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 Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 4:45 pm
Hmmm, I guess I have good taste because I am just totally awesome like that! lol...Hey, did you know that Darren Criss, (The guy that plays Harry Potter in AVPM & AVPS) is going to be on Glee? He's playing a gay member of a rival choral group. I'm EXICTED! That, & Glee is having a Rocky Horror Picture Show tribute episode on the 26th of this month... xP
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Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 5:47 pm
They had repo playing @ a local theater not ton long ago. I wanted to go soooooo bad, but i couldnt.
I really really need to see it though, y'all have gotten me curious.
&, after i do dishes and shower and blah blah, ima try to post. i'm so tired i just might fall asleep on the keyboard. xD
butt. tomorrow i have NOTHING to do, except homework. that only consist of writting a movie critique, redrafting 2 writting peices, and catching up on my AP class hw.
if i work all day, i'll be done in time to rp. (:
oh&Shauna, i love Bri's profile. i'm posting it now.
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Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 5:53 pm
I'm doooone. Now I have to get ready for this week's post sweatdrop burning_eyes
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Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 6:05 pm
Allison Mae Abrams (-TheSweetestDeadlySin-), Daina Nova Anderson (shauna_marie), Adam Sire Listing, Riah "L" Listing, Harman Astrid Weaver, Michaela "Mick" Ronalds. (xC o l o r M e G r e yx), & Kyuubi Katsukai are the only profiles that havnt been revamped. If there is any way that you can revamp these, that would be awesome. If not, tell me and i'll revamp 'em in some genaric format.
Arthuritis592, so i read your post & it was pretty good. Butt, the text you wrote in the bolded lime green lines really clashes w. the post. You can type the whole thing in Lonan's perspecive and the post would sound a whole lot better. It would add details, and length. Plus, it connects us to the character. The narrator kinda thing might work in a novel where the writer does that the whole time, just not in an RP.
You also made it sound almost in current tense.
Next post, can you please not use the narrator technique and write in past tense, read some of the other rp post and you'll get the idea really fast.
keep this post the way it is, alright.
Thanks Arthuritis592.
but seriously, what do you want me to call you?
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Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 7:05 pm
yep yep, I only did that because I didn't really know how to integrate background material (aka years that didn't happen) into the text, so I wanted to make sure that there was a clear difference between them. I'll do that from now on.
Also, my real name is Chris so either that or Arthur for short is fine.
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Posted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 10:43 am
To shauna and drakie, if y'all havnt noticed, i rewrote all of the rules. Shauna and Drakie, can y'all do me a favor and look then over, revising and grammical errors and making suggestions.
What i want y'all to do is look over them, make gramical changes, and send the finished draft. Then, if y'all see a rule y'all don't like, or see something that needs changed or added, rewrite or write that rule and send it sepratly. Then, i'll go over it and post a finalized copy of the rules. Once the rules are done, it'll be announced and i'll make everyone read 'em.
Everyone, None of the rules are tottaly into effect untill they're revised, alright guys? But they will be in effect really soon.
If y'all want, i'm about to go though and redraft some of the RP, so if y'all y'all should look through everything and send me suggestions of what needs to be changed.
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Posted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 11:14 am
Arthuritis592 yep yep, I only did that because I didn't really know how to integrate background material (aka years that didn't happen) into the text, so I wanted to make sure that there was a clear difference between them. I'll do that from now on. Also, my real name is Chris so either that or Arthur for short is fine.
http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=73&t=15680155#232082013
that is an example of wonderfull background information, and just wonderfull writting in genral. i love my rachy boo <3
then, theres just outright saying it
this is a crummy post, but a good example
http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=69&t=15680155#225273537
edit: so, i noticed something that somehow i didnt notice before in your post, we don't have roommates. theres really no specfic reason, but its good because your characters has their own room that they can do whatever they want to.
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Posted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 3:03 pm
>< ok edit numero dos here i come! Sorry about this, I'll attempt to be less inept in the future.
*Edit* Hmm, I'm wondering Elaine if maybe I should read the RP through before writing my first post. It would help with my ignorant mistakes, plus, it would make writing a lot easier if I didn't have to ask questions all the time. If it's all right with you, I'll just delete my first post, read everything, and then re-post with my new and improved Genius Academy knowledge. What do you think?
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Posted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 3:56 pm
sounds brilliant, esp. since your supposed to be friends w/ mer and bri.
you'll find it so intresting w/ how much everyone has improved since the begining.
but beware, its longgg.
&, your questions will never annoy me. it just shows me things i need to point out in the 'about the school section' since ima rewrite it again.
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Posted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 5:00 pm
MWAH HA HA HA HA HA! Time to (temporarily) murder my character! I may need some time, I don't know how long it will take me to read and there are a crap-ton of pages, but I will do my bestest.
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Posted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 6:13 pm
Hey, Elaine, maybe that's something that should be done..have like a summary page since the rp is so long...and so new peeps can get a recap quickly so they can start rping asap!
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Posted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 6:32 pm
(0) (0)
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Mr. Pig agrees with Shauna (but will still read them nonetheless)!!!
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Posted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 8:28 pm
Thats something i've decided to do for awhile now, its just going to take soo long to write it. I'll start eventually.
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Posted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 8:37 pm
I can help if you need it....
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Posted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 9:00 pm
I could too once I'm done reading. It might help to have an outside opinion of what's important. (sorry about the pig lol but idk how to make a bunny)
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