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PostPosted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 4:46 pm


OOC posts out of the IC threads. So quit stalling with OOC posts, because they dont count. Next time I time you out.
PostPosted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 7:51 pm


((Jello, my post attempting the choke was ATTEMPTING A CHOKE. It's the same as saying "throwing a punch knowing it's not made of spikes." After the punch hits, I can say how my fist weaves or whatever once it hit, such as if it remains against his face, depending on what your character does, or not, and pulls it back, such as if trying to grab for the fist when it hits.

This is no different. I attempted the choke. I succeed and you go for a grab. I evade, like evading a punch or "weaving" it. And so, you are to continue on with your next actions with what happens now, not rewind and say you knew he was going to position himself that way.

So you choose even though you don't want to take a risk of a faulty move.))

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 9:15 pm


(( The difference is that you went for a choke. Your choke succeeded. I responded assuming the choke was done properly. You replied by informing me that the choke was not done properly and was instead some bizarre makeshift choke that wouldn't actually work.

This is different from moving from a correct choke to an incorrect choke.

It's like saying "I throw a punch at your face", then when the person responds by ducking it you reply with "it was an uppercut, coming from below, there's no way it could have been ducked".

Necessary details that should be in the first post, but were lacking, which results in one of two things depending on the rules of the thread/guild/judge you're fighting at.

1. Omitted details are subject for the other person to interpret as necessary.
2. Including omitted details after a response makes the response subject to a complete rewrite.


Either way, you still have two OPTIONs open that don't involve the stick in any way.

Make a post or you will be timed out due to delaying. I'm sick of waiting on this thing due to OOC arguments. I stopped arguing with you over these things. I accepted your earlier post as fact without a single exception. I gave you six possible responses to choose from, under 3 different sets of circumstances.

Hell, at this point you could flip a coin for it. Make a post. ))
PostPosted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 9:51 pm


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You replied by informing me that the choke was not done properly and was instead some bizarre makeshift choke that wouldn't actually work.

((Um, I never said my choke was done wrong. You assumed that, and thus, you stated it in your post.

And I cannot post until you make an actual post. Giving me choices won't work. If you're going to perform an action, you're going to be guilty of it, not I. So you randomize which option you're going to pick and go with it. All I'm waiting for you to chose the post you're going to do, not offer me choices. It's your character's actions so you designate them. If you're not serious enough to make your own decisions, then you're only wasting time.))

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 10:47 pm


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You replied by informing me that the choke was not done properly and was instead some bizarre makeshift choke that wouldn't actually work.

((Um, I never said my choke was done wrong.

Assuming the Chokehold is Being Performed Properly
Yariel would place Tiem into an effective chokehold with the weapon, assuming it works out this way.

The Clarification in Which it is Stated that the Choke was Done Wrong
The blade in his left hand was being held so that it rested atop the wooden sword when it went into grip in the same hand. With the sword against the bottom of the palm, the blade would be resting atop it, so it was a semi hold of the blade to be more exact. The successful hold would have it to where his left shoulder would be back and his right tilting toward Tiem's body, since he would be present behind but to the left of Tiem, too, using the advantage of gravity from the left side, and leverage of pulling by stretching his left leg and bending his right. Lowering his height helped in pulling against the neck of Tiem, and beginning to lean his head back as it pressed upward in that notch between the neck and the jaw.




THIS IS AN IN CHARACTER POST.

It was originally posted 35 hours ago.

To be clear: This is an In Character post, and it always has been.


themightyjello
So now it was a chokehold. Yariel behind, Tiem in front. The wooden sword performing it.

Hell... the kid almost had to laugh.

"'s been fun, gai."

And then the spear shaft hit the grate below them.

And then Yariel would hit the grate below them.

Once the chokehold had been established two things would happen; the first would be that Tiem dropped the pole he was holding; the second would be that his two free hands went to use. The left grabbed onto Yariel's left wrist firmly, the right went to his shoulder. Reaching back over his head, and over Yariel's head, the boy grabbed a handful of the elf's robe at the back of his right shoulder and twisted it firmly around his hand to get a solid grip. Then it was just a matter of the boy being on the bottom.

He leaned forwards, ramming his lower back and buttocks into Yariel's midsection with a sudden thrust of his lower body, while at the same time jerking forwards on the elf's upper body. It was one of the simplest maneuvers out there, an over-the-shoulder throw.

The knife that Yariel was somehow holding along with the wooden sword in his left hand? Well, the hand was going to move. He couldn't get a real grip on the wooden weapon with something already in his hand, and if he'd decided to drop it in favor of the choke, then there'd really be nothing to worry about anyways. The wrist firmly in grip, Tiem kept the elf's left hand clear during the entire process; from the point Yariel's feet left the ground to the point where his back slammed against the pole laying on the steel grate below them.

The entire process took barely longer than it took the pole to hit the grate.

It would promptly be followed with some ground n' pound action.


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To maintain a chokehold of that sort, the opponent's back must be against the choker's chest while the 'bar' is held against the neck in order to prevent escape. Any variation in which this is not the case means that any 'choke' that actually happens is entirely dependent upon the situation being more 'tug-of-war' than 'hold'.

Assuming the hold was performed properly, with a three-foot sword and hands at the very tips, Yariel's wrist would be no more than fourteen inches to the left. Barely past Tiem's own shoulder. It would be at roughly shoulder distance as well, and not any further back, or the hold would be pressing firmly on the side of the neck rather than the front, and accomplishing little.

A stick is a very linear thing. It's straight. It doesn't bend. If one side is pulled back the other side has to go forwards. If Yariel's left hand was back, his right hand was forwards, his elbow was up in order to facilitate leaning over the shoulder, and his right shoulder would be easily reachable.

Assuming the hold was performed properly
, what was written in the previous post would happen.

We'll call that OPTION A.


Using the description provided, in which the hold is performed improperly, Tiem could do something as simple as turning his head to he left in order to get the 'bar' out from under his chin. At which point simply dipping his head or sliding the left leg back a step and bending it slightly would be enough so that the force applied to pull back on the 'bar' would cause it to slip straight over the side of his head. Maybe pull his ear a little, but no more than pulling off an overly tight sports helmet would.

Escaping from the grapple in this way does not require the use of either hand, and would not require him to drop the weapon he was holding.

From here a number of options open up.



He could easily slide his left foot out further, pressing against the inside of Yariel's right foot and driving it outwards a few inches. Doing so would knock the elf's balance off, possibly causing him to fall but at the least causing his stance to widen, lower, and shift past Tiem's left side. In synchronous motion he could raise up the shortstaff in hand behind Yariel's left arm, preventing him from pulling it back to counter or guard. By moving with the staff in that way until it reaches his side, under the arm, it assures both that any attempt to lower the arm or attack with it would be rendered ineffective through simple range of motion, and that it would allow Tiem the opening to step under that arm with his right leg.

With his left straight and his right unstable, Yariel would not be able to step off of his left leg with more force than he could muster from the calf muscle. This meant that the elf was relatively immobile for a fraction of a second, and had no control over his lateral movement. Simply spinning the center portion of the staff up behind Yariel's right shoulder would suffice; then Tiem would be able to swing his right arm over the elf's head and pull back with both.

His left leg would then have swung around behind him and his weight would be placed on that. His right would bend slightly at the knee and raise on the ball of his foot to add as much height as possible in order to press the top of his right thigh against Yariel's tailbone; figuratively 'laying him out' on top of the leg and removing his legs from the equation entirely. Unlike Yariel, Tiem's hands would be spaced just slightly wider than the elf's neck.

A demonstration of how a real chokehold should be maintained.

We'll call that OPTION B.


He could also simply drive the shortstaff upwards along Yariel's torso. It was easily long enough so that he could brace it underneath both of the elf's raised arms and prevent him from lowering them. Doing this he could continue to press forwards, as he had been doing, by pushing against the elf's chest while maintaining a lower stance than Yariel (an easy feat, as Yariel was the taller of the two.

Doing this would keep the elf 'on the ropes', as had been the intent throughout the entire fight to this point.

We'll call that OPTION C.


He could drop the weapon as intended and instead place his hands in two positions: The left on Yariel's right hip, the right on the elf's left scapula. Doing this he would simply need to push off of his left leg and twist his body while maintaining the hold. Yariel would be pulled forwards and twisted along with the boy in a clockwise spin. His right leg would drag across the boy's left, 'ramping' it off the ground. His left leg was already straightened and behind him, and would provide no resistance to either the lateral nor the forwards movement.

The elf would end up on his back at Tiem's feet, only this time laying perpendicular to his facing.

We'll call that OPTION D.


He could drop the weapon as intended and instead simply place his left hand on Yariel's thigh while stepping in against him with the right foot. He'd simply have to press back against the 'flat' side of Yariel's stance, where his legs were not aiding him at all. As soon as he stepped in the other hand would go to Yariel's other thigh in the same way; both would be pulled forwards and up while Tiem went belly-to-belly and pushed forwards.

Yariel would fall on his a** with Tiem's waist between his legs, and it would be time for that aforementioned ground n' pound.

We'll call that OPTION E.


He could snap up the 'rear' end of the staff and thrust it up and in while throwing his weight onto the left foot.

lolololololol nutshot.

We'll call that OPTION F.




So, what will it be?
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 10:59 pm


(( If you're too chicken to roll it, there's your roll.

A, B, C, D, E, F, WHAT'LL IT BE?




Be a man, will you? Was that so hard?

Does it really seem like I'm going be mad if you choose something that I asked you to choose off of a list of options that I gave you so that you can do the thing that I've been complaining about you not doing for the last two days? ))


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PostPosted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 11:55 am


((Maybe if you were a real man to actually be able to choose your own character's actions without having me choose choices as if I was choosing my destiny in some Mortal Kombat game, we wouldn't be in this mess.))

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He could drop the weapon as intended and instead place his hands in two positions: The left on Yariel's right hip, the right on the elf's left scapula. Doing this he would simply need to push off of his left leg and twist his body while maintaining the hold. Yariel would be pulled forwards and twisted along with the boy in a clockwise spin. His right leg would drag across the boy's left, 'ramping' it off the ground. His left leg was already straightened and behind him, and would provide no resistance to either the lateral nor the forwards movement.

The elf would end up on his back at Tiem's feet, only this time laying perpendicular to his facing.


Tiem's left hand was going for the right hip of Yariel. He didn't think Yariel's hip could be reached across his waist with his arm extending back, did he? The normal length of his arm wouldn't be long enough to go for it, as Yariel's crouch kept his left side away, his right side near the middle of his back, his left side still to the left of Tiem's positioned body. But upon seeing this anyway, Yariel does pull his right hip back with his right foot stepping back, and that has him move the wooden sword to the right so he could make it more parallel to Tiem's neck. But his left hand lets go, and the choke was lost. The right hand coming for his right shoulder blade was soon caught in a backwards grip with Yariel catching it between his forearm and bicep, pressing his stomach close to Tiem's back now. His right foot would be between Tiem's feet, with his left foot sliding back, but behind the right for a feet and some, making his left side pointed away.

He still held the wooden sword in hand, which was pressing again Tiem's rear around the center of it at the time bu continuing down toward the floor, to show its relative position. The clockwise motion would be stopped here, as Yariel's pull on that right arm followed by his left hand going around the neck from the left shoulder, to have his left forearm press against the front of Tiem's neck in another more common chokehold. Sliding his left foot forward some, more away from behind his right, he holds onto the neck tight, his left hand resting against the right shoulder of Tiem. If one looked at this from a third person perspective, Yariel had just placed Tiem into one of those FBI-type of submissions, where in the movies you usually see the good guy placing a bad guy into a good hold, asking for information and other things.

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 1:40 pm


Nothing Yariel just did would have had any effect.

With both arms over Tiem's shoulders in the choke hold, that meant that Tiem's arms were lower than Yariel's.

With the left foot back and right side forwards, that meant that only the right side was even close to Yariel.

So, when the chokehold was ducked under and Tiem slid his left foot back to turn his left side in against Yariel, even stepping back with his right foot like the elf did wouldn't do anything except give the boy more room to bring his left arm across.

Pinning the right arm between the bicep and forearm? More like the bicep and underarm, since that's where it was reaching. And even then, it's just locking the hand in place, which is exactly what the boy was going for.

What changed? Well, Tiem would have both hands on the elf, and would have pulled and twisted simultaneously in order to imbalance the elf and drag him off his feet.

That was, after all, the attack.




Nothing was pressing against Tiem's back. If Yariel wanted his stomach so close, it'd be in the boy's face due to his dropped stance.

Everything that supposedly happened after that is moot, considering it is running under the assumption that the boy is facing the other way, which he isn't.


In summary:

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Using the description provided, in which the hold is performed improperly, Tiem could do something as simple as turning his head to he left in order to get the 'bar' out from under his chin. At which point simply dipping his head or sliding the left leg back a step and bending it slightly would be enough so that the force applied to pull back on the 'bar' would cause it to slip straight over the side of his head. Maybe pull his ear a little, but no more than pulling off an overly tight sports helmet would.

Escaping from the grapple in this way does not require the use of either hand, and would not require him to drop the weapon he was holding.

- - - -

He could drop the weapon as intended and instead place his hands in two positions: The left on Yariel's right hip, the right on the elf's left scapula. Doing this he would simply need to push off of his left leg and twist his body while maintaining the hold. Yariel would be pulled forwards and twisted along with the boy in a clockwise spin. His right leg would drag across the boy's left, 'ramping' it off the ground. His left leg was already straightened and behind him, and would provide no resistance to either the lateral nor the forwards movement.

The elf would end up on his back at Tiem's feet, only this time laying perpendicular to his facing.


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PostPosted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 6:26 pm


His left arm did have to travel more to get to the right shoulder, and his choke is missed. The right foot is slid in front of Tiem's right foot as he dips low. If Tiem was grabbing, good, that was going to make things a lot more interesting. His right foot sliding right would be countered by the shin of Yariel's right leg. With Yariel just pushing against it, his left foot given a balance of weight, turning to the right was halted in that centerline of the right feet/legs of both of them. His left foot would be sliding some to show the struggle against the throw, but not much to make any difference.

But that left one limb free: Yariel's left hand. His left foot slid left to keep the throw from occuring, his left hand stabs down, the blade striking for the back of Tiem's neck. It would drive through the flesh, the cartilage, and out the other end. The half elf wasn't intending to have to result to this method to take down Tiem, but it was the only option left to ending this fight. Even if Tiem had found a way to continue the throw, his lowered dipped position still gave Yariel an open exposure to the back of his skull, and down came the dagger.
PostPosted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 11:05 am


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The right foot is slid in front of Tiem's right foot as he dips low. If Tiem was grabbing, good, that was going to make things a lot more interesting. His right foot sliding right would be countered by the shin of Yariel's right leg. With Yariel just pushing against it, his left foot given a balance of weight, turning to the right was halted in that centerline of the right feet/legs of both of them.

Seeing as Yariel had somehow countered his own movements by preventing his right step by blocking it with a right step so that it wouldn't be able to step... to the right...

Well, in the end nothing with the feet seemed to matter.

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his left hand stabs down, the blade striking for the back of Tiem's neck.

The knife drew blood.

Sure, there could have been any number of miraculous "I knew you were going to do that" dodges, since everyone knew that if it didn't happen eventually there was something wrong with this fight. Hell, by grace of god Tiem could have leaned to the side while performing the throw in which he was leaning to the side and the knife thrust would end up with Yariel ramming the blade into his own chest. Could have. Didn't.

The knife drew blood, and cut a slice in the side of the kid's neck. Why wasn't it a clean hit? It was too slow, that was why. After all, the knife thrust was the second attempt at stopping the throw, not the first. It was the bonus chance. The extra mans. The green mushroom.

...but we still never found out what happened with that throw...


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PostPosted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 3:18 pm


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It was too slow, that was why. After all, the knife thrust was the second attempt at stopping the throw, not the first.


No, it was not. It was only there to take out Tiem when he saw the chance, which was during the moment of the struggle, not as a second chance since there was nothing of that sort. The counter to the throw, which he showed with his feet repositioning and giving weight to them, especially against the side that tried to reist the most, which was that right foot of a pivot, was done to stall it before Tiem would try to adjust to the situation, which he had yet to do in his previous post. So, down came the blade because no throw was done with Tiem never showing a defense to the stall of the throw, thus having it stab through the neck.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 1:31 pm


Still an IC post.


Thank you for calling.

Please stay on the line.

Your call is important to us.

Your call will be answered shortly.

Please stay on the line.

Your call will be dealt with in the order that it was received.



...but we still never found out what happened with that throw...


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PostPosted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 9:31 am


As said in both posts if they were ever read: the throw never happens. A knife is through his throat before he could even try to counter the stopping of the throw.
PostPosted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 1:54 pm


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A knife is through his throat before he could even try to counter the stopping of the throw.

Unfortunately, things such as 'an attempt to delay the throw' or 'he moves his foot in a way that could not have impeded the throw' tell us little about what actually happened with that throw.

themightyjello
...but we still never found out what happened with that throw...

As such, we reach a TIME PARADOX of sorts, although not the kind that results from SNAKE IS DEAD. Instead the two seem to be stuck in an infinite loop where the throw is attempted, yet somehow delayed long enough for a knife to thrust.

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It was too slow, that was why. After all, the knife thrust was the second attempt at stopping the throw, not the first. It was the bonus chance. The extra mans. The green mushroom.

...but we still never found out what happened with that throw...

However, the knife thrust misses it's target.


...but we still never found out what happened with that delayed throw...








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A knife is through his throat before he could even try to counter

Speedhacking lulz? ))


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PostPosted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 5:38 am


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His left arm did have to travel more to get to the right shoulder, and his choke is missed. The right foot is slid in front of Tiem's right foot as he dips low. If Tiem was grabbing, good, that was going to make things a lot more interesting. His right foot sliding right would be countered by the shin of Yariel's right leg. With Yariel just pushing against it, his left foot given a balance of weight, turning to the right was halted in that centerline of the right feet/legs of both of them. His left foot would be sliding some to show the struggle against the throw, but not much to make any difference.

But that left one limb free: Yariel's left hand. His left foot slid left to keep the throw from occuring, his left hand stabs down, the blade striking for the back of Tiem's neck. It would drive through the flesh, the cartilage, and out the other end. The half elf wasn't intending to have to result to this method to take down Tiem, but it was the only option left to ending this fight. Even if Tiem had found a way to continue the throw, his lowered dipped position still gave Yariel an open exposure to the back of his skull, and down came the dagger.


Maybe Tiem was blind or just didn't read this post that was provided for him a few posts ago. As shown, the throw was stopped and the knife went down.

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A knife is through his throat before he could even try to counter


And if he read it better, it was not speedhacking, but in fact, showing that the knife goes down before Tiem could counter, since all actions were happening simultaneously. Tiem went for the throw. Yariel uses the method in above. Knife comes down during this. And there was no slowness within it. Tiem would never be expecting it with his focus being on throwing.
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