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 Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2010 2:21 pm
Skidding on his heels, Zanzo had thought that even if his clone had not hit her atleast that it would give her an electrical shock. Anything right now to deter her defense would be a blessing. So pulling back his clones that had been easily blocked. He felt like he was fighting a brick wall and he was just ramming into without making it budge at all. Thinking quickly he had to come up with a plan to make it harder for her to track his movements. So in a last ditch attempt, Zanzo summoned up two more clones by Raikou no Jutsu. All of them pulled out kunais and circled around Sensei atleast ten feet out. Then all became to run at full speed around her and started to make a small dust tornado. They sped around and around her til at the same moment they all threw two kunais a piece at her. Then flung themselves at her from five different directions. Zanzo hoped that he had kept his direction a secret from her because he had chosen the direction directly behind her, but he doubted that she was fooled. All his clones flew at her with fists. He hoped that if any made contact that enough electric shock would throw her off balance so that he could make a move.
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2010 3:28 pm
Kokirii blinked. There were six Zanzo's. Although, she was little decieved on where she deduced the real one was. "Well, if you wanna fight with clones, I suppose we can arrange something." she said softly. Her hands flew with superb speed. "Bunshin no Jutsu." she murmured to herself. Three other Kokirii's appeared and nodded, going after the other clones while Kokirii whirled around and struck at him hard with Pressure Point Strike, aiming squarely for his shoulder.
Pressure Point Strike- because of the users training in precise striking, practitioners of this style learn to strike at the pressure points of opponents in quick precise movements. Usually this simply causes more pain than anything, but with a well placed strike the user can render whole limbs useless. (any limbs that are are struck correctly cannot be used for two posts due to the sheer pain it causes)
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2010 3:58 pm
Ok you wanted my input. I honor that. Here it is:
Yes, Gaara is right in saying that Vexin has used to much chakra for his rank. In all technicalities, he should be dead after that much chakra use at his level.
So, unless he's willing to spend a week in RL in the Konohagakure hospital, he should edit his posts to include:
1. Less clones.
2. A change in the static strings. (unless greg says otherwise.)
That's all I can think to put in this post right now. If you see anything wrong with my judgement, please say so. And if there are any suggestions, please give them.
((oh. And as an explanation as to why I didn't respond and deal with this earlier, I was busy. It said I was online, I know. But I was sitting at the My Gaia page and refreshing it so it wouldn't log me out. I was trying to write up my custom Sage Abilities. And thus was sitting in Notepad for like 2 hours while jamming to my classic rock. And in the end, I got nothing to show for it.))
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2010 4:00 pm
Zanzo did not factor in her making three clones for defense. So while his kunais and clones flew at Kokirii-Sensei and her clones. Zanzo was left to deal with Kokirii-Sensei and her attack. Which he took to the shoulder and he did not know what it did to him, but his shoulder hurt really bad. Luckily for him it was his left shoulder and not his right. Three of Zanzo's clones puffed away leaving Zanzo with one lowly clone left. However this lowly clone was directly behind Kokirii-Sensei, who had turned her back to this clone in her attack on Zanzo. While lying on his back, Zanzo looked up at Sensei and said "Well Sensei it would seem that I have alot left to learn, but I hoped to atleast show you some of my skills." Still holding his left shoulder, Zanzo had his clone go for a leg sweep at Sensei's legs while he came up for an uppercut.
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2010 4:13 pm
When the clone came in for a leg sweep, she seemed to stumble...into the clone and away from the uppercut which surely would have bruised her. Stubling backward into the clone, she elbowed it fiercely in the gut, and then grabbed the uppercut meant for her and pulled him over her shoulder, a sort of judo flip you could say.
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2010 4:39 pm
Landin heavy on his back from his flip, Zanzo decided to lay there for a second to think out matters. All out of clones and severly low on charkra, Zanzo figured it was about time he conceded to defeat. Otherwise he could possibly be more injured than he is now. Besides wasting the last of his charkra on a clone would do very little to help right now. So standing up and rubbing his hurt shoulder, Zanzo gingerly put his hands together and bowed to Kokirii-Sensei. He said to her "You have won Kokirii-Sensei, I conced defeat to you. And man that Precise hit thing really hurt." Smiling at her and nodding his head, Zanzo waited for her reponse.
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2010 4:49 pm
Kokirii smiled. "Well, it ought to. I've had to practice it for ever since I was old enough walk." she said. Then she examined his shoulder critically. "Hmmm...I've dislocated it. Sorry, hold on a moment, this'll hurt." she said, shoving said arm back into the socket with a sickening crack. "Alright, you should be better, but it might be sore for a while." she said cheerily. Then she sighed. "Alright, with what you guys put me through, I think I'll hit the Hot Spring. Unless someone else wants to spar." she said with a sharp glint in her eye.
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2010 4:53 pm
Kenshin walked into the class room and sat at a desk, looking around he seeing no one was here he sighed. "Did I miss class again or is this not a class day?" Kenshin sighed again and pulled out a book.
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2010 5:02 pm
Zanzo's jaw dropped as his arm was put back into place, but he did his best not to yell out in pain. Pushing his lips together and closing his eyes tight. Zanzo tried to allow the pain just rest on him and taking a deep breath. He opened his eyes and related "Thanks Sensei for that. Hot springs, well that sounds like a good idea. I need to rest and let my arm soak up the hot water." He looked to see if Ryouji was going to spar Sensei. Even though he really wanted to go rest his sore body in the Hot Springs, Zanzo wanted to be here to see his friend spar Sensei.
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2010 5:13 pm
Satsu had watched the spar go on in silence. When it was over with he walked up to Zanzo and Kokirii-sensei. "My, My and no one died. To be expected in a spar, alas I was not entertained enough." Satsu said grinning in a manner that seemed to suggest he was kidding. Then again, Sharp, pointy teeth don't really appeal to such a look. "Well I suppose I will join you at the Onsen then sensei."
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2010 5:44 pm
Dropping the book back in his bag, Kenshin stood with another sigh. "No one ever tells me anything, I don't care anymore I'm gonna go soak in the hot tube." Kenshin walked out the room and slammed the door.
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2010 6:01 pm
Kokirii promptly turned around and walked over to the entrance of the school, picking up her bag which contained her personal items, along with a change of clothes and a little money for maybe dinner. She looked behind her briefly. "Alright, let's go then." she said, heading out the door.
((Exit: Konoha Hot Springs))
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2010 6:47 pm
Satsu watched her go before following after himself, never bothering to check on his other classmates. Satsuzame stopped by the class and gathered his supplies before he left. "Ah! The onsen will be pretty enjoyable."
((Exit: Konoha Hotsprings))
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2010 6:58 pm
Watching Sensei and Satsuzame head to the back to the classroom, Zanzo ran over and grabbed his lunch bag. Running to catch up, Zanzo sped pass the classroom and out the doors of the Academy. He yelled before he left "Wooo! I can't wait to get into those Hot Springs!" With a jump and his lunch bag on his shoulder, Zanzo headed out to the Hot Springs.
((Exit: Konoha Hot Springs))
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Posted: Fri Aug 06, 2010 9:40 pm
Major Dangerousk Ok you wanted my input. I honor that. Here it is: Yes, Gaara is right in saying that Vexin has used to much chakra for his rank. In all technicalities, he should be dead after that much chakra use at his level. So, unless he's willing to spend a week in RL in the Konohagakure hospital, he should edit his posts to include: 1. Less clones. 2. A change in the static strings. (unless greg says otherwise.) That's all I can think to put in this post right now. If you see anything wrong with my judgement, please say so. And if there are any suggestions, please give them. ((oh. And as an explanation as to why I didn't respond and deal with this earlier, I was busy. It said I was online, I know. But I was sitting at the My Gaia page and refreshing it so it wouldn't log me out. I was trying to write up my custom Sage Abilities. And thus was sitting in Notepad for like 2 hours while jamming to my classic rock. And in the end, I got nothing to show for it.)) i'll edit them and sorry for not getting on i was in job training and im going to wait on the stadic strings tell i can get ahold of greger828
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