:: Zanpakuto/Spirit Weapons/Vivication :: [OLD]

[xl Xero xl]

::General::  

[Tai Mao]

Not done

Character Name: Toraneko Hinote
Link to Profile: Crimson Mist

Zanpakuto Name: Kasumi Shinku
Name Meaning: Crimson Mist
Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance:
Spirit's World: Primordial Forest

::Shikai::
Attack Name: tsume no funzento
Name Meaning: Claws of Rage
Ability: Toraneko IS her zanpakutou. In Shikai, her claws can rend through anything and cause deep wounds. Str+15 for damage. Costs her 3 SE per use.
Appearance: Her claws are three inches long when extended and the same color and material as zanpakutou metal.
Release Command: She hisses

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Comments: Still have to activate shikai unless having a passive release
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::Bankai::
Attack 1 Name:Banteki Kiba
Name Meaning: Savage Fang
Ability: Toraneko IS her zanpakutou. Her fangs in Bankai are metallic in appearance and have the same qualities as any other zanpakutou. Her bite can cut and crush anything. Attack +30 per use. Costs her 3 SE per use.
Appearance: Her fangs are sharp and comparable in size to those of the Caracal.
Release Command:

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1. Pending - Chaos
Comments: +10 higher than a lv 100 custom.
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Attack 2 Name: Bakemono Bakeneko
Name Meaning: Monster Monster Cat
Ability:

Appearance:
Release Command:

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[KibitzRajas]

Replacing Sara's Illusion Shikai
::General::

Character Name:Sara Ichika Ren
Link to Profile: x

Zanpakuto Name: Anastasia
Name Meaning: Resurrection
Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance:

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Spirit's World:

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General Shikai Rules: On release; You pay 3 SP + 1 SP per post released unless you have a custom that makes your zanpakuto permanently released at the shikai state. Boosts Strength and Defense by +5; increasing by 5 every 100 [Capping at +200] Reiatsu. -Powers = Level 50 Customs
::Shikai::
Appearance:

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Release Command: Turn The Tide, Anastasia!
Attack Name: Lotus Dance: A Thousand Paper Cuts
Name Meaning:---
Ability: Anastasia has the ability to create tiny razors along side the blade within this dance. So small to see and unknown how many there is along the blade edge of Anastasia. When this is activated, Sara will dash towards her opponent delivering a single blow. It cuts so deep it will feel like they just ram themselves on piles of sharp paper hence the name of A Thousand Paper Cuts. Attack=Strength+10, If their defense is lower then her strength, they will lose 10 SE. 5SE to activate, Two Post Cooldown

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On release; You pay 5 SE + 3 SE per post released. Boosts Strength and Defense Stats by +10; increasing by 10 every 100 Reiatsu. [Capping at +300] - Powers = Level 100 Customs

::Bankai::
Release Command:May Dancing Oceans Of Blood Drown Them, Anastasia!
Bankai Zanpakuto Appearance:

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Attack 1 Name: Lotus Dance: Ten Thousand Scattering Paper Clash
Name Meaning:----
Ability: This ability is activated when the user breathes on their Zanpakuto brewing up more saw blades but much more then before to the point where the blade turns black. Every inch of that black is saw blades revving. With a single slash, the saw blades come off of the blade shooting towards the target so much so, the saw blades slips off of it almost like a black paper storm because of how fast its going towards the target. Attack Power=Strength+10, Attack Speed=Speed+20, 6 SE to activate, 3 post cooldown

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Attack 2 Name: Lotus Dance: Shark Blade
Name Meaning:---
Ability: This user once more breathes onto their zanpakuto, it turns black like before. Saw blades revving, covering the blade in black of its glory. though this is the true power of Anastasia, Saw blades create a extension which black protrusions what appears to be black shark teeth that are curved down for hooking and tearing into. 6SE to activate, 3 SE to maintain per post. As long as this is maintained, only basic attacks are allowed and are capable of causing 30 loss of Defense/Defensive Power Vs Attacks if they fail STR vs Defense Comparison, no additional to the comparison but the power of Bankai Stat Boost.

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[Lavender Wishes]

::General::

Character Name: Vanessa Celeste Flowers
Link to Profile:

Zanpakuto Name: Acechador Nocturno (Locked until Arrancar achieved)
Name Meaning: Nightstalker

::Resurrection::
Appearance: [X]
Release Command: Entra en el abismo, Acechador Nocturno!
Attack Name: Entra en el abismo
Name Meaning: Enter the Abyss
Ability: If Vanessa has more Intelligence than her opponent (+20) they enter a state called the Abyss. While in the Abyss the trapped individual is robbed of all senses, and may not move. They see, hear, smell, or taste nothing. They trapped individual may do no harm nor be harmed while in this state. This ability can last up to two turns, though may be ended early by Vanessa. (4SE to start, 2SE to maintain)

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Attack Name: El abismo atrapa
Name Meaning: The abyss ensnares
Ability: Under the conditions that "Enter the Abyss or Entra en el abismo" has held the full duration. The once trapped individual is free to move and may harm or be harmed. However the robbing of the senses still remains. They see, hear, smell, or taste nothing. This effect lasts for two turns. (Passive)

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2.Approved - Bandit
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[Luciferin Bandit]

::General::

Character Name: Toshiharu Haruko
Link to Profile:

Zanpakuto Name: Wu Wei
Name Meaning: Doing Nothing

::Hekai:: (100 level)

Attack Name: Zandaka Goschiso
Name Meaning: Balanced Feast, roughly
Ability: When activated, Toshiharu “devours” 50% of an opponent’s total active augments, dividing that total as evenly as possible between his own Attack Power, Movement Speed, and Comparisons. However, Toshiaru also loses 50% of his own augment total and that amount is divided up evenly between the opponent’s Movement Speed, Attack power, and Comparisons
Appearance: a Grey mist begins to swirl around Toshi and his opponent, connecting them
Release Command: Zandaka

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1. Guru blames Nep if this becomes a problem in anyway but Approves of it now that he has stamped it razz
Comments: see why i pended Formidable Release ok giving this a proper once over and thinking about how it works i have no idea how to judge this so whoever gets to this next i leave approving or denying this one to you
2. Nep - Stamp of Approval
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::Nisekai:: (200 level)

Attack Name: Tsuyo-sa no gyakuten
Name Meaning: Strength Reversal
Ability: This fearsome ability affects both Toshiharu and his Opponent. For the duration, Their lowest stat is treated as their highest stat, and their highest stat is treated as their lowest stat. This applies to attacks, movements, defenses, etc. For the duration, those two stats are treated as being switched. This costs Toshi 5 SE to activate, and 3 SE per post to maintain, but cannot affect a single opponent more than once. An opponent whose lowest stat is 20 more than Toshi's lowest stat is not affected
Appearance: The might that surrounds Toshi and his opponent thickens to a thick smog
Release Command: Gyakuten

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1. Guru Hesitantly Approved
Comments: see why i pended Formidable Release ~INTERESTING~ (might be busted but i'm at least willing to let you test out weather we should let people force stat replacements onto opponents) [you might also want to consider adding a stat comparison to resist this effect (maybe something like If Toshi's lowest stat > Target's lowest stat) if this feels too powerful in practice]
2. Nep - Stamp of Approval
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[xl Xero xl]

::General::
Shikai On release; You pay 3 SE + 1 SE per post released . Boosts 2 Stats by +5; increasing by 5 every 100 [Capping at +200]

Bankai on release; You pay 5 SE + 3 SE per post released. Boosts 2 Stats by +10; increasing by 10 every 100 Reiatsu. [Capping at +300]


Character Name: Kazuka
Link to Profile: https://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=1&t=12733439#153533638

Zanpakuto Name: Demon gauntlets
Name Meaning:-------------
Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance: https://i.imgur.com/nbzrpJa.jpg?1
Spirit's World: https://i.imgur.com/FKuhjry.jpg?1

::Shikai::
Attack Name: Demon fists
Name Meaning:---
Ability: Kazuka pounds his fist together boosting his power further make his gauntlet burn bright red from his rage making him able now cut into the opponents defense making them take -10 defense when hit by his fist.
Appearance: https://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=1&t=12733439#153533638
Release Command: Burn for me my fists!

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::Bankai::
Attack 1 Name: Demons rage
Name Meaning:---
Ability: Kazuka's gauntlet grows a series of miniature spikes along the knuckles. These spikes cause the opponents of bleed on hit. Bleed is -5 HP per post for 3 posts. To resist the effect they must have more Sta than Kazuka's Str. If someone already under this bleeding effect is hit the duration of their bleed resets back to 3 posts rather than stacking multiple bleeds.
Appearance: https://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=1&t=12733439#153533638
Release Command: Time to bleed.

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Comments: if you hit someone who is already bleeding do the bleeds stack or does the duration reset?
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Attack 2 Name: Oni arms of bloody rage
Name Meaning:----
Ability:Kazuka at the final stage of his bankai as learn to grasp the oni demons power that is within his blade transforming him into his oni zanpaktous form To do this he take his sword and stabs it into his left pectoral muscle and yells these words,"Take over my Demon".Kazuka transform into the bloody red monster that is his zanpaktou gaining a aura of destruction within 50 ft of kazuka you now take -10 to defense from his bloody aura that is present. comparsion made is [STR vs STR]
Appearance: https://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=1&t=12733439#153533638
Release Command: Take over my demons

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2. Baron's Seal ofApproval
Comments: Since its a large aura I would like to see a comparison before the debuff takes effect

 

[Sir_Viliulfo]

::General::

Shikai On release; You pay 3 SE + 1 SE per post released . Boosts Strenght and Defense by +5; increasing by 5 every 100 [Capping at +200]

Character Name: Kani Kaiu Hida
Link to Profile: Hida

Zanpakuto Name: Chikara
Name Meaning: Spear of the Crab
Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance: Buff Crab
Spirit's World: Crab Sea

::Shikai::
Attack Name: Umi ni wa me ga iranai
Name Meaning: The Sea Needs No Eyes
Ability: Hida taps the area in front of him with Chikara, and sends out ripples of his spiritual energy around him, like ripples on a pond. He combines this pulse with listening and observing his environment to locate enemies he cannot see. If his enemy's Spiritual Power is less than his Clarity+5, he can see them whether stealthed or obscured or otherwise hidden from view without being behind something.
Appearance: Shikai Release Form
Release Command: Chikara, Subete o shirabete teki o mitsukeru!

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[The Pixel Guru]

::General::

Re-submission for the upgrade from Zanpakutou Unionist

Character Name: Tanji Masaki
Link to Profile: X

Zanpakuto Name: Hanaki
Name Meaning: Flowering Tree
Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance: X
Spirit's World: X

::Shikai::
Appearance: A plain pair of wooden Tonfa
Release Command: Hanaki Sprout Forth

Attack 1 Name: Chikarazōfuku
Name Meaning: Force Amplification
Ability [lv 50]: Adds +10 Attack Power to all physical attacks made with the zanpakuto while it is released to shikai
Unionist Upgrade [lv 50]: Chikarazōfuku's Attack Power increase is improved to +20 and, in addition to attacks with the zanpakutou while it is released to shikai, it applies to all attacks Tanji makes while in his fused form (yes it stacks with the plus version during fusion)

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[Zanpakuto Spirit Awakening 1] (unlocked via spirit forge)
Attack 2 Name: Chikarazōfuku suteppu
Name Meaning: Force Amplification Step
Ability [lv 50]: When using Flash Step Tanji can spend an additional 2 SE to increase his movement speed bonus from flash step by +10
Unionist Upgrade [lv 50]: Increase the cost to 3 SE and the boost to flash step's movement speed increase to +20

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Added to profile? NO

::Bankai::
Appearance: An ornate pair of wooden Tonfa
Release Command: Hanaki Sprout Forth, And Bloom

Attack 1 Name: Hanabira kōgeki-ryoku kakunō māku
Name Meaning: Flower Petal Attack Force Storage Mark
Ability [lv 100]: When a target is hit by an attack from an attack made with Tanji's zanpakutou (All of Tanji's attacks are considered to be made with his zanpakutou while he is in his fusion state) they take no damage. Instead the Attack Power of that attack is stored in a flower shaped mark that appears on the target which gains a petal for every attack stored in this fashion. When the flower gets to 5 petals, all the stored attacks' Attack Powers are added together and hit the target as one big hit as the mark disappears and all the force stored inside the mark is released into the target all at once. (This effect is not optional and happens with all attacks made with the zanpakuto while in bankai or fusion) [this effect is the same as the old version i just reworded it so uses the proper terminology and it is clearer as to how the damage is dealt]
Unionist Upgrade [lv 50]: Adds +10 Attack Power to attacks stored in the mark

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Attack 2 Name: Chikarazōfuku +
Name Meaning: Force Amplification Plus
Ability [lv 100]: Adds +20 Attack Power to all physical attacks made with the zanpakuto while it is released to bankai
Unionist Upgrade [lv 50]: Chikarazōfuku +'s Attack Power increase is improved to +30 and, in addition to attacks with the zanpakutou while it is released to bankai, it applies to all attacks Tanji makes while in his fused form (yes it stacks with the not plus version during fusion)

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[Zanpakuto Spirit Awakening 2] (unlocked via spirit forge)
Attack 3 Name: Chikara no hansha
Name Meaning: Reflection of Force
Cost: 4 SE
Ability [lv 100]: Using Both his Offensive and Defensive action can reflect an incoming attack (with less Attack Power than his Reiatsu) back at the attacker with the same Attack Power and +20 to it's Attack Speed
Unionist Upgrade [lv 50]: Increase the Attack Speed bonus to +30

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Added to profile? NO

::Fusion::
Appearance: X
Release Command: Hanaki Sprout Forth, And Bloom Around Me

Attack Name: Uddoāmā
Name Meaning: Wood Armor
Ability [lv 200]: Passively Increases Tanji's Defensive Power by + 40 while he is in his Fusion Form

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2. Approved - Chaos
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Added to profile? NO

 

[Baron Blank]

::General::

Character Name: Hadrian Garandger
Link to Profile: [x]

Zanpakuto Name: Cerco
Name Meaning: "Siege" "Arm of the Siege Beast"

::Resurrection::
Appearance:
Release Command: Fire
Release Bonus: +10 Strength, and Defense

Attack Name: Marca de Las águilas (Lvl 50)
Name Meaning: "Eagle's Mark"
Ability: Upon a successful hit with an attack a target is marked with cross hairs exactly where they have been hit. After two more successful hits the mark explodes violently doing damage = to his Strength+10. This damage is still mitigated by the targets defense. Costs 2 SE to Apply the Mark.

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Attack Name: Tiro de Carcasa (Lvl 100)
Name Meaning: "Carcass Shot"
Ability: Whenever Hadrian lands an attack that deals a Major Wound.. the opponent roles a d4 to determine the debuff they are inflicted with. If the Major Wound is healed the debuff is negated.

1] Head - Int Debuff -20
2] Body - Sta Debuff -20
3] Arms - Str/Def Debuff -10 Each
4] Legs - Spd Debuff -20

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Attack Name: Disparar el Gatillo (Lvl 100)
Name Meaning: Knock Back Trigger
Ability: As a defense action Hadrian can reflexively fire off an explosive bone bolt towards at an incoming attack he can react to. If his Defensive Power [Str+20] is greater then the power of the attack directed at him, the attack is nullified, and any leftover damage carries over to an opponent. If the power of the attack is greater then his Defensive Power [Str+20] he takes the full damage with no defense mitigation. Costs 3 SE.

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[Professor Nep Nep]

Character Name: Akagi Kaida
Link to Profile: [X]

Zanpakuto Name: Akamutorumu
Name Meaning: The Black God, Tyrant of Fire
Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance: [X]
Spirit's World: [X]

Shikai Release Command: None, always in Shikai
Bankai Release Command: Reveal your fury, Akamutorumu!

Shikai Release: +5 to Strength and Speed increasing by 5 every 100 Reiatsu. [Capping at +200]
Bankai Release: +10 to Strength and Speed increasing by 10 every 100 Reiatsu. 5 SE + 3 SE to maintain [Capping at +300]

::Shikai::
Shikai Ability 1[175]: Jigoku no ryū no tsume
Name Meaning: Hell Dragon Claw
Ability: With her katanas edge now glowing orange, Kaida is able to cut through a portion of her opponent's defence. -35 to a person's defence for each attack.
Cost/Cooldown: Passively active.
Appearance: After saying the release command, the edge of Kaida's blade begins to heat up to an orange glow.

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Comments: i'm assuming this is a minus to the defense stat and not defensive power so if you are attacking a barrier that has it's defensive power calculated without the defense stat it would have no effect. so keep that in mind, or specify defensive power.
2. Approved - Chaos
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Shikai Ability 2[175]: Chīsana kōtei no kōshin
Name Meaning: Little Emperor March
Ability: Kaida fashions herself as a war general pushing her subordinates to fight harder until their bodies give out for to her, their entire existence is only worth as much as they fight, to not fight would mean facing the wrath of the general. Kaida grants herself and those around her +35 attack power in a 20m radius.
Cost/Cooldown: Passively active, disabled if Kaida is knocked out.
Appearance: ---

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::Bankai::
Bankai Ability 1:[200] Doragon no Ikari
Name Meaning: Wrath of The Dragon
Ability: With her sword engulfed in flames, each attack made against an opponent is able to deal more damage to an opponent, catching part of their clothes or flesh on fire in the process. Each attack deals an extra +10 damage, dealing an extra 10 per post for 3 posts that circumvents their defence to deal straight health damage. DoT requires a comparison of [STR] vs [STA] to be stopped.
Cost/Cooldown: DoT duration can be reset by paying 5 SE.
Appearance: Upon release, flames burst up from the katanas guard, engulfing the whole blade in flames, an immense amount of heat extruding from the blade.

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Bankai Ability 2[200]: Jigoku Heiya
Name Meaning: Instant Hell Field
Ability: Kaida places the tip of her flaming blade against the ground and a burst of fire shoots out from the tip creating a dangerous and explosive trap that once it's activated, quickly begins to glow a bright orange before blowing up in a large fiery explosion. Uses [STR]+40 for damage calculations.
Cost/Cooldown: Costs 4 SE to place per mine, 2 SE to maintain per mine.
Appearance: A scorch mark with the face of Akamutorumu glowing a dim red in the middle.

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Bankai Ability 3[200]: Ritorudoragon no kōshin
Name Meaning: March of the Little Dragon
Ability: The Little Dragon of the Akagi family, Kaida faces any challenge set in front of her with the fury of her namesake, setting the example for all her subordinates to fight with the rage and fire of a dragon or risk being burned alive for being too weak. Kaida grants herself and those around her +40 attack power in a 25m radius.
Cost/Cooldown: Passively active, disabled if Kaida is knocked out.
Appearance: ---

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[KibitzRajas]

::General::

Character Name: Maylis Oceane Sabrina
Link to Profile: Pirate Lady Of Hueco Mundo- Meno Grande, Gillain

You pay 6 SP + 3 SP per post released. Boosts Spiritual Power and Defense by +5; increasing by 5 every 100 [Capping at +200] Reiatsu. This bonus increases the stats boosted by +10 and increasing every 100 Reiatsu [Capping at +300] every 100 Reiatsu upon achieving Vasto Lorde.

Zanpakuto Name: Thalia
Name Meaning: "To Blossom"
Appearance:
Release Command: "Screech Songs, Thalia!"
::Vivification::

Attack Name: Tongue Pierced Oblivion
Name Meaning: ---
Ability: Maylis while in Vivication, has the ability to employ blood into her Cero and by firing out of the mouth, it becomes a powerful red spirit energy sound wave focused about vibrating the bodily liquid of the enemy painfully. Attack Power=Spiritual Power Attack Speed=Speed. If the enemy's Spiritual Power is lower then Maylis's Spiritual Power+10, they lose a offensive action next post. 3SE to activate, 2 Post Cooldown. Requires Cero to be Learned.

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[Ryuu Sanada]

::General::

Character Name: Ambrosio Tiburón
Link to Profile: Immortal Shark

Zanpakuto Name: Tiburón
Name Meaning: Shark

::Resurrection::
Appearance: https://imgur.com/y6JinJJ
Release Boost: Increase Speed and Strength by +10, and a further +10 per 100 Rei [max of +300]. 5 SE [Activation]; 3 SE [Maintain]
Release Command: Desgarrar! Tiburón!

Resurrection Ability 01 [Lv.50]: Dominio del Agua
Description: Ambrosio is the master of the waters... or sands. His ability to manipulate water is second to none.
Type: Support
Cost: ---
Effect: When Ambrosio uses a [Water] marked technique; the opponent's Defensive Power is treated as -10 less during damage calculation.
Duration: ---
Cool Down: ---
Range: ---

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Resurrection Ability 02 [Lv.50]: Tiro de Anclaje [Locked]
Description: While in Resurrection, Ambrosio wields a massive anchor as a weapon. He can spin and throw this weapon as if it were a light weight weapon. One such attack has him tossing the anchor and on impact releasing a powerful surge of pressurized water in all directions around its impact.
Type: Physical Offensive
Cost: 2 SE
Effect: [Water] Element. Attack Speed equal Movement Speed +10, with a power of Str.
Duration: ---
Cool Down: 1 post
Range: 25 ft radius

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Resurrection Ability 03 [Lv.100]: Cero el Tiburón
Description: A custom variant of Ambrosio's Cero. Usable while only in his Resurrection state, by channeling high pressure water and infusing it into the mass of energy before firing.
Type: Support
Cost: +2 SE [to cost]
Effect: [Water] Element. Requires Cero. Increases the augmented Cero's Spd by +10, and its power by +10.
Duration: ---
Cool Down: ---
Range: ---

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Resurrection Ability 04 [Lv.100]: Cuerpo Perfecto
Description: Ambrosio is a perfect hunter and assassin. As such his body is honed to perfection by his countless fights with rivals and prey.
Type: Support
Cost: 4 SE [per use]
Effect: When facing a comparison that targets his SP or Int, Ambrosio can change his end of the comparison to Str instead.
Duration: ---
Cool Down: ---
Range: Self

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Resurrection Ability 05 [Lv.100]: Barrera del Tifón [Locked]
Description: On activation, a typhoon of pressurized water whips and swirls around Ambrosio's body at such a high rate of speed that they act as blades of water.
Type: Defensive
Cost: 4 SE [Activation]; 2 SE [Maintain]
Effect: [Water] Element. Increases Ambrosio's Defensive Power by +20. While active those within ten [10] feet of him take damage equal to his Str.
Duration: As long as cost is paid
Cool Down: 2 posts
Range: 10 ft

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2.Approved - Bandit
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[jake23482]

Character Name: Chihiro Katagami
Class: Vizard Unionist [Submitting as a Unionist, Will be one completing RP Post]

Zanpakuto Name: Kirisakijakku
Name Meaning: Jack the Ripper
Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance: A Cloaked Figure, wielding a knife. Behind the hood and cloak is nothing but shadows and red mist. A spirit of murder and assassination, that some say was a mistake to be allowed to become an Ausachi. But this often alludes to it's owners spirit already having been a reincarnation of the infamous murderer.
Spirit's World: A photo inverted version of London from the Victorian Era. The streets and air are covered in a fog of red, and the mood looms in a wicked crescent in a perpetual night sky. Occasionally a scream of a woman in the throws of death can be heard, echoing from around in the mist.

::Shikai::
Attack Name: Akai Kiri
Name Meaning: Red Mist
Ability: Upon releasing her zanpakuto, the blade dissapears and becomes a fine red mist which swirls about Chihiro. She may do one of two things with this Red Mist; - Offensive or Defensive: Can only use 1 Mode per Post.

- Offensive: Forms a blade of red that stabs at her opponent from behind or the blind side, typically. If used from Stealth; It is loaded into one of her trap slots instead of becoming a direct attack:: It Has a Speed = Her Speed and a Power = to her Intelligence+10. [Cost : 3 SE/Use +2 SE Maintain for Each Trap Instance]
- Defensive: Forms a barrier of red mist that can brush off attacks and protect it's wielder from harm. It has a Defensive Power equal to Chihiro's Defense+10. Against those with less Clarity than her Intelligence; If the barrier blocks an attack. Chihiro becomes Stealthed until she attacks or doesnt pay the cost [Stealth Detection as per Normal]. [Cost : 3 SE/Use +2 SE per Post in Stealth]
Appearance: A dagger hilt with no blade, just red mist which continually leaks from it and surrounds Chihiro.
Release Command: "Satsujin, Kirisakijakku!" [Murder, Jack the Ripper!]

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1. Pending - Cass
Comments: I don't see a stealth technique created by you or if there is one it needs to be linked. [Stealth detection as per Normal] is not a system that is implemented.
2. Pending - Bandit
Comments: You need to link your stealth tech for this one. easy fix.

::Bankai::
Attack 1 Name: Ketsueki Hantā
Name Meaning: Blood Hunter
Ability: The blades surround her target and blood clones of Chihiro begin attacking from all sides, making it a nasty barrage of stabbing weapons. Each attack has a Speed = to Chihiro's Speed and a Power = to 50% of her Intelligence. - Up to 5 Attacks can be made with this ability; On-Hit Effects are applied to the Extra Attacks at Half-Effeciency. ; If used from Stealth and against a target with less Clarity than her Intelligence; Each Attack ignores 15 Defense. [Cost 4 SE +2 Per Shot beyond the first; 12 SE for a 5 Shot Burst]
Appearance: Chihiro's zanpakuto splits into many bladed handles which all ooze forth the bloody red mist. She is cloaked in a black coat with an ominous hood that allows her to in essence become the very essence of a mysterious murderer among the bloody fog that her blades generate. Her blades seem to be manipulated on a mental level.
Release Command: "Bankai! Aka-Kirisakijakku" [Red Jack the Ripper]

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Comments: See above
2. Approved
Comments: As long as you have a stealthing ability that goes with this. Best to link it.

Attack 2 Name:Aka o Miru
Name Meaning: Seeing Red
Ability: Upon activating this ability; Chihiro causes her blades to leak a huge ammount of red mist. It clouds the battlefield and makes it almost impossible to see. In addition to entering Stealth; Those with less Intelligence than Chihiro's Intelligence+10 find that their Clarity; If Calculated with anything other than [50% Defense + 50% Intelligence] is changed to the standard calculation as their vision becomes blinded by so much red, that color-blindness sets in. If a target has less than 50% of their Speed in Clarity while under this ability's effect; Their Defense is -5. :: 4 SE + 2 SE/Post Active [5 Posts Active (or until canceled) before a 2 Post CD]

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1. Denied - Cass
Comments: This is neglecting class bonuses which is awful. I also see this is a huge problem. As it just punishes people for playing Kensei. If I let someone change change calculations for other characters then I'm probably going to be getting changes to calculations on everything. As well as counters to calculation changes. There is also a lot going on here that do not technically correlate with one another, but that is a much minor problem.
2. Denied
Comments: I dont think i like the idea of ******** with someones stats at this level

::Fusion::
Attack 1 Name: Yoru no Machi
Name Meaning: City of Night
Ability: This effect triggers on entry to Fusion; Taking up an Augment Slot. - Chihiro enters Stealth and gains a +20 Bonus against Detection attempts. In addition; While this ability is active and she is in her fused state; She can use an Augment Action to enter Stealth as part of an attack. (1 Post CD) [Stealth is entered after Damage Calculation.] [Activation: 4 SE, Increases Fusion Cost by +2 SE per Post]
Appearance: Chihiro's Fusion with her zanpakuto creates a reality marble out of the topic, making it appear as the photo-negative version of the streets of London from her Inner World. Laughing can be heard from all around, and the horrific screams of murder being comitted in the ever-random alley ways filled with red mist create an aura of dread and finality.

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Comments:See above. This one is just hard to read, and terribly unclear. So is the detection attempts bonus applying to herself or others? Is this meant to have an attack and then immediately go into stealth?
2. Denied
Comments: The standard for attacks from stealth is that you leave stealth when you attack. I dont like the idea of you entering stealth when you attack. Especially for something as miniscule as an augment action.

 

[Aimi Mizumi]

:: General ::

Character Name: Kamiya Akane
Link to Profile: Bun-Nin

Zanpakuto Name: Kawakami
Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance: Miyako
Spirit's World: xXx

:: Shikai ::
Release Appearance: A basic pair of dual katana.
Release Boost: +5 to Akane's Spd and Str; increasing by +5 every 100 Reiatsu [Capping at +200]. 3 SE [Activate]; 1 SE [Maintain]
Release Command: Shroud my movements, Kawakami!

Shikai Ability 01 [Lv.50]: Shin'nyū suru Yami
Description: Darkness is the ninja's friend, and one of the worst things for opponents to be stuck in. Even those with the most advanced senses can be rendered useless by intense darkness.
Type: Support
Costs: 1 SE [per turn]
Effect: Creates an area of darkness around Akane; opponents with less Clarity than her Spd, have their senses; Sight, Hearing, Smell, Touch, and Taste, sealed while remaining in the darkness.
Duration: As long as cost is paid.
Cool Down: 2 posts
Range: 30 ft radius

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2. Approved - Bandit
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Shikai Ability 02 [Lv.50]: Suchīrufurawā [Locked]
Description: Tossing a single shuriken into the air, Akane then can turn the one into a many. The multiple weapons blossoming out from the one and causing it to rain down on the opponents.
Type: Offensive [Physical]
Costs: 2 SE
Effect: Attack with the speed of Akane's Movement Spd, and power of her Str +5.
Duration: ---
Cool Down: 1 post
Range: 20 ft

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2. Denied - Bandit
Comments: You *leave* stealth when you attack, not enter stealth. i dont like this at this level, or maybe any level.

:: Bankai ::
Release Appearance: A training room in a typical Japanese style manor. Their are plenty of hidden traps and passageways to throw off invaders.
Release Boost [Bankai]: +10 to Akane's Spd and Str; increasing by +10 each for every 100 Reiatsu [capping at +300]. 5 SE [Activate]; 3 SE [Maintain]
Release Command: Drag my opponent into darkness and despair, Kawakami!

Bankai Ability 01 [Lv.100]: Kawakami Manor
Description: Assassinations are typically personal, one-on-one with an opponent. This is the ultimate goal of Akane.. to force her opponent's into a fight with just her alone.
Type: Support
Costs: ---
Effect: Upon activating Bankai; Akane and a single opponent are brought into a room within if they have less Clarity then Akane's Spd, and they can choose to fail the comparison; while under this effect Akane and her opponent are treated as being in their own area, outside of where they once were. While active; Akane can use an augment slot to go into [Concealment].
Duration: ---
Cool Down: ---
Range: 30 ft

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Bankai Ability 02 [Lv.100]: Tsuinsuto
Description: By calling on her Zanpaku-tou Spirit's aid, Akane tag team attacks her opponent with Miyako. The pair of ninja leaping to and from hidden passageways within the manor's floor, walls, and ceiling.
Type: Offensive [Physical]
Costs: 3 SE
Effect: While in [Concealment]; Akane, and Miyako, attack the opponent. Attack Speed = Movement Speed, with a power of her Str. The opponent's clarity is treated as 10 less for reacting to this attack.
Duration: ---
Cool Down: 2 posts
Range: ---

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Bankai Ability 03 [Lv.100]: Sokudo Fukusei [Locked]
Description: Shadows appear on the paper walls around the opponent. They each move as if they were Akane, and if she speaks all the shadows speak at the same time. This is to protect the female ninja and to throw off her opponent within.
Type: Defensive
Costs: 3 SE [Activation]; 1 SE [Maintain]
Effect: Upon Activation; fill any free trap slots that Akane has with [Shadow Copy]. Every post after activation, if the opponent has lower Clarity vs her Speed, they opponent rolls a d8 before attacking [1-6] the attack hits a [Shadow Copy] instead of Akane. While active; Akane remains in [Concealment].
Duration: As long as cost is paid
Cool Down: 3 posts
Range: 30 ft

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2. Approved - Bandit
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[xl Xero xl]

::General::

Character Name:
Link to Profile:

Zanpakuto Name: Demon hands
Name Meaning:N/A

::Vivification::

Attack Name: Demon claws
Name Meaning:--
Ability: Kura sharpens his right claw boosting his power further make his Right claw burn bright red from his Spirit making him able now cut into the opponents defense making them take -10 defense when hit by his Claw.He can only hit if his speed is higher than their speed.
cost 2 se per use, no duration as long as i maintain cost of it,Cool down will only take effect if i can not maintain the cost of the Se for the ability witch will be 2 post.
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1. Approved - Chaos
Comments: Need a cost, cool-down, duration, and comparison
2. Baron's Seal of Approval
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