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Thornwick
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 14, 2014 3:52 pm


Hiacinth
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I think you may be right about the getting tossed by the fam thing. You've given me a great idea! How about they are sending her to a distant elderly Aunt in an isolated part of the country to act as a companion for her, but on the way, she slips out (like at a stop in the city for the driver to change horses) decides to try to make a living for herself in that city.

As for the name, I do like Georgia. How about Georgia Eudora Whiteman? Previously Georgia Garton, but changed so she won't be found by her parents. Her old crew used to call her George.
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Thanks! That larger image is great cat_3nodding


o.o Oh, I like that a lot! x3 Even better--a fiercely strong, independent, and adventurous woman!

Personally, I'm a fan of masculine nicknames for women, so George is fantastic. And I do love her full alias (Georgia Eudora Whiteman); it rolls of the tongue like a nursery rhyme~
PostPosted: Sat Jun 14, 2014 4:00 pm


Thornwick


Personally, I'm a fan of masculine nicknames for women, so George is fantastic. And I do love her full alias (Georgia Eudora Whiteman); it rolls of the tongue like a nursery rhyme~


Ahh, me too! And I thought she could do with a bit more agency than just being dumped by parents and picked up by pirates. So she's choosing to leave her family and choosing to be a prostitute, as such a profession allows her to slip into anonymity in the city and she can practice whatever intellectual pursuits she pleases. No one pays attention to prostitutes after all. She's willing to do whatever she needs to to be happy.

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 14, 2014 4:08 pm



        Omg ! A George and a Charley that are actually womens ;p Awesome ><
PostPosted: Sat Jun 14, 2014 4:08 pm


Hiacinth
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Personally, I'm a fan of masculine nicknames for women, so George is fantastic. And I do love her full alias (Georgia Eudora Whiteman); it rolls of the tongue like a nursery rhyme~


Ahh, me too! And I thought she could do with a bit more agency than just being dumped by parents and picked up by pirates. So she's choosing to leave her family and choosing to be a prostitute, as such a profession allows her to slip into anonymity in the city and she can practice whatever intellectual pursuits she pleases. No one pays attention to prostitutes after all. She's willing to do whatever she needs to to be happy.


I love it! Actually, you know there was an article on woman similar to your George: independent and intelligent, who chose the life of prostitution (in that era). I can't remember the link (it was an article a friend shared on FB, years ago), but yeah!

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 14, 2014 4:17 pm


Lacy Rose the Cake
what happened??? I was just back online and blasted with quotes x.x;;;;

Air pirates happened!

Thornwick

Tense confusions, such as past tense and then present tense being mixed up into the same sentence. I fixed everything that I saw when I pasted it back.
PostPosted: Sat Jun 14, 2014 4:50 pm


Thornwick


Awesome!

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 14, 2014 5:13 pm


Roy T Inane
Lacy Rose the Cake
what happened??? I was just back online and blasted with quotes x.x;;;;

Air pirates happened!

Thornwick

Tense confusions, such as past tense and then present tense being mixed up into the same sentence. I fixed everything that I saw when I pasted it back.


^^ Thanks, Roy! Everything looks great, but I do wish to cut down of some of the more wordier sentences. What do you think of this?

Quote:
Archie moved on and continued to receive excellent marks while receiving education for his impending career field, until his achievements were recognized by the Royal Military’s top officials; he was whisked off to play “cloak and dagger” for his country, soon after.


Semi-colon? Or should I separate them into two sentences?

And this:

Quote:
He’s honest to the point of being insensitive, but he has a soft spot in him—somewhere (no one’s ever bothered to find out where exactly).
PostPosted: Sat Jun 14, 2014 6:03 pm


Roy T Inane
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character image you guys already have that
Name: full name please, Georgia Eudora Whiteman
Position: on ship, if on a ship, prisoner on the C.S.S. Grogram
Occupation: pays your bills or debts, Prostitute/Mechanic
Allegiance: coalition, neutral, piracy c; Piracy
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 14, 2014 6:32 pm


Hiacinth
Position: prisoner on the Coalition's main ship
Occupation: Prostitute/Mechanic
Allegiance: Piracy


        The lead Coalition ships right now are the C.S.S. Seaboots and the C.S.S. Grogram ,
        the former is locked in standoff with the pirate ship Atlas and the latter is about to
        be getting into some action at Moore ( town ) . There's also the C.S.S. Sanglante Ruth ,
        filling in a lesser role since it is not part of the kalydium projects and is a corvette
        class ship , so smaller than those battleships c;
PostPosted: Sat Jun 14, 2014 6:58 pm


Trance Harper


        Hey gurls and gais >< just a quick update c:
        wahmbulance
        The navigation panel in the first post is now functioning so you
        can actually get to the IC thread ( still u|c at the moment ^^" ) but now
        you can go read all the Rules and get the Reserve and Profile skeletons
        and read The Story
        C:



The only thing that worked for me was the link to the approved profiles thread. xp So I can't read up/decide if I want to make a profile.

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 14, 2014 7:20 pm


Trance Harper
Hiacinth
Position: prisoner on the Coalition's main ship
Occupation: Prostitute/Mechanic
Allegiance: Piracy


        The lead Coalition ships right now are the C.S.S. Seaboots and the C.S.S. Grogram ,
        the former is locked in standoff with the pirate ship Atlas and the latter is about to
        be getting into some action at Moore ( town ) . There's also the C.S.S. Sanglante Ruth ,
        filling in a lesser role since it is not part of the kalydium projects and is a corvette
        class ship , so smaller than those battleships c;


Thank you! I've edited that into my reserve post cat_4laugh
PostPosted: Sat Jun 14, 2014 9:09 pm


Good luck everyone with this roleplay. My hands are a bit tied right now so I can't join, but lemme know if there's anything else I can do to help like handing out announcements.

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RapscalliantJackalope

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 14, 2014 10:59 pm


I continue to be impressed by all this. confused
Could I please have some help on making a character/profile? I think I want to play a young stowaway or rigging monkey on one of the ships. I don’t want to give him some cliché’d tragic backstory, so do you have any suggestions of how he might have gotten there? Or any other aspect of his character?
PostPosted: Sun Jun 15, 2014 4:13 am


RapscalliantJackalope
I continue to be impressed by all this. confused
Could I please have some help on making a character/profile? I think I want to play a young stowaway or rigging monkey on one of the ships. I don’t want to give him some cliché’d tragic backstory, so do you have any suggestions of how he might have gotten there? Or any other aspect of his character?


        How young are you thinking ? Like child/teen young or just naive young ?
        Also , pirate or Coalition ? He can be a neutral but the ship still depends . .

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 15, 2014 4:18 am


hoobaap
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        Hey gurls and gais >< just a quick update c:
        wahmbulance
        The navigation panel in the first post is now functioning so you
        can actually get to the IC thread ( still u|c at the moment ^^" ) but now
        you can go read all the Rules and get the Reserve and Profile skeletons
        and read The Story
        C:


The only thing that worked for me was the link to the approved profiles thread. xp So I can't read up/decide if I want to make a profile.


        I just checked to see if it was broken and it is working .
        Click directly on the IC lettering in the middle ( the image is
        in thirds so if you're too much to either side you'll end up back here
        in the ooc or in the profile thread . Let me know if you're still having
        trouble and I'll just give you a direct link .
        The Rp should also be on the first page of the main forum since
        there isn't a tonne of activity in all of those threads . But that involves
        searching , so links are easier C:
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