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 Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 7:50 am
@ Godstone Thanks, I know that grammar is a pain but I am working on it with... my secret weapon ninja
@ Romyion/Romyiom yeah but this is the first chapter give it time people will be introduced later on
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 8:48 am
I give it 9/10 for awesomeness!
...I'll bump it up to a 10 if you put me in it......
...secret weapon
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 8:49 am
Hero Maul I give it 9/10 for awesomeness! ...I'll bump it up to a 10 if you put me in it...... ... secret weaponactually Maul your already placed in a future chapter and for saying Secret weapon ninja you will now kick major a**, anyway thanks glad you like it so far
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 8:54 am
Sauvie Hero Maul I give it 9/10 for awesomeness! ...I'll bump it up to a 10 if you put me in it...... ... secret weaponactually Maul your already placed in a future chapter and for saying Secret weapon ninja you will now kick major a**, anyway thanks glad you like it so far * in god-like voice * I SHALL NOW BUMP IT UP TO...10/10! * fanfare *
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 12:30 pm
hey Sauvie, awesome story and this secret weapon ninja of yours knows their stuff. when are you getting the next chapter out buddy?
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 12:31 pm
Fangs666 hey Sauvie, awesome story and this secret weapon ninja of yours knows their stuff. when are you getting the next chapter out buddy? most likely tomorrow... Secret weapon ninja
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 12:41 pm
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 4:43 pm
there has been a name given to me which I like so that will be the title unless hated
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 4:49 pm
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 4:50 pm
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 8:04 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 6:07 am
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 10:21 am
I like it so far, the only real problem is has is that sometimes it's a bit difficult to understand what's going on. I think I know what your secret weapon may be though. ;D
And nice job adding Skitty in there. heart
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 10:35 am
Awesome storyline so far.
The space pirates confused me a bit, but nontheless.
I wonder who ghost is lol
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 10:37 am
Hey, it's good n_n I like how I'm kinda quirky in there <3
D= Must. Avenge. Fish. Go. Mochi. D=
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