
Non-Combat Outfit: A long black hooded cloak that covers the body down to his feet. Combat Outfit: If not wearing the black hooded cloak, Kisuke will strip down to a black fitted tank top that is hidden underneath.
▰▰▰ SOCIAL AND PERSONALITY
Nindo: TBA Personality: Kisuke is a polite, soft-spoken intellectual, often addressing his Opponents/allies by their given names. He rarely shows any sign of alarm or distress, and often has entire situations planned out well in advance. Whenever confronted, Kisuke is casual and uncaring, attempting to draw out a conversation and make small talk, in hopes of often infuriating those he is talking to. But he also has another side of him due to his Sakkukagan. However, this was just a mask to disguise his manipulative, and very dangerous, nature. In truth, he cares very little for his underlings, and is willing to use almost everyone around him as pawns to achieve his goals. He is willing to stop at nothing to further his ambitions, including manipulating or killing anyone if he deems it to be necessary. If he does find some sort of loyalty; he will attempt to make it unbreakable.
Village: N/A Title: N/A
Background: Being born into the world of the Shinobi , Kisuke was brought up in a care free mentality with the emphasis of reading and training being expressed in a free spirited ideology. His parents brought him up to keep a laid back attitude through out everything he did and not stress upon things which could trouble him to the point of exhaustion. And so he kept this mentality, even through his roughest of days. He worked enough upon his training and any task given to him during this time with poise and a relaxed manner. He learned to talk his way through his battles with a clear mind through his attitude he obtained in his upbringing. Eventually through his time, he learned to pick and choose his battles, never refusing if it meant insulting the opponent if he did such a thing.
▰▰▰ CLASSES AND STATS
First Class: Genjutsu ▱▰▱ Inception → • With Genjutsu, realism and the sensory ability of the target factor heavily into the ability of the victim to realize they are in a genjutsu. With practice and discipline, the shinobi may select one [1] genjutsu Sense that may be added as a Secondary sense to any technique, as well as choose one Sense of Choice that will forever cost one [1] rank less in cost as long as the casted genjutsu's primary sense is the chosen sense. Once these two [2] choices are made, they cannot be switched, so choose wisely. Second Class: Sensor ▱▰▱ Resolution → • You are more determined to get fine details from your sensory techniques, but in order to get this type of clarity the range of your techniques is reduced by half. You are able to discover things such as demon chakra, or the type of technique that is about to be active (Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, etc.), even specifics such as Bloodline type and rank. At body ranks D and C users of this discipline able to sense their enemy’s ninjutsu attacks and their composition, which grants a -1 rank deduction to dodging with the dodge mechanic X-ranked skill if you know the technique that was used. This only works for techniques which originate within the sensory area of the user. ▱▰▱ Cross Class or Specialization: → Genjutsu – Sensor: Genjutsu duration is increased by one post. Genjutsu of the chakra sense influence are one rank weaker against the user.
Chakra Pool: 325 Stamina Pool: 175 Chakra Element: Fuuton(Wind) / Raiton(Lightning) Chakra Color: Indigo Chakra Materialization: The chakra flows around him and then forms up behind him in the shape of tattered wings.
Passive Stats Increases: {Descriptive ranks may be used in place of numbers for this section if desired. All of these start at 0/no buff, with each increase of 1 denoting a one level increase in the descriptive rank bonus to that stat. When you gain a passive benefit, add it to these totals and denote the source in place of the N/A under the relevant stat.} • Strength ► 0 →→ N/A {Ex. Punch Hard PA, Move Fast Training} • Speed ► 0 →→ N/A • Reflex ► 0 →→ N/A • Fortitude ► 0 →→ N/A
Strengths: • Genjutsu • Strong determination. Weaknesses: • Taijutsu • His bipolar disorder causes him issues with relationships; which he tries to keep. Fears: • Not leaving a mark in history • Leading an uneventful life, what he would consider boring.
Modifiers: • Learn 1 extra Ninjutsu technique per post. • Learn 3 extra Genjutsu technique per post." • Potent Illusions: Genjutsu performed while Sakkakugan is active are treated to cost an extra [5] chakra per rank of the genjutsu to Kai
Personal Attributes: • Otherwordly Imagery: Genjutsu performed cannot be mimicked or reversed by any means. ( Genjutsu can still be broken, however. ) • Interweaving Fairytales: Because the Sakkakugan is so adept at weaving genjutsu together they are afforded a unique version of self korabo which is done in place of a normal korabo between two illusions. When more than one genjutsu is on the target their ranks are shifted so that the lower ranked genjutsus get their strength bumped up to highest ranked genjutsu on the target for the rest of it's duration. This is only useable up to the users self ranked korabo level and each genjutsu is still treated as separate when interacting with kai. Any upkeeps are also increased to reflect this change.
▰▰▰ JOBS AND MISSIONS
Ryo: 両0 {starts at 0} AC: 0 {starts at 0}
Missions Complete: {all start at 0} D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
Crafting Jobs Complete: {all start at 0, remove this} D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Job Missions Complete: {all start at 0} D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Mission, Training, Events, and Job Claims
{This spoiler is where you'll link to your character's relevant claim posts for missions, training, holidays/events, and jobs.} Missions Claim: [ x ] Training Claim: [ x ] Jobs Claim: [ x ] Events Claim: [ x ]
▰▰▰ INVENTORY • • • • • •
Weapon Specs
{Only required for custom weapons, copy paste custom description. Standard weapons may have details listed here as well, but it is not required.}
▰▰▰ TECHNIQUES
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info, remove if you don't have access to jutsu. Remember that E rank nin/gen/eiseijutsu do not count towards these limits.} • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 10 • Genjutsu : : 00 / 15 • Eiseijutsu : : 00 / 00 • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
Maruton: {Everyone starts with the jutsu listed below, except Academy students. Do not remove them from the profile if starting as an Academy student, simply replace the "Default" designation with a training link if you choose to train them before taking your graduation exam.} • Kai | Rank X | Default • Henge no Jutsu | Rank E | Default • Bunshin no Jutsu | Rank E | Default • Substitution Technique | Rank E | Default • Art of Walking on Water | D Rank | Default • Art of Walking on Walls | D Rank | Default
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{Replace this with Element 2} •
Bloodline • {Remove if none}
Genjutsu • {Remove if none}
Taijutsu {Remove if none} {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
Bukijutsu {Remove if none} {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▰▰▰ FORMLESS STYLES → 00 / 00 {REMOVE. Current formless slots.} {Find in Formless Style and Class information}
Formless Styles • {Formless style name}
Formless Techniques • {Formless technique name}
▰▰▰ ACADEMY STUDENT Learned E Rank Formless • {Formless type learning}
NecroPlant
Evanescently Magnificent
I'm just gonna hold off on that last PA, if that's kool and I will repost with changes whenever I can think of something.
Neighborhood Watch Since these thread bois are more or less more thread bois that people bois its a really iffy area. But I guess it could prove a double edged sword maaaybe this is quite a thing I must be doing thinking...you see because taste gen, and sound gen, actually most gen barring sight and chakra don't really translate well to thread boys. So I suppose one wouldn't know that the thread boy is actually being genned in that sense and one could per say bring back a thread boy thinking its perfectly fine but at the same time one could argue those gens wouldn't affect the thread boys to begin with. If gens used on the threadbois are still effective despite their lack of sensory organs I suppose I'd let this slide because with that Kameyo would never know if one of her threadbois is infected because it wouldn't display the effects of infection buuuut then again...its just really iffy. A Jiongu can have up to 8 hearts. This means up to 8 thread boys. There's no real way for a Gen user to rack up that much gen uses even with maintaining sustains so this creates a semi pseudo-gen immunnity once passing 3 hearts and gen immunity is a hard nope. I'd be willing to allow one gen redirection at the chance of possible self-contamination but not per heart and only one gen redirection, and said threadboi despite not having the sensory components to be affected by said gen would stilll be treated as though they did. So after much self delegation I think I'd allow it following that criteria assuming you still even want it at this point.
Mattysandwich
Gucci Gang
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Gucci Gang
Posted: Sun Apr 21, 2019 8:52 am
NecroPlant
Neighborhood Watch Since these thread bois are more or less more thread bois that people bois its a really iffy area. But I guess it could prove a double edged sword maaaybe this is quite a thing I must be doing thinking...you see because taste gen, and sound gen, actually most gen barring sight and chakra don't really translate well to thread boys. So I suppose one wouldn't know that the thread boy is actually being genned in that sense and one could per say bring back a thread boy thinking its perfectly fine but at the same time one could argue those gens wouldn't affect the thread boys to begin with. If gens used on the threadbois are still effective despite their lack of sensory organs I suppose I'd let this slide because with that Kameyo would never know if one of her threadbois is infected because it wouldn't display the effects of infection buuuut then again...its just really iffy. A Jiongu can have up to 8 hearts. This means up to 8 thread boys. There's no real way for a Gen user to rack up that much gen uses even with maintaining sustains so this creates a semi pseudo-gen immunnity once passing 3 hearts and gen immunity is a hard nope. I'd be willing to allow one gen redirection at the chance of possible self-contamination but not per heart and only one gen redirection, and said threadboi despite not having the sensory components to be affected by said gen would stilll be treated as though they did. So after much self delegation I think I'd allow it following that criteria assuming you still even want it at this point.
Jiongu can only have five hearts in SR but I see what you mean... If the monster falls under the genjutsu and later gets kai'd out by Kameyo, am I able to redirect genjutsu again so long as it is always only ever one genjutsu and one thread boi active total?
Jack Class Based PA for Susumu: Susumu does not have an Elemental Affinity in the traditional sense. Instead he has Elemental Affinity in the sense of him being able to learn jutsu from those particular elements, however they do not carry their natural elemental affinity. Instead they are treated as Maruton for the purposes of spots taken on jutsu list, and any benefits or detriments involving jutsu. They do however carry on effects based on the affinity they once were if the jutsu has it, such as if a katon jutsu has a burning effect or a ration jutsu has a stunning effect.
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