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@ultima: Accepted, but reword it before you add it to your profile because your description of it is a little messy. (for example I think you meant to say those 2 ranks or lower than haruki will be entranced by him, not 2 ranks higher)

RPC Name: Genesis
Rank: Trainee
Bloodline & Class: Dreadnought | Paladin
Talent Description: Oath of Redemption - Due to Genesis’ training in the Brotherhood of Light monastery he has sworn to God that he would forsake all pleasures of the flesh until he avenged his families deaths. Thanks to this form of resolve Genesis is immune to enthrallment (Seduction Skills) without fail.
Talent Weakness: Elemental Skills Cost twice as much
How did the character get this talent?: Before he left the Monastery he took an oath that he would be faithful to God.

Sample: Genesis fought through the pathetic humans that had been enthralled by a succubus. Hacking and slashing away at the fools who protected the evil creature. ”You stupid fools! You’re your eyes…” he yelled as he slaughtered then all. The Succubus that had enslaved the men walked down the steps, her beauty was unlike any normal women would hold. ”Now now, There’s no reason to fight. I can be all yours…” she said brushing her hand against Genesis’ cheek, trying to enslave him like the other men before him. ”Now I’ll give you a special treat for being so strong…” she said sweetly as she moved closer to kiss Genesis, but stopped just before their lips touched. She looked at his surprised, as Genesis had pierced his sword through her stomach. ”How..?!” she said weakly as Genesis swung his sword to the side, slicing open the Succubus’ abdomen. ”I am immune to your charm. Nothing in this world can tempt me into sin…” Genesis said stabbing the succubus through the heart and removing his sword, wiping away the blood from his sword and sheathing it as he headed back to the village.

sinner: Accepted

XSK: This sounds more like a skill or a couple of skills instead of an actual talent. Are you sure you want to use up your talent on this? Because you could probably have these accepted as custom skills instead.

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Rpc Name:Srin or "Mask"
Rank:Trainee
Bloodline and Class: Dreadnought and Gunslinger
Description:Srin lose all contorl of him self and well snaps. He moves at faster speeds and hits harder. It's all caused when takes off mask for a short period of time or he runs out of meds.(His sickness causes it) he uses his fist and legs as weapons.Carapace form slows him down but makes hit harder. (Speed +2 and power +2 it drains him slowly)
Talent weakness:He loses compete control, so will attack friends,foe, even things in his way.
•Mana/Energy goes down slowly during use. 45-50 mana each post.
•It's rare for him to use it.
How he get talent:After the ki redface lling of his family, the weapons fumes and chemicals get into his body while for first time he forms carapace. It makes it a cronic insanitdy.(sorry for spelling)
Rp sample:
Srin runs though alley ways. His targets men were after him. The must have been watching area just in case. He slides around corner and fist slams into his face. His mask breaks and blood runs down his face. The night hid his face with the hair covering eyes. The dreadnought that punched him move towards him claws turning razor sharp. Srin's eyes widen. The rain was making his meds wear off. The dreadnought stabs down at him. Lighting strikes and he is gone. The dreadnought looks around for him. A crazed laugh starts form in the air. He looks around looking for noise. Lighting strikes again he comes out the shadows sending fist into the dreadnought. It sends it rolling down alley way. Srin catches up to it and spins kicks more in the ground stopping it. His carapace cracking. Srin's carapace forms and he starts ripping into the other dreadnought. Srin laughs and laughs while doing it.Mins pass and lighting strikes only showing a destroyed body and peice of carapace.(sorry if breaking carapace is worng or anything ) Srin runs under somewhere wasn't hitting. He try's to regain contorl. He looks though pack. He brings out needle and sticks it in. The meds go in and he slowly regains contorl. He wipes hands of blood and keeps magumns at side. He was going to wait it out, then he make a new mask. He had enough liquid meds to last intil then.

DamnXD okay on it

Considering what I get out of this talent, I'll take it.