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 Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 4:22 pm
i don't like people reading my poems either....i feel as though their really stupid and yeah....their all up on my happy blogspot thingie....if people ask kindly enough i let them read it, but on my blogspot I post a bunch of random s**t that makes me sound emo...
ps. what's an LJ...?
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 8:53 am
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 9:13 am
I email my stuff to like three people and they tell me how it is. I know they're lying because they say it's really good. I know they're not very good because i'm the author so i'm the ultimate critic. So, yeah.
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 11:32 am
I suck at music. I tried piano twice, gave up both times. Or more like, the teacher gave up on me. && I also tried alto sax in school, & hated it; my dad tried teaching me bass, made it through one lesson. And I can't sing, at all. xDDD; Writing? I don't write much. Only when I have to for English. Last semester I wrote a short story that I was proud of; it's on my quizilla. ((Yeah, I'm aware I spelled 'Chorus' wrong in my username. The ironic part being my old Gaia username was 'Its Spelled C H O R U S'. xDDD; )) && I'm putting up some poems I wrote last semester too. Uhm, I'm decent at photography though. :'D And not a horrible dancer either. …Yeah, I fail at The Arts. emo
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I EAT BRAINZ! Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 12:37 pm
I don't have the attention span or patience to take up an instrument. I'm decent at singing and do it really loudly. Photography I'm pretty good and I suck at dancing. I don't have the coordination to dance well. Writing is my strong point. I just wrote two poems since I was in deep depression last night. If you want me to post them here, I will. But I don't think they're very good.
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 1:31 pm
I'm just too lazy to practise. xD
I'm only good at dancing cause I dance in a studio. Before that, I was hopeless.
Ohh, I wanna read it!
Post it, post it!
*claps and jumps up and down*
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I EAT BRAINZ! Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 5:28 pm
kat want read kat want read!! *bounces in seat* i'm sure your poem is awesome vampz
funny, i wrote a poem like an hour ago, whilst listening to music...
i'll post it if ya'll want
ps. i started a livejournal thingie, although there's virtually nothing on it yet....=D
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 5:42 pm
Sure i'll post mine if youll post yours! *goes to notebook and finds poems*
One Tear Holds 1000 Sorrows:
I lay at night and cry myself to sleep,
Thinking about the wounds that have cut so deep.
My soul has been darkened, my soul tainted
My heart pulsing with the beauty i've painted.
The red on my arms, the blood on my bed,
I'm almost at peace by the lightness in my head.
These thoughts I've pushed past are now clear,
As the lights reveal my darkest fear.
Tears on my face mask the smile I now see,
Inside as I now know my reality.
Death is leaving me behind
As he takes the others' whose fates have been predefined.
I'm here alone with the pain I've started
But I soon know my sadness has departed.
The lesson I'll learn as I remember this tomorrow
Is that one tear holds a thousand sorrows.
I wrote this while I was depressed but it's not based on anything real. It's just talking about depression and suicide.
Here's another one about my recent fear of death (I know, the poems I've written are kinda depressing but it's jsut what I was feeling)
My breath seemed to shorten
My heart seemed to stop.
I inhaled as I calmed myself
And got my heart to bop.
Loss is my enemy
Death is my fear
My mind is filled with haze
But now seems to clear.
The story of troubles
The ending of loss
Sorrows overcome me
As I now begin to toss,
Toss and turn in my bed
As I now begin to pout
My dreams filled with darkness
Now I'm about to shout.
Now my eyes open
To light all around
I regain my control
And make not a sound
'Why am I scared'
I think in my head
As I lay unmoving
Still on my bed
The reason matters not
For I know why
The night brings it back
The fear of death, as I cry.
And those are them. I know I'm not very good but I posted them anyway. The second is based more on my personal experiences. Lately while I've been reading fanfics, the main girl who usually falls in love with Gee almost always ends up dying. And for some reason that really started to affect me and I've been kinda depressed. But writing these poems have really helped me and I'm getting over it. MCR has really helped too.
But hoped you enjoyed them!
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 5:50 pm
Xxpor siemprexX kat want read kat want read!! *bounces in seat* i'm sure your poem is awesome vampz funny, i wrote a poem like an hour ago, whilst listening to music... i'll post it if ya'll want ps. i started a livejournal thingie, although there's virtually nothing on it yet....=D Don't feel bad. I've had mine for almost a year and I only have one entry.
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 5:55 pm
Yeah, don't feel bad cause I don't even have one.
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 12:06 pm
Disciple of Dionysos Yes risingempress! Another sting player! *Highfives* And don't feel bad vampzgrl16, I can't sing either. But I can write! We'll go start a writer's thread together >> i don't feel so alone anymore!! Yay!!! *dances like an idiot around the bedroom listening to "Dead!"*
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 12:14 pm
*gapes at ability to ryhme* that's just wow. i like it despite the theme of blood in the bed....I can't rhyme to save my life...since you posted yours, i'll post mine....
You said we'd be friends forever
That we'd scream together
Feel together
Bleed together
And now what do you think
Who am I to you now
What has changed
Simply everything you say
Or is it just me, I reply
Just you
Not everything
Just us
written cause i'm having some friendship issues.....and i was dwelling on it at the time so I wrote this.....
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 12:20 pm
I really like yours! it's a lot better than mine. And poems don't need to rhyme, just need to flow. And the blood on the bed thing was because of when people get depressed, theysometimes think about suicide. So, yeah.
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 8:07 pm
Geez, I'm so jealous.
You guys have amazing poems.
I wish I could rhyme as well as you.
I've written one poem that I 100% LOVE so far.
It's called One Heart, and it's about the impact of a death on a tight-knit community.
It basically describes what the school family of Laurine Ave P.S. went through when a student in grade five died.
LJ?
I made one back in 2005…I never posted anything; I abandoned it after a few weeks.
I don't even remember the username. xD
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I EAT BRAINZ! Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 8:31 pm
Post it here! I posted my ultra depressing poem so now post yours! Or else it's more pixie sticks for ypu! MUHAHAHA!!!!
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