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 Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2010 7:22 pm
Lament_of_the_lonely >.> By girl Akatsuki member, I assume you mean me? (Man what is with people posting rp samples about the Crew or Akatsuki members e.e')
Anyways, Hinote, how far do you think it should go? I wasn't too sure what to put They were actually all made up Akatsuki members sweatdrop I just made them up when I saw the first episode that Tobi appears xD And Hinote... gime a minute and I'll do the edits... and add new jutsu xD You can sence the free time can't you xD
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Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2010 7:40 pm
Hinote Tosatsu Akura:Earth Style: Dual Ram head - Was approved a long time ago. Why resubmit it? My bad sweatdrop Doton: Shinmantoru Kurasuto sadou - Denied. I can't see any use for it, being identical to the other as it is. So much for bringing down the wall of Konoha whit this... Earth Style: Stone twister - I'm still not sure on this one. It seems more like a Fuuton than Doton to me. What ever you say goes. - - Akura2:Suiton" MizuKei - The description needs to be a bit clearer. How long is it by default? Edited Raiton: Dagenki Vijon - Denied. I know I mentioned the possibility of a similar jutsu, but this is most definitely not it. There are bloodlines based around that ability, and I can't see any way you could force your eyes to see through genjutsu simply by applying chakra. Deleted Suiton: OmoiSawa Meimu - Other than the fact you misspelled the English version... You are saying that this technique is activated by being inside of a tagged area? I think you need to clear up the description a bit more. Done Suiton: OmoiSawa - Okay, your RP samples are becoming increasingly lacking at this point. The rank is stunningly enough, higher than needed on this one. B would be fine. How deep is this swamp? And does it need a water source to create? Done Suiton: AwaTonsou - Simple enough. Approved - Do it and die. Aw... I was looking forward to see you battle a genjutsu user xD - Rin:
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Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2010 3:21 pm
@hinote yea, im working on re-writing it already.
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Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2010 3:24 pm
@Nerd:
Speed Manipulation Jutsu - Approved
Demonic Illusion: Tree Bind Death - Approved
Bringer-of-Darkness Technique - Approved
Demonic Illusion: Descending Hell Technique - You made the User/Victim mistake again. Other than that, Approved.
The District End - Approved. Still don't get the name though...
Debris Petal Escape - Umm... Why did you re-post this?
Barrier of Flames - How long does this last? If it doesn't have a limit, does it drain chakra on every turn?
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Akura:
Suiton" MizuKei Water release: Water Whip - You are aware that a foot wide whip is rather... Thick? The description makes little sense. It has to be from a pouch or the ocean? I would expect any source would work, which makes that statement rather unnecessary.
Suiton: OmoiSawa Meimu - Your sample says nothing about the technique... A sample is meant to show the jutsu in action, not just reference it lightly. Specify whether these tags need to be placed specially, such as at the corners of a room. How are the user's allies exempt from the effect, despite it affecting everyone who enters the area?
Suiton: OmoiSawa - Denied. It's not that well defined, and I can't really see lowering the cost on making a swamp just because you have water.
Stone twister - I'm going to have another mod look at this one, because I can't make up my mind on it. Please re-post it now, because I can't see it in the review panel anymore.
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2010 4:03 pm
@Akura-
Stone Twister: 
The Jutsu is too over powered.
"Being able to block most jutsu one rank above it"?
So only S-rank Jutsu's can go against it? It should have other weaknesses. Someone could call God-modding against this, since if you use this, you would be blocking most jutsu continuously, and then just send the jutsu over to the person and knock them out? That sounds like a God mode to me....
Sorry. Please change it.
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Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2010 4:45 pm
Quote: Barrier of Flames - How long does this last? If it doesn't have a limit, does it drain chakra on every turn?
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2010 5:04 pm
Three posts sounds good. Re-post it and we shall see.
And you can't defeat my RPC! Muahahaha!
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Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2010 5:18 pm
Your Rank: Jounin
Name of Jutsu: Barrier of Flames
Rank of Jutsu: C-Rank
Range of Jutsu:N/A
Jutsu's Element:N/A
Description: This is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a vision of fire. The victims of the genjutsu will believe they are being engulfed by a torrent of fire from all sides and they will most likely spend their time trying to escape. The victim feels intense heat while in the circle, like 100 degrees or so, but if they walk through the fire, they will receive no harm and []not feel unbearable pain, unlike watching Sex and the City. However, when nearing the fire, it seems to increase in size, as if reacting to the movement of the victim. Diameter of the ring of fire can reach up to 50 ft. Fire lasts 3 posts, but victim can dispel illusion before that.
Rp Sample: Sarukin blew out a deep breath, his chakra now disrupting his opponents. If he had performed the jutsu correctly, "flames" would surround the victim, causing him to stay in more or less the same place. The ninja had turned around numerous times, falling down once getting to close to the flames. The ninja had wasted his chakra by performing a Suiton ninjutsu to attempt to douse the flames, but still, the flames continued to appear, not faltering in the least. The ninja tried over and over again, using numerous sution ninjutsu until his chakra was almost depleted. All the while, Sarukin was far from sight, leaving the ninja alone in a ring of imaginary fire.
o.O scary evil genius laugh ftw?
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Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2010 5:23 pm
Approved
The clip about Sex and the City might be removed when it's added to the Jutsu list...
And no. That wasn't my evil genius laugh. That was my amused laugh. My evil genius laugh is much scarier. Usually. It sometimes doesn't come out right.
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 1:38 pm
Your Rank: For a future RPC, or possibly a guild-wide
Name of Jutsu: Hiding like a Mole
Rank of Jutsu: C
Range of Jutsu: Short-Mid
Jutsu's Element: Earth
Description: This technique changes earth into fine sand by channeling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. The user can pinpoint where they are, despite being underground, by sensing the magnetic forces. They can also sense what is happening on the surface and use that information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. One can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy can't reach.
Rp Sample
Tsuki fell through the air, after having been punched in the face from far above. She already had alot of bruises on her face, though it wasn't her job to be the taijutsu specialist. Her team was badly hurt, and she needed time to think. As she fell to the ground, she performed quick hand seals, turning the ground directly below her to sand. When she hit the earth, she sunk right into hit, giving off the appearance of a mole hiding in the earth. Tsuki continued to fall farther, using the magnetic forces around her to place herself somewhere away from the battle. She took the time to catch her breath, and watch the battle from below.
Your Rank: For a future RPC, or possibly a guild-wide
Name of Jutsu: Whac-a-mole
Rank of Jutsu: C
Range of Jutsu: Short Range
Jutsu's Element: Earth
Description: After using the Hiding like a mole technique, the user, when ready, will be able to pop up from the ground where they choose, and launch a quick attack, whether it'd be projectile, taijutsu, or even ninjutsu. This is mainly used to cover a close area, and when there are multiple enemies.
RP Sample:
Tsuki had been sitting down for awhile, and had healed herself via medical techniques. Now, it was time to fight back. She located the first enemy by sensing his chakra, and shot through the ground towards his back. She popped out of the ground, pulled her legs up and round housed his head, knocking him unconscious. She fell to the ground once more, diving back in. Tsuki wasted no time in popping up partially from another direction, throwing out shuriken at another enemy. Tsuki continued this tactic, until the enemies were all incapacitated.
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Posted: Fri Aug 06, 2010 7:48 am
Your Rank:
Academy student
Name of Jutsu:
Ninja art of Beast Mimicry: Bird of Prey: Arc
Rank of Jutsu:
Genin
Range of Jutsu:
N/a
Jutsu's Element:
N/a
Description:
The Ninja Sends his bird Partner Up to the air, above his fight, where it begins to preform lazy circles above head. Or so it would seem. The Bird is releasing small tiny Feathers, which are specifically designed to cut upon contact. The feathers are held in the circle with The Bird, as it begins to speed up, leaving more and more feathers.
Note about the Feathers: They are shaped Like Kunai, but cut as though they were razors.
Your Rank:
Academy student
Name of Jutsu:
Ninja art of Beast Mimicry: Bird of Prey: Decent
Rank of Jutsu:
Genin
Range of Jutsu:
N/a
Jutsu's Element:
N/a
Description:
Thje Bird slowly begins to fall towards the Fight, Bringing the feathers with it. This process takes three posts, before the bird can get to their level, by this time there is a wall of feathers behind the bird, and the bird is moving fast enough that it can not be seen.
Your Rank:
Academy student
Name of Jutsu:
Ninja art of Beast Mimicry: Bird Of Prey: Finale
Rank of Jutsu:
chunnin
Range of Jutsu:
N/a
Jutsu's Element:
N/a
Description:
The Bird comes rushing out of the Feather circle, and Brings a small amount of feathers with it, releasing them along the way, making a smaller circle within the large circle. The Bird keeps repeating this process until the entire circle is filled in, and all people within the circle are being cut to ribbons. This process takes 10 posts to work.
Notes about the circle: The Circle starts out as 10 meters apart, and every post, it closes in one meter.
Rp Sample
(( I'll do this later... Or if Hinote wants to, he can critique the descritions before I do this so I don't have to change anything in my rp sample. ))
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Posted: Sun Aug 08, 2010 3:35 am
Your Rank: Genin
Name of Jutsu: Steps of Light
Rank of Jutsu: Genin to learn (Jounin rank chakra cost)
Range of Jutsu: sight range, or to a premade seal (no range restrictions for a seal)
Jutsu's Element: Universal/chakra (no real element required)
Description: The use takes "steps" at nearly the speed of light to a chosen destination. The user takes in chakra, manipulates it throughout their body and in a sense covers it completely. Once a spot is chosen they transport, unable to attack and unable to be attacked. However, a jutsu prepared before "stepping" can be used immediately after since it is not lost during the process.
Rp Sample
((the not-so-long awaited rp sample rofl ))
-The character name is Fyn, Jounin, Leaf-
A long, cold breeze blew across the surface of the river. Fyn had been staring out over the water for some time now, the sun had begun to rise even. "Ahh... well, now that I can finally see the other side... time to go." He was referring to the other river bank. He had walked for a day and a half with no luck of a boat or bridge. Fyn, without wasting another moment, focused his chakra. He erased all other possible marks in his mind, focused on a dry spot of grass... and jumped. Not up, but forward through space. To him, he took one step forward and arrived on the opposite bank. A smile crossed his face, which faded instantly as his eyes fell on his backpack... across the river. "Ohh... you little son of a..." A moment later and Fyn had the backpack in hand, and just as quickly he was back to the other side of the river. Tired from stepping that many times so quickly back to back, he walked slowly to catch his breath. "Ehh... tired is not the best way to start out a day." Fyn muttered to himself, sighing as he walked on.
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Posted: Sun Aug 08, 2010 5:40 pm
@Zetsu: These jutsus just seem like Inuzuka jutsus for birds. They would have to be part of a clan that is pretty much inuzuka with birds, or a bird summon, for these jutsus to be used.
@Storm: So wait, how far can someone go and how fast (Obviously the speed of light, but is that from one side of a continent to the next, or 20 feet, or what?)
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Posted: Sun Aug 08, 2010 5:44 pm
it's sight range, or to a seal. like... anywhere in where you are currently posting, or to a seal which could be cross country. like from village gates to the kage tower, skipping the main road because you can see the tower from the gates. but in mist you wouldn't be able to use this unless you can see through the mist.
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Posted: Sun Aug 08, 2010 5:50 pm
Interesting concept, but this kinda reminds me a LOT of Hiraishin. How is it different?
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